i TEACHING CREATIVE WRITING FOR GRADE 11 STUDENTS VIA MODULAR DISTANCE LEARNING IN THE NEW NORMAL A Dissertation Presented to The Graduate School CEBU TECHNOLOGICAL UNIVERSITY Moalboal Campus Moalboal, Cebu In Partial Fulfillment of The Requirements for the Degree DOCTOR IN DEVELOPMENT EDUCATION JOSUA D. QUINIQUITO May 2021 ii ABSTRACT TEACHING CREATIVE WRITING TO GRADE 11 STUDENTS VIA MODULAR DISTANCE LEARNING IN THE NEW NORMAL Josua D. Quiniquito quiniquito1993@gmail.com Cebu Technological University-Moalboal Campus Creative writing is a skill that ought to be mastered by students. Considering this, the researcher conducted a study assessing students' performance in writing poem and fiction with reference to a set of criteria, the extent of their learning experiences in modular instruction, significant difference between their pre- and post-test, and significant relationship between performance and profile as well as their learning experiences in modules. This study utilized a quasi-experimental method using single group design. There were 105 students and parents who participated in the study. Adapted Test and Survey Questionnaires were the instruments to gather the data. Also, an interview was conducted to elicit the challenges encountered by the parents. The statistical tools were simple percentage, weighted mean, dependent t-test, and chi-square. The researcher found out that the performance level in the pretest was Fairly Satisfactory in poem and fiction both having a composite mean of 2.08. However, it improved to 3.44 (poem) and 3.25 (fiction) in the posttest or Very Satisfactory which had a significant difference. Meanwhile, the students' perceptions on the use of modules provided a total mean of 3.25 (Very Positive) while 2.95 (Positive) for the parents. Furthermore, there was a significant relationship between performance and Oral Reading Verification, performance and previous grade in English, as well as performance and learning experiences. As revealed in the findings, students' performance should be developed to achieve Outstanding level. Thus, the researcher crafted the development plan which includes enhanced learning modules as output. Keywords: Development Education; Creative Writing; Quasi-experimental; Siaton, Negros Oriental, Philippines iii APPROVAL SHEET This Dissertation entitled “TEACHING CREATIVE WRITING FOR GRADE 11 STUDENTS VIA MODULAR DISTANCE LEARNING IN THE NEW NORMAL” prepared and submitted by JOSUA D. QUINIQUITO in partial fulfillment for the degree DOCTOR IN DEVELOPMENT EDUCATION has been examined and is recommended for acceptance and approval for Oral Examination. DISSERTATION ADVISORY COMMITTEE ROSEIN A. ANCHETA, JR., ASEAN PE, D.M., Ph.D. Chairman REBECCA DC. MANALASTAS, Ed.D., Ph.D. Co-chair RODOLFO A. GOLBIN, JR., Dev.Ed.D. Adviser SEVERINA P. VELOS, Dev.Ed.D. Member MARIVEL B. GO, Dev.Ed.D. Statistician GRACE B. GIMENA, Dev.Ed.D., Ph.D. Censor/Member ADRIAN P. YBAÑEZ, DVM, MBA, PhD, Dip PCVPH, CBO Member Approved by the Committee on Oral Examination with the grade of PASSED. PANEL of EXAMINERS ROSEIN A. ANCHETA, JR., ASEAN PE, D.M., Ph.D. Chairman REBECCA DC. MANALASTAS, Ed.D., Ph.D. Co-chair RODOLFO A. GOLBIN, JR., Dev.Ed.D. Adviser SEVERINA P. VELOS, Dev.Ed.D. Member MARIVEL B. GO, Dev.Ed.D. Statistician GRACE B. GIMENA, Dev.Ed.D., Ph.D. Censor/Member ADRIAN P. YBAÑEZ, DVM, MBA, PhD, Dip PCVPH, CBO Member Accepted and Approved in partial fulfillment of the requirements for the degree of Doctor in Development Education. Design Hearing: PASSED Oral Defense: PASSED ELDIE V. AVENIDO, Ed.D. Campus Director iv ACKNOWLEDGMENT Were it not for the undying support and guidance of the following people who contributed from the making of this research to its completeness, this work would have not been made possible. The researcher, as deemed appropriate, expresses his profound gratitude and appreciation to the following individuals: To Dr. Rosein A. Ancheta, Jr., President and Chairman of the panel; To Dr. Rebecca DC. Manalastas, Co-chairman; Dr. Adoracion A. Lawas, Dr. Adrian Y. Ybañez, Dr. Eldie V. Avenido, Dr. Severina P. Velos, and Dr. Grace B. Gimena, members of the panel for their expertise in improving this manuscript; To Dr. Rodolfo A. Golbin, Jr., research adviser, who devoutly shared her time to help correctly fill in the necessary information used in the study, guided in every section of every chapter, and meticulously aided the correction of errors despite her busy schedule; To Dr. Marivel B. Go, research statistician, for carefully examining the appropriate statistic tools to be used in this study as well as in helping the researcher in the interpretation of data; To the CTU Professors, for their helpful suggestions and ideas that helped the researcher revise and polish the paper; To the School Heads, for their approval in conducting the study in their respective schools; To the Respondents, for their full cooperation in answering the questionnaires with utmost honesty. v To his Friends, for egging him on to strive and reach greater heights; To his Family, the reason he wakes up and lives out his dream, for fueling him with love and inspiration; Above all, to God Almighty, the source of the fountain of blessings, knowledge, and wisdom, for giving the researcher the strength and endurance that led to the fulfillment of his studies. It has been said that writing a dissertation is a long, solitary journey, but you have proven him otherwise. Moreover, because of you, the researcher “has fought a good fight, has finished the race, and has kept his faith”. —Josua D. Quiniquito vi Dedication Writing this dissertation in the time of Covid-19 is a Herculean task, entailing a huge amount of power, perseverance, and patience. Needless to say, the process was intricate. But after looking at the final book, caressing its pages, smelling the fragrance of words that turned into sentences and paragraphs, it gives a feeling of euphoria. I conceptualized and wrote the book not only for myself but also for some people who, in one way or another, have touched the core of my soul. To Mama Diday, my wind beneath my wings, for her unconditional love and for her unwavering support for my endeavor to grow professionally; To Papa Bordet for all his sacrifices who, I know, must have been very proud of what I have become; for teaching me to be determined and to be appreciative of the small things in life; To my sisters, Ate Riza and Ate Dideth; my brothers, Simbo and Paul John, for your tons of encouragement. May you achieve greatness and reach the apex of success; To my friends and classmates, Maristelle (special mention), for being my sheltering tree whenever I am under the weather; To people who doubt their abilities and think their dreams are out of reach; To them who are deprived of education, especially in our community; and To those who, like Santiago in The Alchemist, are eager to search for their Personal Legend amidst the obstacles and challenges they might face; I yearn that this work – shed with blood, sweat, and tears – will inspire its readers to dream deep. —Josua Hda. San Jose, Tanjay City 7th April 2021 vii TABLE OF CONTENTS TITLE PAGE i ABSTRACT ii APPROVAL SHEET iii ACKNOWLEDGMENTS iv DEDICATION vi TABLE OF CONTENTS vii LIST OF FIGURES xi LIST OF TABLES xii CHAPTER 1 Page THE PROBLEM AND ITS RESEARCH DESIGN INTRODUCTION 1 1 Rationale of the Study 1 Theoretical Background 3 THE PROBLEM 13 Statement of the Problem 13 Hypotheses 14 Significance of the Study 15 RESEARCH METHODOLOGY 16 Design 16 Flow of the Study 17 Environment 19 Respondents 21 viii Instrument 22 Data Gathering Procedure 23 Statistical Treatment of Data 24 Scoring Procedure 24 DEFINITION OF TERMS 2 3 REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE AND STUDIES 28 32 Related Literature 32 Related Studies 36 PRESENTATION, ANALYSIS, AND INTERPRETATION OF DATA PROFILE OF THE RESPONDENTS 42 42 Previous Grade in English 42 Reading Proficiency based on their Oral Reading Verification (ORV) 44 Instructional Materials Available at Home 45 Parent’s Highest Educational Attainment 46 Parent’s Combined Monthly Income 47 RESPONDENTS‘ LEVEL OF PERFORMANCE IN THE PRETEST AND POSTTEST IN CREATIVE WRITING 48 Students’ Level of Performance in Writing Poem 48 Diction 48 Elements 50 Language 52 Style 55 Students’ Level of Performance in Writing Fiction Elements 57 57 ix Narrative Techniques 59 Plot Structure and Conflict 62 Language 64 Summary of Mean Scores in Poem’s and Fiction’s Pretest and Posttest STUDENTS’ AND PARENTS’ LEARNING EXPERIENCES IN MODULAR INSTRUCTION 4 5 67 69 Problems and Concerns 70 Ease of Access 72 Evaluations 74 Delivery 77 Satisfaction 79 Summary of Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences 81 TEST OF SIGNIFICANT DIFFERENCE 84 TEST OF SIGNIFICANT RELATIONSHIP 86 Respondents’ Performance and their Identified Profile 86 Respondents’ Performance and their Learning Experiences 88 SUMMARY, FINDINGS, CONCLUSIONS, & RECOMMENDATIONS 90 SUMMARY 90 FINDINGS 91 CONCLUSIONS 94 RECOMMENDATIONS 94 DEVELOPMENT PLAN 95 x Rationale 95 Objectives 95 Scheme of Implementation 96 Development Plan 97 Matrix of Activities 99 Enhanced Learning Module in Creative Writing 100 Reading and Writing Poetry 102 Reading and Writing Fiction 118 BIBLIOGRAPHY 141 APPENDICES 148 A TRANSMITTAL LETTER 149 B RESEARCH QUESTIONNAIRE 151 C TABLE OF SPECIFICATIONS 160 D CERTIFICATE OF SIMILARITY CHECK 161 CURRICULUM VITAE 162 xi LIST OF TABLES Table Title Page 1 Distribution of Respondents’ Group 22 2 Distribution of Respondents’ Profile 43 3 Summary of Mean Scores in the Pretest and Posttest in Writing Poem and Fiction 67 Summary of Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences in Modular Instruction 81 Mean Difference between the Pretest and Posttest Results in Writing Poem and Fiction 85 6 Respondents’ Performance and their Identified Profile 86 7 Respondents’ Performance and their Learning Experiences 88 4 5 i LIST OF FIGURES Figure Page 1 Theoretical Framework of the Study 2 Flow of the Study 18 3 The Locale of the Study 20 4 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Poem’s Diction 49 5 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Poem’s Elements 51 6 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Poem’s Language 53 7 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Poem’s Style 55 8 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Fiction’s Elements 58 9 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Fiction’s Narrative Techniques 60 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Fiction’s Plot Structure and Conflict 62 11 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Fiction’s Language 65 12 Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences in Module’s Problems and Concerns 71 Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences in Module’s Ease of Access 73 10 13 4 14 Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences in Module’s Evaluations ‘75 15 Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences in Module’s Delivery 16 Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences in Module’s Satisfaction ‘80 78 1 Chapter 1 THE PROBLEM AND ITS RESEARCH DESIGN INTRODUCTION Rationale of the Study Creative writing, like any other forms of writing, is a skill and an art that must be mastered by students. It is defined by Morley (2007) as writing in an open space with endless possibilities and freedom of imagination. It gives learners the skills to use the language effectively in expressing their thoughts, feelings, and ideas uniquely (Tok & Kandemir, 2015). According to Pratiwi (2010), it has an essential contribution to the development of other skills. Therefore, writing should be perceived as a skill that covers understanding, thinking, developing, and producing of skills. These skills are known as the creative process. With this, many previous studies have stressed the importance of creative writing. As cited by Chowdhury (2015), it has a significant contribution to students learning a second language because it makes them grasp the language skills in their written expression. For Ostrom (2012), it is both way of knowing and knowledge creation. However, creative writing is a challenge among students. In Pakistan, for instance, students’ writing skills are weak and inferior. They face issues on syntax, coherence, idea expansion, content selection, topic sentence, rhetorical conventions, mechanics, organization, lack of vocabulary, and inappropriate diction (Dar & Khan, 2015). Nationally, in Pablo and Lasaten (2018) study, the writing difficulties among the senior high students in Laoag City, Philippines, 2 include vocabulary and word choice. Meanwhile, in the researcher’s workstation, only five students out of 22 obtained a semestral grade of 90% and above in the Creative Writing course in S.Y. 2019–2020. These results are alarming knowing that writing is a useful tool used in communication. In some respects, this study is similar to Tok and Kandemir’s (2014) when they investigated the effects of using creative writing activities on students’ achievement in writing skills and attitude to English. The pre- and post-test results were compared. It revealed that students’ achievement in writing increased after the experiment. However, their attitude to English course did not augment. To establish the gap, the researcher of this present study used printed modules to evaluate students’ writing skills and their learning experiences after exposure to the modules. Modular instruction is a teaching setup since the opening of classes for school year 2020–2021 has posed a pressing challenge due to COVID-19. With its mission to provide quality education and continue education amidst the threat, DepEd made an intervention that will still respond to the students’ needs. Based on the Learners’ Enrolment and Survey Form (LESF), majority of the parents in Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School prefer to use modular distance learning because they do not have Internet access. Finally, the main thrust of this study is to assess students’ performance level in Creative Writing via modular instruction in the new normal of education with reference to their scores in the pre-test and post-test based on the Most Essential Learning Competencies (MELCs) so that the researcher can craft a development plan which includes printed modules as output to hone students’ writing skills. 3 Theoretical Background This research assumes two theories: Experiential Theory and SelfDirected Learning (SDL) Theory and is anchored on DepEd Order No. 39 s. 2012, otherwise known as Policy Guidelines on Addressing Learning Gaps and Implementing a Reading and Writing Program in Secondary Schools and DepEd Order No. 12 s.2020, or the Basic Education Learning Continuity Plan (BE-LCP) as its legal bases. Experiential Theory, according to Kolb (2015), considers the individuality of the students. In this process, they reflect on the effects of the activities that they engage in. It is believed in this theory that students have innate abilities to learn. The role of the teacher is to encourage and motivate students so that they are guided on what to do. At the same time, the teacher does minimal supervision of the students since he or she is after for their experiences. When students become independent, they feel a sense of self-satisfaction, which in return, is the role of modular instruction. Experiential learning theory centers on students’ experiences as part of their learning experiences. In experiential learning, students get involved and are active participants. They learn best by doing (Munge et al., 2018). They involve their senses in the tasks because their learning is based on direct experiences (Fűz, 2018). Experiential theory, according to Cherry (2020), differs from cognitive and behavioral theories because in the cognitive, it emphasizes the role of mental processes while in the behavioral, it ignores the possible role of subjective experience in the learning process. 4 THEORIES Experiential Learning as discussed by Nardo (2017) → involves the students more to initiate and evaluate themselves LEGAL BASES Self-Directed Learning as discussed by Morris (2019) → students control their learning objectives to meet personal needs DepEd Order No. 39 s. 2012 → Addressing Learning Gaps & Implementing a Reading and Writing Program in Secondary Schools DepEd Order No.12 s.2020 → Basic Education Learning Continuity Plan (BE-LCP) MODULAR DISTANCE LEARNING IN TEACHING CREATIVE WRITING ➢ Writing Poetry • Diction • Language • Elements • Style ➢ Writing Fiction • Elements • Narrative Techniques • Plot & Conflict • Language DEVELOPMENT PLAN Figure 1 Theoretical Framework of the Study 5 Part of the process in this theory is critical reflection. In one way or the other, this develops problem-solving and higher-order thinking skills (Collins et al., 2016; James & Williams, 2017; Scogin et al., 2017). Through the testing of ideas, students gather information through experience. The process does not necessarily begin with experience; instead, students choose which learning mode will work best based upon the specific situation (Cherry, 2020). This notion is true to the observation of Kurt (2020) that experiences are central to this theory. Memorization or recollection of ideas taught does not equal learning, as no value has been added to the students. In simple terms, by connecting schoolwork and theories to experience or activities, students play an active role in what they are learning and the way they are learning. Through experiential learning activities, students can grasp concepts, have an opportunity to be more creative, and become more engaged in what they are learning (Barton, 2020). Asfeldt, Hvenegaard, and Purc-Stephenson (2018) discuss that students need to reflect on their knowledge to create an original piece in creative writing. This is where reflection is of paramount importance since it creates meaningful experiences for the students. Consequently, Larsen (2017) concluded that this theory is more of emotional experiences where learners are responsible for their learning. They have specific roles in honing their skills (Bialka & Havlik, 2016; Fifolt, Morgan, & Burgess, 2018). Furthermore, Fede, Gorman, and Cimini (2018) considered students as decision-makers. This means that along with their intellects, they also develop their 6 emotions. In return, Isaak et al. (2018) observed that they become confident writing a well-crated piece of literature such as poem and fiction. Morris’ (2019) analysis on experiential learning is that learners are active participants; they are exposed to new experiences; learning consists of finding solutions to specific world problems; and critical reflection is part of meaningful learning. Effective learning in this theory can only take place when an individual completes a cycle of four stages, namely: concrete experience, reflective observation, abstract conceptualization, and active experimentation. In the first stage of the cycle or concrete experience, a person has an experience that serves as the basis for observation. The individual encounters a new experience, which in return creates a learning opportunity. The goal is for the individuals to actively participate in the experience so they can learn from it. In reflective observation, the individual reflects on the experience before making any judgments. Particular notice is paid to any inconsistencies between experience and understanding. The goal is for the individual to review the situation and find meaning behind the experience. The third stage is abstract conceptualization, wherein the individual develops theories to explain their experience. This analysis often gives rise to a new idea or changes a pre-existing concept. In this stage, the individual identifies recurring themes, problems, and issues to help them with new learning experiences. The goal is to create concepts that they can apply in the future. The fourth stage is active participation, where individuals apply what they learned in 7 the experience to another situation. They use their theories to solve problems, make decisions, and influence people and/or events. The learner takes risks and implements theories to see what will result. The goal is to test the concepts in different and new situations to discover ways to improve (Explorance 2015). Some of the benefits of experiential learning, as cited by Barton (2020) from Carlton University, include: providing students with an opportunity to apply what they have learned in the theory to practical, real-world situations; encourages critical thinking, problem-solving skills, and decision making; assists with memory retention by building strong relationships between feeling and thinking processes; leads to the development of skills for life-long learning by assisting in the acquisition of essential skills and encouraging students to reflect, conceptualize, and plan for next steps; helps develop a positive attitude toward learning; connects service learning with helping community needs; provides a safe learning environment; and influences both feelings and emotions as well as enhancing knowledge and skills. The second theory is Self-Directed Learning. This theory is where learners plan their objectives and the techniques to achieve them. They are the central aspect of this theory because learning is highly individualized. According to Loeng (2020), it entails individuals taking the initiative and responsibility for their learning. They are free to set goals and define what is worth learning. Self-directed learning can take place both inside and outside of formal institutions. Students would most effectively learn by integrating past and present experiences based on personal interpretations and subject matter. As a result, the 8 educator’s role is to guide students in exploring the world around them, formulating investigative questions, and testing hypotheses. On the same hand, this theory can be as diverse as simply discovering new information and thinking critically about it, actively participating and contributing to a learning community, or designing one’s learning path and selecting resources and guides (Petro, 2017). There are three dimensions of this theory as enumerated by Sawatsky, Ratelle, Bonnes, Egginton, and Beckman (2017): (1) the process of learning; (2) the personality of the learners; and (3) factors that influence their learning. Educators find self-directed learning a vital part of today’s world and workforce, considering the new norm in education. Individuals must know how to take charge of their learning—to plan, develop, adapt, and change in a digital, interactive, and global society. The best way to assess this is through authentic, performance-based tasks that allow students to demonstrate their ability to apply self-directed learning skills. Students develop these skills as they practice them (Brandt, 2020). As discussed by Francis (2017), there are four dimensions of self-directed learning. First, is self-regulation defined as the ability to plan, direct, and control one’s emotions, thoughts, and behaviors during a learning task. The second is motivation. The desire to engage in an activity emerges from the inherent enjoyment of an activity or a sense of obligation to engage in a task. The third is personal responsibility, or the willingness to take full responsibility for one’s actions. Fourth is autonomy. It is the ability to recognize available choices, take 9 charge of one’s learning, and control choices through ongoing reflection and evaluation. The main feature of self-directed learning is that learning experiences contribute to the personal growth of the students. This growth represents the students and other persons within their society (Elias & Merriam, 1995; Groen & Kawalilak, 2014; Maslow, 1943). Arnold (2015) described self-directed learning as the ability wherein people have the advantage to compete with others. Robinson, PharmD, and Persky (2020), in their journal Developing Selfdirected Learners, present six processes. These include a) developing goals for study; b) outlining assessments with respect to how the student will know when they achieve those goals; c) identify the structure and sequence of activities; d) lay out a timeline to complete activities; e) identify resources to achieve each goal; and f) locate a mentor to provide feedback on the plan. In addition, developing selfdirected students requires a scaffolded approach in which more self-paced or teacher-directed activities are introduced early on to help students become more self-regulated in their “self-directedness.” Furthermore, this learning theory involves the ability to manage learning tasks without having them directed by others. Self-directed learning skills are necessary for effective life-long learning and are one of many learning skills students are expected to develop in college. The expectation is that students will become self-directed learners as they mature and gain content knowledge (Weimer, 2010). 