LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
Do Now
Come up with 9
words you could
use to describe
this image.
Put these words
onto your bingo
grid.
Challenge:
Can you use any of these words to
write sentences using language
techniques?
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LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
deserted
isolated
creepy
haunted
private
confined
detached
hidden
lonely
outlying
remote
Derelict
Misty
Shadowy
dun
unusual
abandoned
forsaken
retired
screened
sequestered
stranded
withdrawn
abnormal
bleak
secluded
Segregated
Dusk
Dull
lightless
Fractured
demolished
Fragmented
Damaged
Disarrayed
Contaminated
Disheveled
Barbaric
Chaotic
Disordered
Somber
Gloomy
Shady
Obscure
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The ‘bigger picture’
LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
Think back to the last book you read. What
do you think made it enjoyable to read?
A 'good' story
should...
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Not successful
at all
Very successful
LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
Not successful
at all
Very successful
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Stick in the description in your book.
Under this, re-write the description using as
many different language techniques as you can.
Shivering, the tall man walked slowly down the icy
road. It was a cold day and it was raining. He didn’t
really know where he was going. As the weather got
worse, he walked into an alleyway. He immediately
got scared. He saw in front of him a shape. He
turned around and walked in the other direction. He
wasn’t sure where to go. The weather got worse. He
turned around to see the shape still there.
Challenge: Can you vary your sentence lengths for effect?
LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
Your turn!
Remember to use sophisticated vocabulary!
LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
Your turn!
Remember to use sophisticated vocabulary!
LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
Write a description or a short story based on the
image you have just mind-mapped.
Success Criteria
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LO: To analyse what makes an engaging narrative
Peer Assessment
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