⾼考应⽤⽂【求助信】 【2020 年全国卷 3】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英文课本改编了一个短剧，给外教 Miss.Evan 写邮件， 请她指导，内容包括: 1.剧情介绍;2.指导内容;3.商定时间地点 Para1: 我是李华，您的学生。 【when】最近，在准备剧本的过程中遇到了一些问 题，我写信希望您能提出一些建设性的建议。 【why】我和我的同学正致力于改编一部戏剧，但 由于我们没有很好的剧本写作能力，我们迫切需要 您的专业指导。 (2)求助内容【衔接:先夸为敬】 版本 1: v 我们知道您是一位有成就的演员，也是一位知 识渊博的导师，我们真诚地邀请您指导我们如 何做 出适当的面部表情和肢体语言。 Para2: v 此外，如果你能提供一些其他的指导，使戏剧 更吸引观众，那就再好不过了。 (1)剧情介绍【难点:介绍剧情的时态/思路】 【笼统介绍】 v 该剧讲述了一个小男孩的故事，他对体育有着 真正的热情，面对逆境也从不灰心。 v 该剧改编自我们课本上的一篇文章，讲述了两 个女孩在患难与共中逐渐建立起持久的友谊。 【具体介绍】 n 这部戏剧是根据我们课本上的文章《雾都孤 儿》改编的。它讲述了一个经常被虐待的孤儿奥 利 弗·特威斯特如何逃离济贫院，为美好的未来而奋斗 的故事。 n 这部剧改编自我们课本上的一篇文章，讲述了 安迪被冤枉谋杀妻子后，在监狱里赎罪的故事。 n 这是关于小王子和他的玫瑰之间的故事。故事 的亮点是两个人物之间的对话，传达了爱情和友谊 的真谛。 版本 2: v 鉴于您有丰富的英语戏剧教学经验，我们想知 道您是否可以帮助润饰剧中的台词，并检查故事是 否有条理。 Para3: (1)商定时间地点 v 这个星期五下午 5 点我们在教室见面好吗? v 如果您方便的话，我们可以在下周日在学校大 厅进行面对面的交流。 (2)提前感谢 v 如果你能帮我这个忙，我会很感激的。 v 你的指导一定会使我们受益匪浅。 v 你的专业指导将保证该剧的成功。 (3)期待回复 v 热切期待您的迅速答复。 I am Li Hua, one of your students. / a student from Class 3. Recently, confronted with some problems when preparing a play, I am writing in the hope that you can offer some constructive suggestions. My classmate and I are devoted to adapting a drama, but due to the fact that we don't have an excellent command of writing a play, we are in desperate need of your professional guidance. The play tells a story about a little boy who holds a genuine passion for sports and never loses heart in the face of adversity. Adapted from an article in our textbook, the play tells two girls gradually build lasting bonds of friendship by accompanying each other through thick and thin. The drama is an adaptation of /is adapted from the article Oliver Twist. It tells the story of how Oliver Twist, an orphan who is frequently abused, escapes from the workhouse and struggles for a promising future. The drama is adapted from an article in our textbook, which tells the story of Andy who redeemed himself in prison after being wrongly accused of murdering his wife. It is about the story between the little prince and his roses. The highlight of the story is the dialogue between the two characters, which conveys the true meaning of love and friendship. Knowing that you are an accomplished actress as well as a knowledgeable tutor, we sincerely invite you to give us instructions on how to make appropriate facial expressions and body language. Besides, it couldn't be better if you could offer some other guidance to make the play more appealing to audience. Given that you have extensive experience in teaching English plays, we are wondering if you could help polish the lines in the play as well as checking if the story is well-organized. Would it be possible for us to meet in our classroom at 5 p.m. this Friday? If it's convenient for you, we can have a faceto-face communication next Sunday in the school hall. I will appreciate it if you can do me the favor. Your guidance will definitely benefit us a lot. Your professional guidance will guarantee the success of the play. Earnestly anticipate your prompt reply. 【2021 年 6 月全国甲卷】假定你是李华，你班计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在校 学生会主办的 英语网站上展示，请你给外国的一位高中生朋友 Chris 写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统 文化更吸引外国人， 内容如下: 1. 阐明写信事由;2. 征求建议;3. 表达感谢。 Para1: (1)问候:你最近怎么样? 思路 2:(1)已经做的工作(2)遇到问题(3)求助 (1)为了让外国朋友深入了解中国传统文化，我们准 (2)背景+写信目的 备了几个相关的主题，比如中国的节日、李白 和杜 v 甫的诗歌、中国书法、太极等等。 我们学校将举行一次以中国文化为主题的班 会，我写信是想征求您对这个主题的建议。 (2)然而，我们发现很难确定我们文化的哪些方面对 v 外国读者更有吸引力。 一场旨在介绍中国传统文化的班会将在会后举 行，并在一个英文网站上展示。我写信是想向你征 (3)您能告诉我您最感兴趣的话题是什么，以便我们 求一些建议。 的会议取得圆满成功吗? Para2: Para3: 思路 1: (1)遇到问题 (2)已经做的工作 (3)求助 (1)提前感谢 (1)由于这次班会的内容要发布在一个有很多外国访 v 如果你能帮我这个忙，我会很感激的。 