How does the portrayal of music in Things Fall Apart and Open Water contribute to the cultural fabric of both the Igbo society and urban London, and in what ways does music serve as a dynamic force influencing and reflecting the values, traditions, and identity of each character? Titles should be in italics, no quote marks Open Water by Caleb Azumah Nelson was written in 2021, and explores the themes of love, identity, music, and crippling trauma. The novel opens in media res, during a dance between a dancer and a photographer in a basement in South London. As the novel is in second person, the reader is immediately immersed into this narrative of two Black British artists connecting through cultural identity and dance. This second person point of view presents the reader with the disconnect between the main character’s inner thoughts and the way he expresses himself, causing the narrative to be interspersed with deep moments of reflection on art, music, and the profound impact it has on the character’s experiences and relationships. The novel is not only a love story between the two artists, but also a meditation on navigating the complexities of race and masculinity. Nelson weaves a narrative that is rooted in the lived experiences of Black men displaying the terror of police shootings and racial profiling in London. Because of this, the main character finds himself alienated, scared, mislabelled, and deeply afflicted by the atmosphere he exists in. Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe was published in 1958 and interrogates the clash between cultures in the Igbo society of Nigeria during the 19th century. The novel portrays the impact of British colonialism on indigenous African cultures. The narrative revolves around Okonkwo, a proud Igbo warrior, and his community of Umuofia. Okonkwo's way of life and hamartia, his tragic flaw is shaped by the desire to distance himself from the perceived weakness of his father, Unoka. Okonkwo rises to prominence within the village through his strength, being titled a wrestling champion after defeating Amalinze the Cat, a recognised wrestler in Umuofia. However, pressure from the arrival of European missionaries disrupts the balance of Umuofian life, and with British influence spreading, the traditions and belief systems are left destroyed. Okonkwo finds himself at odds with these changes, and his innate resistance to colonial forces leads to personal tragedy. The novel explores themes of cultural collision, racial identity, and masculinity. Things Fall Apart subverts the Eurocentric perception of African culture, with 19th-century British literature and general stigmas mislabelling African culture as uncivilised, or primal. Music as a prevalent theme in Open Water, particularly the importance of drumbeats, intertwining with the vulnerability and racial trauma experienced by the main character, not only as a way of expressive outlet, but also as a connection to culture. Music provides him with a means of expressing emotions that cannot be conveyed through words alone. The choice of music, such as jazz or hip-hop, which stems from Black culture, provides a sense of belonging and a reminder of shared experiences within the Black community. This connection becomes a source of strength for him, where it is permission to be himself. To him music is everywhere, for example, the writer refers to “headphone wires tangling”1 on the fourteenth page, and this is a recurring theme in the novel’s imagery The description of the tangled wires captures the idea that the music that is shared between the two characters is in fact the very tie that brings the two lovers closer through “a distance” being made “shorter.” Later still, alone in the house, and overwhelmed with sorrow, the music stops for the narrator as the headphones fall off as he slides to the floor, this theme of pauses between music occurs throughout, often as a means of being able to find himself in sudden moments of reflection. This imagery of breaks between music becomes a prevalent theme, relating to his fragmented character due to the terror of police brutality and crippling racial trauma. The narrator is not the only character where percussive breaks are 1 pg14 depicted as a form of therapy, for example, the dancer describes her love of movement as dancing into a space that she makes, into “moments and spaces the drums are asking you to fill.” An innate sense of belonging. “Those pauses like percussive breaks where your own breath is the loudest.”2 She finds herself in each beat and rhythm. These breaks of comfort and sense of belonging pervade both Open Water and Things fall Apart, similarly when it is mentioned that Nwoye finds solace in the hymns of evangelism. Nwoye's affinity for evangelical hymns contrasts sharply with the traditional expectations of Igbo manhood, symbolizing his internal conflict. Similarly, his father Unoka's rejection of violence, or fighting, despite societal traditions, further underscores the tension between identity and cultural expectations within the Igbo community. For example, Unoka cannot bear the sight of blood so in conversation he changes the subject and talks about music and his playing is regarded as “honest”, where his sorrow and grief are heard and “seen”. This is further shown when as a young man, Unoka is said to have loved the kites that return with the dry season and the songs of