10 At some point, educators may encounter challenges when using selfdirected learning, and these challenges can be classified into: time (e.g., SDL may be less “efficient” than direct instruction), acceptance of change, assessment of student learning, motivation, and lack of expertise by the learner. Students who are novice learners in a specific domain may not be equipped to design their own learning goals or know where to find quality information in solving the problem. In some ways, traditional instruction occurs because the instructor has the insight into the skills and knowledge a novice may need to develop and knows how to guide learning in a specific domain. To overcome this particular barrier, targeted feedback from the teacher or coach is required in order to help students refine and focus learning outcomes throughout the process (Magolda, 2004). SDL instills a sense of autonomy and mastery in the students and a sense of purpose into the educational process. In a well-designed SDL environment, students’ motivation increases, as well as their feelings of control, confidence, and belief in themselves (Boyer, Edmondson, & Fleming, 2014). Tough (1971) identified that most of them learned through self-taught through structured interviews with the Canadian students. This means that they acquire learning outside the classroom or without a teacher. This is relevant to the current situation in modular distance learning, considering that students learn from their homes. Furthermore, in his study, students found solutions to real-life problems within the society they belong to. Meanwhile, DepEd Order No. 39 s. 2012 otherwise known as Policy Guidelines on Addressing Learning Gaps and Implementing a Reading and 11 Writing Program in Secondary Schools states that the development of reading and writing skills is critical to effective learning. In many cases, deficiencies in these areas are often at the roots of why gaps in learning occur. In its guiding principles, every student should have a learning profile detailing the results of the pre-assessment. The results would indicate the areas of strengths and development that should be the basis for designing appropriate intervention programs, i.e. for enrichment or remediation. The same process shall be applied in addressing gaps in the curriculum. A large number of researchers have agreed that reading and writing and strictly intertwined and connected. For Olness (2005) and Tsai (2006), they considered reading and writing as similar processes of composing in which the reader or the author interacts with a text. As it has been noticed in classroom experiences, good readers are mainly good writers (Williams, 2003). The explanation of this is that the skill of writing is similar to second language skills. Its mastery comes out of a comprehensible input over a period of time, which means that proficiency in writing is a result of sufficient and comprehensible reading input. To reinforce the improvement of writing skills, across all subject areas, the following strategies are suggested: a) including writing in co-curricular and extracurricular activities; b) encouraging the students to join in the school paper; c) asking the students to write journals and personal diaries; and d) encouraging students to use technology to improve their writing skills. 12 Finally, Basic Education Learning Continuity Plan (BE-LCP) proposed in DepEd Order No.12 s.2020 as one of the legal bases for this study, emphasizes that this package of education interventions will respond to basic education challenges brought about by COVID-19. Furthermore, learning opportunities for students will be provided through blended distance learning modalities depending on the situation and the availability of resources. In national news, published on July 03, 2020, it was reported that most parents and students prefer to use modular distance learning of all the alternative learning modalities offered by the Department of Education (DepEd) this upcoming school year. With this, the Department of Education will provide Self-Learning Modules (SLMs) as an alternative learning delivery modality for face-to-face. The SLMs include the learning competencies to be mastered by the students, the lessons, and the task and activities. These modules will be offered for various types of learners across the Philippines, especially for students where internet connectivity poses a challenge. Thus, upon revisiting the theories and studies underlying the advantages of modular instruction in improving the skills in creative writing of the students as well as the legal bases for addressing learning gaps through reading and writing programs, the researcher aims to propose a development plan that will help extract and unleash students’ skills in writing poem and fiction not only because creative writing is part of the Senior High school curriculum, but also it is a good way of enhancing their English proficiency. 13 THE PROBLEM Statement of the Problem This study assessed the students' performance in Creative Writing and learning experiences via modular distance learning in the new normal of the Grade 11 students of Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School and Mainit High School, Siaton 1 District, Municipality of Siaton, Negros Oriental for School Year 2020– 2021 as basis for a development plan. Specifically, it sought answers to the following sub-problems: 1. What is the profile of the respondents in terms of: 1.1 previous grade in English; 1.2 reading proficiency based on Oral Reading Verification (ORV); 1.3 instructional materials available at home; 1.4 parents’ highest educational attainment; and 1.5 parents’ combined monthly income? 2. What is the respondents’ level of performance in the pre-test and posttest in Creative Writing course for the 3rd quarter as to: 2.1 poem: 2.1.1 diction; 2.1.2 elements; 2.1.3 language conventions; and 2.1.4 style 2.2 fiction: 2.2.1 elements; 14 2.2.2 narrative techniques; 2.2.3 plot structure and conflict; and 2.2.4 language? 3. As perceived by the parents and students, what is the extent of their learning experiences in modular instruction in the following areas: 3.1 problems and concerns; 3.2 ease of access; 3.3 evaluations; 3.4 delivery; and 3.5 satisfaction? 4. Is there a significant difference between the pretest and posttest of the respondents in the aforementioned areas in Creative Writing? 5. Is there a significant relationship between the respondents’ performance and: 5.1 their identified profile; and 5.2 learning experiences? 6. Based on the findings, what development plan can be crafted? Hypotheses The hypotheses were tested at α=0.05 level of significance. Statistically, the first hypothesis was treated using a dependent t-test, while the second and third were treated using a chi-square. 15 𝐻𝑜 1: There is no significant difference between the pre-test and post-test of the respondents. 𝐻𝑜 2: There is no significant relationship between the respondents’ performance and their identified performance. 𝐻𝑜 3: There is no significant relationship between the respondents’ performance and their learning experiences. Significance of the Study The study would benefit the students and teachers of Siaton 1 District. The results of the study may give them guides on the crafting of learning modules to improve the creative writing skills of the students. More specifically, the results would be of great use to the following: Administrators. As leaders of the school, they will be provided with more insights as to where to anchor their programs and projects in supporting the teachers for effective teaching–learning process. Teachers. They can improve their strategies or methods in teaching creative writing through modules and they can provide assessment suitable to the learning styles and multiple intelligences of their students. Students. They would thoroughly understand the lessons provided in the module and become responsible and independent in their learning. In addition, they would learn to evaluate themselves on the level of their progress. Researcher. Through this study, the researcher would be able to develop reviews, enhancement programs/development plan, and learning modules that 16 would help improve students' skills in creative writing. Future Researchers. With the result of this study, future researchers would be encouraged to conduct related studies that would further benefit the students including the teachers to improve their teaching skills and how module instruction facilitates language learning. RESEARCH METHODOLOGY Design This study employed a quasi-experimental method using single group design in assessing the students’ level of performance in Creative Writing course through a percentage of their scores obtained in the pre-test and post-test. The use of modules helped determine the significant difference between the respondents’ pre-test and post-test results graded through rubrics with reference to the Most Essential Learning Competencies (MELCs) in Creative Writing. Furthermore, it described and provided an in-depth analysis of the effect of modular instruction on students’ performance based on their learning experiences when they are exposed to the said instruction. Their parents were also asked to respond to their perceptions of modular instruction and were interviewed on the challenges and benefits of the modules. The MELCs were based on the K to 12 competencies, modified and clustered by the DepEd during this time of a pandemic to master the essential skills needed by the students. Meanwhile, the modules written by select teachers in the 17 department had undergone Quality Assurance stage before the distribution to the field to ensure correctness and relevance. Flow of the Study The flow of the study was presented through input–process–output model. The first frame is the Input which includes the respondents' profile (previous grade in English, reading proficiency based on Oral Reading Verification (ORV), instructional materials available at home, parents’ highest educational attainment, and parent’s combined monthly income); the level of performance in creative writing specifically poetry and fiction based on the Most Essential Learning Competencies (MELCs); the significant difference between the pre-test and posttest results; the extent of their learning experiences on modular instruction as to problems and concerns, ease of access, evaluations, delivery, and satisfaction; and the significant relationship between their level of performance and their identified profile. The second frame is the Process in which the gathered data were classified, tabulated, computed, and analyzed. Statistically, they were treated using Simple Percentage, Weighted Mean, Mean Percentage Score (MPS), Dependent t-test to show the difference in the pretest and posttest means, and Chi-square to test if there is a significant relationship between the students’ performance and their identified profile and learning experiences in the modules. Lastly, the third frame is the Output. After learning and identifying the challenges, the development plan was crafted to make the instructions and 18 INPUT Data on: ➢ Respondents’ profile Data on ➢ Level of performance in creative writing • Poetry ➢ Students’ • Fiction Profilethe pre-test and post-test ➢ Significant difference between ➢ Learning experiences on modular on distance learning ➢ Perceptions ➢ Significant relationship between the level of performance and Modular their identified profile and learning experiences on the utilization of modules Instruction Approval of the Transmittal Letter for the Data Gathering Gathered data were: • • • • classified tabulated computed analyzed Data were statistically treated using: • Simple percentage • Weighted mean • Mean Percentage Score (MPS) • Dependent t-test DEVELOPMENT PLAN Figure 2 The Flow of the Study 19 delivery of the lessons better and more effective. In this way, students’ ability in writing a poem and fiction–with emphasis on their elements–will be developed to the greatest extent. Environment This study was conducted in the two schools of Siaton 1 district, namely: Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School (PCGCHS) and Mainit High School (MHS). PCGCHS was established in 2008 by the Department of Education (DepEd) to address an increasing number of out-of-school youths. The family of the late Atty. Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera donated the school. It was named Napacao High School then and was later changed to the owner's name in 2011 in honor of his memory and benevolence. The site is agricultural and has a total land area of 10,000 sq.m or 1 hectare. The primary source of living of the constituents of Napacao is farming, especially sugarcane planting, weeding, tilling, and fertilizing. The school is 11 km. away from the district office and 13 km. away from the town proper. It is a barangay high school located along the highway. It offers General Academic Strand (GAS) for Senior High School. The school plans to open more tracks so that more students will enroll. Meanwhile, Mainit High School is situated in Mainit, Tayak, Siaton, Negros Oriental. It is 8 km. away from the national road and 13 km. away from the district office. It is accessible through motorcycles. Same with PCGCHS, it is agricultural where the means of livelihood among its citizens is farming. The senior high 20 ` Figure 3 The Locale of the Study 21 department offers two courses, Computer System Servicing for TechnologicalVocational (TVL) track and General Academic Strand (GAS) for Academic track. Guided by the DepEd's Vision, Mission, and Core Values, Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School and Mainit High School aim to develop and produce globally competitive and well-rounded students armed with the 21st-century skills necessary to combat the 21st-century challenges. Respondents The respondents of the study were the 105 Grade 11 students. They were currently enrolled in Creative Writing course and parents of Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School and Mainit High School. Since these two schools belonged to the same cluster in Siaton 1 district, the cluster sampling was used. It is where the whole population is divided into groups or schools based on their geographical location. These respondents were purposively chosen and their participation in the study was voluntary. Table 1 shows the distribution of respondents’ age and gender. It can be seen that 20 males or 19.05% were under the age bracket 18–19 years old while 24 or 22.86% were females. In the 16–17 years old bracket, 18 or 17.14 were males while 23 or 21.90% are females. There were 11 males or 10.48% and 9 or 8.57% who fell under 20–21 years old. Majority of the student-respondents were from 18–19 years old. Meanwhile, in the parent’s group, majority or 79.05% were mothers and only 22 or 20.95 were fathers. 22 Table 1 Distribution of Respondents’ Group Student-Respondents Age Male % Female % Total % 20–21 y/o 11 10.48 9 8.57 20 19.05 18–19 y/o 20 19.05 24 22.86 44 41.90 16–17 y/o 18 17.14 23 21.90 41 39.05 Total 49 46.67 56 53.33 105 100.00 Gender Parent-Respondents Role f % Father 22 20.95 Mother 83 79.05 105 100.00 Total Instrument This research used questionnaires in gathering the data of this study. The first part includes the respondents' profile: age and gender, previous grade in English, reading proficiency based on Oral Reading Verification (ORV), instructional materials available at home, parent’s highest educational attainment, and parent’s combined monthly income. The second part is the questionnaire proper which consists of the performance level in writing poetry and fiction. The third part is the extent of the students’ learning experiences in modular instruction as to problems and concerns, ease of access, evaluation, delivery, and 23 satisfaction. Their parents, being the guides, were also asked about their perceptions of printed modules in creative writing. The questionnaires Writing Poem and Writing Fiction were adapted from Vazques and Lee (2017) and were slightly modified by the researcher, while the questionnaire for learning experiences was adapted from Misko (2010). Data Gathering Procedure The researcher wrote a letter to the school heads asking permission to conduct the study. Upon granting permission, the questionnaire (pre-test) was handed to the parents since the students were not allowed to go out as per InterAgency Task Force for Emerging Infection Diseases (IATF-EID) rules. After four days, the questionnaire was retrieved. Two months later, modules in Creative Writing, which include the lessons on poetry and fiction were sent to the students. This was the new set-up in the new normal as per DepEd advisory to contain the possible spread of Covid-19 and minimize large gatherings of people. Students were instructed to read the lessons, accomplish all the activities or tasks found in the modules. After a few days, the post-test was administered. In gathering the data, the researcher followed the safety protocols such as wearing of face mask and face shield and maintaining physical distancing. Then, the collected data were classified, tabulated, computed, and analyzed towards the preparation of the data matrix. 24 Statistical Treatment of Data The processing of data derived from the research instrument was treated as follows: To determine the respondents' profile, the simple percentage was employed. To identify the level of student’s performance in poetry and fiction, the Mean Percentage Score (MPS) was applied. To find out the extent of the students' learning experiences in the use of Creative Writing modules, the Weighted Mean was utilized. To obtain the significant difference between pre-test and post-test, the dependent t-test was used. Finally, to determine the significant relationship between the respondents’ level of performance and their identified profile, the chisquare correlation was used. Scoring Procedure The respondent's level of performance on creative writing was scaled using the rubrics adapted from Lewy (2001) and Vazques and Lee (2017). A. Scoring Procedure for Writing Poem SCALE AND DESCRIPTIONS AREAS Diction 5 (Outstanding) 4 (Very Satisfactory) 3 (Satisfactory) 2 (Fairly Satisfactory) 1 (Did not Meet Expectation) • Student’s use of vocabulary is precise, vivid, and paints a strong clear and complete picture in the reader’s mind. • Student’s use of vocabulary is routine and workable, and meaning is written behind the line. • Student’s use of vocabulary is more telling than showing, but the meaning is written between the line. • Student’s use of vocabulary is literal but meaningful. • Student’s use of vocabulary is literal 25 Elements • Effectively and appropriately uses poetic elements and literary devices to reinforce the theme. • Uses a lot of poetic elements and literary devices to reinforce the theme. • Uses some poetic elements and literary devices to reinforce the theme. • Uses few poetic elements and literary devices. • Uses little poetic elements and literary devices. Language • Has appropriate spelling, grammar, and punctuation; contains few, if any, errors that do not interfere reader’s understanding • Has appropriate spelling, grammar, and punctuation; contains some errors that do not interfere reader’s understand ding. • May contain few errors in spelling, grammar, and/or punctuation that may interfere reader’s understanding. • May contain frequent and numerous errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation that interfere reader’s • It contains frequent and numerous errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation that interfere reader’s understand ding The poem is written with a great sense of style. The poem has been wellthought and makes sense to the reader. The poem is written with a defined style. Thoughts are clear to read and easy to understand. The poem is written with style. Thoughts are clear to a degree. The poem is written with a style but not that effective to the readers Style understanding The poem lacks style, and the thoughts did not come out clearly. B. Scoring Procedure for Writing Fiction Scale and Descriptions Areas 5 (Outstanding) 4 (Very Satisfactory) Elements • The setting has been skillfully established and effective • The story maintains a consistent point of view, and it enhances the story. • The theme is clear and developed throughout the story. • The setting has been established and effective • The story maintains a consistent point of view, but it seldom enhances the story. • The theme is precise and clearly implied in the story 3 (Satisfactory) • The setting has been established, although there may be some confusion. • The point of view is consistent. • The theme is present in the story. 2 (Fairly Satisfactory) • The setting is unclear; only one aspect of the setting has been established. • The point of view is occasionally consistent. • The theme is hard to determine. 1 (Did not Meet Expectation) • There is no description of the setting. • The point of view is not consistent or meaningful to the story's progress. • There is no determinable theme. 26 Narrative Techniques • Skillfully uses narrative techniques (dialogue, descriptions, etc.) to develop characters. • Includes more than one clear example of direct and indirect characterization • Consistently uses narrative techniques (dialogue, descriptions, etc.) to develop characters. • Includes at least one clear example of direct and indirect characterization • Seldom uses narrative techniques (dialogue, descriptions, etc.) to develop characters. • Includes at least one example of direct and indirect characterization • Inconsistently •There is no use uses narrative of meaningful techniques narrative (dialogue, techniques such descriptions, as meaningful etc.) to develop word choice or characters. dialogue. • Includes an unclear • Does not example of include direct direct and and indirect indirect Characterization characterization Plot Structure and Conflict • The story introduces a clear & effective conflict. • Uses a variety of techniques to sequence the events so that they create a particular tone and outcome • It contains a consistent & smooth progression of experiences and events. •The story introduces a detailed conflict. • Uses some techniques to sequence the events so that they create a tone and outcome • It contains a consistent progression of experiences and events. •The story introduces a clear conflict. • Uses techniques to sequence the events so that they create a tone and outcome • The writing contains an inconsistent progression of experiences and events. • The story introduces unclear conflict. • Uses techniques to sequence the events, but the purpose may be unclear. • The writing contains a vague progression of experiences and events. • There is no conflict, tone and/or meaningful sequence of events. • There is no determinable progression of events. Language •Demonstrates a skillful command of standard English conventions. • Skillfully employs language and tone appropriate for audience and purpose. • No grammatical errors that interfere with understanding. • Demonstrates a good command of standard English conventions. • Employs language and tone appropriate for the audience and purpose leading to a better understanding • Few grammatical errors that interfere understanding. • Demonstrates a command of Standard English conventions. • Employs language and tone appropriate for the audience and purpose. • Some grammatical errors that interfere with understanding. • Demonstrates a limited command of standard English conventions. • Inconsistently and/or employs language and tone inappropriate for audience and purpose. • Grammatical errors may interfere with understanding. • Demonstrates no command of standard English conventions. • Does not employ appropriate language for audience and purpose. • Grammatical errors interfere with understanding. 27 C. Scoring Procedure for Learning Experiences on Modular Instruction SCALE DESCRIPTIVE RATING EXPLANATION 3.25–4.00 Strongly Agree The students and parents have manifested very positive perceptions towards the utilization of printed modules. 2.50–3.24 Agree The students and parents have manifested positive perceptions towards the utilization of printed modules. 1.75–2.49 Disagree The students and parents have manifested negative perceptions towards the utilization of printed modules. 1.00–1.74 Very Disagree The students and parents have manifested very negative perceptions towards the utilization of printed modules. 28 DEFINITION OF TERMS For a better understanding of this study, the following terms are conceptually and operationally defined: Creative Writing. This refers to the course offered in Senior High, which requires students to manipulate the language in attractive, interesting, and demanding ways to express uniquely personal meanings through poetry and fiction. COVID-19. A pandemic that caused the DepEd to shift to modular instruction. Delivery. This term describes how the module contributes to the students’ learning. Developmental Plan. This is the output of the study, which addresses the problems in the use of modules. It also contains activities to improve the printed modules so that students’ creative writing performance will reach Outstanding level. Diction. Refers to the author’s choice of words and the orders of words in a poem. Ease of Access. Refers to the extent of the module’s capability to be used and the materials needed for learning. Evaluation. This variable describes the assessments and activities found in the module. Fiction. These are written stories about people and events that are not real which are imagined by the writer. 29 Elements. In the poem, this consists of meter, rhyme, figures of speech, tone, and theme. In fiction, this term refers to the plot, conflict, point of view, character, and setting. Meter. This is an element where the number of syllables in a poem is counted. Rhyme. This refers to one of two or more words that end in the same sounds. Figures of Speech. A word or phrase that departs from straightforward, literal language. Tone. The feelings or manner in which a poem is expressed. Theme. A subject or topic of a poem. Plot. The series of events that make a fiction. Point of View. A position from which something is seen. It can be in the first person, second person, or third. Character. The protagonist or antagonist of the story who plays the role. Setting. The place where a story happens. Language. Fictional language is created as part of a fictional setting. It is designed with the intent of giving more depth or an appearance to the fiction and still follows the rules in English. Language Conventions. In this area, spelling, grammar, and punctuation are required by students for effective writing. Learning Experiences. Refer to students' interest or attitude in learning 30 creative writing upon exposure to printed modules. Students' Performance. The proficiency and competence in creative writing, specifically in poetry and fiction. Modules. Also known as learning modules is a package where lessons, activities, and assessments are included to provide learning to the students. Modular Instruction. This refers to a learning delivery modality where learning takes place between the teacher and the students who are geographically remote from each other during instruction. Modular Distance Learning. This term involves individualized instruction that allows students to use self-learning modules (SLMS) in print or digital format/electronic copy, whichever is applicable in the context of the student and other learning resources. Most Essential Learning Competencies (MELCs). These are the modified and clustered competencies prepared by the DepEd in the time of COVID-19 pandemic. These need to be mastered by the students in order to continue to subsequent grades. Narrative Techniques. In fiction, narrative technique is any of several specific methods the writer uses to convey the strategy used in the making of a narrative to make it more complete, complex, or interesting. New Normal. Refers to education where the mode of delivery is through modular instruction since face-to-face learning is not allowed due to the pandemic. 