Daily lessons that practice editing on a rich source of informational text. • Students are both editors and writers, applying grade-level language skills to correct a paragraph Monday–Thursday and complete a related writing exercise on Friday. • Includes supplemental resources for students, including a page of proofreading marks that model the standard marks used to correct and edit text and an editing checklist to guide students in reviewing and revising their own writing or a classmate’s writing. • Also includes an assessment rubric and detailed correlations. Correlated to current standards Teacher’s Edition* “ This title is invaluable to my grammar lessons and preparing my students for state testing. Great buy!” —Kimberly, Louisiana BIOGRAPHY: Walt Disney’s Editing Daily Paragraph EDITING KEY: Biography Preview the 4 daily lessons to ensure Cartoon Magic n Magic ney’s Cartoo Name Walt Dis when he was lived on a farm Walt Disney to age, walt liked From an early a young boy. als the farm anim He watched draw animals. them. of ings draw made lifelike carefully he but Walt y for paper had no mone Walts family wall of his pig on the he drawed a r. cleve was not happy! Then were nts ’s pare house. Walt ing paper gave him draw Walts aunt WEEK 1 you review or introdu Walt Disney’s s • apostropheWalt ce skills that may Cartoon Magic Daily Paragraph Editing students. special that the know. Tell about something Write about a person you years, or adult person’s childhood, teenage Error Summary person did. Tell about the how the person’s what the person is like. Tell Capitalization life. Use words that tell people. 3 other to e differenc a actions made Language Usage be unfamiliar to Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age, walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm anim als carefully he made lifelike drawings of them . Walts family had no money for paper but Walt was clever. he drew drawed a pig on the wall of his house. Walt’s parents were not happy! Then Walts aunt gave him drawing paper 1 Punctuation: Apostrophe Comma 2 1 Period were found. Give their how the last two planets Tell what you know about they were found. them. Write the dates when names and tell who found , or write your own: Use one of these topic sentences been the last two planets to have • Uranus and Neptune are discovered. d the seventh and eighth • Curious scientists discovere planets. Error Summary Capitalization h Editing, Grade Paragrap or Corp. • Daily 3 • EMC 2726 1 DAY TUES WEEK 12 © Evan-Mo AM 8/20/15 11:08 2726_New.indb 2726_New.indb 13 13 1 Punctuation: Apostrophe Comma 1 1 Period Spelling 2 1 Paragraph Editing, EMC 6551 Grade 3 EMC 2726 Grade 3 EMC 6552 Grade 4 EMC 2727 Grade 4 EMC 6553 Grade 5 EMC 2728 Grade 5 EMC 6554 Grade 6 EMC 2729 Grade 6 EMC 6555 FRIDAY – WEEK 2 Science Article: The Search Grade 7 EMC 2837 Grade 7 EMC 6737 Grade 8 EMC 2838 Grade 8 EMC 6738 for Planets like about her Ringgold. Tell her what you Write a letter to Mrs. Faith books. Be sure to the names of some of her books and drawings. Tell these closings, and your name. Use one of include your address, a closing, or one of your own: • Very truly yours, • Sincerely, WEEK 1 EMC 2726 • Daily Grade 2 5 Language Usage • Your fan, TUESDAY EMC 2725 Magic Biography: Walt Disney’s Cartoon FRIDAY – WEEK 1 WEEK 1 ing When walt grew got a job draw up, he got a animals grew up, he job drawing When walt animapost ideas for sanimated • uls rophe cartoons. creat oons. creative ive ideas animated cart filled Walts head animuls for were oons . the other carto r cart ons were head. the othe s Walt filled c and silent so Walt made oon with musi a cartoon with made a cart music and talking character silent so Walt d calle s. This carto cartoon was on was called acters. This talking char Mouse.Steamboat Willie. The was mickey star was mick e. The star ey Mouse. sang Mickey talked Steamboat Willi and singed, peop le loved him singed, peop le loved him and d talke Mickey Grade 2 2 MONDAY MONDAY FRIDAY – WEEK 3 Grade 3 • © Evan-Moo Student Pack (5 Student Books) r Corp. 156 12 Letters: Letters to an Author EMC 2726 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 3 • © Evan-Moor Corp. 8/20/15 11:09 AM 2726_New.indb 156 8/20/15 11:08 AM *Available in print and e-book