welcome. When he sees one, he sings with his "whole being." But for Okonkwo, this is simply a betrayal, as his fascination with masculinity and personal achievement is driven by his sense of shame. In a similar linkage between spiritual experience and its expression through music Nwoye’s conversion to Christianity, being rooted in the hymns of evangelism is shown through the imagery of a great relief, "as the hymn poured into his parched soul like drops of frozen rain melting on the dry plate of the panting earth” The hymns are earlier described as “gay and rollicking tunes of evangelism which had the power of plucking at silent and dusty chords in the heart of an Igbo man."3 Nwoye's conversion ends his relationship with his father and contributes to Okonkwo's tragic end. No music tempers Okonkwo's violent nature, but he is surrounded by the melodies of song. "Low voices, broken now and again by singing reached Okonkwo.” Is it significant that he seems less affected by music than some other characters? Is he less spiritually sensitive and aware? Is this because of his violence? Is music thus a bringer of or symbol of peace and unity? You return to this later on; maybe say that you’ll do so later in the essay? Turning to Open Water, later in the book, the narrator recalls a train ride home after a jazz gig, coincidentally also in a basement. “You all moved, alone in this train carriage, together, improvising.” Jazz, as a Black art form, represents the safety of recognition and community for the narrator. The photographer describes Black music as the greatest expression of Blackness, this safety of recognition is further reflected in the imagery of safe space. For example, when she puts her head to his chest it is “a bassline” which is similarly depicted in Things Fall Apart where the collective heartbeat of the village is presented through drumming. These two instances, further the idea that music is depicted as an agent that breathes life into both the people of Umuofia and the narrator in Open Water. Just as headphone wires symbolize connection and shared experiences in Open Water, the drums in Things Fall Apart symbolize unity within the Igbo community. The symbolism of the drum is presented as a force that brings the people of Umuofia together, being described as woven into the social fabric of the village, “Their sound was no longer a separate thing from the living village.” Furthermore, the drum holds profound cultural significance, acting as a vehicle through which the Igbo people express and preserve their traditions. "The drums were still beating, persistent, and unchanging” This imagery of heartbeat is repeated, being described like the pulsation of the village’s heart. The drum's beat and rhythm carry emotional weight, reflecting the community's pulse. Both novels connect music and emotion in this way. The drum's rhythm reflects the stability and harmony of the Umuofia 2 3 pg32 pg107 community until external influences disrupt it. While, in Open Water music depicts a more immediate and personal emotional impact related to both characters’ experiences. Despite this central difference between the two novels, in both texts music serves to connect the characters to a shared heritage and culture while affecting individual development and personal reactions to differing social situations. The relationship of the individual to music is indicative of their personality and cultural milieu. In Things Fall Apart, Achebe depicts Okonkwo as being betrayed by music. He is "possessed by the fear of his father's contemptible life and shameful death". Unoka enjoys drinking, he borrows money and lives only for the present. But it is his skill at playing the flute that makes him sympathetic for the reader. He plays with the village musicians and his face beams with "blessedness and peace." He wore a haggard and mournful look except when he was drinking or playing on his flute. He was exceptionally good on his flute and his happiest moments were the two or three moons after the harvest when the Village musicians brought down their instruments, hung above the fireplace. This description cuts across the historical colonial divide and could be a description of any pre-industrial community, with the instruments of song and community part of hearth and home. Unoka might be a failure in his son's eyes, but his musical ability is not a sign of weakness although he is contrasted with Okoye: “Okoye was also a musician. he played on the ogone. But he was not a failure like Unoka. He had a large barn full of yams and three wives.” The ogone is also the instrument of the town crier, the bringer of news, the message sender. “Gome, gome, gome, gome boomed the hollow metal. Then the crier gave his message and at the end of it beat his instrument again” Here the writer portrays the instrument and musician as almost separate entities but united in purpose like a horse and rider. It is a subtle but expressive mix: “Okonkwo...knew certainly something was amiss. he had discerned a clear overtone of tragedy in the crier's voice.” And it is the absence of this musical voice that is also startling: “As the criers voice was gradually swallowed up in the distance, silence returned to the world, a vibrant silence made more intense by the universal trill of a million forest insects.” The apparent paradox of a silence composed of untold numbers of tiny sounds. In Open Water the