31 Parent’s Highest Educational Attainment. This refers to the highest education obtained by the parents since they guide their children in learning the lessons found in the modules. Parent’s Combined Monthly Income. This is part of the profile of the student, where it identifies the income of their parents. Perceptions Towards the Utilization of Modules. This refers to the students’ learning experiences and parents’ attitudes on modules. Plot Structure and Conflict. This area involves the series of events in fiction and some challenges, struggles, or opposition the character faces. Poetry. This term refers to the component of creative writing that students need to master. In poetry, elements are to be identified and employed to create a well-crafted piece. Previous Grade in English. The grades of the students in English during the school year 2019-2020. Problems and Concerns. Refers to the extent of the possible challenges and drawbacks encountered by the students in using the printed modules. Reading Proficiency Based on Oral Reading Verification. This term refers to the levels of reading proficiency of the student-respondents, namely: Independent, Instructional A, Instructional B, and Frustration. Satisfaction. This variable assesses how satisfied the students are when they use modules in learning creative writing. Style. Refers to the choices that are used to create the poem’s meaning. It includes using short or long lines, varying or omitting punctuation, or using rhythm. 32 Chapter 2 REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE AND STUDIES This Chapter enumerates a plethora of literature and studies discussing the importance of creative writing, the problems and challenges encountered by the students in learning the skills, as well as the benefits of using modular instruction in language learning and its implication to the educational system. Related Literature Creativity in writing is the ability to bring some qualities such as originality, extraordinariness in a particular composition, creating new experiences and new ideas and thoughts (Temizkan, 2011). It emphasizes how the new thoughts and ideas are connected to new information that makes sense. For this reason, creativity and writing skill are closely related to one another and leads to the term creative writing. For Ostrom (2012), creative writing is both a way of knowing as well as a way of knowledge creation. The idea of creative writing is that students write their original literary piece or composition and not copy the ideas from someone else. In this point, Pikulski (1975) conveyed that students can be considered creative writers when they do not imitate the work of other writers. Furthermore, if the thought of their composition contains bad expression and does not evoke the readers’ senses, this cannot be categorized as creative writing. One of Howard Gardner’s multiple intelligences is verbal or linguistic intelligence. People who are strong in this intelligence can use words well, both 33 when writing and speaking. These individuals are typically very good at writing stories, memorizing information, and reading. Their strengths are words and language (Cherry, 2019). If students have a full grasp of the language, they can be great writers in the future. Chowdhury (2015) asserted that writing has a significant contribution to students learning a second language because it makes them grasp the language skills in written expression. Creative writing opens the possibility for students to develop their creativity (Cusk, 2010). It also has an essential contribution to developing other skills and becomes a tool to express a person’s feelings, thoughts, and information. Writing should be perceived and evaluated not as a mechanical process but as a skill that covers understanding, thinking, developing, and producing skills, as MoNE (2011) discussed. Because of this, teachers need to find ways to integrate writing with other skills and activities, giving it more relevance and importance – and making it more interesting. They need to use meaningful, realistic, and relevant writing tasks based on learners' needs and interests and design individual tasks based on what learners need to write (Monis & Rodriques, 2012). Teaching creative writing, as defined by Barbot, Tan, Randi, Donato & Grigorenko (2012), is writing through imagination. Eckhoff and Urbach (2008) found out that the educational environment can enhance students’ imagination and creativity and support their writing ability. The importance of creative writing is undeniable to improve the cognitive and communicative skills of children. Harmer (2004) believed that creative writing students are self-assured to use their 34 language proficiency in written expression. Furthermore, they can express their ideas and create mental images when they are motivated. One of the literary activities that can help students in writing is learning poetry. Olila and Jantas (2006) state that “poetry is any kind of verbal or written language that is structured rhythmically and is meant to tell a story, or express any kind of emotion, idea, or state of being and it is used to achieve this artistic expression in several ways.” Students can share their ideas and stories through learning poetry. By learning poetry, students can improve four language skills (listening, reading, writing, and speaking). By listening and reading poetry, students can exercise both skills in order to guess the meaning and exercise to listen to the words in English. Moreover, they can write other poems that are related to their experiences. By writing a poem, students can improve the language aspects such as grammar and vocabulary. Although there are many advantages in integrating poetry, teachers should identify the challenges in implementing poetry activities and how they overcome these challenges. Killander (2011) states that in Foreign Language Teaching (FLT), teaching poetry is a challenge for teachers because students should have extra thinking to get the meaning of the poem that they read especially if it is written in a foreign language. Hismanoglu (2005) explains that there are some benefits of poetry in ELT classrooms, such as students can appreciate the process of writing poetry, students understand the composition and structure in composing poetry, students 35 are to be sensitive to new words and can find out the meaning to get more profound interest and to be an analytic person. Moreover, Saraç (2003) also explains the educational benefits of poetry as follows: literature provides readers with a different viewpoint towards language use by going beyond the known usages and rules of grammar, syntax, and vocabulary; literature triggers unmotivated readers owing to being so open to explorations and different interpretations; literature evokes feelings and thoughts in heart and mind; literature makes students familiar with figures of speech (i.e., simile, metaphor, irony, personification, imagery, etc.) due to their being a part of daily language use. Moreover, poetry employs language to evoke and exalt unique qualities of life and suffices readers with feelings. Arguably, poetry teaches students to be more appreciative of their culture and the culture of other people. As cited in Panavelil’s (2011) study, poems provide students with insight into developing cross-cultural awareness, and this, in turn will help them in acquiring fluency in the target language. The second way of language learning is writing fiction. It is defined as a literary type that uses imagination, usually written as prose. However, a writer who is just beginning to learn to write might find some problems during the creative process. These problems can be from several factors. They are from the elements of prose fiction, linguistic factors, and self-perception factors. Fiction, like the poem, aids students in learning the English language. Language teachers, according to Bradford (2006), use this genre of literature as a way for students to acquire language skills in three ways. First, students acquire 36 new vocabulary by reading fiction, and they can use the words in meaningful conversation. Second, they become familiar with the correct grammar rules, including punctuations, because they are exposed to these aspects. Third, reading fiction enables students to better appreciate their culture and traditions through the themes and lessons embedded in the story. Creative writing in English is beyond assisting and enabling learning (Everett, 2005). Furthermore, it can also provide alternative ways of expressing and demonstrating learning. When students write, they become imaginative and adventurous in expressing their ideas. In the case of Raimes (1983), the result indicates that writing can help students for these reasons; first, writing reinforces the grammatical structures, idioms, and vocabulary. Secondly, when students write, they have a chance to be adventurous with the language to take risks. Lastly, they become very involved with the new language; the effort to express ideas. There are many writing forms, some are creative, and some are not. However, all writing is creative writing because writing uses the materials of language, experiences, knowledge, textual sources, personal ideas, and imaginings of the writer, bringing out something that did not exist before. Related Studies In a university of China, Dai (2010) students explored different experiences of their lives in the creative writing course. They became proficient in the language. At the same time, the study of Duran (2010) found out that creative writing 37 performance was affected by literary activities. Students were able to internalize the lessons and applied them in their writing. The same result went to Kuvanç (2008) that using creative writing activities was effective on the increase of vocabulary of the students. In writing the story, Pratiwi (2010) found that most of the students had problems with the design of the plot for the story, covering 77% of the respondents. These problems are caused mainly by the students’ difficulties finding a unique theme that might be interesting for the target reader. About 66% of the students admitted having problems with the characterizations. As it is found in the findings of this research, the students responded to the questions of the problem by stating that the problem was with the characterizations. It could be creating or designing the characterizations, revealing them, or maintaining the characterizations throughout the story. In an attempt to cope with this problem, some students researched a character. This research was done by observing the real character or a real person, or it can be inspired by other fictional characters from movies or books. In the process of creating the theme, 69% of the students experienced similar problems found in the creation of the plot, that whether or not the main idea of the story is unique or identical with the other stories. In coping with these problems, the students attempted to research before deciding the theme and the plot. The research is done in the form of reading from many resources. The major difficulty with the students is to deliver the details of the settings in a short story that provides limited room. In order to make the settings happened, 38 the story had to be effective. This is done by various actions, such as providing an obvious scene, a character’s action, or an illustration that allows the student to dismiss the explanation of the setting. This is an effective way to provide the imagination of a scene without using too much description that ended up wasting a lot of space. The fifth element is the point of view. The majority of the problem found in the point of view is choosing between the first-person point of view or the third person point of view. About 38% of the students found that it is hard to decide the point of view due to the lack of experience the students had in fiction writing. As the learner for English as a foreign language, the students’ vocabulary and expression are limited. This is faced by 54% of the students, which stated that the problems with the word choices are the repetition of a certain words or the difficulty in varying the words. As the learner for English as a foreign language, the students’ vocabulary and expression are limited. This is faced by 54% of the students, which stated that the problems with the word choices are the repetition of certain words or the difficulty in varying the words. The problems faced by the student involved three aspects, namely the literature aspects, the technical aspects, and the students’ self-perception aspect, which later developed into eleven problems, namely plot, characterization, theme, settings, point of view, grammar, sentence structure, word choice, distraction, writer’s block, and mood. The various problems found in this research result in 39 multiple ways to deal with the issues, although it is also found that there are problems that have similar solutions from the students. Not knowing how to create a story plan impedes the writing process because the required characters, locations, descriptions, and sequence of events need to be presented cohesively to demonstrate the story structure's idea and hold the reader’s interest (Dunn & Finley, 2010). Because of the pandemic, the Department of Education adopted modules as an alternative to face-to-face. Here are some of the benefits of modules in honing creative writing skills. In the study of Nardo (2017), she encouraged English and content teachers to make their own materials to facilitate the learning activities for independent study of the students. Working on these modules will encourage learners to work on assigned tasks at their own pace with minimal supervision and guidance of the teacher to ensure that they learn correctly. The teachers can further pattern similar texts that cater to the varied lessons depending on the students' major field. Moreover, teachers are enjoined to produce quality modules that will alleviate the rigors of preparation of daily activities and meet teachers' need for prepared relevant materials for students to realize their goals. The modules may serve as guidelines in setting goals of teaching content subjects by providing teachers the steps to follow in preparing materials that will realize the attainment of objectives of designed courses. On the part of the students, the use of creative writing module in the study of Shaw and Moriarty (2012) had enhanced their employability and vocational skills 40 and could foresee how this might help them with their existing studies and with their careers after university. The module helped students to articulate their learning in more depth and with more confidence. This, in turn, supported their development as undergraduate researchers and allowed them to use the experiences they had gathered outside higher education to enrich their creative writing without feeling vulnerable or exposed. Moreover, their study suggests that incorporating concepts and understanding of sustainability into literary studies and creative writing can effectively link academic achievement and vocational ambition. By focusing on a sustainable life, literacy, and society, higher education was produced to support students in developing their personal, vocational and academic development through writing sessions. This module offers a model of best practices. First, it provided opportunities for students to engage in intensive reflective practice on an individual basis and in groups that helped them to make links between creative processes, research-enabled learning practices, meta-cognition, learning outcomes, personal, vocational, and academic aspirations. When students’ academic and creative work is developing through reflective practice, so is their ability to be critically self-aware, understand the inspirations driving their work, and provide opportunities to articulate their learning and creative processes. Second, the module was collaborative and brought together students with professionals from the ‘real’ world. The learning experiences of the students represent desirable, personal, and responsible growth. Third, the module 41 promoted the idea of creative writing students as researchers – providing opportunities for students to articulate and present ideas to others. Fourth, the module engaged the students in the local community and academic community and helped them to consider their role as global citizens, engendering a sustainable attitude to life beyond university The implications of this study to the educational system respond to the DepEd’s goal of providing quality education. Long before the onset of modules, John Dewey (1969) asserted that the development of self-learning materials or resources for modular instruction tends to meet the demand for educational opportunity for students of every background, regardless of their aptitude, intelligence, or previous achievement as well as in moral, emotional and personality traits. Individualized instruction is an attempt to provide the optimum learning condition for individual students and situations. For Cruickshank et al. (2003), modular instruction guides students in achieving their personal goals; thus, making them responsible and independent learners. With this instruction, they develop a feeling of satisfaction. In developing students’ writing skills, educators feel the need to provide learning activities or resource materials to aid them in their writing. These include modules that allow them to be proficient in the second language (Waguey, 2012). The role of the teachers in this mode of delivery is to guide the students' progress and apply remediation whenever they perform unsatisfactorily. They should make sure that the activities are interesting to maintain students’ motivation. 42 Chapter 3 PRESENTATION, ANALYSIS, AND INTERPRETATION OF DATA This chapter deals with the statistical presentation, analysis, and interpretation of data based on the identified problems in the preceding chapter. The presentation comes in this order: Profile of the Respondents, Level of Students’ Performance in Poetry and Fiction, Learning Experiences of Students and Parents, Test of Significant Difference, and Test of Significant Relationship. PROFILE OF THE RESPONDENTS The profile of the respondents assessed in this study includes Previous Grade in English, Reading Proficiency based on their Oral Reading Verification, Instructional Materials Available at Home, Parent’s Highest Educational Attainment, and Parent’s Combined Monthly Income. Previous Grade in English The students' grades during the school year 2019–2020 in English were included as these may affect their performance in writing. Components included in this subject are Reading Comprehension, Vocabulary Development, Literature, Writing and Composition, and Grammar Awareness. Table 2 reveals that majority or 34.29% had their grades between 80 and 84%. This means that their level of progress and achievement was Satisfactory. There were 25 or 23.81% who were in the bracket 75–79% or their achievement was Fairly Satisfactory. Meanwhile, only 17 belonged to 90–100%, or Outstanding 43 Table 2 Distribution of Respondents’ Profile Variables N = 105 f % 17 27 36 25 16.19 25.71 34.29 23.81 Previous Grade in English 90–100 85–89 80–84 75–79 Reading Proficiency based on Oral Reading Verification (ORV) Independent Instructional A Instructional B Frustration 24 22 33 26 22.86 20.95 31.43 24.76 57 1 11 13 71 54 43 54.29 0.95 10.48 12.38 67.62 51.43 40.95 5 6 9 17 22 46 4.76 5.71 8.58 16.19 20.95 43.81 12 10 13 36 18 16 11.43 9.52 12.38 34.29 17.14 15.24 Instructional Materials Available at Home Books Computer Laptop Newspaper Smartphone TV Radio Parent’s Highest Educational Attainment College Graduate College Level High School Graduate High School Level Elementary Graduate Elementary Level Parent’s Combined Monthly Income 11,000 above 9,000–10,999 7,000–8,999 5,000–6,999 3,000–4,999 below 2,999 44 level. These data imply that most of the students’ performance met expectations. The competencies in English in their Junior High were achieved based on the established standards. Students’ grades are proof of their learning in a particular subject. If their grades are high, that can be attributed to their excellent performance in English. According to Hvidman and Sievertsen (2019), in their study High-Stakes Grades and Students’ Behavior, grades give students feedback on how well they master a subject. Reading Proficiency based on Oral Reading Verification (ORV) The ORV result in the previous grade level was taken from the English coordinators. Students were required to read a passage aloud. After which, the teacher asked them questions and categorized them based on their correct responses. It can be seen that 33 or 31.43% were under Instructional B. This means that they are fast readers but have poor comprehension. There were 26 or 24.76% who fell under Frustration level or slow readers and have poor comprehension. Meanwhile, 24 or 22.96% were Independent. They are described as fast readers and have good comprehension. Finally, 22 or 20.95% were categorized as Instructional A or slow readers but had good comprehension. Owing to these results, some students were not confident in answering orally, especially when in front of a teacher. Most of them could answer the literal questions or those questions that are explicitly stated in the text and the inferential 45 questions or those questions that have responses that are indirectly expressed, induced, or require other information. However, they mainly struggled in answering critical and creative questions or those questions that require judgments and create new ideas from what was learned. It is essential to identify the levels of comprehension of the students since it has been noticed in classroom experiences that good readers are mainly good writers (Williams, 2003). The explanation of this is that the skill of writing is similar to second language skill in which its mastery comes out of a comprehensible input over a period of time, meaning that proficiency in writing is a result of a sufficient and comprehensible reading habit. Instructional Materials Available at Home This variable enumerates the materials that can be used by the students in improving their writing skills. Based on the data, most of the students, or 67.72%, have a smartphone. There are already downloadable applications where they can read the lessons and get tips or techniques in writing, such as Creative Writing and Guide to Creative Writing both powered by the developer Andromo. These applications can be downloaded for free via students’ smartphones. Books are also suitable reference materials in honing their reading and writing skills. More than half or 54.29% own books. Most of them have television, while 43 or 40.95% have a radio. Only a few own laptops and computers. When 46 students are exposed to these various media, these can be their gateway to develop their skills and imagination. These materials can be used to engage students and to make learning more accessible and more fun. They can also significantly increase achievement and practice a new skill gained. In a study by Oyola (2010), instructional materials were created based on the Structural Cognitive Modifiability theory (SCM), a theory that purports that intelligence is not static but dynamic and able to be modified by means of mediated learning experiences. The materials were implemented in the classroom not only to teach the English language but also to scrutinize first graders' writing development and determine if such materials did or did not influence the progress of cognitive skills such as identification, comparison, classification, differentiation, decoding, synthesis, analysis, and the use of divergent thinking. Parent’s Highest Educational Attainment In this study, it is vital to identify the parent’s education because being the first teachers, they play an essential role, especially in guiding the students whenever the latter have difficulty in their modules. Majority of the parents or 43.81% were Elementary Level. There were 22 or 20.95% who fell under Elementary Graduate. Only 5.71% were College Level, and 4.76% were College Graduate. These results imply that only a few parents can assist their students in answering the module since they had not taken up Creative Writing as a course or subject in Elementary or High School. 47 In a study by Chiu and Khoo (2005), they reported that the test scores among 15-year-old students correlated significantly with mothers’ mean years of schooling. However, there are also instances where students whose parents were not college graduates but performed well. Parent’s Combined Monthly Income It is widely believed that parents' social and economic status can contribute significantly to students’ success in education; thus, this variable is included. It is shown in this variable that 36 or 34.29% had ₱5,000–₱6,999 monthly income. There were 10 whose monthly income fell between ₱9,000–₱10,999. These data explain that most of the families fell under the bracket of low-income class or, as described by the National Economic and Development Authority (NEDA), “cannot afford in a sustained manner to provide their minimum basic needs of food, health, education, housing, and other essential amenities of life.” Since the land composition of these barangays is agricultural, the primary source of living of the constituents of Napacao and Mainit is farming, especially sugarcane planting, weeding, and fertilizer application. Some of the students help their parents in agriculture to make both ends meet. In a study Impact of Parental Socioeconomic Status on Academic Performance of Students of Soharwardi, Fatima, Nazir, and Firdous (2020), the researchers found out that families from the low socio-economic status group are less likely to have economic resources or time available to provide academic support to their children. 48 RESPONDENTS’ LEVEL OF PERFORMANCE IN THE PRETEST AND POSTTEST IN CREATIVE WRITING This part spells out the students’ performance level in writing a poem and fiction based on criteria for each genre. Students' Level of Performance in Writing Poem This sub-section elucidates the students’ level of performance in writing a poem with emphasis on the criteria: Diction, Elements, Language Conventions, and Style. Diction. In poetry, diction refers to the author’s choice of words and the orders of words in a poem. Proper diction is essential to get connected with the readers without any misinterpretation. Hence, the right choice of words is indispensable not to divert the readers. It can be seen in Figure 4 that the highest total in the pretest was 43 students who fell under Did not Meet Expectations. This means that their use of vocabulary was literal. Only 10 students got the rating of 5 (Outstanding) or their use of vocabulary was precise or vivid and paints a strong, clear, and complete picture in the reader’s mind. It was observed in their outputs that most of them used general or abstract words such as “I see flowers in the garden” or “The leaves fall from the tree”. They did not give the specific kind of flowers or specific name of the tree in the poem. Because of this, the use of literal words did not create layers of meaning for the readers. 