TEXT SUMMARY 1984 follows the journey of the protagonist Winston in a dystopian totalitarian society. Winston is part of the ruling Party in London in the nation of Oceania. Big Brother is the leader of the Party all the citizens are under constant surveillance through telescreens. Winston is frustrated by the oppression and control of the society and rebels against the Party by purchasing an illegal diary to write his thoughts of rebellion. Winston works at the Minister of Truth where his job is to alter historical records in order to fit the needs of the party. At work he meets a man named O’Brien who Winston believes is part of a group called the Brotherhood – a secret group that wants to overthrow the Party. Oceania is allied with another nation called Eastasia and they together are at war with Eurasia however Winston believes that this was not always true. He also meets a girl at work – Julia - who he believes will turn him in for thoughtcrime – thinking things against the party. However later he receives a note from her saying ‘I love you’ and they begin to have an affair – which is against the Party rules. Winston receives a note from O’Brien saying that he wants to see him and O’Brien confirms that he hates the Party like Julia and Winston. He gives Winston and Julia a copy of Goldstein’s book and they join the Brotherhood. They are then caught by the Thought Police and taken to the Ministry of Love where they find out that O’Brien was a Party spy. O’Brien then spends months torturing Winston and finally sends him to Room 101 where he faces his fear of rats that eat his face. Winston finally concedes and tells O’Brien to do it to Julia and not to him – his spirit is broken and he is released. He loves big brother. 2 CHARACTERS Winston Smith Winston is the protagonist of the text and a minor member of the ruling Party where he works in changing history to suit the society. He has revolutionary ideological dreams of destroying Big Brother and hates the totalitarian control of his society. Julia Julia also works at the Ministry of Truth in the Fiction Department. She is Winston’s lover and claims to have had affairs with many Party members. Julia is very pragmatic and optimistic and her rebellion against the Party is small and personal, for her own enjoyment, in contrast to Winston’s ideological motivation. O’Brien O'Brien is a member of the Inner Party whom Winston believes is also a part of the Brotherhood - the rebel forces. He is mysterious and powerful and Winston is drawn to him. Big Brother Although Big Brother never actually appears in the text - and has questionable existence - he is a powerful presence throughout the novel. He is the perceived ruler of Oceania and everywhere Winston looks he sees posters of Big Brother’s face bearing the message “BIG BROTHER IS WATCHING YOU.” Big Brother’s image is stamped on coins and broadcast on the unavoidable telescreens; it haunts Winston’s life and fills him with hatred and fascination. Mr. Charrington Mr Harringtonis a king and encouraging old man that runs the secondhand store in the prole district. He seems to share an interest with Winston about the past and seemingly supports Winson and Julia's rebellion against Big Brother as he rents them the room in which they often meet. However later he betrays Winston and Julia, handing them in to the authorities because he is part of the Thought Police. 3 Syme Syme also works at the Ministry of Truth and specialises is the reduction of language as part of "Newspeak". Winston thinks that Syme is too intelligent to stay in the Party's favour. Parsons An obnoxious and dull Party member who lives near Winston and works at the Ministry of Truth. He has a dull wife and a group of suspicious, ill-mannered children who are members of the Junior Spies. Emmanuel Goldstein Emmanuel Goldstein is another presence that never appears in the text yet has a significant influence on the story. He is the legendary leader of the Brotherhood or rebels and was rumoured to be a Party member that fell out of favour with regime. The Party describes him as the most dangerous and treacherous man in Oceania. 4 TERMINOLOGY "The book": Titled "Theory and Practice of Oligarchical Collectivism" and supposedly written by Goldstein, it contains the story of humankind and the Revolution, arguing that there is hope for a stronger future without the dishonesty and manipulation of the Party. Black Market: Illegal trade resource for all "good quality" materials, such as real coffee, sugar, razors, etc. Doublethink: Newspeak word “doublethink means the power of holding two contradictory beliefs in one’s mind simultaneously, and accepting both of them” Hate Week: A week of hate mongering against enemies of war. Supported by massive rallies and organized through the Ministry of Truth, Hate Week rallies Party members around INGSOC: Newspeak for English Socialism. Junior Anti-Sex League: A youth organization advocating complete celibacy for both sexes and encouraging artsem. Julia is a member and wears the organization's symbolic scarlet sash. Jus primae noctis: A supposed capitalist law that allowed any capitalist the right to sleep with any woman working in one of his factories. A "fact" the party cites about capitalist history. Ministry of Love (Miniluv): Maintains law and order. Protected with great force. Only those arrested for Thought Crime or who are on official Party business can enter. Referred to within the novel as "the place with no darkness" because the lights are always on. Dissidents are taken here to be tortured, reformed, or killed. Ministry of Peace (Minipax): The Ministry of Peace is ironically responsible for matters of war. Oceania is in a perpetual state of war against both Eurasia and Eastasia at different times, so the function of this ministry is vital. They also direct the welfare of the population, and are in charge of the armed forces such as the army and navy. 5 Ministry of Plenty (Miniplenty): The Ministry of Plenty controls all matters of the economy. This is particularly important due to the rationing of many resources and food among the Outer Party and proles Ministry of Truth (Minitrue): Responsible for all Party news, entertainment, education and fine arts. The Party's propaganda machine. Newspeak: The official language of Oceania and the new language of the Party, devised to meet the ideological needs of Ingsoc (English Socialism). The goal of Newspeak is to reduce the English language to the fewest words possible and supercede Oldspeak by 2050. Removing words removes ways to define anti-Party feelings and the ability to disagree. For example, the word "speedful" can be used in place of the word "rapid." Prole: One of the 85% of the Oceania population that are not Party members and live in poverty. Regulated loosely to weed out the overly intellectual and protect the Party. Spies and Youth League: A Party youth organization that encourages children to spy on and report elders, including parents, to the Thought Police. Indoctrinates children into the Party. Telescreen: An oblong metal plaque that looks like a dulled mirror and acts like a television, a camera, and a listening device for the Inner Party and Thought Police. There is no way to shut it off completely, and it keeps tabs on all Party members. The Physical Jerks: Daily morning exercises all Party members must take part in. Dictated via the telescreen. The Revolution: The rise of new socialism (versus democracy and capitalism) that resulted in Ingsoc in Oceania, Neo-Bolshevism in Eurasia, and Death Worship in Eastasia. Each regime has the conscious aim of perpetuating unfreedom and inequality, arresting progress, freezing history in a chosen moment, and perpetuating war. The Times: A Party-sponsored news publication for which Winston works. Thought Police: The arm of the Inner Party that seeks out those against the Party, searching out anyone with even the smallest thoughts against the Party or Big Brother. Their powers of observation force everyone to live as though they are always being watched or listened to. Mr. Charrington is a member. 6 Thoughtcrime: Thinking against the Party, having misgivings about the Party, doubting Big Brother, or questioning any Party action or "fact." Two Minutes Hate: Daily requirement for all Party members. Organized group of members watches Party presentations on a telescreen denouncing Goldstein and war enemies (either Eastasia or Eurasia), and celebrating Big Brother. Causes great outbursts of hatred such as directed screaming and violence at screen representations of the enemy. Vaporized: The fate of those who commit Thoughtcrimes. Those who are vaporized are removed from society in that they are killed and all evidence of their existence is removed. Victory products: Party-made products, such as gin, cigarettes, clothing, food, and even housing. All of poor quality 7 CONTEXT Historical Context The inception of the Cold War, a prolonged state of political and military tension after WWII between powers in the Western Bloc (US and allies) and powers in the Eastern Bloc (Soviet Union and allies). It was based on the work of the Russian author Yevgeny Zamyatin, 1984 is an apocalyptical satirical depiction of how the power of the state could dominate the lives of individuals through cultural conditioning. Joseph Stalin - Russia During WWII, Russia was ruled by the despotic dictator, Joseph Stalin, who was known for his midnight purges, where his government would abduct people deemed dissidents of the state (those with opposing political values, artists, Jews and other ethnic minorities) and murdering them in isolated areas. Stalin is believed to have killed over 20 million people. Textual Relevance The Great Purge Orwell modelled the Party after events such as The Great Purge, a coordinated massexecution of political dissidents in Stalinist Russia, to criticise how authoritarian powers eliminate opposition to ensure their versions of truth remain unquestioned. Vaporisation and torture were used to destroy the psyche and remove the power to hold rebellious thought. Lysenkoism Campaign The promotion of Lamarckian pseudo-science and prohibition of conventional sciences, which were marked as “bourgeois pseudoscience” Glavlit The main Soviet Union censorship body, Glavlit, was employed not only to eliminate any undesirable printed materials but also “ensure that the correct ideological spin was put 8 on every published item” In the Stalin era, deviation from the dictates of official propaganda was punished by execution and labour camps. This parallels Orwell's Ministry of Truth through the "rectification" or altering of history to suit the Party as well as the Big Brother propaganda throughout the text. White Rose Inspired by acts of political rebellion such as the White Rose, a group that resisted Nazi indoctrination through anti-fascist pamphlets, Orwell conveys we can protect our humanity from totalitarian dominion by actively asserting our freedoms. NKVD Orwell parallels the ironic ‘Ministry of Love’ to the Stalinist NKVD which similarly aimed to eliminate private loyalties by creating an atmosphere of distrust. Hitler – Germany At the time, Germany’s leader, Adolf Hitler, was instrumenting the Holocaust which killed over 6 million Jews, 9 million Slavic people, gypsies, dissidents, homosexuals and disabled people. Textual Relevance Hitler Youth Orwell responds to the Hitler Youth, where the Nazi ideologically instilled children with fascist values, forcing parents to mistrust their children in fear of being reported. Nuremberg Rallies “By illustrating how the totalitarian Party uses events like the Two Minutes Hate to replace private loyalties with love for the state, Orwell condemns the Nazi Party’s use of the Nuremberg Rallies to promote the blind acceptance of Socialist ideologies. This propaganda is a metaphor for social orthodoxy as…” 9 Francisco Franco – Spain The general and dictator Francisco Franco (1892-1975) ruled over Spain from 1939 until his death. He rose to power during the bloody Spanish Civil War when, with the help of Nazi Germany and Fascist Italy, his Nationalist forces overthrew the democratically elected Second Republic. Stalin also played a role in the Spanish Civil War, funding the socialist Republican government in its battle against fascist Nationalists, who fought for militaristic, elite rule over the country. However, Stalin's paranoia and need for total power led him to accuse many of his allies on the Republican side of treason, supporting the Nationalists. The resulting infighting on the Republican side created an even more horrific period of bloodshed and fear of retribution during the war. Orwell, who fought as a socialist in the Spanish Civil War and was targeted by Stalin's supporters, had firsthand experience with allies turning into enemies. Textual Relevance Witnessing the oppressive Francoist regime first-hand during his time fighting in the Spanish Civil War (1936), Orwell characterises Winston as an anomaly who challenges collective subjugation to encourage his audience to maintain similar political awareness. Chairman Mao Tse Tung - China In China, Chairman Mao Tse Tung fought for communism against nationalist forces to begin a long, oppressive totalitarian regime. Mao Tse-tung served as chairman of the People's Republic of China from 1949 to 1959, and led the Chinese Communist Party from 1935 until his death. It is estimated that he ordered the persecution of hundreds of thousands to millions of deaths. Benito Mussolini – Italy The Italian political leader Mussolini became the fascist dictator of Italy from 1925 to 1945. He was originally a revolutionary socialist, yet forged the paramilitary fascist movement in 1919 and became prime minister in 1922. 10 Political Terminology Democratic Socialism • Definition: having a socialist economy in which the means of production are socially and collectively owned or controlled, alongside a democratic political system of government. • Democratic socialists reject most self-described socialist states and Marxism–Leninism. • Democratic socialists argue that capitalism is inherently incompatible with the values of freedom, equality and solidarity and that these ideals can only be achieved through the realist ion of a socialist society. Although most democratic socialists seek a gradual transition to socialism, democratic socialism can support either revolutionary or reformist politics as means to establish socialism. As a term, it was popularised by social democrats who were opposed to the authoritarian socialist development in Russia and elsewhere during the 20th century. Totalitarianism • Definition: form of government that prohibits opposition parties, restricts individual opposition to the state and its claims, and exercises an extremely high degree of control over public and private life. • In totalitarian states, political power has often been held by autocrats who employ allencompassing campaigns in which propaganda is broadcast by state-controlled mass media. 