Grade 10 2020 LOVE IS NOT ALL By Edna St Vincent Millay Poetry Anthology page 166-168 READ THE POEM TO REFRESH THEN GO TO THE NEXT SLIDE Using the notes you made on the poem yesterday, look at the following analyses and add to your notes. Write down any questions you might have about the poem as you go along. The colon (:) indicates the introduction to the speaker’s argument. For the speaker, Love is not something that can be consumed for nourishment or survival like food or water. Love (with a capital letter) is the abstract noun. The poem is referring to the emotion of love. Love is not all: it is not meat nor drink The speaker says Love is not like a deep and peaceful sleep. Love is not like a floating piece of wood needed when one is sinking. A lung that is “thick” implies that breathing is difficult. This is a reference to illness or disease. Love cannot give one air when one is unable to breathe or suffering from illness. “Yet” is a coordinating conjunction that usually indicates a contradiction/ counter-point to what was said previously. It’s like saying “But…” It can also indicate things like an afterthought or a change in thinking. This line (line 7) is the ‘volta’ (change) in the poem. Nor slumber nor a roof against the rain; Nor yet a floating spar to men that sink And rise and sink and rise and sink again; Love is not like shelter from a storm, or a place to keep oneself safe. This is an image of men in the ocean. Their ship was likely a big ship and it has sunk. The men are drowning/ sinking and latch onto floating wood. They tread water to stay afloat. Love cannot fill the thickened lung with breath, Nor clean the blood, nor set the fractured bone; Yet many a man is making friends with death Even as I speak, for lack of love alone. Love cannot perform actions like this; it cannot treat ailments or mend wounds. This is a euphemism for men dying. The men become ‘friendly’ with Death when they pass away. The speaker states that their death is due to a lack of love. The speaker reiterates that if Love is not necessary for survival, why then is it the case that these men pass away. They had nothing else wrong with them, except that they did not have Love. So, Love is ESSENTIAL! Notice the change in the speaker’s tone in line 9. Previously the tone was matter-offact/wry whereas now it have become more conversational and ambivalent (uncertain). The diction used, like “well may be”, sounds more conversational and indicates a change in thought by the speaker. The speaker is clearly expressing a different viewpoint, like saying “But on the other hand…” Implies the hypothetical scenario is difficult or challenging. Possibility, but not certain. Repetition from line 9: “It well may be” à these words imply uncertainty. The speaker is identifying for readers the possibilities of Love and how people might take it for granted or trade it for something else more essential or helpful in their individual situations. The speaker is now reflecting on what was said in the first 6 lines of the poem. Difficult situation or challenging time (for the speaker). The speaker gives a hypothetically scenario. It well may be that in a difficult hour, Pinned down by pain and moaning for release, Or nagged by want past resolution's power, I might be driven to sell your love for peace, Or trade the memory of this night for food. It well may be. I do not think I would. But for the speaker: Love has significance in human existence beyond just the physical. Diction used has connotations with being trapped or having no solution. There is also an element of desperation and suffering. Relief/a solution/ or escape from the situation. The speaker admits that if the situation were so dire that he/she MIGHT knowingly give up the love one might have for them in order to gain peace or food if they were hungry. THE CONLUSION OF THE SPEAKER’S ARGUMENT: Despite spending the majority of the poem expressing Love as non-essential in various situations, the speaker concludes by stating that he/she would likely not trade Love for anything. Love is more meaningful to the speaker than any essential item life requires. He/She believes it is something to value and cherish. Forward me any questions you might have and I will assist you. Once you have grasped the analysis; answer the following short questions on the poem. Analysis questions: On the next slide I have helped you to understand what the question is asking of you. J 1. Refer to lines 1-6. 1.1. How do the repeated negatives (nor/not) support the opening statement: “Love is not all”? (2) 1.2. Identify and account for the tone of the phrase “Love is not all:…” (2) 2. Refer to line 3-4. 2.1. How does the diction and rhythm in these lines create the picture of what is happening in these lines. (3) 3. Referring to the last line of the poem. 3.1. Discuss what the speaker takes into account before she comes to her conclusion: “I do not think I would.” (3) [10 marks] Analysis questions: How do these words reinforce the opening statement for the reader? Explain. 1. Refer to lines 1-6. 1.1. How do the repeated negatives (nor/not) support the opening statement: “Love is not all”? (2) 1.2. Identify and account for the tone of the phrase “Love is not all:…” (2) Identify the tone and then give reasons why you say so. 2. Refer to line 3-4. 2.1. How do the diction and rhythm in these lines create the picture of what is happening in these lines. (3) word choice beat 3. Referring to the last line of the poem. 3.1. Discuss what the speaker takes into account before she comes to her conclusion: “I do not think I would.” (3) What does the speaker take into consideration before he/she reaches his/her conclusion? [10 marks] A memorandum will be provided for you later in the week. Please answer the questions before looking at the answers.