49 Diction 45 No. of Students 40 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 O 5 10 VS 4 FS 2 26 Mean Md Sd 13 S3 13 DME 1 Before Pretest 43 Posttest After 19 32 24 16 14 2.03 3.38 2.00 3.33 1.36 1.12 Descrp. FS VS Figure 4 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Poem's Diction In the posttest, there were only 14 students who got a rating of 1 while majority or 30.48% obtained the rating of 4 (Very Satisfactory) or their use of vocabulary was workable, and the meaning was written behind the line of the poem. The raters found out in their poems that they were able to use words that create a mental image or evoke senses such as roses instead of flowers, mango tree instead of tree, tread instead of walk, excruciating instead of painful. Most of these students who fell under Did not Meet Expectations were Frustration readers or slow readers with poor comprehension. Meanwhile from 10 in the pretest, now it climbed to 19 students who fell under Outstanding level. During the pretest, it obtained a mean of 2.03 with a descriptive rating of Fairly Satisfactory. However, in the posttest, it went up to 50 3.38 or their performance became Very Satisfactory. Students were able to use the correct terms. These results show that the use of printed modules was effective in honing students’ writing skills, especially in word usage. These students who obtained an Outstanding level were Independent readers or fast readers with good comprehension. The modules, as discussed in the Experiential theory, contain skills making them independent learners. The use of words is the most critical tool of a writer. When students use words intelligently, they create images for the readers. This was observed by Rachmawati, Supriyanto, and Doyin (2019) that by the time the students’ choice of words has begun to vary, images of poetry have also been able to strengthen and clarify poetry. Elements. In poetry, these include meter, stanza, rhyme, and figurative language. These are the ingredients of a poem. They make it creative and effective to the readers. It can be seen in the pretest that 42 of them got the rating of 1 (Did not Meet Expectations), which means they used little poetic elements and literary devices. Twenty-five (25) students used a few elements and literary devices, while only 9 (Outstanding) of them had effectively and appropriately used poetic elements and literary devices to reinforce the theme. These elements include the use of metaphor, simile, and imagery in their written pieces. 51 Elements 45 40 No. of Students 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 O 5 VS 4 9 15 3S 14 FS 2 Before Pretest 25 DME 1 42 Posttest After 21 32 24 19 9 Mean 2.05 3.32 Md Sd Descrp. 2.00 3.33 1.35 1.22 FS S Figure 5. Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Poem's Elements Based on their outputs, the students’ poems did not employ figurative language (e.g., The grass is green or The flowers bloom). Their poems had no creative impulse that can catch readers’ interest. In the posttest, 32 got a rating of 4 (Very Satisfactory) or used a lot of poetic elements and literary devices. There were 21 students whose performance was Outstanding, or they effectively and appropriately used poetic elements and literary devices in their poem. After checking their outputs, the researcher observed that the elements were evident. They used simile and personification in their poems, for example, “The sun is like an orange fruit” or “The bamboo trees dance against the wind.” They were able to imbibe the lessons on the elements of poetry found in Creative Writing modules. Students who performed better in this 52 area were good readers. The moment they read different elements of poetry, they were able to apply them in their written outputs. Comparably, from 42 in the pretest, there were only 9 who fell to Did not Meet Expectations in the posttest. In terms of their means, it was 2.05 or their level of performance was Fairly Satisfactory before the printed modules were given to them, but when they used the modules, the mean went to 3.32. This unveils that their performance became Satisfactory. Because of the modules, the students learned to transpose their words from literal to figurative (e.g., from The garden has full of flowers to Roses and daisies blanketed the garden). This is true to Experiential Learning theory, as discussed by Asfeldt, Hvenegaard, and PurcStephenson (2018), that students need to reflect on their knowledge to create an original piece. The students need to have a full grasp of the elements, especially the figurative language. For instance, the study of Roebuck (2015) revealed that for the advanced student, poetry’s wide object and demanding linguistic structures, technical elements such as figurative language, and frequent use of rhythm and repetition provide an intellectual challenge. Therefore, students should master the different elements of poems found in the modules to improve their literary skills to an Outstanding level. Language. In this area, spelling, grammar, and punctuation are required by students for effective writing . Based on the result in the pretest, 37 out of 105 obtained a rating of 1 (Did not Meet Expectations), or their output contained frequent and numerous errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation that interfered with understanding, while 22 fell under Fairly 53 Language 40 35 No. of Students 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 O 5 VS 4 S3 FS 2 DME 1 Mean Md Sd Descrp. Pre Before 12 15 18 22 37 After Post 25 25 27 20 8 2.21 3.50 2.00 3.33 1.40 2.21 FS VS Figure 6 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Poem's Language Satisfactory, or they had some errors in the language conventions. The common errors committed by students in this aspect were subject-verb agreement, punctuation, and tenses of verbs. For instance, they wrote, “The woman ‘carry’ her bag” instead of “The woman ‘carries’ her bag.” Most of them inserted an apostrophe (‘) to the possessive pronoun its, for example: “It’s sound rings to my ears.” They also failed to use comma in separating items on a list, such as, “Inside her bag are bread, fish and umbrella” instead of bread, fish, and umbrella. Students, therefore, are encouraged to read so that they will familiarize themselves with the use of correct grammar and apply it in their writing. 54 Only 12 of them were able to get a rating of 5 (Outstanding), or they had appropriate spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Their written outputs contained minimal errors. These students were Independent readers or with good comprehension based on their Oral Reading Verification. When they were exposed to Creative Writing modules, 27 of them were categorized as Satisfactory, which means that they had only a few errors in their outputs. Twenty (25) of the students had appropriate spelling, grammar, and punctuation. This implies that before writing the final draft, they edited, polished, and revised their poems. It was also observed that they were more careful in their use of language. They used punctuation and tenses of verbs correctly (e.g., It’s Monday, and the azure sky illuminates my smile). Based on their means, it obtained a 2.21 before the exposure of the printed modules. This means that their performance level was Did not Meet Expectations. However, the mean result went to a whopping 3.50 after they used the modules. The students’ performance improved and is now categorized as Very Satisfactory. Since the target level is Outstanding, students’ skills in language conventions should be honed to the fullest extent. They should read the lessons in the modules. Language, being the writer’s toolbox, should be accurate, precise, concrete, and appropriate. As Marimutu (2007) discussed, the tasks of understanding the poetry would require a certain level of proficiency in the language, and not all students have it. Some of them do not have a literature 55 background while in school. Quite a number of students find it challenging to use English as a means of communication. Style. This refers to all the choices that are made to create the poem’s meaning. Style can include technical choices, such as using short or long lines, varying or omitting punctuation, or using a set rhythm or rhyme scheme. Style 45 No.of Students 40 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 5 O 11 VS 4 10 3S 14 FS 2 DME 1 Mean Md Sd Descrp. Pretest Before 29 41 Posttest After 23 38 27 11 7 2.02 3.56 2.00 3.33 1.40 2.21 FS VS Figure 7 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Poem's Style The pretest shows that 41 received the lowest rating, Did not Meet Expectations. This means that their poem lacked style, and the thoughts did not come out clearly. In their poems, a line break was not effective. For example, in verse, Free as the wind, the virus came uninvited, it could have been better if it was split into, Free as the wind, // the virus came uninvited to allow pause and flow 56 of the ideas clearly. Only 11 had a rating of 5 (Outstanding). This implies that the poem was written with a great sense of style, and it was well-thought-of and made sense to the reader. One student wrote, I peep through the window // and see a rainbow. This created an image for the reader because the two sentences were divided by a line break, and it achieved rhyme (i.e., window-rainbow). In the posttest, 38 of the students’ poems were Very Satisfactory. This implies that they were written with a defined style. The thoughts were clear to read and easy to understand. Twenty-three (23) students were Outstanding, meaning they wrote the poem with style. The poems had been well-thought-of and made sense to the reader. An example of this well-thought image from a student was, Endless gloomy skies, // barrels of tears, // wounded hearts as time flies. This time, only 7 belonged to Did not Meet Expectations or whose poem lacked style, and the thoughts did not come out clearly. Comparing the means, before the modular instruction, it had 2.02 or Fairly Satisfactory, but it increased to 3.56 or Very Satisfactory after they used the modules. Before their compositions sounded like prose but after exposure to printed modules, they learned to apply rhythm and melody. These gave their outputs a poetic style. When students are more exposed to reading materials, they will be able to use the style in the pieces. The challenges in the students' poems correspond to the study of Liao (2017) that the students in the second language might be unable to express themselves within the constraints of the forms or structures of grammar-based instruction. They are more likely to think about respecting specific rules while 57 producing poetry, such as rhyme and stanzas. By doing so, students may perceive they have lower poetry writing ability. The best way to develop students’ style in writing poems is to imitate the style of famous poets. The printed modules contain various poems that serve as their guide. In this way, students will be accustomed to composing or writing correctly; hence their performance in this area would become Outstanding. Students' Level of Performance in Writing Fiction This competency presents the students’ level of performance in writing fiction based on the criteria: Elements, Narrative Techniques, Plot Structure and Conflict, and Language. Elements. These refer to the point of view, character, and setting of a story. It is a combination of them that determines a piece of literature’s genre, and how they are used and represented determines the quality of the piece. Figure 8 shows the total number of students in each of the categories tested. It revealed that a total of 48 students got the lowest rating. This means that their fiction had no description of the setting (e.g., The conversation happened in the afternoon of July). The point of view was not consistent or meaningful to the story’s progress and had no determinable theme. Based on their composition, they used I, you, we, and he/she inconsistently the reason the readers were confused (e.g., We should learn to forgive because you are humans.) Only 3 students fell under Outstanding. The students’ written outputs showed that the setting had been skillfully established (e.g., It was in the middle of 58 Elements 50 45 No. of Students 40 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 O 5 VS 4 Pretest Before 3 Posttest After 22 P o FS 2 DME 1 9 3S 16 29 48 41 18 15 9 Mean Md Sd Descrp. 1.96 3.50 2.00 4.00 1.11 1.21 FS VS Figure 8 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Fiction's Elements the night when the moon shone the brightest). The story maintained a consistent point of view, and it enhanced the story. The theme was clear, and it developed throughout the story. Without a doubt, since reading and writing go together, these students who performed well were Independent readers or fast readers with good comprehension. Those students who are under Frustration usually failed to apply the elements of fiction in their compositions. In the posttest, 41 students reached the rating of 4 (Very Satisfactory) or the setting had been established and effective, the story maintained a consistent point of view, but it seldom enhanced the story. The theme was precise and clearly implied in the story. Out of 105, 22 of them were categorized as Outstanding, whose setting had been skillfully established and effective, the story maintained a consistent point of view, and the point of view chosen enhanced the story, the 59 theme was clear and developed throughout the story such as hate, peace, friendship, longing, beating the odds, etc. These were clearly conveyed in their story. Only 9 students were categorized under Did not Meet Expectations after they were exposed to modular instruction. These students fell under Instructional B or students who are fast readers but with poor comprehension. The means before and after the test were also found to be progressive. From 1.96 or Fairly Satisfactory, it augmented to 3.56 or Very Satisfactory. This implies that printed modules enhanced their performance in using the elements of fiction. It was easier for them to use the elements because they were guided by the explanations in the modules. The students, as explained in Self-Directed Learning theory, are the central part of the teaching-learning process because their goals are highly individualized. Students need to exert more effort so that their performance would reach to Outstanding level. The problems in the use of the elements relate to the study of Dunn and Finley (2010) that when students do not know how to create a story plan, it impedes the writing process because the required characters, locations, descriptions, and sequence of events need to be presented cohesively to demonstrate the idea of story structure and to hold the reader’s interest. Narrative Techniques. In fiction, the narrative technique is a strategy used in developing the narrative to make it more interesting and effective. The majority or 43 of the students fell to Did not Meet Expectations in this area. This shows that their fiction did not use dialogue. The students failed to describe 60 Narrative Techniques 45 40 No. of Students 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 O5 VS 4 S3 FS 2 DME1 Pretest Before 6 9 18 29 43 Posttest After 12 35 30 14 13 Mean Md Sd 2.10 3.18 2.00 3.00 1.21 1.19 Descrp. FS S Figure 9 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Fiction's Narrative Techniques the characters in their dialogues, and the way they narrated the story was not that descriptive (e.g., I open the window, and I see the sunrise). They need to build up the characters so that the readers can create mental pictures of the way they act and speak. Moreover, only a few of them skillfully used dialogue and descriptions to develop the characters of the fiction. Twenty-nine (29) of them were Fairly Satisfactory, or the use of narrative techniques was inconsistent, and that characterization was unclear. Since the skill in reading shows an interplay with writing, these students either fell under Instructional B (fast readers with poor comprehension) or Frustration (slow readers with poor comprehension). 61 Meanwhile, in the posttest results, 35 had reached the rating of 4 (Very Satisfactory), or they consistently used narrative techniques. Their writings included at least one clear example of direct and indirect characterizations. As observed, the stories were more understandable when they included meaningful words, especially in narrating events. Such examples from their story were, “The room was dark. Anna jumped in fear, taking three steps at a time downstairs” and “It was windy. The breeze woke me up from my slumber as it gently caressed my hair.” The good reading habits of the students also contributed to their high performance. From 6 in the pretest who were Outstanding, the number doubled in the posttest. Regarding the means, the pretest shows that it got 2.10 or the students’ level of performance was Fairly Satisfactory; however, the mean score climbed to 3.18 in the posttest, or the students’ performance was Satisfactory. It had been observed that they effectively developed narrative techniques because of the examples found in the printed modules. For fiction to be effective, Lee and Vasquez (2017) enumerate various techniques. They said that a writer of fiction could manipulate time and spacing in a story through foreshadowing or providing hints for the future events; in media res or putting the exposition right in the middle of the action; flashback or when the narrative moves back in time usually as memory or remembrance of how the past influenced the current goings-on in the narrative; and through flashforward, this is 62 when the narrative moves forward in time, usually providing a glimpse of the consequences of the present-day action or activities of the characters. Plot Structure and Conflict. This area involves the series of events in fiction and some challenges, struggles, or opposition the character faces. Plot Structure and Conflict 50 45 No. of Students 40 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 O 5 VS 4 S3 FS 2 DME 1 Mean Md Sd Descrp. Pretest Before 4 10 17 28 47 Posttest After 14 23 24 22 12 2.02 3.03 2.00 3.00 1.15 1.21 FS S Figure 10 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Fiction's Plot Structure and Conflict Assessing their ability in this criterion, the raters found that most of their output had no conflict, tone, or meaningful sequence of events that made progression or build-up. From exposition to resolution in their fiction, the events were not elaborated well by the students. They also failed to include the possible conflict the character may experience, such as Man against Himself, Man against Man, Man against Society, Man against Nature, Man Culture, Man against Supernatural Beings, and Man against Machinery. 63 Only 4 students whose story introduced a clear and effective conflict (e.g. Man against Man: Ma’am Raya got pissed off at Mariel when the latter didn’t come to their meeting place). Moreover, the students’ writing contained a consistent and smooth progression of experiences and events. In the posttest, 24 of them were under Satisfactory level which indicates that they introduced a clear conflict (e.g., Man against Himself: Anger takes over my consciousness and After some time, I noticed something peculiar going on). The writing contained a consistent progression of experiences and events. These hooked the readers from the beginning of the story towards the end. Most of the students who performed better in this area were readers of short stories and novels. By the time they identified the plot and conflict in the stories, they could apply them in their composition. Compare to 4 who got a rating of 5 or Outstanding in the pretest, the data shows that it increased to 14 students which means that their story was written with effective conflict, they created tone and outcome, and there was a progression of events in the story. During the pretest, they were not aware of the different conflicts of fiction the reason they failed to apply but after reading the modules, they were able to construct effective conflict that reveals the true colors of the characters (e.g., He wanders through the forest. There he fights his thirst and hunger, and he meets his waterloo.) The explanation is similar to the theory of Experiential Learning as elaborated by Munge, Thomas, and Heck (2018) that students learn by engaging in the activities. 64 Consequently, the mean score of 2.02 during the pretest raised to 3.03, which means that their level of performance improved from Fairly Satisfactory to Satisfactory. Before the plot did not flow smoothly, but after they were introduced to the modules, they were able to organize their exposition, rising and falling actions, climax, and resolution. However, the target level is Outstanding; hence, students are encouraged to write most of the time to enhance their skills in structuring the plot and conflict since majority of them had difficulty in formulating the series of events in a story. The challenges observed in the outputs of the students correspond to the study of Pratiwi (2010), where he found that majority of the students had problems with the design of the plot for the story, covering 77% of the respondents. These problems were caused mainly by the students’ difficulties finding a unique theme that might be interesting for the target reader. Language. Fictional language is created as part of a fictional setting. It is designed with the intent of giving more depth or an appearance to the fiction and still follows the rules in English. It can be gleaned from the graph that most of their fiction demonstrated no command of English. A lot of grammatical errors interfered understanding of the story. Majority of them committed errors on tenses. They shifted from present to past tense, and vice versa. For example, “My brother bought cake after his shift. He ‘slices’ it into eight” instead of “He sliced it into eight” to make it parallel to the first statement. 65 Based on the rating, only 8 of them whose writing demonstrated a skillful command of standard English conventions. In addition, few grammatical errors interfered with understanding. Language 40 No. of Students 35 30 25 20 15 10 Pretest 5 0 FS 2 DME 1 13 3S 17 27 40 32 34 14 10 VS 4 Before Pretest 5O 8 After Posttest 16 Mean 2.25 3.30 Md 2.00 3.00 Sd 1.31 1.15 Descrp. FS S Figure 11 Level of Pretest and Posttest Performance in Fiction's Language When students used the printed modules, 34 of them obtained a rating of 3 (Satisfactory), or they demonstrated command of Standard English conventions. They also employed language and tone appropriate for the audience and purpose. Some grammatical errors interfered with understanding of their story. From 8 in the pretest who were categorized as Outstanding, the number doubled to 16 whose fiction demonstrated a skillful command of standard English conventions. They skillfully wrote for specific readers. It was also found that no grammatical errors interfered with readers’ understanding. They were able to use the rules of 66 grammar correctly. Some of these students were either Independent (fast readers with good comprehension) or Instructional A readers (slow readers but have good comprehension). Based on their level of performance, the mean shows that they were under Fairly Satisfactory level (2.25) during the pretest. However, they improved to Satisfactory (3.30) in their posttest after they were taught using the modular instruction. Students were able to use consistent verb tenses in their story (e.g., Out of my realization, I got home without noticing it. Then I went inside my room and put my things on the table). However, they must consider writing as a habit while observing grammar rules in the editing stage so that they can augment their performance in this technical aspect. This technical problem which consists of grammar, sentence structure, and word choice, comes as a consideration that this beginner writer is not a native speaker of English, as disclosed by Pratiwi (2010). Moreover, based on his observation, the students of creative writing learn English as a foreign language, affecting the language used in the story. There were 77% of the students experienced problems with grammar, and 69% of the students experienced problems in arranging the sentence structure. The problem found in the grammar use is mainly caused by tenses confusion; meanwhile, the main problem with the sentence structure is the level of sentence complexity which causes meaning confusion. 67 Summary of Mean Scores in Poem’s and Fictions’ Pretest and Posttest This subsection shows the overview of the means of the areas in writing poems and fiction along with their descriptive rating. Table 3 Summary of Mean Scores in the Pretest and Posttest in Writing Poem and Fiction PRETEST POSTTEST AREA Mean Description Mean Description Diction 2.03 Fairly Satisfactory 3.38 Very Satisfactory Elements 2.05 Fairly Satisfactory 3.32 Very Satisfactory Language 2.21 Fairly Satisfactory 3.50 Very Satisfactory Style 2.02 Fairly Satisfactory 3.56 Very Satisfactory 2.08 Fairly Satisfactory 3.44 Very Satisfactory Elements 1.96 Fairly Satisfactory 3.50 Very Satisfactory Narrative Techniques 2.10 Fairly Satisfactory 3.18 Satisfactory Plot Structure & Conflict 2.02 Fairly Satisfactory 3.03 Satisfactory Language 2.25 Fairly Satisfactory 3.30 Very Satisfactory 2.08 Fairly Satisfactory 3.25 Very Satisfactory Poem Composite Mean Fiction Composite Mean Table 3 unveils that in the pretest in writing poems, all the four areas had a descriptive rating of Fairly Satisfactory, but during posttest, it improved to Very Satisfactory. The Style had the most significant leap from a mean of 2.02, it reached 3.56 after the students were exposed to modular instruction. Correspondingly, diction’s mean of 2.03, Fairly Satisfactory stepped up to 3.38, Very Satisfactory. Students used concrete words rather than abstract. 