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PROBLEM SOLUTION

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PROBLEM SOLUTION, CAUSE & EFFECT AND MIXED TYPE OF ESSAYS
PRACTICE WITH THE
GIVEN ACTIVITIES
PRACTICE WITH
THE GIVEN
ACTIVITIES
Cause and effects of stress
DIFFERENCE BETWEEN PROBLEM SOLUTION & CAUSE &EFFECT
Problem and solution is when something that happens and you find a way to fix it. Cause and effect
is when something happens and something bigger happens. Problem solutions and causes solutions
essay are very similar but there is a subtle difference. One type asks about the problems and the
other type asks about the causes. In both types of essay, you have to mention the problem but in a
causes solution essay you are mainly focused on the cause of the problem and that is what you will
write about as well as the possible solutions.
An increase number of
professionals, such as doctors &
teachers , are leaving their poor
countries to work in developed
countries. What problem does this
cause? What solution can you
suggest?
An increase number of professionals,
such as doctors & teachers , are leaving
their poor countries to work in
developed countries. What are the
causes of this problem? What solution
can you suggest?
THE STRUCTURE OF BOTH ESSAYS
Match these introductions to the appropriate task questions below
A growing number of qualified personnel, such
as doctors and teachers from developing
countries, are migrating to work in more
developed countries. Due to this, highly
qualified people are in short supply, which
negatively affects education and health services.
To tackle the issue their governments should
offer greater financial rewards to entice people
to stay.
A growing number of qualified personnel, such as
doctors and teachers from developing countries, are
migrating to work in more developed countries. This
is caused by low salaries and a lack of career
advancement opportunities. To tackle the issue their
governments should offer greater financial rewards
and more chances of promotions.
An increase number of professionals, such as doctors & teachers , are leaving their poor countries to work in
developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solution can you suggest?
An increase number of professionals, such as doctors & teachers , are leaving their poor countries to work in
developed countries. What are the causes of this problem? What solution can you suggest?
ANALISE OF THE THESIS STATEMENTS
A growing number of qualified personnel, such
as doctors and teachers from developing
countries, are migrating to work in more
developed countries. Due to this, highly
qualified people are in short supply, which
negatively affects education and health services.
To tackle the issue their governments should
offer greater financial rewards to entice people
to stay.
A growing number of qualified personnel, such as doctors
and teachers from developing countries, are migrating to
work in more developed countries. This is caused by low
salaries and a lack of career advancement opportunities.
To tackle the issue their governments should offer greater
financial rewards and more chances of promotions.
An increase number of professionals, such as doctors & teachers , are leaving their poor countries to work in
developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solution can you suggest?
An increase number of professionals, such as doctors & teachers , are leaving their poor countries to work in
developed countries. What are the causes of this problem? What solution can you suggest?
MODEL ANSWER: The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created
problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can
you suggest?
• There is no doubt that the internet has revolutionized communication and information-sharing in
the same way that the telegraph and the television did before it. However, societies have had to
cope with unanticipated new problems, including crimes which traditional laws are powerless to
prevent. This essay will address some of the illegal acts enabled by the internet and propose
solutions.
• To begin with, the global scale of the internet means that national laws are no longer adequate to
control what happens online. Take restrictions on legal reporting, for example. In some countries,
the media is prohibited from revealing details of a defendant’s past in case this prejudices a fair
trial. However, such restrictions are no longer enforceable now that information may be freely
published in other countries and accessed by all. The only solution here, it seems, is to adopt global
standards. Since the internet traverses national borders, the flow of information can only be
controlled if all nations agree on what can and cannot be shared.
• Another problem concerns anonymity, as internet users can easily conceal their identity and even
impersonate others. Many crimes such as identity theft and child abuse result from the ease with
which criminals can operate anonymously online. Some have proposed a system of online
identification, similar to a passport, which would allow all internet users to be verified and traced.
I believe this idea should be explored further, though there are clearly concerns about the security
of those who use the internet to protest against oppressive regimes.
• In conclusion, the only long-term solution to the problem of internet crime is greater international
cooperation. Since the problem is global is scale, the solution must also be global. A new agency of
the United Nations should be created to tackle the problems described here.
• (298 words, IELTS 8.5)
NOTE: IF IN THE ESSAY
WRITER IS GOING TO
FOCUS TO CAUSE &
PROBLEM MORE, IT
WOULD BE BETTER TO
SHOW IT IN SEPARATE
PARAGRAPHS
MIXED TYPE OF ESSAY (COMBINATION OF QUESTIONS)
NOTE: THE STRUCTURE OF
MIXED TYPE MAY DIFFER
ACCORDING TO THE TYPE
OF QUESTIONS. F EX:
SOMETIMES IT CAN BE;
CAUSE& EFFECT +OPINION,
DISCUSSION+OPINION. SO
THAT PARAGRAPGH
DIVISION ALSO OCCURS
ACCORDINGLY
MIXED TYPE OF ESSAY (COMBINATION OF QUESTIONS)
NOTE: THE
STRUCTURE OF
MIXED TYPE MAY
DIFFER
ACCORDING TO
THE TYPE OF
QUESTIONS. F EX:
SOMETIMES IT CAN
BE; CAUSE&
EFFECT +OPINION,
DISCUSSION+OPINI
ON. SO THAT
PARAGRAPGH
DIVISION ALSO
OCCURS
ACCORDINGLY
MIXED TYPE OF ESSAY (COMBINATION OF QUESTIONS)
NOTE: THE STRUCTURE
OF MIXED TYPE MAY
DIFFER ACCORDING TO
THE TYPE OF QUESTIONS.
F EX: SOMETIMES IT CAN
BE; CAUSE& EFFECT
+OPINION,
DISCUSSION+OPINION. SO
THAT PARAGRAPGH
DIVISION ALSO OCCURS
ACCORDINGLY
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