11 Personal Context Orwell was born in India in 1903 and educated as a scholarship student at a prestigious boarding school named Eton in England. He famously described his family as “lower-upper-middle class” because of diverse background and he never quite fit in. Despite going to a prestigious boarding school Orwell felt oppressed and opposed the dictatorial control of student’s lives within the school. After graduating Orwell decided against the further education of college and went to work as a British Imperial Policeman in Burma. However, he again despised the dictatorial and strict regime of policing. His failing health then forced him to return to England where he quit the police force and decided to become a writer. Orwell was inspired by Jack London’s 1903 book The People of the Abyss, which explored the author’s experience in the slums of London. Orwell then emulated this and bought ragged clothes and went to live among the very poor in London. After returning from this he published his first book Down and Out in Paris and London. He later lived among coal miners which causes him to give up capitalism in favour of democratic socialism. In 1936 he travelled to Spain and reported on the Spanish Civil War. He fought with the Republicans as an advocate for socialism against Francisco who was the leader of the Nationalist forces that overthrew the Spanish democratic republic in the Spanish Civil War. Here he witnessed firsthand the atrocities of fascist political regimes – sparking his hatred of totalitarianism and political authority – an idea that was furthered by the context of Adolf Hitler in Germany and Joseph Stalin in the Soviet Union. Orwell then published Animal Farm in 1945 and 1984 in 1949 – both texts aimed at warning against the dangers of totalitarian society. 12 Orwell’s Purpose Orwell wrote 1984 to show how political systems can suppress individual freedom, a warning for the future of what society could become should totalitarianism be allowed to achieve dominance. Orwell wanted to expose the cruelty of political oppression and the manipulations inhumanity depends eg. Party slogans. The world of 1984 is a NOT Orwell’s prediction of what the world would be like in the future but instead, a hyperbolised instance that reflects the direction of societies at the time. Orwell deliberately provokes moral outrage towards Oceania, a society that so completely destroys the human values of expression and love etc. to encourage his audience to think about the effect of governmental control on the populace. Often, through Winston’s unreliable narration, the reader falls victim to the very same manipulation, highlighting the limitation of our capacity, like Winston, to recognise manipulation. This explores fragility of the human condition in that it can so easily be manipulated and corrupted. Orwell expresses his values regarding the importance of the human spirit, creativity and freedom of expression. His vision of the future serves as a warning for people to be vigilant about the dangers inherent in the rise of totalitarianism and nationalism, the oppression of the working class (proletariats) and the decay of language that expresses the complexity and inspirational nature of human experience. Ignorance and fear are tropes portrayed as a means of control and a cause of the people’s oppression. Fear is induced by a breakdown of trust as Thought Police roam among the people, removing anyone who seems to be a threat/dissident. This effectively makes it impossible to create a collective uprising. Their ignorance makes people impotent in the grip of government control, and this ignorance is perpetuated by the governmental control over them. Orwell satirised the political systems of his context in order to poignantly highlight the nature of contextual Marxist construction and its limitations on individuals. 13 MODULE BREAKDOWN In this common module students deepen their understanding of how texts represent individual and collective human experiences. They examine how texts represent human qualities and emotions associated with, or arising from, these experiences. Students appreciate, explore, interpret, analyse and evaluate the ways language is used to shape these representations in a range of texts in a variety of forms, modes and media. Students explore how texts may give insight into the anomalies, paradoxes and inconsistencies in human behaviour and motivations, inviting the responder to see the world differently, to challenge assumptions, ignite new ideas or reflect personally. They may also consider the role of storytelling throughout time to express and reflect particular lives and cultures. By responding to a range of texts they further develop skills and confidence using various literary devices, language concepts, modes and media to formulate a considered response to texts. Students study one prescribed text and a range of short texts that provide rich opportunities to further explore representations of human experiences illuminated in texts. They make increasingly informed judgements about how aspects of these texts, for example context, purpose, structure, stylistic and grammatical features, and form shape meaning. In addition, students select one related text and draw from personal experience to make connections between themselves, the world of the text and their wider world. By responding and composing throughout the module students further develop a repertoire of skills in comprehending, interpreting and analysing complex texts. They examine how different modes and media use visual, verbal and/or digital language elements. They communicate ideas using figurative language to express universal themes and evaluative language to make informed judgements about texts. Students further develop skills in using metalanguage, correct grammar and syntax to analyse language and express a personal perspective about a text. 14 Key Words Anomaly: something that deviates from what is standard, normal, or expected. Paradox: a seemingly absurd or contradictory statement or proposition which when investigated may prove to be well founded or true. Inconsistencies: the variation in human behaviour that causes individuals to behave in different ways Representation: The way ideas are portrayed and represented in texts, using language devices, forms, features and structures of texts to create specific views about characters, events and ideas. Representation applies to all language modes: spoken, written, visual and multimodal. Representing: A collective noun to include a reader, listener, viewer, an audience and so on. Responding: The activity that occurs when students read, listen to or view texts. It encompasses the personal and intellectual connections a student makes with texts. It also recognises that students and the texts to which they respond reflect social contexts. Responding typically involves: • reading, listening and viewing that depend on, but go beyond, the decoding of texts • identifying, comprehending, selecting, articulating, imagining, critically analysing and evaluating. Textual Integrity: The unity of a text; its coherent use of form and language to produce an integrated whole in terms of meaning and value. 15 Module Breakdown Individual vs. Collective Any engaging story should have the ability to explore timeless concerns that humanity has always faced yet still illustrate unique perspectives of the individual characters. This is essentially the dichotomy that is presented in this rubric statement—that it should be distinguished as best as possible the experiences of the individual and the experiences of a wider collective. That is, while every human has their own upbringing in different environments with different people, some aspects of our lives transcend such borders. The universal themes presented in the texts are ones that are only enhanced by the specific experiences of the characters as it allows for a more engaging depiction of such concerns. That is, as responders, we still seem to relate to many of the emotions evoked or concerns explored in these texts despite it not being entirely reflective of our own lives. The module is asking readers to reflect on their understanding of how texts explore the relationship between the individual identity and the collective. The individual identity refers to the values, emotions, experiences and human qualities of the individual person – in the context of 1984 this would be referring to Winston. However, the collective refers to the societal values, beliefs and ideas – in 1984 this would be the values and beliefs of the Party that are imposed on society. The collective identity is often the society that the individual exists within, however can be any group that the individual belongs to. Because the individual identity exists within the collective identity, the ideas and values of the collective are imposed on the individual and this limits their individuality. This is especially prevalent in a totalitarian society such as 1984. Therefore, the module wants us to explore the relationship between the individual and the collective and the subsequent effect that this relationship has on human qualities and emotions. These ideas are shaped by the author’s use of language devices, form and perspectives in order to engage the audience within these ideas. Human Qualities & Emotions The modules name of “Texts and Human Experiences” directly related to the exploration of human qualities and emotions. A major part of human experience is not the event itself, but our emotional response to the situations. Therefore, it is imperative that we use art and literature to 16 more deeply comprehend the feelings that define our existence and experiences, in order to depict what it is that makes us human. Human qualities are the breakdown of these emotions and experiences and more simply define humans. These are terms such as ambition, arrogance, conformity, determination, realism or optimism. These are part of our response to events and situations. Anomalies, Paradoxes & inconsistences This expands on the ideas of human qualities and emotions by effectively subverting them. It is the idea that perhaps one of the defining qualities or features of humanity is that we simply cannot be confined it a single label. It is part of our individual and evolving identity that we cannot be restricted to a specific mode of behaviour. It is this notion of the inherent conflict between people, cultures and even within ourselves, that the idea of “anomalies, paradoxes and inconsistences” arises from. Challenging Assumptions, Igniting Ideas and Reflecting Personally Try to explain precisely what it is that makes the text unique, differentiating it from other works of similar genres or styles. It is also important to consider these works of art in the larger fabric of texts—this means discussing how the composers are being innovative through form and overall message. Above all, you should understand that challenging readers’ assumptions is a fundamental purpose of all texts, as part of the human experience deals with our ability to be challenged in order to grow. Role of Storytelling The role of storytelling is simply to allow the audience to move beyond the confines of reality or the limitations placed on them by society and experience a new world. Storytelling allows readers to transcend themselves and further their understanding of the world around them in order to grow as individuals. It allows us to gain a deeper understanding of our own society, context and experiences as well as promotes self-reflection. By portraying negative aspects of the human experience, it makes social commentary on contextual concerns about the changing political or social climate. 1984 captures the zeitgeist of the era—a society of people fearing the loss of all freedom from totalitarian governments all whilst seemingly and actively participating 17 events that could catalyse this occurrence. This exploration of concerns allows enhanced understanding and this is because of the audience’s relationship to art and storytelling. Texts are a product of their time and of the composer’s contexts and audiences grain a deeper understanding of the contextual concerns through the role of storytelling. However despite disparities it is the fundamental themes or principles that allow the composer to relate to the responder. In this way, the role of storytelling is both to reflect certain cultures and unite all of us by showing how humanity at its core can find harmony with one another despite our varied experiences. Above all the role of storytelling is to help responders understand what it really means to be human. To take pain, happiness, sorrow or surprising experiences and turn it into a piece of art that can be shared endlessly, effectively immortalising the composer’s name in a way that defies our physical limitations. We are opened to new perspectives, are told stories that may resonate with us due to our personal memories and see the vast and colourful diversity of experiences that people have to offer. In Summary Texts use language, context, purpose, structure, stylistic and grammatical features, and form to represent and afford insight into: • Individual and collective human experiences, thus revealing: • Individual, shared and universal human qualities • The emotions, assumptions and ideas that can arise However, anomalies, paradoxes and inconsistencies arise in human behaviour and motivations arise because of our individuality. This invites us to: • See the world differently by challenging our assumptions, igniting new ideas, or prompting personal reflection • Consider the role of storytelling throughout time to express and reflect particular lives and cultures 18 Form Summary 1984 has a tripart structure with an appendix. Part one focuses on the setting of Oceania and employs third person limited narration to introduce Winston. This section lasts from the 4 th to the 6th of April and readers explore Winston’s loneliness with the primary focus on establishing the totalitarian regime and restriction of individuality within the society. The second part is the lengthiest part of the narrative where Winston becomes connected with rebels like himself. He has an affair with Julia and follows O’Brien to an underground meeting of dissidents. Orwell includes lengthy sections from the fictional Emmanuel Goldstein’s political tract. This section lasts from April to August and focuses on Winston’s rebellion and temporary happiness. The third and final section of the texts is involved with the imprisonment, torture and final abandonment of intellectual integrity by Winston. Winston and Julia have been caught by the Inner Party and separated. Winston undergoes severe torture and brainwashing at the hands of O’Brien. His dialogue and interaction with O’Brien have much dramatic tension because underlying their battle is mutual respect. Unfortunately for Winston, this respect does not translate into O’Brien freeing him. O’Brien successfully brainwashes Winston into loving Big Brother. This section lasts from August to May. The book ends with an appendix on the development and structure of the language called “Newspeak.” The appendix is written as if it were a scholarly article, and while it serves to clarify the use of Newspeak in the novel it is interesting to note that the publisher originally wanted to cut it, thinking it unnecessary. Analysis The Dystopian Novel Dystopian literature is a form of speculative fiction that began as a response to utopian literature. A dystopia is an imagined community or society that is dehumanizing and frightening. The dystopian genre imagines worlds or societies where life is extremely bad because of 19 deprivation or oppression or terror, and human society is characterized by human misery, such as squalor, oppression, disease, overcrowding, environmental destruction, or war. A dystopia is an antonym of a utopia, which is a perfect society. Dystopian authors represent social control as wielded by any number of powerful entities, including: • Corporate • Religious/Philosophical • Technological • Bureaucratic • Reproductive Dystopian fiction is usually set in the near — rather than far — future to generate urgency about real current events. Because dystopian literature and cinema is set in the future, it is by definition science fiction. However, this can also look very different than the best sci-fi movies. Both science fiction and dystopian fiction belong to the larger category of “speculative” fiction. This type of fiction speculates what might happen to society if humans don’t deal with existential threats such as climate change, nuclear war, over-population, or authoritarianism. Tripart Structure 1984 follows a three-part linear narrative structure that enables the reader to experience Winston’s dehumanization along with him, creating tension and sympathy for the main characters. This tripart structure allows the reader to become part of the story and engage with the experiences of Winston himself, allowing the transcendence of Winston’s human experience to the readers themselves. This lends itself to the ultimate idea that the novel’s function is also to provoke hope for the audience, as although Winston’s story has come to an end, there is a transcendence of his hope to the audience. This gives the audience agency to act instead of remaining passive in their own context of oppression. 