metaphor of his partner's heartbeat being a kick drum links to Things Fall Apart where the drum's beat is symbolic of the heartbeat of the community. At its core, the drum serves as a unique form of communication within Igbo culture. The beats and rhythms emanating from its core convey an array of messages, ranging from announcements and celebrations to warnings and communal gatherings. This nuanced drum language establishes a shared understanding among the community members, fostering a sense of togetherness and collective identity. The drum, therefore, becomes a dynamic tool for communication that binds the Igbo people in a network of shared meanings. "The drums were still beating, persistent and unchanging. Their sound was no longer a separate thing from the living village. It was like the pulsation of its heart." The drums are described as persistent and unchanging, being a metaphor for the enduring nature of the Igbo cultural rhythm. In the social hierarchy of Igbo society, the drummer occupies a position of respect and authority. Mastery of drumming is a testament to cultural expertise, and drummers are entrusted with significant responsibilities. Their role extends beyond musical performance; they become bearers of cultural knowledge, conveying messages accurately and preserving the community's cultural richness through their rhythmic talents. The drummer, therefore, becomes a custodian of tradition, wielding influence and contributing to the social fabric of Igbo life. In the urban landscape of modern London, the speaker in Open Water grapples with shared human struggles, being unheard and suppressed. The contemporary setting echoes the societal challenges faced by the Igbo community in Things Fall Apart, portraying the universal theme of collective identity confronting external pressures. The character expresses this struggle, stating, "We who are loud and angry, we who are bold and brash. We who are Black. We find ourselves not saying it how it is. We find ourselves scared. We find ourselves suppressed." This resonates with the drum's role in Things Fall Apart, where it becomes a symbol of the spirit of the Igbo people facing forced cultural change. "The drums were still beating, persistent and unchanging. Their sound was no longer a separate thing from the living village. It was like the pulsation of its heart. It throbbed in the air, in the sunshine, and even in the trees, and filled the village with excitement." This illustrates the drums' persistent beat, symbolizing the heartbeat of the community. The unchanging rhythm reflects the resilience of the Igbo people, who continue to maintain their cultural practices, even as the village faces a period of transformation. The drums, in this context, become an image of the community's collective spirit and their determination to preserve their way of life. In Open Water, the couple first meet in a basement club. The driving rhythms of 70s soul / funk classics that weren't just something to dance to but expressions of the black civil rights movement. "Fight the Power ", "move on up," for example. The narrator is captivated but would like to say, "the dance floor heaved, and the young moved like it was the 80s, where to move in this way was but one of a few freedoms afforded to those who came before." On the same page, in the 1st paragraph, " the ancestors visit us, and we let them take over." This is comparable to the ritual aspects of the drums in Things Fall Apart. In both instances, there's a recognition of the living influence of history and tradition. In Open Water, the metaphor of the ancestors visiting tells of the dynamic engagement with the historical struggles, triumphs, and resilience of the Black community. This engagement is not passive; rather, it's an active invitation for the lessons and strength of the past to shape the present. In Things Fall Apart, the drums function similarly as carriers of history during rituals. The rhythmic patterns, specific to certain ceremonies, evoke a communal memory that stretches back through generations. The drumming becomes the bridge that connects with the history and traditions of the Igbo people. Just as headphone wires symbolize connection and shared experiences in Open Water, the drums in Things Fall Apart symbolize unity and communication within the Igbo community. The symbolism of the drum is presented as a force of unification that brings the people of Umuofia together. The drum's rhythm is described as reflecting the stability and harmony of the community, while conversely in Open Water both the headphone wires and the drum symbolize vulnerability and fragility. Vulnerability is evident in the tangling wires and the emotional breakdown of the character. In Things Fall Apart, the vulnerability is exposed through the disruption of traditional Igbo culture and the impact of colonial forces on the community. YOU NEED A CONCLUSION SUMMING UP YOUR ARGUMENTS. Say briefly what is similar and what is different between the novels. EG in both, aspects of shared musical experiences express and embody Black culture, under threat in TFA and even more dislocated and fragmented in OW. In both cases music is seen as a strongly transformative if ultimately threatened entity. As for its impact on character development this varies (examples) but generally the imagery and metaphorical aspects of music suffuse the narrative development of both novels.