(0500) Paper 1, Question 3 – Directed Writing
7) You have used your own words,
and you used the bullet points to
organise your writing.
1) You use the sentence/ phrase
given in the question to begin
your writing.
Fully
achieved
Frequently
achieved
Sometimes
achieved
6) You use more
than 10 details
in your whole
response.
Details are
nouns/
pronouns from
the text.
Didn’t
achieve
2) You use more
than 4 relevant
ideas from the
text to cover
the first bullet
point (A1).
3) You use
more than 4
relevant ideas
from the text
to cover the
second bullet
point (A2).
5) You have used more than 6 developments
in your whole response.
Developments are comments about how a
character in the text thinks or feels towards
an idea you have used to cover one of the
bullet points.
4) You use more than 4 relevant ideas to cover
the third bullet point (A3).
Remember: Base your ideas on some of the
things you wrote for bullet 1 and 2. Make sure
your ideas are relevant to the focus of the third
bullet point.
In order to improve, you need to:
1. _____________________________________________________________________________________
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2. _____________________________________________________________________________________
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