Properties of a WellWritten Text (Organization, Coherence & Cohesion, Language Use & Mechanics) At the end of the lesson, you are expected to: At the end of this module, you are expected to: 1. Identify the properties of a well-written text; 2. Assess if a text follows the properties of a well-written text; and 3. Write a wellwritten text Why it is important that we can write? A paragraph is a section of writing that is composed of one or more sentences that focuses on a single topic or idea. Paragraph INTRODUCTION BODY CONCLUSION Paragraph A paragraph has three parts: introduction, body and conclusion. Remember that the introduction usually contains the topic sentence; the body provides facts, arguments, examples, etc.; and the conclusion summarizes the connections of the information that are discussed in the body. Sample paragraph Choose a topic from the given below that you want to write about. Complete the table with the necessary parts of a paragraph. By following this, you may accomplish a well-written text. Sample Topics: Introduction Body Conclusion • Experience during the quarantine period • Tips on how to stay mentally healthy • Effects of Covid-19 to the economic status of the Philippines Read and compare the sample texts below. Paragraph A When I first brought my cat home from the Humane Society she was a mangy, pitiful animal. It cost a lot to adopt her: forty dollar. And then I had to buy litter, a litter box, food, and dishes for her to eat out of. Two days after she came home with me she got taken to the pound by the animal warden. There’s a leash law for cats in Fort Collins. If they’re not in your house, they have to be on a leash. Anyway, my cat is my best friend. I’m glad I got her. She sleeps under the covers with me when it’s cold. Sometimes she meows a lot in the middle of the night and wakes me up, though (ColoState.edu, 1993). Paragraph B I first brought my cat home from the Human Society she was a mangy, pitiful animal. She was so thin that you could count her vertebrae just by looking at her. Apparently, she was declawed by her previous owners, then abandoned or lost. Since she couldn’t hunt, she nearly starved. Not only that, but she had an abscess on one hip. The vets at the Humane Society had drained it, but it was still scabby and without fur. She had terrible cold, too. She was sneezing and sniffling and her meow was just a hoarse squeak. And she’d lost half her tail somewhere. Instead of tapering gracefully, it had a bony knob at the end. (ColoState.edu, 1993). Debriefing questions: 1. Which paragraph do you like better? Why? 2.Are the two paragraphs' examples of a well-written text? Why or why not? 3.Between the two paragraphs, which do you consider a well-written text? 1. Organization 1. Organization – refers to the flow of the ideas in a text. Creating an outline before writing can help you organize your ideas. An outline is a technique that can be utilized to show the general ideas and specific/subordinating ideas. Example • Poorly written paragraph: Pancakes are easy to make. You just must mix all the dry ingredients like the flour which is already sifted, sugar and pinch of salt. The wet ingredients are eggs, milk and water. Mix them all together and you can have the batter. You just must put butter on the pan and fry them. • Improved paragraph: Pancakes are easy to make. First, you have to mix all the dry ingredients like the sifted flour, sugar and pinch of salt. Next, you have to mix the wet ingredients like eggs, milk and water. Then, you can now mix them all together to have the batter. Lastly, you can heat up the pan and put a butter and fry them. Coherence and Cohesion Refers how ideas, sentences, and paragraphs are connected. So, the ideas presented in a text are based on a single topic only. Using transitional and cohesive devices can help to assure coherence and cohesion. For example, to signal additional information, you may use in addition, moreover, similarly, likewise, etc. but when you are giving contrasting idea, you may use phrases like on the other hand, however, on the contrary, conversely, etc. COHERENCE – OCCURS WHEN SENTENCES ARE LOGICALLY CONNECTED TO PRODUCE MEANINGFUL WHOLE. COHESION – OCCURS WHEN LEXICAL AND GRAMMATICAL ELEMENTS OF A SENTENCE ARE MET. Coherent but not cohesive “One of my favorite colors is purple. I am loyal and trustworthy. I watch the concert of my idol.” Cohesive but not coherent “One of my favorite colors is purple. Purple flowers have calming effects. I am calm whenever I have my security blanket. I always bring it wherever I go.” Coherent and cohesive “One of my favorite colors is purple. I like it because it symbolizes loyalty and trust. I learned its meaning when I watch the concert of my idol. For that reason, I started to like purple.” 3. Appropriate Language Use Refers to the acceptable style of language for a specific situation or usage of the text. For example, business correspondences use formal, concise and courteous tone. So, you should not use wordy phrases. However, in literary pieces, language and style may be less formal and more creative. Levels of Language Use Informal/ Personal Informal/ Personal – these are the slang words, local expressions, text messaging Examples: Sup, Gnyt, OTW, Bes, Bro Standard/ Academic Standard/ Academic - these are the accepted words that usually appear in books and magazines. Example: Philippines is one of the richest countries in terms of language having 172 documented languages according to Summer Institute of Linguistic. These languages have their distinct sound systems, vocabulary and structure or grammar. Business/ Technical Business/ Technical – these are scientific terms or jargons Example: Both lungs are clear. Heart is not enlarge. Pulmonary vascularity is not accented. Diaphragm and sinuses are intact. Mechanics Refers to the rules in writing like proper capitalization, punctuation, spelling, numerals, abbreviations, acronyms, and contractions. Quiz No. 1 1. Refers to the rules in writing like proper capitalization, punctuation, spelling, numerals, abbreviations, acronyms, and contractions. A.Mechanism B.Appropriate Language C.Organization D.Coherence 2. Refers to the flow of the ideas in a text. Creating an outline before writing can help you organize your ideas. An outline is a technique that can be utilized to show the general ideas and specific/subordinating ideas. A.Mechanism B.Appropriate Language C. Organization D.Coherence 3. These are type of language that are scientific terms or jargons, example Both lungs are clear. Heart is not enlarged. Pulmonary vascularity is not accented. Diaphragm and sinuses are intact. A.Business/ Technical B.Informal C. Academic D.Paragraph 4. Refers to the acceptable style of language for a specific situation or usage of the text. For example, business correspondences use formal, concise and courteous tone. A.Appropriate Language Use B.Organization C.Mechanism D.Coherence 5. These are the slang words, local expressions, text messaging example Sup, Gnyt, OTW, Bes, Bro A.Organization B.Informal C.Academic D.Business E.Mechanism 6. It is a section of writing that is composed of one or more sentences that focuses on a single topic or idea.. A.Mechanism B.Organization C.Coherence D.Paragraph 7. These are the accepted words that usually appear in books and magazines. A.Informal B.Academic C.Business D.Mechanism CREATE A RECIPE ON HOW TO COOK CHICKEN ADOBO VENN DIAGRAM EBOOK TEXTBOOK 8-10 Enumerate the 3 parts of the paragraph