20 This is an important aspect of your last paragraph in your essay where you have to provide the ultimate purpose for the book. The module asks the audience to consider what they are taking away from the book and the tripart structure allows the audience to come to this understanding. It is also important that you analyse the form in your essay, and this is conventionally done in the second sentence of your first paragraph and is often integrated with the introduction of context. It is also important to mention form where it is relevant throughout your argument – for example how does the form engage the audience ? How does the form facilitate the exploration of meaning in the novel ? Character Development Winston’s development follows the tripart structure and therefore the audience accompanies the protagonist in his journey. This allows the audience to engage with the story on a deeper and more personal level as their interpretation of the text becomes integral in the story itself. Essay Breakdown General Approach In reference to the thematic breakdown below, this essay explores the ideas within Manipulation and Oppression, Attempted Rebellion and Futile Rebellion, with a specific emphasis on Anomalous Resistance. Thesis The generic argument outline focuses on the oppression of identity, the attempted rebellion throughout the text and the futility of this individual resistance by reflecting on the strength in the collective. A general 1984 thesis outlines how the individual is oppressed by the collective totalitarian regime and this subsequently shapes their identity by minimising it. It then goes on to explore 21 the attempted rebellion against this oppression through rebellion but outlines how this is ultimately futile because the individual cannot overcome the collective regime and there is strength in the collective identity. However Orwell positions the audience to evolve their understanding of the world, initiating reflection on how the futility of individual resistance is depicted to didactically reveal the importance of collective action in protecting political autonomy. Paragraph 1 – Setting up the World This paragraph should outline how the regime is able to oppress the individual. This includes exploration of manipulation tactics and the suppression of language that affects the individual’s ability to express themselves. This is also an important paragraph for including the contextual influence of the world’s construction. Ultimately this paragraph is established to highlight how the individual consciousness can be oppressed in order to make audiences more aware of their own potential oppression. This paragraph also allows us to show later how this oppression leads to Winston’s rebellion as individuals inherently desire individuality. Paragraph 2 – Attempted Rebellion This paragraph explores the individual’s desire to regain their freedom and identity through rebellion. This paragraph should focus on the power of the human spirit despite all odds and highlight to audiences the power they inherently hold within themselves. As you explore the character’s journey to regain individuality you should focus on the ways that they are able to do this. The power of self expression that allows individuals to regain truth and purpose and lead them to a better understanding of themselves. This is a great way to address the “storytelling” aspect of the module and place emphasis on the role of storytelling in our lives. This paragraph also includes a focus on human emotionality to both empower and oppress the individual by focusing on Winston and Julia’s relationship. The modular relation in this paragraph is “texts represent human qualities and emotions”. However reference to the anomalous aspect of Winston’s character must also be addressed – why did he specifically choose to go against all odds and rebel ? What makes him different ? These are all things that should be explored in this paragraph. Paragraph 3 – Futility of Anomalous Resistance 22 This final paragraph ultimately shows that despite this individual desire to regain freedom – ultimately this is futile if there is no collective resistance. This paragraph is important for the exploration of the human spirit and how powerful we are as individuals. Although this is not something that you must address some students focus this paragraph on the inherent complexity of human hope that Winston portrays, because despite all odds and adversity he rebels, even though he knows from the very beginning “The thought police would get me all the same”. However usually students focus this paragraph on how the collective behavior will always override the individual acts of resistance, highlighting to audienec the importance of collective solidarity in challenging oppressive political structures. This paragraph directly focuses on the module’s exploration “how texts represent individual and collective human experiences.”. Alternative Essay Approach Although many students choose to argue a generic 1984 essay for their HSC – there are also many different interpretations and essay focuses that are also valid for the HSC. If your school is very specific regarding the type of argument that they would like to see then it may be a good idea to stick to a more generic essay type. However, if your school allows you to take a more creative approach to your thesis then definitely open yourself up to some more ideas. Here is one which you can take! In reference to the thematic breakdown below, this essay explores the ideas within Manipulation and Oppression, Attempted Rebellion and Futile Rebellion, with a specific emphasis on Constructed Identity. Therefore this essay approach differs from the Generic approach through its emphasis on constructed identity rather than the anomality of Winston’s rebellion. Thesis Thesis: Within worlds of rupture, shaping of individual and societal consciousness through contextually driven ideologies functions to fragment and counterintuitively provoke both cyclical stability and dislocation of human experience. This means: Within worlds of upheaval, both the individual and the society is shaped by the contextual ideologies that through oppression – fragment their identity or consciousness. This then provokes cycles where the individual attempts to stabilise their identity by regaining power 23 through rebellion. However this is ultimately futile because the individual themselves is constructed by the context – when they rebel they are rebelling against themselves. This creates a paradox whereby their own identity is further fragmented despite attempts at regaining it. Paragraph 1: The external constructive ideological forces that shape the individual writer, character, and reader’s experience within 1984, directly correlating with European socialist and communist regimes, poignantly enforces that truth is manipulated and constructed, within both thought and history. This means: Orwell is highlighting how these ideological forces construct not only the individual, but also the writer and the reader by shaping their interpretation of the world around them. This directly correlates with European totalitarian regimes and shows that the idea of truth is a construction of the context. Paragraph 2: Individual human response to oppressive forces, attempting rebellion defined by reflected identity, paradoxically disempowers through emphasis of predetermined character framing, raising questions about how achievable it is to seek true individual identity. This means: The individual responds to these oppressive ideological forces by attempting to rebel against them – however they are restricted because they themselves are constructed by the context. This then paradoxically disempowers them because it shows that even their rebellion is a construction and this questions the ability to find true individual identity. Paragraph 3: Disempowerment of the human individual, through attempted resistance, exemplifies complex identity created as part of the human experience. This means: This attempted rebellion paradoxically disempowers the individual and highlights their complex identity. 24 THEMATIC BREAKDOWN Manipulation & Oppression Totalitarian regime The individual’s identity is oppressed because of the extremely restrictive totalitarian regime, meaning that their consciousness is constructed by their environment This paragraph explores the limitation placed on the individual’s identity when they live within the oppressive regime. The lack of freedom the individual has limits their ability to have individuality because within the oppressive regime they are told who they are, their job and their living conditions, meaning there is no freedom of choice. This engages the relationship between the “individual and collective human experience” from the module, whereby the collective identity is dictating the individual’s experience. Essentially Orwell explores the idea that the individual identity is constructed by the contextual environment – in the case of 1984 the individual identity of Winston is restricted because of the oppressive nature of the totalitarian regime. This environmental construction can also be extrapolated to the writer – Orwell – and the reader. Because of Orwell’s context of totalitarian regimes, he wrote the text 1984 to warn the society of the harmful effects of this – therefore it can be said that he himself was influenced – or constructed – by his context. The construction of Orwell within the context of post-World War II societal uncertainty and totalitarian regimes prefaces his employment of the alienating dystopian narrative that interacts with the political turmoil and parallels Winston himself. This is an extension of the idea that Winston himself is constructed and provokes the audience to reflect on their own identity and relationship with the collective. This is a higher order thinking idea and if you would like to engage with this point a meta-fictive technique that explores levels of consciousness within the text (Orwell, reader, and Winston) this idea may be appropriate. See essay sample 2 for an example of this. 25 Similarly, readers interpretation is dependent on perspective – which is also influenced by context. Therefore, this emphasises the importance of contextual environment on the text, author, and reader. Orwell’s acknowledgement of authoritarian contextual Nazi and Soviet regimes and their effect on constructing the individual establishes his metafictive appropriation of the concept itself (through 1984) and allows the readers to come to a point of self-realisation of their own constructed identity. The contextual construction of 1984 directly correlates with European socialist and communist regimes and poignantly enforces that truth is manipulated and constructed, within both thought and history. Winston’s himself becomes a narrative device for depicting the constructed nature of our identity through external forces that pressure the individual’s ability to express themselves, raising questions regarding audience response to authoritarian manipulation of individual perspective. Winston mimetically encompasses Orwell’s self-reflexive acknowledgement of contextual Marxist construction of identity. Construction through ideological contextual positioning of text establishes reflexive appropriation and fragmentation of identity and experience for character, writer and reader, becoming Orwell’s established storytelling mode that challenges his readership. Therefore, there is construction on many levels: the external constructive ideological forces of the totalitarian regime shape the individual writer, character, and reader’s experience within 1984. Audience Takeaway The individual’s construction and existence within the oppressive regime therefore restricts their individual identity and the module prompts the audience to consider the relationship between our identity and context. Diminution of language The paradoxical power and fragility of language as a vehicle through which we shape human thought and identity Orwell makes a potent commentary on the way language shapes meaning and thus our perception of truth and identity within our own lives. Orwell offers a psycholinguistic 26 imposition through restrictive neologisms as a means of eradicating the ability to describe and thereby nullify human experience. There is an obvious overt critique on the way excessive surveillance, control and assertions of authority can inhibit the human experience, however the common module requires the audience to consider: What role does the distortion of language and literature play in creating oppression? Part of the human experience is learning to express yourself – and they address the removal of this psychological development in the text through the reduction of language by Newspeak. The construction of language within the text dualistically accentuates individual empowerment and potential for disempowerment – this paradox directly correlating with the module. If sense of consciousness and identity is largely shaped by what we believe, and what we’ve experienced, our ability to discern truth and develop our identity is only afforded by our ability to communicate empirical evidence and draw upon our own experiences through memory. Therefore, when the integrity of language and history is compromised by oppressive political structures, language acts a mechanism to suppress human identity by removing the ability to autonomously develop our own thoughts and beliefs. For example, Winston’s identity and thought is forced into the fractured reality of the regime and therefore conformity, ‘doublethink means the power of holding two contradictory beliefs in one’s mind simultaneously, and accepting both of them’. By forcing individuals to accept the paradoxical idea of doublethink – the words lose their meaning entirely and the individual – through limited expression – is more