问者的英文网站上，我们发现很难确定我们文 化的 v 你的慷慨帮助一定会对我们的班会有很大的好 哪些方面对外国读者更有吸引力。 处，对此我将感激不尽。 (2)目前，我们考虑了很多选择，包括茶文化、京 剧、旗袍、中国书法、中国结等等，但我们还没 有 (2)期待回复 达成一致。 v (3)我想知道您对哪个话题最感兴趣。此外，如果你 对这次文化活动有任何其他的想法，请告诉我。 热切期待您的迅速答复。 * How's it going? * How are you doing these days? A class meeting under the theme of Chinese cultures will be held by our school, and I'm writing to ask for your suggestions on the topic. A class meeting aimed at introducing traditional Chinese culture is to be held and displayed on an can you just put forward an alternative if possible? I am wondering if you could offer any suggestions on which topic fascinates you the most. Besides, if you have any other ideas about this cultural event, please let me know. To give our foreign friends a deep insight into traditional Chinese culture, we have prepared several relevant topics, such as Chinese English website afterwards. I am writing to ask festivals, Li Bai and Du Fu's poems, Chinese you for some advice. calligraphy, tai chi and so forth. Since the content of this class meeting is to be Nevertheless, we find it challenging to posted on an English website that has numerous determine which aspects of our culture are foreign visitors, we find it challenging to more appealing to foreign readers. determine which aspects of our culture are more appealing to foreign readers. Currently, we have been considering a wide range of choices which comprise tea culture, Peking opera, cheongsam, the Chinese Would you be so kind to tell me which topic fascinates you most so that our meeting can gain great success? I will appreciate it if you can do me the favor. calligraphy, the Chinese knot and so on, but we Your generous help/gracious assistance is haven't reached an agreement yet. bound to be of great benefit to our class From your perspective, which topic interests you the most? Do you have any suggestions or meeting, for which I will be indebted. Earnestly anticipate your prompt reply. 假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教 George 写封邮件求助，内容包括: 1. 说明比赛要求;2. 请他推荐英文诗;3. 请教朗诵技巧。 Para1: 我是李华，你的学生。最近，在准备即将到来的英 语诗歌朗诵比赛时遇到了一些问题，我写信给你， 希望你能提供一些建设性的建议。 Para2: (1)说明比赛要求 参与者将被要求朗诵一些著名作家的精选诗歌，并 用正确的发音、语调和表达来传达诗歌，以展 示诗 歌的美和意义。 (2)请他推荐英文诗 v 我在选择英文诗歌时遇到了一个棘手的问题， I am Li Hua, one of your students. Recently, confronted with some problems when preparing for the approaching/upcoming English Poetry Recitation Contest, I am writing 我真诚地希望您能为我推荐一首。 v 选择说什么是我目前陷入困境的问题之一。我 不确定哪种材料最吸引人，最具启发性。 (3)请教朗诵技巧 v 另外，我一直在努力读诗。然而，我发现掌握 它的技巧是一项挑战。您能给我提供专业的指导吗? v 此外，也引起我关注的是我缺乏背诵技巧。我 怎样才能在说英语的时候更自然、更感性呢? Para3: v 您的慷慨协助将不胜感激。热切期待您的迅速 答复。 Choosing what to say is one of the problems I'm stuck in at the moment. I'm not sure which material can be most appealing and enlightening. with the expectation that you can offer some Besides, I've been exerting myself to read constructive suggestions. poems. Yet I find it challenging to grasp the Participants are expected/required to recite skills of it. selected poems from some renowned authors Would you be kind enough to provide me with and convey the poem with the correct professional guidance? pronunciation, intonation, and expression to showcase the beauty and meaning of the poem. I have encountered a tricky problem in selecting English poetry, for which I sincerely hope that you could recommend one for me. Moreover, what also cause my concern is my lack of recitation skills. How can I be more natural and emotional when speaking English? Your substantial assistance will be appreciated. Keenly anticipating your prompt reply.