Outline
This is the format for outline:
A. Title of your essay = Indonesian government ban smoking
Paragraph 1:
a. General Information
-jumlah perokok di Indonesia dan berapa tembakau yang ada di Indonesia sama jelasin kalo di
Indonesia itu merokok bagi kebanyakan orang udh melekat gitu lah kebiasaan
b. Thesis Statement
I disagree if the Indonesian government ban smoking
- demonstrations and crimes will occur
- Tobacco companies absorb a large number of workers
-Tobacco companies help state revenues
-many resources are wasted
Paragraph 2: demonstrations and crimes will occur
a. Supporting details Explanation of your 1st reason in your thesis statement (only in points, not
paragraphs because this is an outline, not an essay)
bakal banyak demo yg terjadi gitu karena kan perokok di Indonesia juga banyak (data berapa banyk
perokok) habis itu rokok tuh bakal dijual secara illegal kyk narkoba.
b. examples based on a true story
pas itu waktu cuman kenaikan cukai rokok aja udh banyak yg demo apalagi rokok di larang gitu jelasin
juga di supporting detailsnya
c. references/sources
Paragraph 3: Tobacco companies absorb a large number of workers
a. Supporting details Explanation of your 2nd reason in your thesis statement (only in points, not
paragraphs because this is an outline, not an essay)
jelasin berapa persen sih perusahaan tembakau atau rokok menyerap tenaga kerja abis itu kan
kebanyakan workersnya itu cewek yang kerja dan dijadikan kalo misalnya di Indonesia ban rokok kan
bakal banyak yg dipecat.
b. examples based on a true story
cari lah yg ngmg kalo cewe diperusahaan rokok itu kerja buat hidupin keluarganya sama paling berita
perusahaan rokok banyak nyerap tenaga kerja
c. references/sources
Paragraph 4: Tobacco companies help state revenues
a. Supporting details Explanation of your 3rd reason in your thesis statement (only in points not
paragraph because this is outline not an essay)
berapa persen sih pendapatan rokok itu bantu keuangan negara habis itu kalo ada sektor mana aja . Kalo
diban nanti keuangan negaranya gimnaa tuh
b. examples based on a true story
berita kalo keuntungan dari rokok bisa ngebantu apa sam ya berita berita lah kalo pendapatan rokok itu
ngebantuu
c. references/sources
Paragraph 5: many resources are wasted
a. Supporting details Explanation of your 3rd reason in your thesis statement (only in points not
paragraph because this is outline not an essay)
Indonesia kan sebagai penghasil tembakau besa sayang gitu lah kalo gk kepake nanti tembakaunya
kebanyakan padahal kan perusahaan rokok tuh beli banyak tembakau harusnya sih berhubungan sama
kesejahteraan petani
b. examples based on a true story
berapa persen petani tembakau gitu sama apa ya kalo ada si cari berita kyk apa sih yang terjadi para
petani tembakau kalo perusaahan rokok diban past ikan tembakaunya gk kejual full kyk biasa gitu
c. references/sources
berapa persen tembakau yg diserap oleh perusahaan rokok gitu kali ya
Paragraph 6:
a. Conclusion ( you are going to write again the main ideas of paragraphs 2,3 & 4 but do not use the
same words)
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b. Suggestion or recommendation or solution
References:.............