easily oppressed. Alternatively, when language and the autonomous expression of oneself is asserted, language acts as a powerful vehicle to reclaim human thought and identity through storytelling. Winston’s sense of rationality and purpose is reignited when he starts writing in his diary and feels the intense desire to “preserve the human race” through his personal story. Fragments of memory and consciousness also begin to appear when he reclaims the catharsis and empowerment which language and self-expression affords him. 27 However even in Winston’s empowerment through storytelling, his oppressive context ironically continues to be reflected. This futile inescapability of the individual’s construction within the society therefore limits not only their language through Newspeak, but also their thought. For example, Winston’s high modal language within his rebellious diary writing ironically reflects his role of “wordsmith”, questioning the individual’s ability to remove themselves from the communal experience because of their construction within it. Therefore, Orwell presents this paradoxical dichotomous representation of language in its ability to oppress and empower. This idea can be extended by exploring the ultimate disempowerment through construction of the individual within these oppressive totalitarian forces that results in their inability to have original thought. Audience Takeaway Ultimately, Orwell’s exploration of our susceptibility toward manipulation and this awakens the audience towards our tendency towards passiveness as individuals, and the importance of preserving the integrity of language and the literature we consume. Readers’ responses through engagement with direct parallels to their experience allow self-reflexivity to shape their reclamation of identity against their own limiting constructed contexts. Emotions as a political tool for exploitation The dual power of emotions to either perpetuate conformity to oppressive political structures or reclaim autonomy from them. Our emotional response to upheaval is a fundamental quality of what is means to be human and engages with the module’s assertation of how texts represent different experiences. However, emotions can have conflicting implications on our human experience, as acting in accordance with them holds the potential for us to perpetuate our own oppression. For example, the human emotion of fear may compel us into social conformity and moral corruption, illustrated in the scene where Winston partakes in the Two Minutes of Hate and acts inconsistently with his belief system out of fear. Alternatively, his strong hatred against the party also ironically drives him to moral corruption, as he shows his willingness to engage in inhumane acts in the name of resistance – in the scene where O’Brien asks him what he is willing 28 to do for the Brotherhood Winston says he is willing to murder innocent people and commit suicide. However, we also see the immense strength and resilience of the human spirit through the character of Winston, and the power of his emotions to drive his quest for change and truth. We see glimpses of his renewed purpose in life when he meets Julia, his slow reclamation of hope through the Brotherhood, and his slow regaining of consciousness in fragments – despite the bathetic ending, we are still able to see the human capacity for strength. Orwell utilises 1984 as a device for readers own metafictive realisation of construction and manipulation. Through Winston’s unreliable third person unreliable narration the reader falls victim to the very same manipulation of perspective that Winston does. Therefore, Winston’s despotically oppressed perspective becomes reflective of the reader’s own manipulated perspective highlighting the emotional fragility of the human psyche and establishing metafictive awareness of reader’s subjugation. In the words of Ai WeiWei, a Chinese Activist and Artist, “Art is always dangerous. It talks about uncertainty; it talks about imagination. It talks about something beyond our rationality, and gives trust to our emotions. So… it is dangerous to authoritarian societies”. Whilst he may act consistent with some emotions and inconsistent with others, we do receive a glimpse of the tremendous power of human emotionality to reclaim our autonomy – meaning another dichotomous representation is formed, exploring the dual power and weakness of human emotions. Summary The marked aspect of this manipulation and oppression is the dichotomous nature of each device that engage with the module’s exploration of paradoxes, anomalies and inconsistencies in human experience. Both Orwell and the module prompt audience self-reflection in order to consider the relationship between the individual and the collective identity. Yet Orwell does not 29 fail to consider the multifaceted nature of the individual and our response to oppression and prompts us as the audience to reconsider our relationship with our context. 30 Attempted Rebellion Relationships Orwell establishes a dichotomy between the innate human desire for connection and the ironic limitation of emotion resultant from individual construction – explored in futile rebellion. Orwell highlights that Winston’s construction within the totalitarian society where all forms of relationships and love are removed has left him desultory. By distorting one’s capacity to experience connection and the instinctive emotions of our existence, the totalitarian authority becomes the only source of life and fulfilment, causing the essence of the human experience to be extinguished. Orwell poises that in a society without human connection we as individuals are unable to establish consciousness. This also critiques the complete removal of the individual from the collective identity and posies that to some degree individuals need to be part of a collective in order to be fulfilled. Orwell explores this motivation to be part of the collective through Winston’s initial obsession with O’Brien and his innate desire to become part of the Brotherhood. Winston’s relationship with Julia also calls to question the necessity of human connection in order to establish consciousness and synthesise fragmented self-identity. However, Winston’s outbursts of cathartic emotional expression signify the lack of physiological development and his construction within the totalitarian context. Despite this Winston’s restoration of motivations and consciousness within his relationship with Julia offers hope to the contextual audience regarding our own ability to form meaning-full relationships. Language & storytelling Winston’s rebellion through storytelling allows him to self-express and imagine, allowing him to become conscious of his desires and thereby detect his own sense of entrapment. Winston’s subversive diary writing provides liberation from individual oppression – establishing transcendence between contrived identity and true desires. 31 Winston is irrevocably drawn to freeing his voice through storytelling as the diary is the first thing that Winston purchases from Mr. Charrington’s shop. He uses a pen “simply because of a feeling that the beautiful creamy paper deserved to be written on with a real nib instead of being scratched with an ink pencil.”. Winston revels that “he writes this diary for the future” where through storytelling he reveals his ability to ironically transcend his limited identity between oppressed existence and conscious freedom. Within Winston’s diary writing he continually reveals his transcendence and metafictive awareness of oppression – transcribing this awareness of oppression and resultant liberation through awareness “freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two make four. If that is granted, everything else follows”. We thus realise how the ability to express oneself and the imagination can provide liberation from one’s present oppression, as Winston’s subversive diary writing provided a degree of solace and sense of empowerment. There is a famous quote from Friedrich Nietzche: “He who has a why to live can bear almost any how.” 32 Futile Rebellion Anomalous Resistance The futility and challenges of individual resistance without collective solidarity Despite gaining glimpses of hope through the first half of Winston’s character arc, Orwell decides to ultimately end the novel in the conventional dystopian style where Winston’s efforts become futile. But what does the ending and turn of events say about the human experience? By representing the futility of Winston’s efforts alone to change the state of the world he inhabits, Orwell comments on the profound importance of recognising our shared human experience and engaging in collective solidarity in order for true change to occur. Winston’s questioning of the reality that had been systematically imposed on him may have been a symbolic representation of humanity’s capacity for agency, yet ultimately his anti-heroic trajectory emphasises the overpowering need for collective action to resist oppression. Orwell pushes us out of the ‘bystander’ mindset and reminds us of the essential role each person plays in any resistance against political authorities, whether or not the authority is totalitarian. In this way, literature teaches us the importance of preserving our voice as freedom exists only to the extent that we ourselves collectively exercise it. In the words of the novelist Charlotte Wood, “As soon as we fall silent - from distraction, obedience, exhaustion or fear– our freedom evaporates”. The Constructed Nature of Identity Individual human response to oppressive forces, attempting rebellion despite their limited individuality, paradoxically disempowers through emphasis of predetermined character framing, raising questions about how achievable it is to seek true individual identity. Orwell explores the extent to which individuals are able to hold an authentic identity when that identity is constructed within the ideologies of their context. Essentially Orwell is posing the question – how much of our identity is truly us and how much of it is a product of our environment? 33 For example – Winston and Julia’s rebellion is ironically constructed to reflect context through their allocated jobs. Winston rebels through writing in his diary - reflecting his role as “wordsmith” and Julia uses sex as a tool for her personal rebellion - reflecting her membership of the anti-sex League. Both the characters are so constructed within their context that their entire identity – and even their rebellion – reflects their contextual construction. This therefore limits their ability to seek true identity because it can be argued that it doesn’t exist. The characters have never had the ability to develop their true identity and therefore they are entirely a contextual construction. This construction of identity means that when they rebel against their despotic context – they are in a sense – rebelling against themselves – as context is an integral part of their identity. This results in fragmentation of the character’s limited identity and establishes a metafictive realisation of characters own construction. Reader’s engage with direct parallels to their persona experience and through self reflexivity – become aware of their own constructed rebellion against their own limiting contexts. Character’s metafictive realisation of their own construction exemplifies complex identity created as part of the human experience. Winston continually asserts the inevitable failure of his rebellion – highlighting his awareness of self-construction and “dead” identity. For example - ‘We are the dead’ and the echoed ‘You are the dead’, emphasises awareness of rebellion’s futility, shared with the audience to raise questions about the efficacy of rebellion in a constructed world when the individual identity is constructed, and therefore already ‘dead’. The narrative critiques individual incapacity and dominance of prevailing external ideological forces; paralleling readers prompted to question individual human experience in the face of contextual disruption. This paradoxical disempowerment through attempted rebellion also engages with the module study and raises questions about underlying predetermined character framing by the influence of context on the individual. 34 QUOTE ANALYSIS Manipulation and Oppression Diminution of language QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS “doublethink means the power of holding two contradictory beliefs in one’s mind simultaneously, and accepting both of them” Paradox The reduction of thought through the systematic suppression of critical thinking onsets a constructed reality characterised by conformity, thereby limiting individuality. “even the monologue had dried up” Hyperbole – Winston’s thoughts and his capacity to rationalise has become so suppressed that his monologue has been hyperbolically “dried up” When the freedom to express oneself is suppressed, our sense of voice is hyperbolically “dried up”, as the thoughts and emotions which characterise our human consciousness becomes suppressed through paranoia and self-censorship, affirmed by the use of the adverb “only” in Winston’s thought, “Only the Thought Police mattered”. “Don’t you see that the whole aim of Newspeak is to narrow the range of thought” Self reflexive Metafictive Readers are made aware of Orwell’s narrative construction of language, metafictive realisation of construction reflecting audience self-awareness and engagement with their context. & 35 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS This is a good quote to support the constructed identity theme. “This process of continuous alteration was applied not only to newspapers, but to books, periodicals, pamphlets, posters, leaflets, films, soundtracks, cartoons, photographs – to every kind of literature or documentation which might hold any ideological significance” Parataxis + Asyndeton to build tension and emphasis Emphasises the immense power of stripping language to fortify authority and political dominance, and how it is recognised that literature acts as a mechanism for revolution - a powerful vehicle for resistance that is suppressed. “WAR IS PEACE / FREEDOM IS SLAVERY / IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH” Motif of paradoxical the Emphasises the fragility of language, and its fallible nature as a vehicle to convey truth, thus affording authorities the power to irrationally restore “confidence by the fact of being spoken”. “Dreams “are a continuation of one’s intellectual life, and in which one becomes aware of facts and ideas which Irony – Dreams hold more truth and validity as he refers to them as “facts” than conscious being. Highlights the complete indoctrination of reality through the distortion of language. If false stories are imposed upon us, it becomes truth and thus breeds a contrived worldview wherein true human consciousness cannot be achieved. tricolon 36 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS “It's a beautiful thing, the destruction of words.” Irony, Juxtaposition The juxtaposition of beautiful and destruction highlights to audiences the reduction and indoctrination of thought as this concept is accepted by characters. This emphasises the importance of preserving the integrity of language and literature in order to maintain thought and identity. “But if thought corrupts language, language can also corrupt thought.” Chiasmus/Antimeta bole Poignantly highlights the effect of language on thought and the restriction of consciousness by limiting language. The chiasmus highlights the inversely proportional relationship between the language and thought and emphasises the integrity of language to expression and development of identity. still seem new and valuable after one is awake.” 