68 Collectively, the pretest had a composite mean of 2.08, Fairly Satisfactory, while in the posttest, it went to 3.44. This means that their performance was Very Satisfactory in writing the poem. Indeed, the utilization of modules complemented the increase of performance in the poem. Students were able to apply accurate, concrete, appropriate, and precise diction, as well as elements, techniques, and style in their written outputs. Similarly, the lowest mean in writing fiction was 1.96 in the area of Elements followed by Plot Structure & Conflict, which had a mean of 2.02. However, the student's performance improved when they used the printed modules. For instance, in the Elements, the mean incremented to 3.50, or their performance became Very Satisfactory. The same is true in the area of Language. From 2.25 or Fairly Satisfactory in the pretest, it increased to 3.30 or Very Satisfactory in the posttest. In the Narrative Techniques and Plot Structure, the students’ performance was Satisfactory in the posttest. The composite mean yielded a 2.08 (Fairly Satisfactory) before the printed modules were given to the students. In the posttest, it reached 3.25 (Very Satisfactory). These favorable contributions and impact imply that their performance in writing fiction in the four areas was Very Satisfactory. This means that they learned the lesson in creative writing because of their exposure to printed modules. These became both their learning resources and instructional materials in honing their writing skills. Despite the increase of students’ mean scores, however, they 69 should develop their skills since they did not achieve the Outstanding level in all the areas tested. With these positive and promising results, students should read intensively the lessons found in the printed modules in Creative Writing, accomplish the tasks and activities, follow the tips and techniques in order to progress their performance and reach the Outstanding level in writing poem and fiction. These modules cater to their needs and abilities. As discussed in Self-Directed Learning theory, students control their learning objectives and means in order to meet personal goals or the perceived demands of their individual context. In his study Modular Method of Teaching, Sejpal (2013) concluded that the modular method of teaching is a more effective, recent, and more technologybased teaching method in the present educational field. It also provides more flexibility to distance teaching mode as well to learners. Indeed, this is timely in the time of crisis where face-to-face instruction is not possible. STUDENTS’ AND PARENTS’ LEARNING EXPERIENCES IN MODULAR INSTRUCTION This section assessed the respondents’ level of agreement and perceptions when they were exposed to printed modules in Creative Writing regarding the following areas: Problems and Concerns, Ease of Access, Evaluations, Delivery, and Satisfaction. 70 Problems and Concerns This area in modules refers to the extent of the possible challenges and drawbacks encountered by the students and parents when they used these learning materials. Students. It can be seen in Figure 12 that 73 students strongly agreed that the modules fit their needs and goals. Sixty-two (62) said that they are disciplined enough to do their studies. This means that the modules contributed to the skills that they ought to acquire. Only a few students disagreed on this area. It can be further seen that they strongly agreed on items 1, 2, and 3 and agreed on items 4 and 5. The composite mean in this area was 3.27 or interpreted to be Very Positive. Based on their responses, their study habits improved to a great extent. Parents. Meanwhile, 60 parents agreed that modules fit in in work obligations and study time of their child. More than half of them agreed that their child has enough time to study with modules or their child is being disciplined to their studies. There were 25 who disagreed on the item, My child can complete assignments before deadlines. Some of the students have work obligations the reason that sometimes they cannot finish the task ahead of time, especially those that require intensive reading and research. Based on their means, the parents agreed on the 4 items except in item 2 Modules fit his/her goals which was strongly agreed with a mean of 3.26. The composite mean for the parents was 3.05 and was interpreted to be Positive. This means that parents’ guidance contributed to students’ performance. 71 Problems and Concerns 80 No. of Students 70 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Mean 1. I have enough time to study with modules. 2. Modules fit my needs and goals. 3.25 = SA 3.61 = SA 3. I'm being disciplined enough to do my studies. 4. Modules fit in work obligations with study time. 3.33 = SA 3.07 = A 5. I can complete assignments before deadlines. 3.08 = A ` Composite Mean 3.27 = Very Positive No. of Parents 60 40 20 0 1. My child has enough time to study with modules. Mean 3.03 = A 2. Modules fit his/her needs and goals. 3.26 = SA 3. My child is being disciplined enough to do my studies. 2.93 = A 4. Modules fit in work obligations with study time. 3.07 = A 5. My child can complete assignments before deadlines. 2.97 = A ` Composite Mean 3.05 = Positive Strongly Agree Agree Disagree Strongly Disagree Figure 12. Students' and Parents' Learning Experiences in Module's Problems and Concerns 72 The printed modules in Creative Writing contain lessons and activities to be accomplished by the students to hone their writing skills. Cruickshank et al. (2003) believed that modular instruction guides students in achieving their personal goals; thus, making them responsible and independent learners. With this instruction, they develop a feeling of satisfaction. Ease of Access Refers to the extent of the module’s capability to be used and the materials needed for learning. Students. The diagram shows that 48 students strongly agreed that it’s easy for them to locate reference materials required for tasks. There were 46 of them who strongly agreed that it’s easy to access equipment to learn and practice skills. Because the topics in the modules are carefully chosen, students found it easier to use other references. Close to half of them agreed that it’s easy to return the modules to my teachers and easy to contact the teaches when having problems. All five items were agreed upon by the respondents. The composite mean of 3.12 suggests that they found the ease of accessibility positive. Parents. The responses of the parents revealed that most of them agreed on the five items. There were 48 who agreed that the printed modules are easy to get from the teacher. Because of the pandemic, they are the ones who went to the school to get the modules of their students. Forty-five (45) agreed that it’s easy to return the modules to the teacher. Because of their effort to provide education to 73 Ease of Access 50 40 No. of Studnets 30 20 10 0 6. The printed modules are easy to get from my teachers. Mean 3.03 = A Composite Mean 7. It's easy for me to locate reference materials required for tasks. 3.17 = A 8. It's easy to access equipment to learn and practice skills. 3.12 = A 9. It's easy to contact my teacher when having problems. 10. It's easy to return the modules to my teachers. 3.09 = A 3.19 = A ` 3.12 = Positive Chart Title 50 No. of Parents 40 30 20 10 0 6. The printed modules are easy to get from the teacher. Mean 2.90 = A Composite Mean 7. It is easy for my child to locate reference materials required for tasks. 2.55 = A 8. It is easy for my child to access equipment to learn and practice skills. 9. It is easy to contact the teachers when having problems. 2.54 = A 3.08 = A 3.08 = A ` 2.85 = Positive Very Positive 4 10. It is easy to return the modules to the teacher. Positive 3 Negative 2 Very Negative 1 Figure 13. Students' and Parents' Learning Experiences in Module's Ease of Access 74 their students, the latter showed interest in their studies as seen in their performance in the Creative Writing course. Meanwhile, 41 of them disagreed on the item, It is easy for my child to locate reference materials required for tasks. According to them, their students do not have specific books in writing as their reference. Despite the challenge, the means of the five items showed that the parents agreed to them. The composite mean of 2.85 posits that ease of accessibility was positive. With these results, language teachers should use materials that respond to the learning styles of the students. In the study of Nardo (2017), English teachers are encouraged to create learning activities such as printed modules for students. These modules will encourage them to become independent with minimal supervision. They will also work to meet their desired goals. In return, the teachers can prepare instructional materials that respond to their needs. Thus, the enhanced module crafted in this study is recommended. Evaluations This area of modules describes the assessments, tasks, and activities found in the module. Students. Figure 14 presents the students’ and parents' learning experiences on modules’ evaluations. It can be gleaned that majority or 70 of the students strongly agreed that the tests and activities are for practical use with a mean of 3.48. There were 55 of them who strongly agreed that the instructions in the study guides are clear having a mean of 3.25. In the item, The instructions in 75 Evaluations 70 60 No. of Students 50 40 30 20 10 0 11. The instructions in study guides are clear. Mean 3.28 = SA Composite Mean 12. It's easy for 13. It's easy to me to process the understand the contents of the study guides & tests. assessments. 3.22 = A 14. The instructions in the modules are easy to follow. 3.05 = A 15. The tests and activities are for practical use. 3.23 = A 3.48 = SA ` 3.25 = Very Positive Chart Title 70 60 50 No. of Parents 40 30 20 10 0 Mean 11. The instructions in study guides are clear. 12. It is easy for 13. It is easy for my child to him/her to understand the process the study guides & contents of the assessments. tests. 3.20 = A 3.00 = A Composite Mean 2.67 = A 14. The instructions in the modules are easy to follow. 3.04 = A 3.00 = A ` 2.98 = Positive Very Positive 15. The tests and activities are for practical use. Positive Negative Very Negative Figure 14. Students' and Parents' Learning Experiences in Module's Evaluations 76 the modules are easy to follow, 53 also strongly agreed. Collectively, the module’s evaluations had a composite mean of 3.25 or were perceived by the students to be very positive. This implies that they were satisfied with the tests and activities found in the modules. Likely, the tests and activities brought a new concept of learning based on their perceptions. Parents. Majority of them agreed that the tests and activities are for practical use with a mean of 3.00. Out of 105 respondents, 50 of them agreed that the instructions in the modules are easy to follow with a mean of 3.04. The respondents agreed to all five items. During the interview, parents said that modules developed the reading comprehension and writing skills of their children. They observed that they were more focused on their study habits and eager to learn independently. However, others responded that there were questions that were difficult to understand. Despite this challenge, it can be related that the composite mean of 2.98 proved that they embraced and perceived the modules’ evaluations to have positively contributed to their children’s learning. Undeniably, the role of parents in modular instruction is crucial because other than the teachers, they are the ones who extend guidance and utmost support to the students, especially when the latter have difficulty answering or completing the tasks. The printed modules, according to Cruickshank et al. (2003), guide and track the parents and teachers in their students’ progress. With the use of these modules, students maintain their focus and motivation. 77 Delivery This term describes how the module contributes to the students’ learning and development of their skills. Students. Figure 15 explains that 74 of the students strongly agreed the modules helped them practice the skills required, with a mean of 3.64. Seventytwo (72) strongly agreed that it helped them understand the subject matter well, with a mean of 3.56. There were 65 of them who responded that modules allowed them to complete course requirements with a mean of 3.50. The composite mean of 3.35 emphasized that they perceived the modules’ delivery as very positive in developing their skills. Parents. Perceptions of the parents show that they agreed on the item, They allow my child to complete his/her requirements with a mean of 2.96. Similarly, 49 parents agreed that modules helped their child practice skills required with a mean of 3.25, modules allowed their child to have access to their teacher having a mean of 2.57. Based on their interview, parents observed that students were obliged to answer or become responsible to do the tasks found in the modules. The composite mean of 2.85 revealed that they perceived this area as positive. With the use of modules, students were trained to write down their thoughts, and they were able to express themselves. In developing students’ writing skills, educators feel the need to provide learning activities or resource materials to aid them in their writing. These include textbooks and modules that allow them to be proficient in the second language (Waguey, 2012). When students are exposed to 78 Delivery 80 70 60 No. of Students 50 40 30 20 10 0 16. It helps me 17.They allow understand the me to complete subject matter. course requirements. Mean 3.56 = SA Composite Mean 3.50 = SA 18. The use of modules in Creative Writing suits my lifestyle. 19. They help me practice the skills required. 3.16 = A 3.64 = SA 20. Modules allow me to have ready access to the teacher. 2.87 = A ` 3.35 = Very Positive Chart Title 50 40 No. of Parents 30 20 10 0 Mean 16. Creative Writing modules help my child understand the subject matter. 17.They allow him/her to complete course requirements. 2.94 = A 2.96 = A Composite Mean 18. The use of modules in Creative Writing suits my child's lifestyle. 19. They help my child practice the skills required. 2.74 = A 2.57 = A ` 2.85 = Positive Very Positive 3.25 = SA 20. Modules allow my child to have ready access to his/her teacher. Positive Negative Very Negative Figure 15. Students' and Parents' Learning Experiences in Module's Delivery 79 modules and other learning materials, their communicative competence in English would increase. Satisfaction This variable assesses how satisfied the parents and students are when they use modules in learning creative writing. Students. Figure 16 unveils that majority of the students strongly agreed that they looked forward to doing their assignments with a mean of 3.43. There were 59 who would recommend this method of learning to other students, with a mean of 3.27. The 3.26 composite mean proved that their level of satisfaction was very positive. Parents. Most of them agreed that their child looked forward to doing their assignments, their child prepared the assignments most of the time, their child looked forward to study sessions. All the five items in this area were perceived to be agreed by them. The composite mean of 2.96 uncovers that their level of satisfaction was positive. This means that they are willing to the idea that their children learn using the printed modules. However, according to them, some of the students were crammed because there were many tasks and activities to be accomplished. When students exert effort in learning the language using creative writing modules, it would be a good avenue for them to land a job in the future since written communication is required. This is true to the study of Shaw and Moriarty (2012), wherein the modules enabled students to become expressive of 80 Satisfaction 60 No. of Students 50 40 30 20 10 0 21. With the modules, I look forward to my study sessions. Mean 22. I prepare my assignments most of the time. 3.22 = A Composite Mean 3.30 = SA 3.43 = SA 24. I would 25. I would recommend the recommend this use of modules method of to other subject learning to areas other students. 3.27 = SA 3.09 = A ` 3.26 = Very Positive Chart Title 60 No. of Parents 23. I look forward to doing my assessments. 50 40 30 20 10 0 21. With the modules, my child looks forward to study sessions. Mean 3.12 = A Composite Mean 22. My child prepares his/her assignments most of the time. 3.13 = A 23. He/she 24. I would 25. I would looks forward recommend the recommend this to doing his/her use of modules method of assessments. to other subject learning to areas other students. 3.08 = A 2.66 = A ` 2.96 = Positive Very Positive 2.81 = A Positive Negative Very Negative Figure 16. Students' and Parents' Learning Experiences in Module's Satisfaction 81 their feelings, and they used this skill to interact with others outside their classrooms without a feeling of doubt and apprehension. Summary of Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences This part shows the overview of the means along with their descriptive rating in modular instruction in the five areas, namely problems and concerns, ease of access, evaluations, delivery, and satisfaction. Table 4 Summary of Students’ and Parents’ Learning Experiences in Modular Instruction Students Parameters Parents Composite Mean Descriptive Rating Composite Mean Descriptive Rating Problems & Concerns 3.27 Very Positive 3.05 Positive Ease of Access 3.12 Positive 2.85 Positive Evaluations 3.25 Very Positive 2.98 Positive Delivery 3.35 Very Positive 2.85 Positive Satisfaction 3.26 Very Positive 2.96 Positive 3.25 Very Positive 2.95 Positive Total Students. In the area Problems and Concerns, Modules fit my needs and goals had the highest mean of 3.61 or interpreted to be strongly agree. This was followed by I’m being disciplined enough my studies with a mean of 3.33. In the area Ease of Access, the student-respondents agreed on all the items. This obtained a composite mean of 3.12 or manifested a positive influence on the respondents. Meanwhile, in the Evaluations, the items The tests and 82 activities are for practical use and The instructions in study guides are clear were strongly agreed by the students with means of 3.48 and 3.28, respectively. In the Delivery, the highest mean was 3.64 (Strongly Agree) for the item, They help me practice the skills required followed by 3.56 (Strongly Agree) for the item, It helps me understand the subject matter well. This means that they were contented with the delivery of the modules’ contents. Finally, in Satisfaction, the mean of 3.43 for the item I look forward to doing my assessments, 3.30 for I prepare my assignments most of the time, and 3.27 for I would recommend the use of modules to other subject areas implied that they strongly agreed or satisfied with the modules. The composite mean of 3.26 can be interpreted that the modules had a very positive contribution to their learning. This correlates to the study of Shaw & Moriarty (2012), that learning activities contributed to their academic achievement and work experiences. Through the writing sessions, they developed their personal, vocational, and educational aspects. This module offers a model of best practices. First, it developed students’ learning through reflection. Second, the module opens a collaboration with the students in the real world. This means that their learning experiences catered to their personal growth. Third, they allowed students to express their feelings. Fourth, they made them connected to their community and fostered their sustainable development. Parents. In the area Problems and Concerns, only item, Modules fit his/her needs and goals was strongly agreed by the parents with a mean of 3.26. The lowest mean was 2.97 in the item, My child can complete assignments before 83 deadlines. Because of the many subjects or modules students have to accomplish, some cannot complete the tasks in a specified time. In the area Ease of Access, all the items were agreed upon by them. The highest mean was It is easy to return the modules to the teacher, 3.19. In modules’ Evaluations, the item, The instructions in study guides are clear had a mean of 3.20 followed by It is easy for my child to understand the study guides & assessments and The tests and activities are for practical use with the same mean of 3.00. These results suggest that the parents observed their children have fully grasped the series of tests and activities in the modules. Meanwhile, in the Delivery, all the items were agreed by the parent-respondents except in the item, They help my child practice the skills required, which was strongly agreed with a mean of 3.25. With this promising result, parents believed that creative writing modules prepare their children in the future endeavor since the modules hone not only their ability to write but also in learning the second language. Undeniably, as discussed by Eckhoff and Urbach (2008), creative writing improves the critical thinking and communicative skills of the students since the lessons included were the essential part of the curriculum. Therefore, in second language learning, modules play a vital role. In terms of Satisfaction, they agreed to all five items. The parents observed that their children prepared the assignments most of the time, and they looked forward to their study sessions. Parents were quoted to have said during the interview that creative writing “modules provided meaningful ideas” as well as “gave more time for students to reflect.” The composite mean of 2.95 indicates that 84 they considered the modules in Creative Writing to have a positive impact on their children’s overall performance. The development of self-learning materials or resources for modular instruction, according to Dewey (1969), responds to students’ needs, abilities from diverse backgrounds, which in turn is the primary goal of inclusive education. For this reason, modules should be introduced to students since they helped them analyze the lessons well. TEST OF SIGNIFICANT DIFFERENCE The following table reflects the significant difference among the mean scores of writing a poem and fiction with respect to their specified areas. It can be seen in Table 5 that in Writing Poem, all the means in the four areas in the posttest improved. The t-values ranged from 4.39 to 7.51 have corresponding p-values (.000). Since the p-values are less than the set alpha (α=0.05 ), these findings result in the rejection of the null hypothesis "𝐻𝑜 1: There is no significant difference between the pre-test and post-test of the respondents.” This means that a significant difference existed in the pretest and posttest scores in each criterion under writing a poem. The results further imply that utilizing printed modules in teaching creative writing is effective in improving the writing skills of students, as evident in their posttest scores, which were significantly higher than their pretest performance. Similarly, all four areas in writing fiction improved after the students used the printed modules. As seen in the Table, the obtained t-values and p-value of .000, have resulted to reject the null hypothesis "𝐻𝑜 1: There is no significant 85 difference between the pre-test and post-test of the respondents.” This means that a significant difference in the scores of the students existed among the four variables under writing fiction, indicating an effectiveness of the printed module to improve their writing skills. Table 5 Mean Difference Between the Pretest and Posttest Results in Writing Poem and Fiction Variables Test Mean Pre Post Pre Post Pre Post Pre Post 2.03 3.38 2.05 3.32 2.21 3.50 2.02 3.56 Pre Post Pre Post Pre Post Pre 1.96 3.50 2.10 3.18 2.02 3.03 2.25 Post 3.30 tValue pValue Decision Interpreta tion 6.224 .000 Reject H01 Significant 5.819 .000 Reject H01 Significant 4.392 .000 Reject H01 Significant 7.512 .000 Reject H01 Significant 10.092 .000 Reject H01 Significant 6.622 .000 Reject H01 Significant 6.581 .000 Reject H01 Significant 6.474 .000 Reject H01 Significant Writing Poem Diction Elements Language Conventions Style Writing Fiction Elements Narrative Techniques Plot and Conflict Language The increase of students’ mean scores in the posttest can be attributed to the use of printed modules since they were given a chance to explore and discover their own learnings and become active doers of the activities required to accomplish. This, in return, corresponds to the study of Cruickshank et al. (2003) that printed modules have the ability to enhance students’ academic performance. 86 TEST OF SIGNIFICANT RELATIONSHIP Using Chi-square, this section presents the test of the significant relationship between the students' performance and their identified profile. Respondents’ Performance and their Identified Profile The result on the respondents’ performance in Creative Writing and their identified profile is presented in Table 6. Table 6 Respondents’ Performance and their Identified Profile Χ2 Cramer's V Interpreta tion pValue α Decision Interpreta tion Performance and ORV 35.24 0.419 Moderate 0.000 0.05 Reject H02 Significant Performance and Previous Grade in English 35.76 0.443 Moderate 0.000 0.05 Reject H02 Significant Performance and Parents’ Educational Attainment 15.69 0.284 Low 0.109 0.05 Failed to Reject H02 Not Significant Performance and Parents’ Income 12.48 0.239 Low 0.254 0.05 Failed to Reject H02 Not Significant Variables Based on the Table, it can be observed that the variables Performance and ORV and Performance and Previous Grade in English had a p-value of 0.000, which is less than the alpha set at 0.005. Therefore, the decision is to reject the hypothesis. This means that a significant relationship existed between them. Under Cramer’s V, 0.419 and 0.443, respectively, tell that the two sets of variables have a moderate association. This can be interpreted to mean that the 87 level of reading comprehension of the students is associated with their writing skills. As pointed out by some researchers, reading and writing are strictly intertwined and connected. For Olness (2005) and Tsai (2006), they both consider reading and writing as similar processes of composing in which the reader or the author interacts with a text. As has been noticed in classroom experiences by Williams (2003), good readers are mainly good writers. Undeniably, through reading, students learn new vocabulary, organize their thoughts well, and allow them to create connections to their own experiences and emotions; thus, making them better writers. In Performance and Parents’ Highest Educational Attainment, the pvalue of 0.109 is greater than the alpha. This results in the acceptance of the null hypothesis, which means that there is no significant relationship between the two or the parents’ education did not contribute to students' performance. There were students who performed better in writing regardless of their parents’ low education than those students whose parents were college graduates. This corresponds to the study of Nelson (2009) that parents’ education mediates but generally does not directly influence all dependent variables of student success. In the same manner, Parents’ Income did not significantly contribute to students’ performance, as evident in the p-value of 0.254. This is in consonance with the study of Gabriel (2015), where it established a non-significant correlation between the occupation of parents and the academic performance of learners. 