Funeral Blues WH Auden 25th September 2023 Starter What are the connotations of the colour blue? Learning Intentions Today we will: • Begin looking at a poem from the set IGCSE texts. • Analyse the poem • Understand the key themes and messages in the poem W. H. Auden: ‘Funeral Blues’ Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come. Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’. Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves, Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves. He was my North, my South, my East and West, My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song; I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong. The stars are not wanted now; put out every one, Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun, Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood; For nothing now can ever come to any good. Rhyme scheme/structure • This poem has 16 lines, split into four quatrains. • Each quatrain consists of two rhyming couplets, that is, the first two lines and the last two lines of each stanza rhyme. • This poem’s rhyme scheme is AABB. • This provides a consistent rhythm throughout the poem and is reminiscent of a funeral march’s repetitive drum. What are your first impressions? What do you think the meaning of this poem is? Think: 10 seconds Pair: 30 seconds Share: I will choose people to share Why do you think this poem was written? When do you think this poem was written? • The poem‘s meaning has changed over time – it‘s funny how literature does this! • Auden first wrote it in 1936 as part of a philosophical/satirical theatre production. • In the play, the poem was snarky, mocking, and overblown. It poked fun at a dead politician. Task: Read the poem now as if it is mocking a terrible person’s death in a sarcastic manner. • You will probably have noticed how it might be interpreted as the opposite to the sincere, sorrowful reading we would expect. Question (discuss and be ready to feedback): which images in the poem now seem most sarcastic, and why? What is an elegy? (in modern literature) a poem of serious reflection, typically a lament for the dead. Task Define an elegy (in your own words) and explain why this poem is one. Match Match up the techniques, and comments with arrows. Task: up thequotes, techniques, quotes, and comments ‘For nothing now can ever come to any good’ Alliteration Personification Metaphor ‘mourners’ ‘muffled’ ‘moaning’ The sound of an aeroplane is long and droning like mourners crying profusely at funerals. Indicative of how the deceased had given the speaker direction and purpose in life. ‘My noon, my midnight’ ‘My talk, my song’ Represents the speaker’s deep and utter devastation by his loss of his loved one. ‘Stop all the clocks’, ‘cut off the telephone’ Reflects the happiness and joy they had found in each other’s company. ‘Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead’ Hyperbole ‘He was my North, my South, my East and West’ This is the exaggeration of the speaker’s grief so much so that he wants the world to come to a standstill. Indicative of the speaker trying to stifle his crying and stop the tears from flowing. Answers! Alliteration (sound imagery) ‘For nothing now can ever come to any good’ ‘mourners’ ‘muffled’ ‘moaning’ ‘My noon, my midnight’ ‘My talk, my song’ Personification Metaphor Hyperbole ‘Stop all the clocks’, ‘cut off the telephone’ ‘Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead’ ‘He was my North, my South, my East and West’ The sound of an aeroplane is long and droning like mourners crying profusely at funerals. Indicative of how the deceased had given the speaker direction and purpose in life. Represents the speaker’s deep and utter devastation by his loss of his loved one. Reflects the happiness and joy they had found in each other’s company. This is the exaggeration of the speaker’s grief so much so that he wants the world to come to a standstill. Indicative of the speaker trying to stifle his crying and stop the tears from flowing. ‘Stop all the clocks’: stops the noise and signifies the stopping of time. When somebody dies their time is said to be up and this represents that. ’Cut off the telephone’, says the speaker, desiring silence, but also no longer valuing the companionship and human connection that the telephone could bring. Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come. The silenced pianos mean the silencing of song, and dance, and party. All that needs to be heard is the sound of the funeral drums as the mourners congregate around the coffin of the dead. • The poem begins with a series of harsh commands (imperatives) • Tone of urgency • The speaker sounds forceful, even angry. Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come This is a very public acknowledgement of death. Why do you think ‘He is Dead’. Is capitalised? The airplanes are "moaning," as if expressing their own sadness over the person being grieved for. Everything surrounding him expresses the deep sorrow he feels. And anything that is not in keeping with his mourning is something he wishes to shut off. Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’. Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves, Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves. This poem was written for a play that was rewritten as a cabaret, is this indicated by the cotton gloves? • What do white doves typically represent? • What might this symbolise within the poem? • Why is this significant? ‘public doves’: ambiguity. Does he mean pigeons or does it represent more? Is he earnest or is it a joke? Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’. Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves, Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves. Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come. Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’. Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves, Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves. He was my North, my South, my East and West, My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song; I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong. The stars are not wanted now; put out every one, Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun, Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood; For nothing now can ever come to any good. Personal Vs Public? Tone of urgency. Ironic that stop is the first word in the poem. The era of the poem is considerered modernist. Here, Auden absurdedly mingles sincerety with sarcasm, referencing objects from the time. Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come. He is Dead is capitalized. Does this associate the man with the divine? A pair of rhyming lines in iambic pentameters are known as heroic couplets, as is the case within this poem. Purposeful comma splices to increase the pace. Note the demand for silence. The poet is asking for all aspects of life to be halted for this very situation. Could be mocking or earnest – ambiguous. Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’. Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves, The playthe was traffic rewrittenpolicemen as a cabaret. Is this indicated by the cotton gloves? Let wear black cotton gloves. His requests become more and more difficult to carry out and a lot more ridiculous. Alternatively, the inclusion of aeroplanes may also be a form of a military sign of respect. Further ambiguity. Does he mean pigeons, or is this a symbol for peace? Is this a joke or in earnest? The poet has lost his or her direction in life. This is more profound than being He was my North, my South, my East and West, physically lost as it also conveys a sense of helplessness as one is unable to revive the dead. It is in this sense that the poet is now spiritually lost. My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song; The words: “noon” and “midnight” together cover, by synecdoche Sudden realization that nothing lasts forever. I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong. (parts standing for the whole), all hours of the day. There was the physical, the (borderline) ridiculous, the The stars are not wanted now; put out every one, metaphysical, and now the natural. Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun, Emotional breakdown of the poet as his grief comes to a climax Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood; For now wood cancould everbecome tofor…? anyAgain, good. Stars, nothing sun, moon, ocean, metaphors is this ridiculous hyperbole or earnest romantic feelings of loss and despair? You decide. The repetition of ‘my’ underscores the intense connection between the speaker and this person. Directions: this person was literally the writers whole world. The poet has lost his or her direction in life. This is more profound than being physically lost as it also conveys a sense of helplessness as one is unable to revive the dead. It is in this sense that the poet is now spiritually lost. He was my North, my South, my East and West, My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song; I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong. Metaphors. The last two lines imply that the dead man filled every hour of the speaker's day. He brought conversation and joy into the speaker's life. •While the previous lines were lovely and metaphorical, this one is harsh: Your loved ones will die. No love lasts forever. ‘I was wrong’: Sudden realization that nothing lasts forever. He was my North, my South, my East and West, My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song; I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong. The stars are not wanted now; put out every one, Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun, Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood; For nothing now can ever come to any good. Hopeless: In a lot of elegies the speaker will offer some hope for the future, or will talk about how the dead person will live on in memories and poetry. There's usually a small moment of optimism buried somewhere in them. But not in Auden's "Funeral Blues." Extreme, hyperbolic commands are his expressions of his extreme grief. Even though no one could ever "dismantle the sun," the speaker's grief is so intense that he wishes that we could. Romantic and natural images (stars/moon/sun) are too painful for him. It's almost as if he wants to blot out everything in the world except his own mourning Task: Answer these questions in pairs 1. Notice the plea for certain actions to take place in the first stanza. a) Why would someone want to ‘Stop all the clocks’ (line 1)? b) Identify all the references to sound. c) Why would the speaker want these sounds to stop? 2. Why do you think capital letters have been used in ‘He is Dead’ (line 6)? 3. Consider the implications of the description ‘He was my North, my South, my East and West’ (line 9). 4. Link the verbs in the final stanza to their objects: ‘put out’ (line 13), ‘pack up’, ‘dismantle’ (line 14), ‘Pour away’ and ‘sweep’ (line 15). In what way are these verbs appropriate? Task 1.List the ways in which the speaker asks society to mourn the loss of his partner. 2.Identify the literary device in line 9 and comment on its effectiveness. 3.What does the speaker realise when he says ‘I was wrong’? 4.Describe the change in tone that occurs in line12. Point Evidence (quote) Technique Analysis Link back to question Extension task: How effective is this poem as an expression of loss and grief? Write a PETAL paragraph answering this question. Plenary 1a. What do you think the most impactful (saddest) line of the poem is? 1b. Why? W. H. Auden: “Funeral Blues” Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come. Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’. Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves, Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves. He was my North, my South, my East and West, My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song; I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong. The stars are not wanted now; put out every one, Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun, Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood; For nothing now can ever come to any good. Task: Your job is convert the poem into a dramatic performance in a group of 2 or 3, performing it in various styles. You have one lesson to do this now. Ideas for a possible performance: One person reads and the others act out the words physically using movement, body language and facial expressions. or All group member read the poem, but you use voice for emphasis and to convey emotions found in the poem. or All group members turn the poem into a script, adding your own words where necessary, and perform your dramatic script to the class. or A combination of two or more of the above ideas, or make your own performance ideas to bring the poem to life. W. H. Auden: “Funeral Blues” Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come. Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’. Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves, Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves. He was my North, my South, my East and West, My working week and my Sunday rest, My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song; I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong. Performance Time As we watch the performances, give each team a mark out of five for the following four criteria: A: Voice 1 2 3 4 5 3 4 5 4 5 4 5 B: Body Language 1 2 C: Audience Engagement 1 2 3 D: Performance Commitment The stars are not wanted now; put out every one, Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun, Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood; For nothing now can ever come to any good. 1 2 3