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Charl Margaux Elcano
603-102-MQ
Ms. Vivian Ralickas
Baggage Screening: An Analysis of Wendy Cope’s Anecdotal Sonnet
In Wendy Cope's English sonnet1“ Baggage," the speaker describes the luggage labels on
her father's battered vintage leather suitcase stored in her garage. The speaker's response to the
suitcase is of symbolic significance since it exhibits how objects possess sentimental value
because they reveal insight into a loved one’s identity and past. In particular, her curiosity
towards the fragmented luggage labels and her mental projection of her father’s character
through the shabby suitcase make evident the emotional burden of a child longing for parental
intimacy.
In surveying the state of the luggage labels, Cope seeks to regain more knowledge of her
father's identity. The poet's straightforward depictions of the luggage labels portray her
superficial knowledge regarding her father. For instance, she only names the most conspicuous
elements of the labels, such as "two smart porters" and a "fortress." The lack of vivid description
of the labels renders an incomplete ekphrasis. The poet is incapable of expanding further nor
make the reader envision the labels as described ("Ekphrasis"; Munsterberg). This literary tool is
symbolic of her insufficient familiarity with her father. Her perusal also notes some luggage
labels that are "stuck on the lid" while others that "are partly missing." The descriptions
demonstrate an antithesis that contrasts the states of the luggage labels, suggesting that her
memories of her father, although enduring across a considerable amount of time, are also subject
Among many studies of the sonnet, see Stephen Adam’s poetic designs: an introduction to meters, verse forms,
and figures of speech which defines an English sonnet, also known as a Shakespearean sonnet (p. 88-90).
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to fragmentation. The utilization of aposiopesis2 further accentuates the fragmented status of the
labels and, correspondingly, her memories. Here, the poet utters "and another Lac de Co…"
confirming the overwhelming gap of her memory of her father. Following the previously said
line, the poet employs personification in illustrating her memories of her father that she had
forgotten: "Some scraps remain mysterious." In doing so, she posits the father as an alien figure
to her. Airlines, railroads, and bellhops at hotels around the world had initially affixed luggage
labels with gum such that if you were to remove them, they would be damaged (Alice). The
"mysterious" unidentified labels, then, is a metaphorical statement of her impaired relationship
with her father as well. While examining the state of the luggage labels allowed her to acquire
fragments of her father's past, she fails to procure any substantial knowledge that would aid her
to become more familiar with him.
Cope's attempt to determine the origin of the luggage labels reveals her interest to
discover her father in a different light as an individual human being. The sonnet begins with the
poet conveying the locales printed on each of the labels on the suitcase, indicating that her
primary curiosity is towards her father's past affairs. These locales, which are all located in
Europe3, collectively embody a motif of affluent foreign travel. One label is "from Nacional
Madrid," another "from the hotel in Carcassonne," "Vichy," and "Lac de Co…" The early-20th
century marked the golden age of luggage labels. This period, corresponding with the Golden
An aposiopesis is a rhetorical term for an unfinished statement of a speaker’s abrupt break thereby leaving a
thought incomplete. For further details on aposiopesis, refer to ThoughtCo.’s article entitled “Aposiopesis: The
Broken Figure of Speech” by Richard Nordquist.
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According to online consultation, Nacional Madrid is a classic grand hotel located in Madrid, Spain built around
the era of 1920s and remains in business to this day. Carcassonne is a hilltop town in southern France’s Languedoc
area, and is famous for its medieval citadel. Vichy is a city in central France, although, the name is also “used to
denote the government of France which operated from Vichy (1940–44) in collaboration with the Germans” (OED).
Finally, Lac de Com…, which can be easily deduced to be Lac de Come (or Lake Como), is an Italian lake located
in Northern Italy’s Lombardy region.
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Age of Travel, coincides with the time Cope’s father obtained the labels—Wendy Cope was born
in 1945 when her father was approximately sixty-years old (Cope Pieces of Me). Luggage labels
proclaimed to all that the owner of the luggage was an adventurer at a time when travel was still
inaccessible, a luxury, and a mystery (Alice). The act of travelling was a means to assert an aura
of cultural sophistication, which was then portrayed as an inherent characteristic of the moneyed
elite (Gemme 510). European travel, in particular, was used to "help construct and claim
identities variously defined by gender, class, race, and nationality" (Gemme 509). Therefore, the
label-plastered suitcase is a mark of Cope's father's worldliness. In his days of yore as a seasoned
traveller, the luggage labels were vehicles he appropriates to proudly flaunt his character,
exceptional taste and social status to whomever he encounters. This function of the labels
transcends time, and they also become vehicles of which his daughter can access him. Cope's
father passed away when she was twenty-six years of age (Brockes). Her father's death was a
reminder that parents are susceptible to vulnerability and mortality. Likewise, the labels become
a reminder that her father was just like any other human adult who had his passions and
aspirations. On that account, Cope says, "It calls to mind the handsome, young /And happy man
I'd like to think he was." The luggage labels are representative of the diverging interests between
a father and his daughter. While the father sought the mysteries of global travel, the poet intends
to pursue the mystery of who her father is. The sonnet reflects her intention to compensate for
her minimal memory and knowledge of him not just as a person whom she, biologically, came
into this world, but also as an individual who had his own journey.
The poet's false nostalgic portrayals of faraway lands and her father's past further
underscore the lack of quality time she had with her father. Cope had suffered mentally as a child
since both of her parents sent her to boarding school at the age of seven and all throughout her
adolescent years (Alice). With this in mind, there is a grim satirical undertone to Cope's
(sub)conscious choice of entitling the sonnet 'Baggage,' revealing an allusion to her own
experience of how her parents dealt with her like "property packed up for carriage" ("baggage").
Hence, the 'Baggage' from the sonnet's title connotes not only the burdensome grief of her
father's passing but also being "tied" ("baggage") to her mental struggles induced by her strained
relationship with her parents (Benson; Brockes). Nonetheless, according to Cope, the shabby
leather suitcase "still looks glamorous to me" despite being "left too long" in a "damp garage."
Leather loses its supple quality and turns brittle after prolonged exposure in a humid
environment (Leather). In postulating the leather's condition as a metaphorical analogy of the
poet's relationship with her father, her compliment towards the suitcase is a form of verbal irony
reaffirming her attachment towards her father despite the detached affection she felt from him
growing up. Additionally, her attachment gives way to her idyllic, conjectural conceptualization
of her father: "It calls to mind the handsome, young /And happy man I'd like to think he was." In
envisioning her father in a way that does not reflect the father whom she grew up with, she has
come to terms with her internal burden and wishes nothing more than to be able to spend time
with him. Accordingly, in the poem's volta, we witness her shift in thought away from
(Holbrook) her father's luggage revealing two critical pieces of information. First is that the poet
wishes to "join him under sunny foreign skies." She aspires to a specific kind of relationship with
him—one in which she accompanies her father in his travels overseas to experience a parental
bond that centres around togetherness. Secondly, Cope remarks herself as "the child of his old
age," an allegory that implies Cope making peace with the fact that her father's old age was one
of the factors which had forcibly kept her away from him in her youth (Alice). Discovering the
vintage leather luggage helped the poet alleviate her past grievances and make allowances for her
father.
Wendy Cope's anecdotal sonnet "Baggage" chronicles the poet's depictive commentary of
her father's old travelling suitcase, providing her with a vehicle to re-establish an emotional
connection with him. The sonnet illuminates the therapeutic value of a cherished item which
allows for introspection. In remarking the condition and the origins of the luggage labels
followed by envisaging her father’s halcyon days of travel, Cope celebrates the half-forgotten
figures in our lives.
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