88 This can be elaborated that senior high students who came from low-income families were seen to work extra hard to liberate themselves from such conditions and are therefore likely to perform well academically. Respondents’ Performance and their Learning Experiences This section presents the test of the significant relationship between the students' performance in creative writing and their learning experiences in the utilization of modules. Table 7 Respondents’ Performance and their Learning Experiences Variables Χ2 Cramer's V Interpreta tion pValue α Decision Interpreta tion Performance and Learning Experience 19.41 0.284 Low 0.004 0.05 Reject H03 Significant Table 7 presents the relationship between Performance and Learning Experience. The variables obtained a p-value of 0.004 less than the set alpha at 0.005. This results in the rejection of the null hypothesis, "𝐻𝑜 3: There is no significant relationship between the respondents’ profile and their learning experiences.” which means that a significant relationship existed between the aforementioned variables. This can be interpreted that the very positive perceptions of modules as part of students’ learning experiences correlated with their performance. The improvement of their level of progress was due to the use of Creative Writing 89 modules. In totality, students’ positive learning experiences towards the use of the module resulted in a better performance. Corollary to the study of Morris (2019), learning experiences in self-directed learning theory develop the students' abilities. In addition, as pointed out by Sadiq and Zamir (2014), the use of printed modules fosters life-long learning. This means that even after graduation, students can recall and apply the knowledge, concepts, and skills found in the modules. 90 Chapter 4 SUMMARY, FINDINGS, CONCLUSIONS, AND RECOMMENDATIONS To give a succinct overview of the results of the study, this chapter spells out the summary, findings, conclusions, and recommendations. SUMMARY The main thrust of this study was to assess the level of performance in Creative Writing via modular distance learning in the new normal as well as students’ and parents’ learning experiences in the utilization of printed modules in Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School and Mainit High School, Siaton 1 District, Siaton, Negros Oriental for S.Y. 2020–2021 as basis for a development plan. Specifically, this study sought answers to the subproblems: the profile of the respondents in terms of previous grade in English, reading proficiency based on their oral reading verification, instructional materials available at home, parents’ highest educational attainment, and parents’ combined monthly income. Likely, it focused on the level of learners’ performance in the pretest and posttest in the areas of poem: diction, elements, language conventions, and style; and in the areas of fiction: elements, narrative techniques, plot structure and conflict, and language. Also, the study put an emphasis on the extent of students’ and parents’ perceptions on the utilization of modules, the significant difference between the pretest and posttest results, and significant difference between the students’ level 91 of performance and their profile as well as the learning experiences on the use of modules in order to craft learning modules as part of the development plan. Accordingly, questionnaires were used to assess the students’ level of performance in writing a poem and fiction. Rubric scoring was used by the raters to grade students’ output. The respondents of the study were the 105 Grade 11 students and parents of Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School and Mainit High School during the S.Y. 2020–2021. To interpret the data, the following statistical tools were used, namely: Simple Percentage, Weighted Mean, dependent t-test, and Chi-square. Consequently, the results served as a basis for crafting enhanced learning modules to hone the creative writing skills of the students. FINDINGS In Respondents’ Profile, the variable Previous Grade in English revealed that 36 or 34.29% had their grades between 85 and 89%. This means that their level of progress and achievement was Satisfactory. There were 25 or 23.81% who were in the bracket 75–79% or their achievement was Fairly Satisfactory. Meanwhile, 17 or 16.19% belonged to 90–100%, or Outstanding level. In Reading Proficiency based on Oral Reading Verification (ORV), 33 or 31.43% were under Instructional B or fast readers with poor comprehension. There were 26 or 24.76% who fell under Frustration level or slow readers with slow comprehension. Meanwhile, 24 or 22.86% were Independent readers or fast 92 readers with good comprehension, while 22 or 20.95% were categorized as Instructional A or slow readers with good comprehension. In Instructional Materials Available at Home, majority of them had smartphones. Fifty-seven (57) or 54.29% owned books, while 43 or 40.95% had a radio. Less than 13% owned laptops and computers. In Parents’ Highest Educational Attainment, majority or 43.81% were Elementary level. There were 22 or 20.95% who were Elementary graduates. Only 6 or 5.71% were College level and 5 or 4.76% were College graduate. In Parents’ Combined Monthly Income, 36 or 34.29% had ₱5,000– ₱6,999. There were 10 or 9.52% whose monthly income fell under ₱9,000– ₱10,999. In terms of Diction in the Level of Students’ Performance in Poetry, the mean score in the pretest was 2.03 or Fairly Satisfactory. In the posttest, it reached 3.38 or Satisfactory. In Elements, the pretest mean was 2.05 or Fairly Satisfactory, while in the posttest, it went up to 3.32 or Satisfactory. In Language, the pretest mean was 2.21 or Fairly Satisfactory, while in the posttest it became 3.50 or Very Satisfactory. In Style, the pretest was 2.02, Fairly Satisfactory. In the posttest, it obtained a mean of 3.56 or Very Satisfactory. In fictions’ Elements, the mean of 1.96 (Fairly Satisfactory) improved to 3.50 (Very Satisfactory) in the posttest. In Narrative Techniques, the pretest yielded a mean of 2.10 or Fairly Satisfactory. In the posttest, it reached 3.18 or Satisfactory. In Plot Structure and Conflict, the pretest mean was 2.02 or Fairly Satisfactory. In the posttest, it augmented to 3.03 or Satisfactory. Finally, in 93 Language, the mean score of 2.25 (Fairly Satisfactory) in the pretest incremented to 3.30 (Satisfactory) in the posttest. Regarding Learning Experiences in Modular Instruction, the students’ perceptions in Problems and Concerns had a composite mean of 3.27 or Very Positive, while for the parents’ perceptions, it was positive with a mean of 3.05. In Ease of Access, the composite means were 3.12 or Positive for students while 2.85 or Positive for parents. In Evaluations, students had a composite mean of 3.25 or Very Positive while 2.98 or Positive for parents. In Delivery, the students’ composite mean was 3.35 or Very Positive while 2.85 or Positive for parents. In Satisfaction, the students’ perceptions yielded a mean of 3.26 or Very Positive while for the parents, it had a composite mean of 2.96 or Positive. Collectively, the students’ perceptions had a composite mean of 3.25 (Very Positive) while 2.95 (Positive) for the parents’. In Significant Difference between the Pretest and Posttest, using dependent t-test, the p-values of all areas were 0.000 or less than 0.005. The null hypothesis "𝐻𝑜 1: There is no significant difference between the pre-test and posttest of the respondents.” was rejected. This means that a significant difference existed between the pretest and posttest results. In Relationship between Students’ Creative Writing Performance and their Profile, the variables Performance and ORV and Performance and Previous Grade in English had a p-value of 0.000, less than 0.05. This means that a significant relationship existed between them. However, there was no significant relationship between Performance and Parents’ Educational 94 Attainment (p-value of 0.109) and their Parents’ Combined Monthly Income (pvalue of 0.254). In Relationship between Students’ Creative Writing Performance and their Learning Experiences, the p-value of 0.004 suggested that a significant relationship existed between these two variables. CONCLUSIONS Based on the findings, modular instruction improved the students’ performance in Creative Writing from Fairly Satisfactory in the pretest to Very Satisfactory in the posttest. Meanwhile, students and parents manifested their learning experiences in the utilization of modules as very positive and positive, respectively. Statistically, students’ previous grade in English and their levels of reading comprehension had significantly influenced their creative writing performance. However, parents’ educational attainment and their combined monthly income did not affect students’ performance. RECOMMENDATIONS Since modular instruction improved the creative writing skills of the students, it is recommended that language teachers, especially creative writing teachers are to make use of the crafted learning modules as a way of developing and enhancing students’ creative writing skills and competencies to the greatest extent since the target level of progress and achievement is outstanding. They are also tasked to convene to implement the matrix of activities found in the development plan. 95 Chapter 5 DEVELOPMENT PLAN Rationale This research work entitled “Teaching Creative Writing to Grade 11 Students via Modular Distance Learning in the New Normal” was made to assess the students’ level of performance and progress in writing poems and fiction. Based on the findings, there is a dire need to develop students’ skills and competence in these aspects of creative writing. To address this problem, the researcher crafted the development plan which includes the enhancement of the modules in Creative Writing course. This module contains a series of activities to be accomplished by the students. The positive outcome would help language teachers and school administrators achieve the goal of high competence and outstanding performance in creative writing among their students as the skill is of paramount importance in learning the English language. Objectives The following objectives for the development plan are constructed in order to improve students’ performance in creative writing as well as to address problems of the modules: 1. to implement the proposed modules to the English teachers Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School and Mainit High School in Siaton 1 district, Siaton, Negros Oriental; 96 2. to improve the quality of implementation of modular instruction by employing suitable and efficient language teaching strategies in the time of crisis; and 3. to enhance students’ creative writing skills and competence through the use of the enhanced learning module. Scheme of Implementation To make this output realize, the researcher will present the development plan to the school heads of Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School and Mainit High School. After which, sessions will be organized involving English teachers handling Creative Writing. On the part of the students, they will be asked to study the lessons, accomplish the tasks, and let themselves engage in the activities in the crafted modules. Teachers shall monitor the progress of the students in order for them to achieve mastery of the competencies. Also, during in-service training wherein English teachers of Siaton 1 district will gather either face-to-face or virtual, the researcher will ask permission to the district supervisor to present this learning material to give language teachers an idea of new teaching strategy to be employed, i.e., modular-assisted instruction, so as students’ creative writing skills will be improved. 1 DEVELOPMENT PLAN SY 2021-2022 Areas Problems & Concerns Objective Produce modules in Creative Writing that respond to students’ needs and learning styles. Strategies Time Frame Persons Involved Fund Source Budget Enhanced printed modules SeminarWorkshop Year round Improve the creative writing performance of the students Resource Speaker, Teachers, Sch Head MOOE ₱5,000.00 Communicate with students & parents in any platforms so that questions can be accommodated Ease of Access Include reference materials for students’ assignments/tasks SeminarWorkshop Year round Teachers, Sch Head MOOE ₱2,000.00 Enhanced printed modules Students’ performance reached Outstanding level Improve instructions, study guides, assessments Retool teachers on appropriate assessment tools to be used Students’ performance reached Outstanding level Built rapport between teachers and parents Improve the creative writing performance of the students Evaluation Expected Output SeminarWorkshop Year round Resource Speakers, Teachers, Sch Head MOOE ₱5,000.00 Developed teachers’ competence in the use of assessment tools Enhanced printed modules Actual Accomplishment Remarks 2 Students’ performance reached Outstanding level Improve the creative writing performance of the students Expedite learning by making subject matter or lessons easier for students Delivery Prepare lessons for enhancement of practical skills. Enhanced printed modules SeminarWorkshop Year round Teachers, Sch Head MOOE ₱3,000.00 Improve the creative writing performance of the students Students’ performance reached Outstanding level Motivate students in the use of printed modules Satisfied and motivated students Assure modules’ quality prior to distribution Enhanced printed modules Satisfaction Improve the creative writing performance of the students SeminarWorkshop Year round Teachers, Sch Head MOOE ₱2,000 Students’ performance reached Outstanding level 98 99 MATRIX OF ACTIVITIES Time Day 1 Day 2 Day 3 7:45–8:00 Registration Management of Learning (MOL) Management of Learning (MOL) 8:00–9:00 Opening Program Assessment Strategies in the New Normal 21st Century Teaching 9:00–10:30 10:30–12:00 (Mrs. Isabel B. Pusalan) (Mr. Rene Boy D. Gadiana) Self-Directed Learning in the New Normal The School & Community Relationships (Mrs. Jeany P. Arangco) (Mrs. Jimalyn E. Borreros) 12:00–12:45 Writing of Enhanced Learning Modules in Creative Writing LUNCH Management of Learning (MOL) Management of Learning (MOL) Unpacking of Most Essential Learning Competencies (MELCs) Problem-Solving & Working with Parents 2:30–3:30 (Mr. Marvin Q. Amparado) (Mrs. Airen Jun B. Kadusale) 3:30–4:30 Contextualization, Localization, and Indigenization of Modules Development Education: Innovations for Modular Instruction 4:30–5:00 (Mr. Edsel Mari A. Uy) (Ms. Mary Mae V. Diaz) Closing Program Class Manager Mr. Joseph A. Agor Mr. Joseph A. Agor Mr. Joseph A. Agor Process Observer Mr. Gaudioso G. Gaitera Jr. Mr. Gaudioso G. Gaitera Jr. Mr. Gaudioso G. Gaitera Jr. 12:45–1:00 1:00–2:30 Prepared by: JOSUA D. QUINIQUITO Researcher Management of Learning (MOL) Quality Assurance: Editing, Revising, Polishing of Modules 100 ENHANCED LEARNING MODULE IN CREATIVE WRITING JOSUA D. QUINIQUITO May 2021 101 TABLE OF CONTENTS Page Reading and Writing Poetry 102 Overview 102 Learning Competencies 102 Diction 103 Elements of Poetry 106 Language Convention 109 Style 113 Reading and Writing Fiction 118 Overview 118 Learning Competencies 118 Elements of Fiction 119 Plot Structure and Conflict 125 Narrative Techniques 133 Language 137 102 Reading & Writing Poetry Overview: Good day students. Welcome to Module in Creative Writing in our journey to become creative writers! This module will introduce you to perhaps one of the oldest types of art developed as a type of literary genre even before our ancestors have learned to write. Folk stories have been told for generations in verses and other forms of poetic language that had fascinated us even to this day. At the end of this module, you are expected to: 1. use appropriate diction in poetry; 2. identify the various elements; 3. determine specific forms and language conventions of poetry; 4. explore innovative style and techniques in writing poetry; and 5. compose a short, well-crafted poem applying the various elements, style, techniques, and literary devices. 103 Name : ____________________________ Date : __________________ Year & Section Score : _________ : ________ Subject Matter : Diction Writing Guide : Diction or word usage is the author’s choice or selection of words or vocabulary; the artistic arrangement that words constitute. Inappropriate use of diction is called diction error. Concrete diction is usually preferred over a general or abstract word choice. By evoking images and appealing to the senses, concrete words allow the reader to be immersed in that imaginary world and even experience what the characters are going through. Example : Abstract: Specific: Audrey exhibited extreme shyness. Audrey looked sheepish. The first sentence sounds formal and to an extent clinical. The use of the word “exhibit” reminds one of a psychological case and is not used in everyday conversation. The second sentence is concrete and directly associates with the description of the images of a sheep, meek and helpless. The adjective itself means “sheep-like” and gives a mental picture of what extreme shyness must be like. Activity : Take the Challenge! Accomplish Activities 1 and 2. 104 Activity #1 In this activity, you are going to transform the abstract/generic descriptions into more concrete ones. 1. Mary's pet was sleeping. ➢ 2. For the first time in years, he felt happy. ➢ 3. The meal Auntie Mae prepared was a disaster. ➢ 4. The country's citizens pushed their agenda. ➢ 5. The doctor examined her condition thoroughly. ➢ 6. It is obvious that that the house used to be in a better state. ➢ 7. John cried over the death of a relative. ➢ 8. All they wanted was long-lasting peace. ➢ 9. She sensed the need to make changes in her life. ➢ 10. The old couple still looked very much in love. ➢ 105 Activity #2. Write a 2-stanza poem with specific diction based on the picture above. Think of a title that evokes mental image to the readers. _________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 106 Subject Matter : Elements of Poetry Writing Guide : Essential elements of poetry are things that we can find in most if not all forms and types of poetry. Every poem consists of a theme or an underlying message of what the poem wanted to tell us. Equally important element in every poem is a tone. A tone is the attitude that we feel when we read or listen to a poem. Poetry can evoke our emotions and feelings when we read it out loud. These emotions and feelings help establish a certain atmosphere or mood. Example : Themes • family • freedom • fate • action vs. apathy • beating the odds • coming of age • fear • greed • nature • beauty • faith • courage • fear of failure • hate • love • fall from grace • friendship • corruption Sample poem: Little drops of water Little grains of sand, Make the mighty ocean And the pleasant land. Thus the little minutes Humble though they be, Make the mighty ages of eternity.” Theme: Time moves on Tones • serious • sad • angry • cheerful • humorous • amused • ironic 107 Sample poem: My dead love came to me, and said: 'God gives me one hour's rest, To spend with thee on earth again: How shall we spend it best?' 'Why, as of old,' I said; and so We quarreled, as of old: But, when I turned to make my peace, That one short hour was told.” Tone: Ironic Mood • romantic • realistic • optimistic • pessimistic • mournful • sorrowful • suspense Sample poem: "The little house stood in the twilight with its gate ajar, creaking as the wind blew. A shutter slammed against the house, and a curtain fluttered in the breeze." Mood: Suspense Activity : Take the Challenge! Accomplish Activity 1 108 Activity #1. Write a 2-stanza poem with theme, tone, and mood based on the picture above. Think of a title that evokes mental image to the readers. _________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 109 Subject Matter : Language Convention Writing Guide : 1. PERIOD (.) – full stop; use a period to mark the end of the thought I had a dream, which was not all a dream. -Darkness by Lord Byron 2. COMMA (,) – commas help to make a pause, separate elements, use many adjectives, and eliminate “and” Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, The flying cloud, the frosty light -In Memoriam A. H. H. OBIIT MDCCCXXXIII: 106 By Alfred Tennyson 3. QUESTION MARK (?) – needless to say, with a question mark, you indicate a question (sometimes rhetorical); as well as give the reader a chance to take a breath Who can sing the House of the Sun? Who shall frame its dreadful art? -The House of the Sun by Donald (Grady) Davidson 4. EXCLAMATION POINT (!) – use exclamation marks to specify some protest, excitement, appeal, completeness, or just emphasize a thought. Earth, ocean, air, belovèd brotherhood! -Alastor; or, The Spirit of Solitude by Percy Bysshe Shelley I know what the caged bird feels, alas! -Sympathy by Paul Laurence Dunbar 5. SEMICOLON (;) – semicolons are for connecting two separate parts of the sentence and to separate lists. I know why the caged bird beats his wing Till its blood is red on the cruel bars; For he must fly back to his perch and cling When he fain would be on the bough a-swing; -Sympathy by Paul Laurence Dunbar 110 6. COLON (:) – use a colon before introducing a list, explanation, or definition. They wander & are exiled, they live in exile through long ages Like drawn blades never sheathed, hacked and gone black, The alien trees in alien lands: and yet The heart of blossom, The unquenchable heart of blossom! -Almond Blossom by D. H. Lawrence 7. QUOTATION MARKS (“) – like in prose punctuation, quotation marks in poems serve to mark words of another source. The light there, but what’s it for? For eyes. He called me “Four Eyes” now I have billions. -My Sea by Alice Notley 8. ELLIPSIS (…) – this mysterious mark says about the omitted part of the sentence (sometimes word) and indicates a transition. I’m going to lead you into a you you don’t know … Most people want to go. -My Sea by Alice Notley 9. APOSTROPHE (‘) – besides pointing to the possessive form, apostrophes can also be used to omit letters from the word. ‘Tis true, ’tis day, what though it be? O wilt thou therefore rise from me? Why should we rise because ’tis light? Did we lie down because ’twas night? -Break of Day by John Donne 10. HYPHEN (-) – use a hyphen to connect compound words (or add some modifiers) With blood-hot eyes and cane-lipped scented mouth, Surprised in making folk-songs from soul sounds. -Georgia Dusk by Jean Toomer 11. EM-DASH (–) – with this punctuation mark, you can introduce an explanation or specification, make a break in thought, or separate two parts of the sentence. All water from the streams; dead birds were found 111 In wells a hundred feet below the ground Such was the season when the flower bloomed. -November Cotton Flower by Jean Toomer 12. PARENTHESIS (( )) – use parenthesis to add a text that is not a part of the sentence (for example, qualifying notes or developed thoughts I only have this whimsy hair (that always remained the same) yet once was somone’s dearest love. -Song of the Orphan by Rainer Maria Rilke Adapted: https://helpfulpapers.com/blog/punctuation-in-poetry-4-main-typesand-simple-tips Activity : Take the Challenge! Fill in the blanks with appropriate punctuation marks. A Time to Talk by Robert Frost When a friend call to me from the road And slows his horse to a meaning walk __ I don’t stand still and look around On all the hills I haven’t hoed ___ And shout from where I am, What is it___ No__ not as there is a time to talk ___ I thrust my hoe in the mellow ground ___ Blade__end up and five feet tall ____ And plod__ I go up to the stone wall For a friendly visit___ 112 Activity #1. Write a 2-stanza poem based on the given picture using the language conventions. Think of a title that evokes mental image to the readers. _________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 113 Subject Matter : Style Writing Guide : This refers to all the choices that are made to create the poem’s meaning. Style includes technical choices, such as using short or long lines, varying or omitting punctuation, using a set rhythm or rhyme scheme, line breaks and enjambments. A Line Break is a poetic device which is used at the end of a line and the beginning of the next line in a poem. It could be employed without traditional punctuation. A line break in poetry is a method by which lines of poetry are divided to show a change in a metrical pattern. Unlike prose, the poetry’s rhythmic pattern can be visually seen when written using line breaks. Enjambment can be defined as a thought or sense, phrase or clause, in a line of poetry that does not end at the line break, but moves over to the next line. In simple words, it is the running on of a sense from one couplet or line to the next without a major pause or syntactical break. Conversely, it runs into each other and make meaning in conjunction with each other rather than independent units like end-stopped lines. Example : Line Break Cymbeline (By William Shakespeare) “With his own sword, Which he did wave against my throat, I have ta’en His head from him I am absolute ‘Twas very Cloten” Explanation: There are two-line break examples in the given passage. One line break cuts the line, “I have ta’en his head from him” in the middle, placing the line break at the end of the second line. Another line break is used in the fourth line, “I” being a person has an absolute meaning. These line breaks are determining the visual shape of this text. 114 Enjambment It is a Beauteous Evening (William Wordsworth) “It is a beauteous Evening, calm and free; The holy time is quiet as a Nun Breathless with adoration; the broad sun Is sinking down in its tranquility; The gentleness of heaven is on the Sea; Listen! The mighty Being is awake, And doth with his eternal motion make A sound like thunder―everlastingly. … “Thou liest in Abraham’s bosom all the year; And worshipp’st at the Temple’s inner shrine, God being with thee when we know it not.” Explanation This poem is a perfect example of enjambment. In this poem, every line is running over to the next, while the sense is not finished at the end of lines, without pause or break. None of the lines make sense – or stand on their own – without the next line. Activity : Take the Challenge! Accomplish Activities 1 and 2. Activity #1 Below are texts with specified cues on line break and enjambment. Identify the item if it utilizes line break or enjambment. 