37 Totalitarian regime QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS All history was a palimpsest, scraped clean and reinscribed exactly as often as was necessary. Paradox Establishes not only the context but history itself as a construction. This reflects Winston’s constructed identity and highlights the reduction of conscious awareness of the Party’s oppression. It also prompts consideration of the individual’s responsibility for their actions despite the dictatorial control – as Winston actively contribute to the “rectification” of history. “I don’t suppose anything happened to her nobody cares what the proles say typical prole reaction they never—— ”, Stream consciousness of Winston’s stream of consciousness becomes mimetic for the political process and system within text. This becomes a narrative device depicting construction through external forces that pressure individual expression, raising questions regarding audience response and authorial manipulation of perspective “It was, he now realized, because of this other incident that he had suddenly decided to come home and begin the diary today.” Self reflexive epiphany & Mimetic Winston mimetically encompasses Orwell’s self-reflexive acknowledgement of contextual Marxist construction of identity as he is consciously aware of the fact that the only reason he decided to rebel today was because of the “incident” that happened within his context. Subsequently the contextual influence is prevalent even within Winston’s attempted individual rebellion. Mimetic 38 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS “Who controls the past controls the future, Who controls the present controls the past.” Anaphora Winston directly references his contextual upheaval and political uncertainty which fragments character consciousness. This emphasises indoctrination as a powerful tool that Big Brother wields “life is a struggle against hunger or Polysyndetonic metaphor This indicates a reduction of experience to impulses and cravings because of the totalitarian regime. Therefore, the individual consciousness has been reduced to a “struggle”. “Orthodoxy means not thinking--not needing to think. Orthodoxy is unconsciousness. ” Anaphora, (kinda) Anaphoric “Orthodoxy” emphasises the adage of “orthodoxy is unconsciousness” where Orwell’s construction of despotic context limits the individual capacity for thought and results in “unconsciousness” through diminution of thought and therefore identity. All history was a palimpsest, scraped clean and reinscribed exactly as often as was necessary. Paradox Epanalepsis cold or sleeplessness, against a sour stomach or an aching tooth” Adage Establishes not only the context but history itself as a construction. This reflects Winston’s constructed identity and highlights the reduction of conscious awareness of the Party’s oppression. It also prompts consideration of the individual’s responsibility for their actions despite the dictatorial control – as Winston actively contribute to the “rectification” of history. 39 Emotion QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS “I hate purity, I hate goodness! I don't want any virtue to exist anywhere. I want everyone to be corrupt to the bones." Repetition Dialogue Julia’s rejection of chastity reflects her experience as a member of the anti-sec league and paroxysm emphasises how our emotional response to upheaval is a fundamental aspect of humanity. This engages with the module’s assertation of how texts represent different responses to upheaval. This also highlights the integrity of emotion within her rebellion and her engagement with her desires allows recognition of her oppression. “He would ravish her and cut her throat at the moment of climax” Vivid imagery, foreshadowing Vivid overlays of aggression when Winston sees Julia indicates the construction of her rebellion early within the text and foreshadowing their affair. The confusion of emotional response also indicates the lack of psychological development and the integrity of this emotional development to character’s recognition of true desires. “‘If they could make me stop loving you—that would be the real betrayal.’ She thought it over. ‘They can’t do that. . . . They can make you say anything— anything—but Irony This ironically foreshadows the end of the text where O’Brien is able to fragment and oppress Winston’s desires in Room 101 by his ultimate “Do it to Julia” – highlighting the significance of emotional expression in individuality. This also highlights the paradox of emotion to enlighten and oppress identity. 40 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS “The choice for mankind lies between freedom and happiness and for the great bulk of mankind, happiness is better.” Hyperphoria (kinda) The appropriation of hyperphoria indicates a question poised to the audience – prompting reconsideration of personal freedoms. Yet the lack of the question indicates the freedom of choice ironically restricted within the totalitarian regime. “Confession is not betrayal. What you say or do doesn't matter; only feelings matter. If they could make me stop loving youthat would be the real betrayal.” Irony Foreshadowing This again foreshadows the ultimate fragmentation and restriction of consciousness in Room 101 where the Party limits individuality by forcing Winston to turn on Julia. This again calls the audience to question the role of emotion within individual identity and the integral role of emotionality within humanity. No emotion was pure, because everything was mixed up with fear and hatred. Irony This again emphasises the lack of Winston’s psychological development and the oppression of his emotional response which has resulted in his confused consciousness. Orwell intends to warn readers of the dangers of these corrupting human experiences, as draconian regimes will inject “fear and hatred”, confusion and frustration into a psychologically manipulated populous to strip they can’t make you believe it. They can’t get inside you.’” 41 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS individual uniqueness to gain absolute control. Attempted Rebellion Love & Rebellion QUOTE “Though the sun was shining and the sky a harsh blue, there seemed to be no colour in anything” “Winston picked his way up the lane through dappled light and shade, stepping TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS Juxtaposition in colour imagery, from monotone to vibrant, visceral imagery Illustrates the power of human connection to restore the essence of the human experience. When human connection and purpose is suppressed, the human experience is debilitating and lifeless. However, when human connection exists, it is a source of solace and restoration. 42 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS War imagery in reference to “battle”, “Victory” and “blow struct against”, which symbolises the atomic power of their resistance through human connection. When consciousness and human emotion and connection is asserted and restored, power is regained. out into pools of gold” “Their embrace had been a battle, the climax a victory. It was a blow struck against the Party. It was a political act” The definitive tone and transformation in confidence highlights the transformative power of reclaiming the innate qualities which make us human. Hyperbole of the “blow struck against the party” “He wished that he were walking through the streets with her… He wished above all that they had some place where they could be alone together” Repetition of “He wished” Power of human connection to restore one’s sense of purpose and imagination, which is crucial to shaping our actions and thus destiny within the human experience. “The paperweight was the room he was in, and the coral was Julia’s life and his own, fixed in a sort of eternity at the heart of the crystal” Symbolism of the paperweight as a representation of Winston’s life Indicates a newfound sense of perspective towards life as a result of embracing the innate emotions which define our humanity. Displays a direct shift in tone from his previous repeated references to being “dead”. However, with the presence of human connection, Winston is able to revive his sense of purpose in life. since meeting Julia + vivid evocative imagery “eternity at the heart of the crystal” 43 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS “Perhaps one did not want to be loved so much as to be understood.” Low modality This low modality indicates the lack of Winston’s psychological development and inability to express his desires. His confusion regarding love and understanding minimises his direct expression. Yet his innate desire to be understood and have human connection surpasses this confusion of consciousness. This paradoxical idea relates to the power of relationships to reclaim human emotions as a form of resistance. “If you loved someone, you loved him, and when you had nothing else to give, you still gave him love.” Repetition The repetition of “love” emphasises Winston’s innate desire for human connection that surpasses all other part so his life – “when you had nothing else to give you still gave him love” elevating and valuing love as a necessity in human experience and expression above all else. “If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them.” Irony This ironically foreshadows the end of the text where the characters succumb to the totalitarian regime and their humanity is diminished. However, this quote elevates the importance of humanity within the text – emphasising that this is an integral part of individuality and consciousness and that with this the individual will always overcome the regime since the aim of the regime is to reduce consciousness. 44 QUOTE “the coral was Julia’s life and his own, fixed in a sort of eternity (at the heart of the crystal)” TECHNIQUE Evocative imagery ANALYSIS Their relationship undermines the Party’s attempts to compel a bleak existence in the evocative imagery of the paperweight, where Winston’s shift from a nihilistic to Romantic tone represents a newfound sense of purpose within the sordid world through human connection. This also elevates human connection as an enduring human experience that is present despite all else, reflected through the “eternity” of their “hearts”. 45 Language This paragraph should focus on the power of language to empower the individual. QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS Pg.10 (chapter I) “if anything so nebulous could be said to happen” Juxtaposition between the motif of the conditional clause “if” used in Winston’s thoughts and the certainty of tone in “it was three years ago Symbolises a progression in certainty and the reclamation of personal truth and rationality when one is able to freely express oneself through the act of storytelling. Pg.17 “If, indeed, it did happen” Pg.61 (chapter IV) “It was three years ago. This is affirmed by the juxtaposition between the initial tension and anxiety associated with writing in the diary and the mundane description “Winston was writing in his diary”, where it becomes more familiar to him. Further, there is a postmodern tone to these conditional statements, as the free indirect discourse allows Orwell to partake in a more active role in the novel so that he can challenge us to determine our own truth in Winston’s story. “It had got to be written down; it had got to be confessed” Repetition of the auxiliary verb “had” creates a sense of conviction in his actions Displays Winston’s transition into a more rational state of mind towards the act of storytelling when contrasted to the intense irrationality and fear when first writing in his diary, and also his growing sense of certainty into the actions he must take in his life. “He was a lonely ghost uttering a truth that nobody would ever Metaphor of himself being a “lonely ghost” emphasises Winston’s The only way Winston is able to meaningfully rebel and maintain his sense of reality and spirit at this time 46 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS hear. But so long as he uttered it, in some obscure way the continuity was not broken. It was not by making yourself heard but by staying sane that you carried on the human heritage” impermanence in the macro sense, and can be seen as a reference to the human “spirit” when combined with the aphorism suggesting that survival was in staying sane. is through the act of telling his story through the diary. “Now that he had recognised himself as a dead man it became important to stay alive as long as possible” Hyperbole – “recognised himself as a dead man” Suggests that Winston is only “alive” to the extent that he has an inkling of purpose – through his diary he is able to preserve the human legacy QUOTE is the song passage (in some instances you don’t have to state the exact quote when the technique itself is an overarching one) The motif of song verses conveying fragments of truth Emphasises the power of storytelling through varying art forms to convey truth and allow individuals to comprehend reality. “He was already dead, he reflected. It seemed to him that it was only now, when he Motif Winston is metafictively aware that he is already “dead” due to his lack of individuality. He highlights the importance of expression through “formulating his thoughts” for this realisation – engaging with the idea 47 QUOTE TECHNIQUE had begun to be able to formulate his thoughts, that he had taken the decisive step.” ANALYSIS that individuals require expression in order to be conscious. ‘he writes this diary for the future’ Irony Winston is aware that his current consciousness is “dead” and therefore a lost cause. Winston however realises that his self-expression is valuable as it can provide liberation from one’s present oppression. Therefore, Winston’s subversive diary writing provides a degree empowerment and transcendence to a “future” self. "All he had to do was to transfer to paper the interminable restless monologue” Hyperbole/ Personification This quote suggests that it is an uncontrollable force, which mirrors the innate human desire to express. Orwell metatextually indicates how not only is Winston’s own craft a form of rebellion against the experience under the party, but the psychoanalysis and his awareness of his rebellion is also an act against the party because it shows that he is conscious – the main thing that the Party aims to reduce. 