MGMT8600 Assignment #3: Peer Feedback Form
Please complete feedback using full sentences.
Your Name: Shivani Parekh
Student you are providing Name: Isha Dabhi
Student Number: 8891213
feedback for:
Did the individual communicate the story effectively? Why or why not?
Yes, the individual successfully communicated the story. The story was straightforward,
thorough, and emotionally fascinating. It produced a clear picture of the event and highlighted
the significance it had on both the storyteller and the patient.
Were all four components of the story (inciting incident, struggle moment, climax,
resolution) clearly outlined? Provide examples.
Inciting Incident: The introduction of Mr. Dave, a middle-aged patient who had suffered a
massive stroke and was paralysed on his right side.
Struggle Moment: The difficulties of the rehabilitation process, as evidenced by Mr. Dave's
irritation and reluctance to therapy, as well as the storyteller's lack of confidence.
Climax: Mr. Dave's outburst during a particularly difficult session, when he proclaimed
treatment futile and wanted to quit.
Resolution: Changing the therapy to incorporate gardening-related exercises rekindled Mr.
Dave's passion and resulted in significant improvement in his condition.
Were you engaged in the presentation? Describe the qualities of the storytelling that kept
you engaged.
Yes, I was engaged during the presentation. The story was compelling because of its emotional
depth, excellent organisation, and the relatable difficulty of overcoming difficulties in a
hospital setting. Mr. Dave's therapy was personalised, which helped the novel stand out and
captivate readers. The story flow, from struggle to the end, captivated me throughout.
What is one area the person could improve for future communication? (E.g. eye contact,
presentation style). Please elaborate
For future communication, the individual should work on refining their presentation style by
using enhanced vocal fluctuation to emphasise key themes and provide emotional depth.
Furthermore, employing more descriptive language to accurately describe the scenes and
feelings involved could improve the tale even further.
Please rate your colleague’s storytelling.
Total Score:
4.5 /5