1. The poet labors all his days// To build the beauty in his rhyme. ➢ 2. When rain drops are Exposed to sunlight, even Colorless become vibrant. ➢ 3. Amongst the bushes and thorns Beautiful red rose blooms. ➢ 115 4. Cold morning time Ice crystals reflect the rays Of blazing sunrise. ➢ 5. Lovely nature has something to offer you; so inhale the fresh air And, beautifully, learn by deciding where to go. ➢ Activity #2 Put a double bar line to show line break and underline once the word that displays enjambment. The first one is done for you. Sample: I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox. Answer: I have eaten// the plums// that were in //the icebox. 1. I think I had never seen a verse as beautiful as a flower. ➢ 2. Amongst the bushes and thorns beautiful red rose blooms. ➢ 3. The sunlight brightens the horizon like the sky lightens a small island. ➢ 4. Breezy blue sky so clear, so bright and relaxing that escapes daily toil. ➢ 5. How beautiful are sunflowers that yield without difficulty, blooming so fully now in the light of the sun. ➢ 116 Activity #3. Write a 2-stanza poem based on the given picture above using the line break and enjambment to achieve poem's style. Think of a title that evokes mental image to the readers. _________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 117 EXTRACT YOUR CREATIVE JUICES Create an original four-stanza poem of four lines following the aabb ccdd ccdd aabb rhyme scheme with a line break and enjambment. Your poem’s theme should base on the picture below. Apply the style and the elements of poetry. __________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 118 Reading & Writing Fiction Overview: Welcome to this module! This will expose you to creative literary works of well-known writers and will help you develop the writer in you as this module focuses on reading and writing fiction. This module will also discuss the elements and literary devices in fiction. Activities are prepared for you to craft an imaginative short scene. At the end of this module, you are expected to: 1. identify the various elements of fiction; 2. determine narrative techniques in fiction; 3. explore innovative style in developing plot structure and conflict; and 4. write a short fictional scene applying the elements, appropriate language, and narrative techniques. 119 Name : ____________________________ Date : __________________ Year & Section Score : _________ : ________ Subject Matter : Elements of Fiction Writing Guide : The Elements of Fiction A. Character. This element refers to a representation of a human being or any other creature in the course of the story. A character can be any person, a figure, an animate object, or animal usually endowed with human qualities. The characters are the people or any figures in the story. 1. Protagonist is the main character in a novel, play or in a story. The protagonist is also referred as the hero of the work. Frodo Baggins, a hobbit, who inherits The One Ring from Bilbo in The Lord of the Rings is an example of this type of character. 2. Antagonist is a character in a story who deceives, frustrates or works against the main character or the protagonist. In The Lord of the Rings the title character named Sauron, who desires for power is an example of an antagonist character. 3. Flat Character is a character who is the same kind of person at the end of the story as he/she was at the beginning. Gollum from The Lord of the Rings is an example of this type. Gollum’s character is determined by his obsession with the recovery of the ring “his precious.” Jafar from the folktale Aladdin, was described as evil and ambitious and always wants to be evil and ambitious. 4. Dynamic Character is a character who undergoes a permanent change in the aspect of his/her personality or outlook. Aladdin from Aladdin is an example of a dynamic character. Aladdin was first described as a thief but eventually becomes an honest hero in the end. 5. Tragic hero/Tragic figure is a protagonist who comes to a bad end as a result of his own behaviour, usually caused by personality disorder. Romeo in Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet is a good example of this type. Romeo killed himself when he thought that Juliet is actually dead. 6. Antihero is a protagonist character who has the opposite of most of the traditional attributes of a hero. This type of character may be bewildered, deluded, or merely pathetic. A good example of this type is Captain Jack Sparrow in Pirates of the Caribbean, a major character named Captain Jack Sparrow is described as a selfish pirate he even ran away to save himself when others need help too. 120 B. Point-of-View. Point of view is the perspective from which the story or work is told. Point –of-view is also defined as the eyes and mind through which the reader views the unfolding of events. It tells through whose eyes we are seeing the story and as well reveals the attitude of the writer toward the character. 1. First Person POV. This is used when the narrator is a character of the story. This point of view is identifiable by the use of the pronoun “I.” Narrators of first person fiction are characters in the story. They can be the protagonist (very common choice), a participant in the action (a major character), a bystander (a minor character, mainly an observer), or even a frame narrator. Take a look at the passage below from Charlotte Bronte’s Jane Eyre, “I could not unlove him now, because I found that he had ceased to notice me.” 2. Second Person POV. This is the rarest narrative voice in literature. The narrator refers the reader as “you” making the reader feel as if he/she is a character or part within the story. Instructional manuals, how-to-guides and selfhelp books are usually written using this point-of-view. You hear the car after an hour and a half. During that time, you’ve been here in the darkness, sitting on the small telephone seat near the front door, waiting. You only moved once, after half an hour, when you went back through the kitchen to check on the maid. 3. Third Person POV. This happens when the narrator does not take part in the story. The narrator relates events but is not one of the characters. A. Objective POV is often referred to as Dramatic point of view, because the story is narrated by the author as if he is a mere spectator of events. Objective point of view contains no references to thoughts or feelings; it only reports what can be seen and heard. A narrator tells a story without describing any of the character’s thoughts, opinions, or feelings; instead an objective, unbiased point of view. “Hansel walked ahead of Gretel. Gretel dropped breadcrumbs behind her as she went. Ahead of them, an old witch waited.” B. Third person limited, the narrator can relate to what is in the minds of only a select few characters. Limited means that the POV is limited to only one character and that the narrator only knows what that character knows. In third person limited you can choose to view the action from right inside the character's head, or from further away, where the narrator has more access to information outside the protagonist's viewpoint. 121 • Karen couldn't tell if her boss was lying. • Aziz started to panic. How am I going to get out of this mess? C. Third person omniscient, the narrator can render information from anywhere, including the thoughts and feelings of any characters. This allknowing perspective allows the narrator to explore the story’s setting and beyond. This omniscient narrator is not a character in the story and can tell what any or all characters are feeling and thinking. The narrator knows things that others don't, can make comments about what's happening, and can see inside the minds of other characters. • • He thought that Sarah was fantastic, but she didn't think the same of him. As Leslie and Andi kissed under the Eiffel Tower, a burglary was taking place four miles east, in the 11th Arrondissement. Activity : Take the Challenge! Activity 1. Read the description of the story and determine the protagonist and antagonist character. Then describe the type of conflict found in the description. 1. Kiko is a ninja warrior trained by Mountain Master Yoho Mahrati. When master Mahrati is slain by Shan Bhutan of the Lotus Clan in the most cowardly of fashions, Kiko lays it all on the line to avenge the death of his master. Will Kiko lays overcome the Shan Bhutan and the powerful Lotus Clan? Protagonist : _____________ Antagonist : _____________ 2. Greg is just a regular boy who tries his best in school and just so happens to have a magical unicorn. When he’s not studying and playing baseball, Greg is riding his unicorn through the enchanted land of Harmonia. When Greg brings something to Harmonia that he shouldn’t, a secret gate is unlocked and the muck-muck monsters are unleashed, causing terrible pollution in Harmonia. Can Greg and his unicorn stop the muck-muck monsters before they find a way to Greg’s world? Protagonist : _____________ Antagonist : _____________ 122 Activity 2. Read the following passage and tell what Point of View is used in the material. ______________ 1. When Jane and Elizabeth were alone, the former who had been cautious in her praise of Mr. Bingley before, expressed to her sister how very much she admired him. “He is just what a young man ought to be,” said she, “sensible, good humoured, lively; and I never saw such happy manners! – so much ease, with such perfect good breeding!” -from Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice ______________2. When the bus came, I got on, carrying my pink backpack. It was the first day of school, and I was nervous. I smiled, though when I saw my bestfriend Kevin sitting in the back. ______________3. All the same, he’s a good man, truthful, kind and remarkable in his sphere,” Anna said to herself, going back to her room, as if defending him before someone who was accusing him and saying that it was impossible to love him, “but why do his ears stick out oddly? Did he have to have his hair cut?” Exactly at midnight, when Anna was still sitting at her desk finishing a letter to Dolly, she heard the measured steps of slippered feet, and Alexi Alexadrovich, washed and combed, a book under his arm, came up to her. “It’s time, it’s time,” he said with a special smile, and went into the bedroom. -Anna Karenina ______________4. First, you will need to wash your hands and gather all of your materials. Once you’ve done that, follow all of the directions in your cookbook. Put your crispy treats in the oven and cook for 30-35 minutes. Once the treats are cooled, you and your friends can enjoy. ______________5. Odin brushed the snowflakes off of his sword and replied, “I will never accept a peace treaty from the Hamburgs. They are our sworn enemies and so long as I can hold a sword, I will point it at Hamburgs.” Epee looked at him and wrinkled her face. A long moment passed in silence. Snow continued to fall from the sky. Finally, Epee responded, “But, Odin, think about what peace might mean for the children.” Odin sneered and said, “Hump, “but made no further comment. Epee drew her weapon. 123 Activity 3. Have you thought about what story you are going to write about? Or who the characters would be? Try to do it step by step. First, think of three characters who will be part of your storyline. Illustrate each character in the first box, write their name on the second then write short descriptions for each character in the third box. Them, write a short scene. Character 1 Character 2 Character 3 Character 1 Character 2 Character 3 124 Write your short scene here using the information of the characters. _______________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _______________________ 125 Subject Matter : Plot Structure and Conflict Writing Guide : A. Plot. This refers to the series or sequence of events that give a story its meaning and effect. It is built around the events that take place within a definite period. This is what happens to the characters found in the work. Read the sample story, My Father Goes to Court. Examine how it is divided into different parts of plots. 1. Exposition is the introductory part that creates the tone, gives the setting, and introduces the character and other necessary facts in understanding the work. The Story starts in a small town in the island of Luzon. A poor but happy family usually stands by the house of a rich man to smell the Delicious Food that the Servants are cooking. The children of the poor family enjoy and play a lot outside of the house, while the rich man's children are locked up in their house. 2. Rising Action contains several events to make the story more interesting, in this part of the story the characters have encountered problems. One day the rich man appeared at his window and stood there for a long time, He glowered down on the children of the poor family who had grown robust and full of life as if he was condemning them, while his children became thin and anemic. The rich man shut down all the windows in his house, and from that day on, the windows of our neighbor's house were always closed. 126 3. Climax is the suspenseful part of the story. The character needs to face the problem and the need to make a decision. One morning, a policeman from the presidencia came to our house with a sealed paper. The rich man had filed a complaint against the poor family. He sued the poor family of stealing the Spirit of his wealth and food. 4. Falling Action is the part of the plot where the character has already made a decision about handling the problem and the story is coming closer to the end. On the court trial, the father didn't need an attorney to defend him. The attorney of the rich man questioned the poor father about stealing the spirit of the rich man’s wealth and food. The father answered all the questions and asked if he could question the rich man's children. the children, came in shyly, looked so thin and pale, and was question by the poor father. 5. Resolution/Denouement is the final unravelling of a plot; the living solution of a mystery; an explanation or outcome. Denouement is the untying of the knot of intrigue, involving not only a satisfactory outcome of the main situation but an explanation of all the secrets and misunderstandings connected with the plot of complication. The father says that he will pay them for stealing the spirit of their food, he took a straw hat, put money and coins, and he walked around. The sweet tinkle of the coins carried beautifully in the courtroom. The poor father has paid the rich family with the spirit of the money. B. Conflict. A story without conflict or problem is lifeless. Every good story must have a conflict. Conflict is a problem or obstacle encountered by the character within the story. Conflict creates tension and interest in a story by adding doubt as to the outcome. 1. Man against Himself. This conflict happens when the character is experiencing inner struggle, or the character is in conflict with himself. To be, or not to be: that is the question: Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, Or to take arms against a sea of troubles, And by opposing end them? To die: to sleep; No more; and by a sleep to say we end The heart-ache and the thousand natural shocks That flesh is heir to, 'tis a consummation Devoutly to be wish'd. To die, to sleep; To sleep: perchance to dream: ay, there's the rub; For in that sleep of death what dreams may come When we have shuffled off this mortal coil, Must give us pause: there's the respect That makes calamity of so long life. —Hamlet 127 2. Man against Man. A type of conflict that shows two characters pitted or in clash against each other. One character is against another. The thousand injuries of Fortunato I had borne as I best could, but when he ventured upon insult, I vowed revenge. You, who so well know the nature of my soul, will not suppose, however, that I gave utterance to a threat. At length I would be avenged; this was a point definitely settled— but the very definitiveness with which it was resolved, precluded the idea of risk. I must not only punish, but punish with impunity. A wrong is unredressed when retribution overtakes its redresser. It is equally unredressed when the avenger fails to make himself felt as such to him who has done the wrong. —The Cask of Amontillado 3. Man against Society. The character is against a group of people or the society itself. This is shown when the character has done something which offended society he/she is part of. Also, when the character is unable to adjust to the ways of the people around him/her. No man, for any considerable period, can wear one face to himself and another to the multitude, without finally getting bewildered as to which may be the true. —The Scarlet Letter 4. Man against Nature. This conflict happens when the character has to deal with natural disasters such as earthquakes, landslides, or the characters are found in a harsh environment like, in the middle of the ocean or desert and struggles to survive against bit. He always thought of the sea as 'la mar' which is what people call her in Spanish when they love her. Sometimes those who love her say bad things of her but they are always said as though she were a woman. Some of the younger fishermen, those who used buoys as floats for their lines and had motorboats, bought when the shark livers had brought much money, spoke of her as 'el mar' which is masculine. They spoke of her as a contestant or a place or even an enemy. But the old man always thought of her as feminine and as something that gave or withheld great favours, and if she did wild or wicked things it was because she could not help them. The moon affects her as it does a woman, he thought. —The Old Man and the Sea 5. Man against Supernatural Beings. The hero/protagonist faces extraordinary creature such as gods or monsters before he can achieve his goal. Ah how shameless—the way these mortals blame the gods. From us alone they say come all their miseries yes but they themselves with their own reckless ways compound their pains beyond their proper share. —The Odyssey 128 6. Man against to Technology/Machinery. This type of conflict focuses on a person or group of people fighting to overcome unemotional and unsympathetic machinery that believes it no longer requires humanity. 'Do you have information that there's an android in the cast? I'd be glad to help you, and if I were an android would I be glad to help you?' 'An android,' he said, 'doesn't care what happens to another android. That's one of the indications we look for.' 'Then,' Miss Luft said, 'you must be an android.' —Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep? Activity : Take the Challenge! Read the fiction carefully and supply the information of its plot: exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution. The Three Valuable Pieces of Advice A young, newlywed couple lived on a small farm. Since the man was poor and had nothing much to offer his wife, he thought about leaving and finding a better job. So, he spoke to her and said, “Honey, I will leave and travel far. I’ll get a job and work hard so I can give you the comfortable life that you deserve when I come back. I do not know how long I’ll be gone, but only ask one thing: please wait for me. Be faithful to me for I will be faithful to you.” So, the young man left. He walked for many days until he found a farmer who was in need of help. The young man offered his services and was immediately accepted. However, before he began his work, he laid a few conditions. “Let me work for you as long as I want, but when I think it’s time for me to go home please release me of my duties. I do not want to receive my salary. I ask you to save it for me until the day I leave. The day I decide to go, please give me the money and I will be on my way.” The young man worked for twenty years without holidays and rest. Finally, after twenty years, he went to his boss. “Boss, I need my money now; it’s time for me to come home.” 129 The boss replied, “All right. After all, I made a deal with you and I’ll keep my word. However, before you go, I want to offer you something new: I will give you all your money and send you away, or I will give you 3 pieces of advice and then send you away. "If I give you the money, I will not give you the 3 pieces of advice. But, if I give you the 3 pieces of advice, I will not give you the money. Now, go to your room and think about your answer.” He thought about it for two days. Until the man made up his mind and went to the boss and said, “I want the 3 pieces of advice.” The boss stressed again, “If I give you the 3 pieces of advice, I will not give you the money.” But the man insisted, “I want the 3 pieces of advice!” The boss then told him his three pieces of advice: Never take shortcuts in your life, shorter and unknown paths can cost your life; Never be too curious, for curiosity towards evil can be deadly; and Never make decisions in moments of anger or pain, because when you repent, it could be too late. After giving these 3 pieces of advice, the boss gave him 3 huge loaves of bread for his journey. “Here you have 3 loaves of bread. Two are for you to eat during the journey and the last is for you to eat with your wife when you get home.” So finally, after twenty years of working so hard. The man went on his way to return to his wife whom he loved so much. On the first day of his travel, he found a man who greeted him and asked, “Where are you going?” He replied, “To a distant place which is about 20 days away if I continue walking on this road.” The man said to him, “Oh boy, this path is too long! I know a shortcut that is very safe and you will arrive in 5 days only.” The man began to follow the path suggested until he remembered the first piece of advice. Then, he returned and followed the long path. Days later, he learned that the shortcut led to an ambush. A few days after, he found a small shack in a village where he could rest. He kindly asked the owner if he could stay for just one night. 130 During the night, he woke up as he heard a terrifying scream. He rose to his feet and went to the door to check what happened. He was about to open the door when he remembered the second piece of advice. Therefore, he ignored the screams and went back to bed. At dawn, after having his breakfast, the owner asked him if he had not heard the screams that night. He affirmed that he did. Then, the host said, “Were you not curious to see what happened?” And he replied, “No! I was not!” Then the host answered again, “You are the first traveler who stayed overnight and leave this village alive. My neighbor is completely crazy. He usually shouts at night to call someone’s attention. When the guest comes out, he kills them and buries their bodies in the backyard.” The man continued his long journey, eager to arrive soon. After many days and nights of walking, he was very tired, but he finally saw his house. It was nighttime. He saw light coming out from the window and was able to see the silhouette of his wife. But he also saw that she was not alone. He came closer and saw that there was a man with her. She was softly caressing his hair. His heart was immediately filled with hatred and bitterness. He decided that he would confront and kill them mercilessly. However, he took a deep breath, and he remembered the third piece of advice. He stopped, reflected, and decided to sleep outside that night. He slept in the midst of the bushes, determined that he was going to make a decision the next day. By dawn, when he was calmer, the man said to himself, “I will not kill my wife and her lover. I am going back to my boss and ask him to take me back. But before I do, I want to tell my wife that I have always been faithful to her.” He went to the front door and knocked. When his wife opened the door and recognized him, she cried and embraced him warmly. He tried to push her away, but he was not able to. Then, with tears in his eyes, he told her, “I was faithful to you and you betrayed me!” She was shocked by that accusation, so she replied, “How did I betray you? I have never betrayed you. I waited patiently for you for twenty years.” Then he asked, “How about the man that you were caressing yesterday?” 131 And she said, “That man is our son! When you left, I discovered I was pregnant. Today he is twenty years old.” Hearing that, the man asked for her forgiveness. He met and hugged his son. After that, he told them all the stories that he experienced while he was away. Meanwhile, his wife prepared coffee and the last bread given by her husband’s boss. After a prayer of thanksgiving, he broke the bread. When he looked at it, he found all his money inside. In fact, there was even more than the right payment for his twenty years of dedication and hard work. Activity #1. Identify the exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, denouement, and the conflict of the story, Three Valuable Pieces of Advice: Exposition ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________ Rising Action ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________ Climax ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________ Falling Action ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________ Denouement ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________ Conflict ___________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 132 Activity #2. Write an outline of your short scene using the format below. Exposition _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Rising Action _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Climax _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Falling Action _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Denouement _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Conflict _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 133 Subject Matter : Narrative Techniques Writing Guide : Narrative techniques is any method a writer uses to convey his/her message. These devices add texture, energy and excitement that grips readers imagination. 