48 Futility of Anomalous Resistance Anomalous Resistance QUOTE TECHNIQUE “‘We do not destroy the heretic because he resists us. . .. We convert him, we capture his inner mind, we reshape him.’” Repetition “whether [Winston] wrote DOWN WITH BIG BROTHER or not, it made no difference” Epizeuxis empathic tone “The masses never revolt of their own accord, Repetition ANALYSIS Through the repetition of “we” Orwell is able to highlight the power that is held within the collective consciousness – in this case – the power that is held within the party as a collective. The individual resistance to the part if futile because the party stands as a conscious collective. The hope the reader has for the future is removed and Orwell displays how totalitarian governments seek to control everyone and everything; they do not focus only on people who actually show potential to bring about change – an ability that is only enabled due to their collective consciousness. and The disillusioned stream of consciousness, “whether [Winston] wrote DOWN WITH BIG BROTHER or not, it made no difference” reveals the paradox of individual’s motivations for rebellion as Winston attempts to escape collective indoctrination by writing in his diary yet recognises his futility against the Party’s omnipotence. This directly engages with the limitation of the prole’s collective consciousness and their inability to 49 QUOTE TECHNIQUE and they never revolt merely because they are oppressed. Indeed, so long as they are not permitted to have standards of comparison, they never even become aware that they are oppressed.” “Reality exists in the human mind, and nowhere else. Not in the individual mind, which can make mistakes, and in any case soon perishes: only in the mind of the Party, which is collective and immortal.” ANALYSIS revolt – they are not even aware of the fact that they are oppressed. This parallels the quote “until they become consciousness, they can never rebel…” Orwell providing insight into the oppression of the totalitarian structure on the collective. Motif Orwell is using O'Brien's interrogation of Winston to frame a philosophical debate around several things that underpin the novel. O'Brien argues that history cannot exist as an independent entity but only as part of a collective memory, namely the memory of the Party which Winston has recognised as false. Winston knows that the Party have lied, but the evidence has gone. He held it in his hand briefly, but now has to address where that 'truth' exists. O'Brien is clearly showing Winston that any historical event cannot have taken place if no evidence of it exists, other than in the minds of people who cannot be trusted. This takes us to a deeper debate about the truth of history - if two people give contradictory accounts of something, how do we ever know the truth? This relates the importance of the collective identity in knowing “truth” and the 50 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS power that the collective hold in establishing what is real. ”Until they become conscious they will never rebel and until after they have rebelled they cannot become conscious." Antimetabole, paradox Orwell again emphasises the importance of the communal rebellion yet the paradox is that proles will continue to go about their lives unquestioningly until they become conscious of their oppression—but it seems that a radical change or revolution would need to take place in order for the oppressed working class to even understand that they are oppressed. These proles are "kept in subjection, like animals" and fed a few simple lies that they believe because they do not have the capability to be able to believe anything else. So, in reality, they will never rebel because they don't know they can. No one has told them, or made them believe they can. This construction of the proles again emphasises the impotence of individual rebellion, acknowledged by Winston. “If there is hope, it lies in the proles.” Low modality Orwell comments on the profound importance of recognising our shared human experience and engaging in collective solidarity in order for true change to occur. He highlights the only “hope” for change lies within the communal experience of the proles and cannot be achieved simply by the isolated individual. 51 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS “Perhaphs a lunatic is just a minority of one.” Low modality, aphorism Contextually, it indicates how the lunacy of totalitarian regimes is contagious for their citizens. And by extension, to cater for the syllabus, how the lunacy of a corrupted collective corrupts the individuality of their holders. In 1984, conformity is encouraged through the propaganda and agendas that are translated and controlled in all aspects of Oceania's society. Using negative connotations such as "minority", "one" and the indefinite article "a" before "lunatic" all constitute towards the constructed belief that individualism is associated with denunciation and isolation. Through this fear of being alienated, the ideals of individualism are destroyed “So long as human beings stay human, death and life are the same thing.” Paradox This collective identity of “death” that Winston places of humans emphasises the lack of individuality and humanity that the population currently has. The paradox establishes “life” as “death” because there is no authentic selfexpression, desires or human connection. At present nothing is possible except to extend the area of sanity little by Irony Winston acknowledges that at the current moment there is noa ability for the population to “act collectively” because they do not have the consciousness to do so. Winston aims to instead “extend the area of sanity little by little” in a futile attempt of 52 QUOTE TECHNIQUE little. We cannot act collectively. ANALYSIS rebellion that he is consciously aware of – yet nonetheless attempts as part of his own attempt at consciousness. We can only spread our knowledge outwards from individual to individual, generation after generation. In the face of the Thought Police there is no other way. Motif This expresses the dichotomy between the individual and the collective whereby the current ability to only spread “individual to individual” limits the ability to establish collective consciousness and therefore have effective rebellion. “The words kept coming back to him, statement of a mystical truth and a palpable absurdity.” Paradox “If there is hope it lies in the proles” occurs to him as a “statement of a mystical truth and a palpable absurdity”. This paradox of “truth” and “absurdity” engages the futility yet necessity of rebellion that lies within the communal strength of the proles. “Two gin-scented tears” Allusion By the end of the text, Winston forfeits any remaining emotional autonomy, crying “two gin-scented tears” in allusion to the motif of “victory gin” to suggest that his emotional autonomy is the emotion of the party. Winston’s conformity at the end illustrates the futility of anomalous resistance without collective solidarity 53 54 Construction of Identity This is an alternative line of argument for your third paragraph where instead of focusing on anomalous resistance you highlight that the reason Winston’s rebellion was futile was because he is inherently a construction of his context. This means that when he rebels against his context he is rebelling against himself resulting in fragmented identity and futility. QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS “Even after enormous upheavals…the same pattern has reasserted…just as a gyroscope will always return to equilibrium” Metafictive simile Readers are made aware of Orwell’s narrative construction of rebellion through Winston’s metafictive realisation of self construction. The simile compares his upheaval to a gyroscope – which is a spinning wheel or disc – and this futility in individual rebellion as “the same pattern has reasserted” complex identity created as part of the human experience and prompts audience self-awareness of construction. “If you want to keep a secret, you must also hide it from yourself.” Metafictive This self reflective awareness of construction emphasises the importance of expression on the construction of consciousness. ‘consciousness… stopping dead’ Motif The motif of Winston referring to himself and the populace as already “dead” highlights his awareness of rebellions futility due to individual identity that is already constructed and limited by minimised emotional expression and language – therefore dead. 55 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS ‘We are the dead’ and the echoed ‘You are the dead’ Motif Emphasises awareness of rebellion’s futility, shared with the audience to raise questions about the efficacy of rebellion in a constructed world when the individual identity is constructed, and therefore already ‘dead’. ‘the Thought Police would get him just the same’ Foreshadowing Metafictive “All beliefs, habits, tastes, emotions, mental attitudes that characterize our time are really designed to sustain the mystique of the Party and prevent the true nature of present-day society from being perceived.” Metafictive Word choice of “design” emphasises the construction of the individual identity. “He loved Big Brother” Short sentence The inevitable futility and construction of Winston’s identity is emphasises by the short sentence that highlights the ongoing ideological & Ironic transcendence of limited identity through awareness of selfconstruction becomes Orwell’s ironic narrative device for questioning the efficacy of action as Winston is aware of the futility of his rebellion from the beginning. This calls to question the ideological hope held by Winston that critiques idealism. 56 QUOTE TECHNIQUE ANALYSIS entropy of the consciousness through regimes. individual dictatorial 57 ESSAY Example 1 Essay Outline Thesis: Orwell reveals the fragility of an individual’s conception of truth in that it paradoxically shapes ones sense of self yet can so easily be manipulated to enforce collective subjugation and suppress oppositional thought. This means: Orwell is exploring the idea that individual’s understanding of truth is inherently flawed or fragile. The thesis is saying that the reason for this is because of the paradox: we as individuals use what we believe is true to shape our identity – and yet our sense of truth can very easily be manipulated to subsequently oppress us. Paragraph 1: Orwell criticises how governments exploit the human imperfection of selfdeception to obliterate the prospect of rebellion, enlightening his audience to the centrality of rebellion to preserve autonomy. This means: Orwell is commenting on the ability of governments to exploit us as individuals to minimise our ability to rebel and show the audience how important rebellion is for our ability to have power over ourselves. Paragraph 2: While individual rebellion against the Party is futile, Orwell commends the search for deeper human connection through personal relationships as a cathartic internalised rebellion against the Party’s manipulation. This means: Despite the fact that the individual attempts to rebel is futile, Orwell comments on the importance of human connection and personal relationships for individual expression as a form of internal rebellion. 58 Paragraph 3: However, Orwell reveals how individuals motivated by rebellion challenge oppressive government doctrines despite foreseeing the futility of their resistance, highlighting the inherent complexity of human hope. This means: Orwell ultimately shows that the individua is motivated by their rebellion despite its futility and this shows the complex nature of human identity through hope. Essay Orwell reveals the fragility of an individual’s conception of truth in that it paradoxically shapes one’s sense of self yet can so easily be manipulated to enforce collective subjugation and suppress oppositional thought. In his model of the Party, Orwell hyperbolises events such as The Great Purge, a coordinated execution of political dissidents en masse in Stalinist Russia, as dissenters are ‘vapourised’ such that rebellious thought is completely eradicated and the Party’s constructed reality is solidified. Orwell criticises how governments exploit the human imperfection of self-deception to obliterate the prospect of rebellion, enlightening his audience to the centrality of rebellion to preserve autonomy. Orwell modelled the Party after events such as The Great Purge, a coordinated mass-execution of political dissidents in Stalinist Russia, to criticise how authoritarian powers eliminate opposition to ensure their versions of truth remain unquestioned. In the stark juxtaposition between the destitute, “dingy cities where underfed people shuffled” and grandiose “[Ministries] soaring up, terrace after terrace” Orwell reveals how the Party masks collective subjugation behind utopian illusions, leaving the individual vulnerable to self-deception as they begin to accept the Party’s constructed reality. The Party’s cognisance of self-deception is affirmed in the paradoxical maxim, “Ignorance is Strength” where the ‘doublethink’, as individuals are made to hold contradictory beliefs at once, blurs the distinction between fact and fiction to undermine revolutionary thought. Orwell criticises how the Party exploits self-deception during the Two Minutes Hate in the visceral tricolon, “to kill, to torture, to smash faces” where Winston’s thought of rebellion is displaced by fanatical allegiance to the Party, exposing the redundancy of rebellion when human emotion can be so easily manipulated. Despite this futility, the caesural assertion, “To die hating them, that was freedom” celebrates the enduring conflict between Winston’s individual agency and the collective subjugation to position the audience to understand the importance of preserving the autonomy 59 to hold rebellious thought. [[Orwell condemns how authoritarian governments exploit selfdeception to remove autonomy and create a passive society in which rebellion is impossible.]] While individual rebellion against the Party is futile, Orwell commends the search for deeper human connection through personal relationships as a cathartic internalised rebellion against the Party’s manipulation. Orwell parallels the ironic ‘Ministry of Love’ to the Stalinist NKVD which similarly aimed to eliminate private loyalties by creating an atmosphere of distrust. In the emotive tricolon, “Today there was fear, hatred and pain, but no dignity of emotion” Orwell reveals how the Party suppresses love and relationships by displacing compassion with vindictiveness to criticise the increasingly desensitised world which prohibits genuine human connections. However, the hyperbolic battle imagery of, “Their embrace had been a battle, their climax a victory…it was a political act” in Winston’s sexual encounter with Julia represents Winston as an anomaly to promote how meaningful human relationships instil a cathartic sense of fulfilment through personal rebellion. Their relationship undermines the Party’s attempts to compel a bleak existence in the evocative imagery of the paperweight, “the coral was Julia’s life and his own, fixed in a sort of eternity (at the heart of the crystal)” where Winston’s shift from a nihilistic to Romantic tone represents a newfound sense of purpose within the sordid world. However, the anaphora in Winston’s observation as the paperweight is ultimately shattered, “How small, thought Winston, how small it always was” symbolises the end of the love affair, a regretful acceptance of futility in the face of the Party’s omnipresence. Orwell thus champions how human connections form the basis of personal rebellion yet recognises the inherent fragility of such connections to create lasting change without collective solidarity. However, Orwell reveals how individuals motivated by rebellion challenge oppressive government doctrines despite foreseeing the futility of their resistance, highlighting the inherent complexity of human hope. Witnessing the oppressive Francoist regime first-hand during his time fighting in the Spanish Civil War (1936), Orwell characterises Winston as an anomaly who challenges collective subjugation to encourage his audience to maintain similar political awareness. The disillusioned stream of consciousness, “whether [Winston] wrote DOWN WITH BIG BROTHER or not, it made no difference” reveals the paradox of individual’s motivations for rebellion as Winston attempts to escape collective indoctrination by writing in his diary yet recognises his futility against the Party’s omnipotence. However, Winston’s unreliable narration, “He knew… O’Brien was on his side” positions the reader to share his persisting hope in his 60 rebellion only to be quelled by O’Brien in the barbaric hyperbole, “power is in tearing human minds to pieces”. As such, Orwell subverts classical prose conventions in the tripartite nihilistic structure as Winston is ultimately defeated, affirmed in the bathetic ending as “He loved Big Brother”, to position the reader to acknowledge their own flawed self-deception in having held hope in Winston. Thus, Winston’s futile rebellion ultimately awakens the reader to the complexity of inconsistent human motivation, his failure didactically revealing the futility of individual rebellion and the need for collective solidarity to challenge oppression. 