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Things You Treasure
Hello, (in this essay) I (will) introduce my precious present. My most precious
object is my i- phone (iPhone). It is very special for (to) me. I was verry  (very)
happy because I bought it when the i-phone (iPhone) was newly released.
I like i-phone, (iPhone) because it is very pretty. It has (a) lovely and (a)
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beautiful color and I think its appearance is prettier than Samsung phone. And
then, it is very precious and I like it very much. The biggest reason is that my dad
bought it for me. And its function is very good and I use it (for a) long time. It's
been months since I bought it, but I still have a (the) fondness for it. I'll (I) use it
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carefully so (that) I do (will) not break it.
I like my phone and I think it's very worth it. I bought its (a lot of) case very
many (cases for it). And my announcement is end. I recommend to buy
(buying) i-phone (iPhone) 15 pink.
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