Revision Responses that Help
(suggestions that help you become a better
writer)
 It’s funny because…or when…
 It hooked me when you…
 It kinda got off topic when…
 If you had more detail about…
 I would like to hear more about…
 It had good humour…for example
 I liked it when…
 It made me feel…
 It made me think about…
 I think you wanted me to…
 Maybe it needs…
 One questions I have is…
 Have you considered…
 When you wrote____ it made me think…