61 Example 2 Essay Outline Thesis: Within worlds of rupture, shaping of individual and societal consciousness through contextually driven ideologies functions to fragment and counterintuitively provoke both cyclical stability and dislocation of human experience. This means: Within worlds of upheaval, both the individual and the society is shaped by the contextual ideologies that through oppression – fragment their identity or consciousness. This then provokes cycles where the individual attempts to stabilise their identity by regaining power through rebellion. However this is ultimately futile because the individual themselves is constructed by the context – when they rebel they are rebelling against themselves. This creates a paradox whereby their own identity is further fragmented despite attempts at regaining it. Paragraph 1: The external constructive ideological forces that shape the individual writer, character, and reader’s experience within 1984, directly correlating with European socialist and communist regimes, poignantly enforces that truth is manipulated and constructed, within both thought and history. This means: Orwell is highlighting how these ideological forces construct not only the individual, but also the writer and the reader by shaping their interpretation of the world around them. This directly correlates with European totalitarian regimes and shows that the idea of truth is a construction of the context. Paragraph 2: Individual human response to oppressive forces, attempting rebellion defined by reflected identity, paradoxically disempowers through emphasis of predetermined character framing, raising questions about how achievable it is to seek true individual identity. This means: The individual responds to these oppressive ideological forces by attempting to rebel against them – however they are restricted because they themselves are constructed by the context. This then paradoxically disempowers them because it shows that even their rebellion is a construction and this questions the ability to find true individual identity. 62 Paragraph 3: Disempowerment of the human individual, through attempted resistance, exemplifies complex identity created as part of the human experience. This means: This attempted rebellion paradoxically disempowers the individual and highlights their complex identity. Essay Within worlds of rupture, shaping of individual and societal consciousness through contextually driven ideologies functions to fragment and counterintuitively provoke both cyclical stability and dislocation of human experience. George Orwell’s narrative, 1984, satirises contextually prevalent, politically driven shaping of the individual, construction of language dualistically accentuating individual empowerment and potential for disempowerment. Rebellion against constructed identity paradoxically disempowers the individual, raising questions about underlying predetermined character framing and the influence of context on the individual. Reader identification of ideological fragmentation allows metafictive realisation of selfconstruction, establishing self awareness. The external constructive ideological forces that shape the individual writer, character, and reader’s experience within 1984, directly correlating with European socialist and communist regimes, poignantly enforces that truth is manipulated and constructed, within both thought and history. Winstons’ identity and thought is synecdochally constructed, ‘Smith’, nominal individuality forced into fractured preconceived reality and conformity, ‘doublethink means the power of holding two contradictory beliefs in one’s mind simultaneously, and accepting both of them’. Orwell’s employment of alienating dystopian narrative establishes fractal dynamics of fragmentation interacting with experience of post-World War II political turmoil and England’s impending socialist transformation, paralleling Winston himself. “ I don’t suppose anything happened to her nobody cares what the proles say typical prole reaction they never—— ”, Winston’s stream of consciousness, mimetic of political process and system within text, becomes a narrative device depicting constructedness through external forces that pressure individual expression, raising questions regarding audience response and authorial manipulation of perspective. Orwell’s acknowledgement of authoritarian contextual Soviet and Nazi regimes and 63 their constructions creates his metafictive appropriation of the concept allowing reader selfrealisation through questioning synthesis that prompts self-reflection. Winston mimetically encompasses Orwell’s self-reflexive acknowledgement of contextual Marxist construction of identity, “It was, he now realized, because of this other incident that he had suddenly decided to come home and begin the diary today.” Post World War II societal uncertainty and questioning of essential humanity through political uncertainty fragments character consciousness, “If you want a picture of the future, imagine a boot stamping on a face forever”, Winston directly referencing contextual upheaval “Who controls the past controls the future”, questioning societal constructions through attempted synthesis. Construction through ideological contextual positioning of text establishes reflexive appropriation and fragmentation of identity and experience for character, writer and reader, becoming Orwell’s established storytelling mode that challenges his readership. Individual human response to oppressive forces, attempting rebellion defined by reflected identity, paradoxically disempowers through emphasis of predetermined character framing, raising questions about how achievable it is to seek true individual identity. Ironic construction of rebellion in Winston and Julia reflecting their allocated jobs critiques the impotence of individual rebellion, acknowledged by Winston,” Until they become conscious, they will never rebel and until after they have rebelled they cannot become conscious." Julia’s experience, member of the anti-sex League, is countered as she uses sex as a tool for rebellion and reflects political and societal construction of her identity through individual rejection of chastity, “I hate purity, I hate goodness! I don't want any virtue to exist anywhere. I want everyone to be corrupt to the bones.". Winston’s construction of Julia’s rebellion early within the text through vivid imagery, “He would ravish her and cut her throat at the moment of climax”, fulfilled by Julia as a “blow struck to the party”, highlights their rebellion, undermined by constructed identity and futility. Later scenes symmetrically reflect the moment, “Do it to Julia” highlighting the cyclical fragmentation despite attempted synthesis through rebellion, desperation and pleading nature paralleling early fantasies of rebellion, ultimately futile. High modal language in Winston’s rebellious diary writing ironically reflects his role as “wordsmith” through “rectification” of history, “DOWN WITH BIG BROTHER”, questioning communal experience ironically restricted through language construction that shrinks consciousness, “Don’t you see that the whole aim of Newspeak is to narrow the range of thought”, raising questions about fragmented self identity. Readers’ responses through engagement with direct parallels to their experience allow self- 64 reflexivity to shape their rebellion against their own limiting constructed contexts. Attempted synthesis of Winston’s fragmented experience through self realisation, “In the end the Party would announce that two and two made five, and you would have to believe it.”, inevitably focuses readers on ongoing ideological construction leading to progressive entropy within the individual consciousness, “He loved Big Brother”. Orwell’s cyclical construction questions ideological contextual restrictions of consciousness. Disempowerment of the human individual, through attempted resistance, exemplifies complex identity created as part of the human experience. Readers are made aware of Orwell’s narrative construction of rebellion, metafictive realisation of self construction reflecting audience selfawareness and engagement with the questions it poses, “Even after enormous upheavals…the same pattern has reasserted…just as a gyroscope will always return to equilibrium”. Complexity of human experience is explored and questioned through attempted emergence from constructs, despite failed synthesis in the face of fragmentation. “If you want to keep a secret, you must also hide it from yourself.”, emphasises the importance of expression on the construction of consciousness. Ironically limited transcendence descending into liminal self-realisation of individual construction, seen in Winston’s observation of ‘consciousness… stopping dead’, offers limited transcendence between oppressed existence and conscious freedom as ‘he writes this diary for the future’. Freedom through awareness of self-construction becomes Orwell’s ironic narrative device for questioning the efficacy of action as ‘the Thought Police would get him just the same’. ‘We are the dead’ and the echoed ‘You are the dead’, emphasises awareness of rebellion’s futility, shared with the audience to raise questions about the efficacy of rebellion in a constructed world when the individual identity is constructed, and therefore already ‘dead’. The narrative critiques individual incapacity and dominance of prevailing external ideological forces; paralleling readers prompted to question individual human experience in the face of contextual disruption. Texts, artificial creations themselves, exist within constructs, including contextual values and the milieu of the responder’s experience of the text; mimetic of reflective individual and social experience. Satirisation of Orwell’s construct drives self-reflection of audience through metafictive realisation of self-construction intra and extra-textually. Paradoxical disempowerment through rebellion by enhancement of constructive forces establishes further ideological fragmentation of character, provoking both cyclical stability and dislocation. 65 Example 3 Essay Outline Thesis: The democratic framework that we live under is designed to protect and nourish the individual autonomy, agency, and expression, yet there exists a credulous ‘assumption’ that this framework is an absolute. George Orwell’s dystopic prose ‘Nineteen-Eighty Four’, however, does not simply submit to a rupturing of this assumption – Orwell invites us to see that our experiences must be premised upon autarchist and individual rights. This means: This thesis explores the idea that democracy is designed to protect individuals, however this relies on the assumption that this is a given in the framework. Orwell goes against this assumption of protection and invites the audience to see that our experiences rely on the premise of Autarchism – the political philosophy that promotes the principles of individualism, the moral ideology of individual liberty and self-reliance. It rejects compulsory government and supports the elimination of government in favor of ruling oneself to the exclusion of rule by others. Paragraph 1: The credulous belief in the sanctity of individual autonomy can be challenged through experiences of tribulation and hegemony. This means: Orwell criticises this belief that individual autonomy is a given in society and shows that this can be challenged by individual suffering and dominant societies. Paragraph 2: In experiences of suppression and subordination, humanity is categorised by the dialectical tension of exercising autonomy in an attempt to save and maintain human behaviour or exercising submission to the defeatist and futile experiences that they have become accustomed to. This means: The individual responds to these oppressive is characterised either by their attempts to regain their individual power through autonomy, or by their submission to the forces and defeat by the system. 