1. Dialogue is the talk between your characters. Dialogue is the spoken communication found within quotation marks. Dialogue and thought has three purposes; first, they reveal something about the character. Second, they build tension. Third, they help advance the story. Dialogue is spoken action, that means it is spoken aloud, while thought is an internal monologue. Dialogue is a conversation between characters that can help to evolve the characters. • They hung their head and mumbled, “It’s fine if you don’t want me to come.” • “Are you sure we should go this weekend?” She shoved the curtain aside, sneering at the greying clouds. “It could be a mess out there.” 2. Thought. A character’s thoughts might be simply thoughts. But a character could talk to himself in his head, calling himself names, for example, for the foolish risks he took or giving himself a pep talk. “The Indian world is on a collision course with the white world,” Billy said. Wasn’t that the truth, Horse thought.” 3. Action is a driving force of your narrative, it does not only advance the story, but also to reveal information about your characters. Readers become engaged when something happens to the fictional characters. It is something that happens and may include dialogue, gestures, and other activities. Nola didn’t look back at the drenched, angry matron standing at the edge of the schoolyard with her hands on her hops. Will turned on the wipers. He took off his expensive wet hat, threw it in the back, and drove Nola away in the rainstorm, imagining the taste of the rain on her skin. In this passage the action not only moves the plot of the story forward, but also reveals something about the personalities of the three characters involved. 4. Descriptions are those deep sensory images the writer wants the reader to experience. It sets the mood and the scene, and it provides an explanation. It gives details about the place, person, or thing. Tornado Nola, as it came to be called, was a favorite topic in Indian Territory. The twister had touched down only in select locations. It destroyed 134 the Catholic church, but it left the Baptist church untouched. The most devout of both faiths concluded it was God’s will they attend the Baptist church. Slogan on TV suggests, and the floor was sticky with spilled drinks from the children scurrying around like an infestation, waiting to be pressed into the ground by a careless foot. 5. Exposition. This refers to the details the narrator gives about a character. Exposition tells readers about the important elements of the story or characters. Unlike her mother, however, she had Catholic leanings and placed anemic looking statues of saints, Jesus, and the blond Virgin Mary throughout the rooms. She burned candles at the feet of the statues. And her monkey wore a rhinestone collar. Activity : Take the Challenge! Activity 1 Directions: Read the selection below and determine the narrative technique used. Write your answer on the space provided. ___________1. Because he didn’t have his driver’s license yet—he would next year if all went well—his mother would normally have driven him here, but she’d already promised his younger sister a trip to the zoo on the next nice Saturday, and the zoo was in the opposite direction of the library. He pushed through the revolving door and into the massive lobby. It had been a couple of years since he’d been to the main library. He’d forgotten how huge this place was! ___________ 2. In front of him, in the center of the lobby and under the four storytall dome, sat the long, information and check-out desk. To either side, stairs curved up along the wall to the second-floor balcony. Straight ahead, behind the desk stood two elevators. What surprised him were how many people he saw in here on a sunny morning. He didn’t see any other students, just mostly adults and older folks. ___________ 3. Well, it was only ten o’clock. They might still be in bed, or more likely planning on going other places than the library would probably take him all day to do this paper. ___________ 4. At the information desk a young lady was typing something on her computer. ___________5. “May I help you?” she asked, looking up. “Sure. Where is the archaeology section?” “Third floor.” She pointed behind her at the elevators. “Turn right off the elevator and go all the way to the end of the hall.” He smiled and said, “Thank you. 135 Activity #2. Below are individual details to make up a story. Create a short scene following the narrative techniques by connecting the following details. Man playing a guitar Blood in the hallway Woman crying under the rain Song, Hawak Kamay, playing over a radio A loud gun shot 136 Short scene: 137 Subject Matter : Language Writing Guide : Principles of Composition 1. Make the paragraph the unit of composition. The paragraph is a convenient unit; it serves all forms of literary work. As long as it holds together, a paragraph may be of any length — a single, short sentence or a passage of great duration. If the subject on which you are writing is of slight extent, or if you intend to treat it briefly, there may be no need to divide it into topics. Thus, a brief description, a brief book review, a brief account of a single incident, a narrative merely outlining an action, the setting forth of a single idea — any one of these is best written in a single paragraph. After the paragraph has been written, examine it to see whether division will improve it. Ordinarily, however, a subject requires division into topics, each of which should be dealt with in a paragraph. The object of treating each topic in a paragraph by itself is, of course, to aid the reader. The beginning of each paragraph is a signal that a new step in the development of the subject has been reached. As a rule, single sentences should not be written or printed as paragraphs. An exception may be made of sentences of transition, indicating the relation between the parts of an exposition or argument In dialogue, each speech, even if only a single word, is usually a paragraph by itself; that is, a new paragraph begins with each change of speaker. The application of this rule when dialogue and narrative are combined is best learned from examples in well-edited works of fiction. Sometimes a writer, seeking to create an effect of rapid talk or for some other reason, will elect not to set off each speech in a separate paragraph and instead will run speeches together. The common practice, however, and the one that serves best in most instances, is to give each speech a paragraph of its own. As a rule, begin each paragraph either with a sentence that suggests the topic or with a sentence that helps the transition. If a paragraph forms part of a larger composition, its relation to what precedes, or its function as a part of the whole, may need to be expressed. This can sometimes be done by a mere word or phrase (again, therefore, for the same reason) in the first sentence. Sometimes, however, it is expedient to get into the topic slowly, by way of a sentence or two of introduction or transition. In narration and description, the paragraph sometimes begins with a concise, comprehensive statement serving to hold together the details that follow. The breeze served us admirably. The campaign opened with a series of reverses. 138 The next ten or twelve pages were filled with a curious set of entries. But when this device, or any device, is too often used, it becomes a mannerism. More commonly, the opening sentence simply indicates by its subject the direction the paragraph is to take. At length I thought I might return toward the stockade. He picked up the heavy lamp from the table and began to explore. Another flight of steps, and they emerged on the roof. 2. Use the active voice. The active voice is usually more direct and vigorous than the passive: I shall always remember my first visit to Boston. This is much better than My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me. The latter sentence is less direct, less bold, and less concise. If the writer tries to make it more concise by omitting "by me," My first visit to Boston will always be remembered, it becomes indefinite: is it the writer or some undisclosed person or the world at large that will always remember this visit? This rule does not, of course, mean that the writer should entirely discard the passive voice, which is frequently convenient and sometimes necessary. The dramatists of the Restoration are little esteemed today. Modern readers have little esteem for the dramatists of the Restoration. The first would be the preferred form in a paragraph on the dramatists of the Restoration, the second in a paragraph on the tastes of modern readers. The need to make a particular word the subject of the sentence will often, as in these examples, determine which voice is to be used. 3. Put statements in positive form. Make definite assertions. Avoid tame, colorless, hesitating, noncommittal language. Use the word not as a means of denial or in antithesis, never as a means of evasion. He was not very often on time. She did not think that studying Latin was a sensible way to use one's time. The Taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare's works. He usually came late. She thought the study of Latin a waste of time. The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is disagreeable, Bianca insignificant. 139 The last example, before correction, is indefinite as well as negative. The corrected version, consequently, is simply a guess at the writer's intention. All three examples show the weakness inherent in the word not. Consciously or unconsciously, the reader is dissatisfied with being told only what is not; the reader wishes to be told what is. Hence, as a rule, it is better to express even a negative in positive form. 4. Use definite, specific, concrete language. Prefer the specific to the general, the definite to the vague, the concrete to the abstract. A period of unfavorable weather set in. It rained every day for a week. He showed satisfaction as he took He grinned as he pocketed the possession of his well-earned reward. coin. If those who have studied the art of writing are in accord on any one point, it is this: the surest way to arouse and hold the readers’ attention is by being specific, definite, and concrete. The greatest writers — Homer, Dante, Shakespeare — are effective largely because they deal in particulars and report the details that matter. Their words call up pictures. 5. Omit needless words. Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all sentences short, or avoid all detail and treat subjects only in outline, but that every word tell. Many expressions in common use violate this principle. the question as to whether whether (the question whether) there is no doubt but that no doubt (doubtless) used for fuel purposes used for fuel he is a man who he in a hasty manner hastily this is a subject that this subject Her story is a strange one. Her story is strange. the reason why is that because Activity : Take the Challenge! 140 Remember your last encounter with someone wherein you felt insulted and betrayed. Can you vividly reminisce the exact words he/she said to you? I know it's painful. 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Profile of the Respondents Age Gender 16 19 Male 17 20 Female 18 21 up Previous Grade in English Reading Proficiency based on ORV 95 89 83 77 Independent 94 88 82 76 Instructional A 93 87 81 Instructional 92 86 80 Frustration 91 85 79 90 84 78 Instructional Materials available at home Books Newspaper Radio Computer Smartphone Others: _________ Laptop TV Parent’s Educational Attainment Elementary Level College Level Elementary Graduate College Graduate High School Level Master’s Units/Degree High School Graduate Others: __________ 152 Parent’s Monthly Income Php 11,000 above Php 5,000–6,999 Php 9,000-10,999 Php 3,000–4,999 Php 7,000–8,999 below Php 2,999 Part II. Level of Performance A. Writing Poem Instructions: Look outside the window—of a bus, your room, even a public restroom, or any window. What do you see? Write a 2-stanza poem with a minimum of eight lines based on what you see in that frame. —Adapted from Vazques and Lee (2017) ______________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ 153 Rubric for Poetry Areas Diction Elements Language Conventions Style 5 4 3 2 1 • Student’s use of vocabulary is precise, vivid, and paints a strong clear and complete picture in the reader’s mind. • Student’s use of vocabulary is routine and workable and meaning is written behind the line. • Student’s use of vocabulary is more telling than showing but the meaning is written between the line. • Student’s use of vocabulary is literal but meaningful. • Student’s use of vocabulary is literal • Effectively and appropriately uses poetic elements and literary devices. to reinforce the theme. • Uses a lot of poetic elements and literary devices to reinforce the theme. • Uses some poetic elements and literary devices to reinforce the theme. • Uses few poetic elements and literary devices. • Uses little poetic elements and literary devices. • Has appropriate spelling, grammar, and punctuation; contains few, if any, errors that do not interfere reader’s understanding • Has appropriate spelling, grammar, and punctuation; contains some errors that do not interfere reader’s understand ding. • May contain few errors in spelling, grammar, and/or punctuation that may interfere reader’s understanding. • May contain frequent and numerous errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation that interfere reader’s understanding • It contains frequent and numerous errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation that interfere reader’s understand ding The poem is written with style. Thoughts are clear to a degree. The poem is written with a style but not that effective to the readers The poem lacks style, and the thoughts did not come out clearly. The poem is written with a great sense of style. The poem has been wellthought and makes sense to the reader. . The poem is written with a defined style. Thoughts are clear to read and easy to understand. —Adapted from Lewy (2001) 154 B. Writing Fiction Instructions: Many stories start by connecting different ideas or concepts or elements, and then finding a way to make them make sense. In the diagram, fill in the boxes with your answers, and write a 300-word story that combines all of them in one coherent scene. Make sure that all four answers make an appearance or are referred to within the scene. Who was the last person you were angry at and why you were angry with that person? What was the last thing you ate before class? ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ What was the weather like when you got home yesterday? What is your current favorite song and your favorite lyric in that song? ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ —Adapted from Vazques and Lee (2017) 155 Your story: ___________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 156 Rubric for Fiction AREAS Elements Narrative Techniques Plot Structure and Conflict 5 4 3 2 1 • The setting has been skillfully established and effective • The story maintains a consistent point of view, and the point of view chosen enhances the story. • The theme is clear and developed throughout the story. • The setting has been established and effective • The story maintains a consistent point of view but it seldom enhances the story. • The theme is precise and clearly implied in the story • The setting has been established, although there may be some confusion. • The point of view is consistent. • The theme is present in the story. • The setting is unclear; only one aspect of the setting has been established. • The point of view is occasionally consistent. • The theme is hard to determine. • There is no description of the setting. • The point of view is not consistent or meaningful to the story's progress. • There is no determinable theme. • Skillfully uses narrative techniques (dialogue, descriptions, etc.) to develop characters. • Includes more than one clear example of direct and indirect characterization • Consistently uses narrative techniques (dialogue, descriptions, etc.) to develop characters. • Includes at least one clear example of direct and indirect characterization • Seldom uses narrative techniques (dialogue, descriptions, etc.) to develop characters. • Includes at least one example of direct and indirect characterization • Inconsistently uses narrative techniques (dialogue, descriptions, etc.) to develop characters. • Includes an unclear example of direct and indirect characterization •There is no use of meaningful narrative techniques such as meaningful word choice or dialogue. • The story introduces a clear & effective conflict. • Uses a variety of techniques to sequence the events so that they create a particular tone and outcome • The writing contains a consistent & smooth progression of experiences and events. •The story introduces a detailed conflict. • Uses some techniques to sequence the events so that they create a tone and outcome • The writing contains a consistent progression of experiences and events. •The story introduces a clear conflict. • Uses techniques to sequence the events so that they create a tone and outcome • The writing contains an inconsistent progression of experiences and events. • The story introduces unclear conflict. • Uses techniques to sequence the events, but the purpose may be unclear. • The writing contains a vague progression of experiences and events. • There is no conflict, tone and/or meaningful sequence of events. • There is no determinable progression of events. • Does not include direct and indirect Characterization 157 AREAS 1 2 3 4 5 Language •Demonstrates a skillful command of standard English conventions. • Skillfully employs language and tone appropriate for the audience and purpose. • No grammatical errors that interfere understanding. • Demonstrates a good command of standard English conventions. • Employs language and tone appropriate for the audience and purpose leading to a better understanding • Few grammatical errors that interfere understanding. • Demonstrates a command of Standard English conventions. • Employs language and tone appropriate for the audience and purpose. • Some grammatical errors that interfere understanding. • Demonstrates a limited command of standard English conventions. • Inconsistently and/or employs language and tone inappropriate for the audience and purpose. • Grammatical errors may interfere understanding. • Demonstrates no command of standard English conventions. • Does not employ appropriate language for audience and purpose. • Grammatical errors interfere understanding. —Adapted from Vazques and Lee (2017) 158 Part III. Learning Experiences for Students Instructions: Please read each of the following statements about your learning experiences in using Creative Writing modules for the distance learning. Show your level of agreement with each statement by checking your response. 4=Strongly Agree 3=Agree 2=Disagree 1=Very Disagree Areas/Items 4 3 2 1 A. Problems and Concerns 1. I have enough time to study with modules. 2. Modules fit my needs and goals. 3. I am being disciplined enough to do my studies. 4. Modules fit in work obligations with study time. 5. I can complete assignments before deadlines. B. Ease of Access 6. The printed modules are easy to get from my teachers. 7. It is easy for me to locate reference materials required for the tasks. 8. It is easy to access equipment to learn and practice skills. 9. It is easy to contact my teacher when having problems. 10. It is easy to return the modules to my teachers. C. Evaluations 11. The instructions in study guides are clear. 12. It is easy for me to understand the study guides and assessments. 13. It is easy to process the contents of the tests. 14. The instructions in the modules are easy to follow. 15. The tests and activities are for practical use. D. Delivery 16. Creative Writing modules help me understand the subject matter. 17.They allow me to complete course requirements. 18. The use of modules in Creative Writing suits my lifestyle. 19. They help me practice the skills required. 20. Modules allow me to have ready access to the teacher. E. Satisfaction 21. With the modules, I look forward to my study sessions. 22. I prepare my assignments most of the time. 23. I look forward to doing my assessments. 24. I would recommend the use of modules to other subject areas 25. I would recommend this method of learning to other students. —Adapted from Misko (2000). 1. What are the benefits you have acquired and challenges you have encountered in using Creative Writing modules? _______________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________. 159 Part IV. Learning Experiences for Parents Instructions: Please read each of the following statements about your learning experiences in using Creative Writing modules for the distance learning of your child. Show your level of agreement with each statement by checking your response. 4=Strongly Agree 3=Agree 2=Disagree 1=Very Disagree Areas/Items 4 3 2 1 A. Problems and Concerns 1. My child has enough time to study with modules. 2. Modules fit his/her needs and goals. 3. My child is being disciplined enough to do his/her studies. 4. Modules fit in work obligations with study time. 5. My child can complete assignments before deadlines. B. Ease of Access 6. The printed modules are easy to get from the teacher. 7. It is easy for my child to locate reference materials required for tasks. 8. It is easy for my child to access equipment to learn and practice skills. 9. It is easy to contact the teachers when having problems. 10. It is easy to return the modules to the teacher. C. Evaluations 11. The instructions in study guides are clear. 12. It is easy for my child to understand the study guides & assessments. 13. It is easy for him/her to process the contents of the tests. 14. The instructions in the modules are easy to follow. 15. The tests and activities are for practical use. D. Delivery 16. Creative Writing modules help my child understand the subject matter well. 17. They allow him/her to complete course requirements. 18. The use of modules in Creative Writing suits my child's lifestyle. 19. They help my child practice the skills required. 20. Modules allow my child to have ready access to his/her teacher. E. Satisfaction 21. With the modules, my child looks forward to study sessions. 22. My child prepares his/her assignments most of the time. 23. He/she looks forward to doing his/her assessments. 24. I would recommend the use of modules to other subject areas 25. I would recommend this method of learning to other students. —Adapted from Misko (2000). 1. What are the benefits you have acquired and challenges you have encountered in using Creative Writing modules? _______________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________. 160 Appendix C Table of Specifications Writing Poem and Fiction Quarter: 3rd Year Level: Grade 11 Cognitive Level Total % 1 5 25 2 2 5 25 1 1 2 5 25 1 1 1 2 5 25 Elements 2 1 1 1 5 25 Narrative Tech. Plot & Conflict 2 1 2 5 25 2 1 2 5 25 Language 1 1 2 5 25 100 100 Areas Remem ber Under stand Apply Ana lyze Eval uate Create Diction 2 1 1 Elements 1 Language 1 Style Poem Fiction 1 Total Prepared by: JOSUA D. QUINIQUITO Creative Writing Teacher 161 Appendix D Certificate of Similarity Check 162 CURRICULUM VITAE 163 CURRICULUM VITAE PERSONAL PROFILE Name Address Place of Birth Date of Birth Age Civil Status E-mail Address Contact Number : Josua D. Quiniquito : Hda. San Jose, Tanjay City, Negros Oriental : Hda. San Jose, Tanjay City, Negros Oriental : December 10, 1993 : 27 : Single : quiniquito1993@gmail.com : 0975-931-4104 EDUCATIONAL BACKGROUND Graduate Studies Doctor in Development Education (Dev.Ed.D.) Cebu Technological University-Moalboal Campus Moalboal, Cebu May 20, 2021 Graduate Studies Master of Arts in Educ. (English Language Teaching) Cebu Technological University-Moalboal Campus Moalboal, Cebu May 29, 2018 Tertiary Education Bachelor of Secondary Education (English) Villaflores College Tanjay City, Negros Oriental March 17, 2014 cum laude 164 Secondary Education Tanjay National High School (Main) Tanjay City, Negros Oriental March 31, 2010 Elementary Education San Jose Elementary School San Jose, Tanjay City, Negros Oriental March 2006 1st honorable mention ELIGIBILITY Licensure Examination for Teachers (LET) Aug. 17, 2014 81.20% WORK EXPERIENCES Senior High School Teacher DepEd-Negros Oriental Division Dumaguete City, Negros Oriental Jun. 13, 2016–present Copy editor Elsevier Journals SPI Global, Inc., Dumaguete City, Negros Oriental Jul. 16, 2014–Sept. 22, 2015 ANCILLARY School Paper Adviser Hyperion Publication June 2017–present Coordinator School In-Service Training (INSET) Dec. 2020–present Chairman Human Resource Development April 16, 2021-present 165 PUBLISHED WORKS Short Fiction: The Note in the Library Anak Sastra, Literary Magazine for Southeast Asian Writers 40th issue, July 31, 2020 Poem: I Don’t Love You Anak Sastra, Literary Magazine for Southeast Asian Writers 39th issue, April 30, 2020 AWARDS Performance Management System (PMS) Achiever Copy editing Department, Elsevier Journals SPI Global, Inc. Dumaguete City, Negros Oriental Best Paper Award (English category) Mobile-assisted Instruction in Teaching Syntax for Grade 10 Learners 3rd UP–CTU Research Conference Moalboal, Cebu Feb.16–18, 2018 RELEVANT TRAININGS/SEMINARS Midyear In-Service Training Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School, Napacao, Siaton, Neg. Or. Mar 15–19, 2021 Learning Delivery Modalities Paciente Cesar G. Cabrera High School, Napacao, Siaton, Neg. Or. Dec. 14–18, 2020 School Paper Adviser Summit Bacong, Negros Oriental September 12, 2019 Collaborative Research Publication Cebu Technological University-Moalboal Campus Moalboal Cebu Feb. 23–24, 2019 Two Day Live-Out Division Training of School Paper Advisers 166 Zamboaguita, Negros Oriental Sept. 25–26, 2018 Research Publication Seminar-Workshop Cebu Technological University-Moalboal Campus Moalboal Cebu Feb.16–18, 2018 Training Workshop on Action Research Cebu Technological University-Moalboal Campus Moalboal Cebu Oct. 15–17, 2017 Campus Journalism Enhancement of Coaching and Managing Skills Dumaguete City, Negros Oriental Jul. 19, 2017 Workshop on the Crafting of District Educational Plan (DEP) Dumaguete City, Negros Oriental Phase 1: Apr. 28–29, 2017 Phase 2: May 05, 2017 Phase 3: May 17, 2017 Enhanced School Improvement Plan (E-SIP) Writeshop Mabinay II District Mabinay, Negros Oriental Mar. 16–18, 2017 Training Workshop on the Second Batch of Senior High Teachers Dumaguete City, Negros Oriental Jul. 01-02, 2016