Written by; Lauren Jolivette
1st/2nd period
Fiction writing
The Big Day
One February morning a beautiful girl named Julia she had brown hair and a bright blond
highlight in her hair. Woke up sweating and hot and asked her dad “why is it so hot “and
seen her dad packing boxes she asked her dad “are we going on a trip.” Her dad said “Were
selling the house and the electricity is off “and told her to go start packing up her room
Julia stormed back to her room and did not approve to sell the house in her head it was
difficult to process everything because she lived there her whole life she was furious and was
so eager to stay. She was producing a plan to get her dad to stay and not sell the house. She
really wanted to know why her dad wanted to sell the house, so she went to”, he explained,”
I lost my job and I don’t have enough and we need to move to a smaller house “.So she
realized her dad needed a new job and wanted him to keep the house because, she grew up
there and lived there her whole life. She thought of telling her dad to stay in San Antonio
and look for a new job to work at, so she went to tell him to stay instead of selling the house.
Her dad yelled, “no we are moving to a new home I already explained to you why” so she
decided to sneak and get everything off the boat and put everything back on the Water Hut.
As the time passed her dad found out and yelled again “No we are moving to Houston that
is that Julia” Julia went out and sat over the water and was upset, but she did not give up
that easy after she cried even if she felt terrible about moving, she stayed calm. After a while
Julia was walking back inside it was clean and empty it was just a big empty square and
realized she was not helpful helping pack, but Julia was to worry about coming out with
new and new plans to get her dad not to sell the house. Julia hoped this marvelous plan
Written by; Lauren Jolivette
1st/2nd period
Fiction writing
would work because she was really hoping it would change her dad’s mind from moving to
a new home. When her dad got back from the boat and getting all off the bags into the car.
She used the adorable puppy eyes, and eventually her dad response was “Get onto the boat
it’s time to go.” As she got on the boat she said,” we will miss you and all our memories
there my little water hut.” The End