66 Paragraph 3: The dialectical tension culminates in the understanding that the collective behaviour will always override the individual, thereby illuminating experiences of inertia and futility. This means: This shows that the collective society will also have more power than the individual, showing that any attempts at rebellion are futile. Essay The democratic framework that we live under is designed to protect and nourish the individual autonomy, agency, and expression, yet there exists a credulous ‘assumption’ that this framework is an absolute. George Orwell’s dystopic prose ‘Nineteen-Eighty-Four’, however, does not simply submit to a rupturing of this assumption – Orwell invites us to see that our experiences must be premised upon autarchist and individual rights. He does this by representing that our experiences can be oppressed and adversarial due to the unreliability of the human condition. In such experiences, a dialectical tension is created; some attempt to preserve the fulfilment of an autonomous human experience through agency to proactively protect their freedoms; others submit to the experience of subjugation and defeat. In doing so, Orwell satirically transposes his narrative beyond Nazism and Stalinism to an eschatological trajectory, so as to disorient the responder’s assumptions and allow them to better comprehend their own world. The credulous belief in the sanctity of individual autonomy can be challenged through experiences of tribulation and hegemony. This tribulated experience is engendered by Orwell’s oppressive craft of a technological invasion; Orwell satirises Britain’s “worldwide network of listening posts” through the panoptic “telescreens” and the metonymic posters of “the face of a man”, thereby creating a collective experience that is constricted by surveillance. Orwell also incites the experience of inequality through the dystopian form by juxtaposing two settings; the stasis of the Inner Party’s living quarters is apparent through reliance of copular verbs in describing the wealthy setting: “everything was intimidating”, “the passage… was softly carpeted”, “the room was long-shaped and softly lit”, juxtaposed with Winston’s ironic residence of the “Victory Mansions” as described in “the pipes burst in every frost, the roof leaked whenever there was snow” utilising a morbid adverbial repetition to indicate the destitution of the collective experience. Orwell offers a psycholinguistic imposition through restrictive neologisms as a means of eradicating the ability to describe and thereby nullify 67 human experience. Namely, the motif of “duckspeak” in “a noise uttered in unconsciousness, like the quacking of a duck” uses simile to sedate and control the individual autonomy during experiences of intense adversity. By drawing upon Mirzoeff’s discussion of Nazism that “totalitarianism is profoundly distrustful of the body politic", Orwell’s Juvenalian satire form allows him to mirror moral indignation such as deficient self-care of England and Germany post-WW2, evidenced by the polysyndetonic metaphor in “life is a struggle against hunger or cold or sleeplessness, against a sour stomach or an aching tooth” to indicate a reduction of experience to impulses and cravings, and hence the morbid and mundane “struggle” when bodily autonomy is lost. Hence, Orwell draws upon innately human experiences such as adversity and subjugation as a means to provide insights into the complexities of the human condition. In experiences of suppression and subordination, humanity is categorised by the dialectical tension of exercising autonomy in an attempt to save and maintain human behaviour or exercising submission to the defeatist and futile experiences that they have become accustomed to. Orwell recognises the importance of protecting personal liberties through individual experiences of hope and insubordination. In what is the most overt rebellious experience, “the gesture” of sex with Julia subverts the party’s dehumanising scientific synechdoche “the individual is only a cell” to elicit how even the smallest experiences against “the party” is rebellious. Orwell implements a synaesthesic tricolon of “the smell of her hair, the taste of her mouth, the feeling of her skin” to capture the escapism that physical and sexually instinctual experiences provide, thus rebelling against the adverse experience under the regime and igniting 2nd wave feminist ideologies such as “Women have a fundamental right of sexual freedom and pleasure” (Freidan). Experiences of rebellion and insubordination are also evident through a psychoanalytical lens, as Orwell’s use of homodiegetic narrative voice allows for the portrayal of psychological rebellion. In "All he had to do was to transfer to paper the interminable restless monologue”, Orwell metatextually indicates how not only is Orwell’s own craft a form of rebellion to the refined experience under the party, but the psychoanalysis of rebellion is an act against the party. Orwell’s prose satirises the paradoxical nature of critic Dana Fisher’s “utopia-dystopia dichotomy” of the setting, by auditorily juxtaposing the Golden Country in “Thrush sings with astonishing variations” with Room 101’s artificial “low steady humming sound” to reflect the rebellious experience of travel and escapism under the regime. By extension, Orwell crafts figments of rebellious experience such as the coral paperweight to represent the potential for 68 human experience to be enshrined. The exclamatory statement “how small it always was!” highlights the idealism of Winston who believes he “was fixed in a sort of eternity at the heart of the crystal”, thereby representing a relic of past jubilance and beauty that underpinned prior experiences. Therefore, Orwell draws upon the individual experience of insubordination to elucidate that our world should not be seen as an eternal sustaining of our autonomy. The dialectical tension culminates in the understanding that the collective behaviour will always override the individual, thereby illuminating experiences of inertia and futility. Orwell’s 3-act nihilistic structure of ending with an antagonistic success subverts normal prose, so as to instil a lack of hope in the reader. Orwell crafts both Julia and Winston’s character arc as moving between what Sartre defined “good faith” and “bad faith”; the movement from the established rebellion to the emphasised inertia in the Ministry of Love scene. Winston mutters the indirect reference to Descartes ‘Cogito ergo sum’ in ‘I think I exist’ to O’Brien, thereby reflecting the Sartrean nature of existential thinking under futile, psychological oppression. The stichomythic conversing between Julia and Winston, the rebellious icons, by the end of the prose such as “‘We are the dead’… ‘We are not dead, yet’… ‘Not physically’” echoes the emotional tension by defying traditionalist formed dialogue to reflect Lyotard’s ‘Postmodern Condition’ of the Cold War Era. By the end of the text, Winston forfeits any remaining emotional autonomy, crying “two gin-scented tears” in allusion to the motif of “victory gin” to suggest that his emotional autonomy is the emotion of the party. Also, despite the visceral imagery that is elucidated in the sexual experiences, the paradoxical juxtaposition of “physical contact” and lack of “physical sensation” illuminates the ways in which the “sex instinct” has become contaminated by the party rhetoric. In doing so, Orwell recognises how the experiences of the collective will always override the individual response, insofar as he can subvert the assumption that we will always have rights and liberties. In conclusion, 1984 tells of concerns pursuant to Orwell’s post-war zeitgeist, through satirising the credulity of humankind to conjecture that the humanistic framework of society is an absolute. Through represents the way in which the framework of morality is ruptured and showing the futility of the individual against the regime, Orwell has created an intercultural dialogue in relation to an awareness of shared human desires for autonomy and agency, but through confronting the belief that they are absolute. 69 Example 4 Essay Outline Thesis: George Orwell in his dystopian novel Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949) explores aspects of the human experience that are essential for a meaningful existence yet easily suppressed in a totalitarian setting, to emphasise the need for collective solidarity in preserving such freedoms. This means: Orwell is exploring the idea that there are part of the human experience that are necessary to maintain individual identity, emphasising the need of the collective support in order to maintain this freedom. Paragraph 1: Orwell represents the fragility of individual autonomy under totalitarian manipulation to reveal the importance of pursuing the collective human desire for freedom and self-expression. This means: Orwell highlights that the individual’s freedom is fragile under oppressive totalitarian forces and this reveals the importance of the collective support in order to maintain freedom. Paragraph 2: Orwell depicts the paradoxical fragility and power of emotions in either perpetuating or resisting oppression to suggest that meaningful connections are necessary for a fulfilling human experience. This means: The individual responds to these oppressive is characterised either by their attempts to regain their individual power through autonomy, or by their submission to the forces and defeat by the system. Paragraph 3: Orwell exposes how governments distort reality and objective truth to render critical thought and dissent impossible, reducing the human experience to an indistinguishable cycle of repression. This means: Orwell then exposes how these totalitarian governments change the individual’s reality and perception of truth in order to minimise thought which then reduces the human experience to cycles of oppression. 70 Essay George Orwell in his dystopian novel Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949) explores aspects of the human experience that are essential for a meaningful existence yet easily suppressed in a totalitarian setting, to emphasise the need for collective solidarity in preserving such freedoms. By representing the fragility of autonomy, Orwell asserts the importance of pursuing our innate desire for freedom to experience existential fulfilment. Similarly, Orwell asserts that in a society deprived of interpersonal intimacy, we must realise the value of private loyalties in providing emotional fulfilment and actively seek it. Yet, Orwell illuminates the tragic triumph of the collective over individual rebellion, stressing the need for us to collectively preserve our sense of reality by asserting our freedoms before resistance is rendered futile. Orwell represents the fragility of individual autonomy under totalitarian manipulation to reveal the importance of pursuing the collective human desire for freedom and self-expression. Drawing from the constant state of fear created by the omnipotent KGB secret police in Stalinist Russia, Orwell crafts a technologically invasive dystopia where motivic telescreens potentially “watched everybody all the time … every movement scrutinised”, to establish Oceania as a panopticon that instils a perpetual state of paranoia and self-censorship in individuals. The antihero Winston Smith strives to express himself in this repressed society, where the polysyndeton “life is a struggle against hunger or cold or sleeplessness” metaphorically indicates the reduction of the human experience to mere impulses when basic freedoms are suppressed. Inspired by acts of political rebellion such as the White Rose, a group which resisted Nazi indoctrination through anti-fascist pamphlets, Orwell uses the stream of consciousness in Winston’s hypophora “for whom … was he writing this diary? For the future, for the unborn” to highlight self-expression as an innate human need that offers a higher sense of existential purpose. However, under physical and psychological torture, Winston ultimately becomes a powerless extension of the behaviour constructed by the Party, as his tears of “two gin-scented tears” allude to the motif of the Party’s “victory gin” to lament the futility of pursuing autonomy in a totalitarian society. By depicting the collective disempowerment that results when our autonomy is destroyed, Orwell establishes the necessity of such freedoms to provide existential fulfilment. 71 Orwell depicts the paradoxical fragility and power of emotions in either perpetuating or resisting oppression to suggest that meaningful connections are necessary for a fulfilling human experience. Orwell responds to the Hitler Youth, where Nazi ideologically instilled children with fascist values, forcing parents to mistrust their children in fear of being reported. Analogously, the Parson’s family serves as a microcosm of Oceania’s social fragmentation; children, traditional symbols of innocence, are indoctrinated into “ungovernable savages” to reveal the destruction of genuine emotional connections when filial bonds have been eroded to prioritise a devotion to the Party. This is achieved through the abuse of innate human emotions, evident in the oxymoronic “hideous ecstasy of fear and vindictiveness” during the Two Minutes of Hate, when fear and hatred are artificially orchestrated as a form of contrived emotional fulfilment to facilitate collective conformity. However, when Winston receives a love note from Julia, his metaphor “the desire to stay alive had welled up inside him” reveals the power of private loyalties that can mitigate emotional isolation by inciting a spiritual purpose. In the Golden Country, an aesthetic poetic interlude where Winston reconnects with his fragmented memories of his mother’s “loyalty that was private and unalterable”, his physical intimacy with Julia is described using the war imagery “Their embrace had been a battle, the climax a victory”. Here, Orwell asserts that meaningful connections can provide the ‘why to live [that] can bear almost any how’ (Nietzsche) and are thus necessary in evoking a higher motivation for a fulfilling human experience. Orwell depicts the dual role of emotions in an oppressive environment to reveal the necessity of meaningful connections to provide emotional fulfilment. By representing the tension between an individual’s desire for objective truth and the collective’s motivation to artificially impose reality, Orwell reveals the need for us to collectively assert our freedoms and experience a genuine sense of reality before resistance is rendered futile. Paralleling this, the state endorsed language “Newspeak” forces the individual to accept paradoxical axioms, “WAR IS PEACE. FREEDOM IS SLAVERY. IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH”, where the mechanical rhythm of the truncated sentences replicates the ubiquitous and inculcating impact of propaganda in shaping a contrived reality to restrict rebellious thought. Subverting a victorious hero arc, Winston’s optimistic motif “If there is hope, it lies in the proles”, which emphasises the power of collective solidarity in challenging an oppressive regime, is dismantled under Party torture. Tormented until his “reality exists … in the mind of the Party, collective and immortal”, Winston mutters the indirect reference to Descartes ‘Cogito ergo sum’ in “I think I exist” to lament how the sense of objective truth that underpins 72 a meaningful existence is easily controlled by ideologically manipulative states. Eventually, Winston’s autocratic recitation of the Party chiasmus “Who controls the past controls the future: who controls the present controls the past” bleakly reveals his ultimate immersion into the perpetual cycle of oppression created in the artificial reality of totalitarian regimes. By depicting the tragic transience of individual resistance, Orwell asserts the need for collective solidarity in order to preserve our sense of reality and truth. Orwell exposes how governments distort reality and objective truth to render critical thought and dissent impossible, reducing the human experience to an indistinguishable cycle of repression. Orwell draws on Stalinist Russia, which controlled reality and truth by only permitting propaganda and literature that aligned with desired Marxist-Leninist ideologies. The state endorsed language “Newspeak” forces the individual to accept paradoxical axioms, “WAR IS PEACE. FREEDOM IS SLAVERY. IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH”, where the mechanical rhythm of the truncated sentences replicates the ubiquitous and inculcating impact of propaganda in shaping reality and restricting critical thought. Subverting a victorious hero arc, Winston’s optimistic motif “If there is hope, it lies in the proles”, which emphasises the power of collective solidarity in challenging an oppressive regime, is dismantled under Party torture. Tormented until his “reality exists … in the mind of the Party, collective and immortal”, Winston mutters the indirect reference to Descartes ‘Cogito ergo sum’ in “I think I exist” to lament how the truth that underpins a meaningful existence is easily controlled by ideologically manipulative states. Eventually, Winston’s autocratic recitation of the Party’s chiasmus “Who controls the past controls the future: who controls the present controls the past” bleakly reveals the perpetual cycle of oppression created in the artificial reality of totalitarian regimes. By depicting the transience of individual resistance, Orwell asserts the need for collective solidarity in order to preserve our sense of reality and truth. Hope this guide was helpful and good luck with your HSC ! 73