ABCD’s of On-Demand Writing Attack the prompt Brainstorm possible answers Choose the order of your response Detect errors before turning the draft in ABCD: Attack the prompt Some prompts contain two parts: 1) Warm-up or background information 2) Actual writing prompt Example By the time students enter high school, they have learned about many moments in history that have influenced our world today. Think about a moment in history you studied and consider its importance. Write a composition in which you discuss a moment in history. Share its importance in today’s world. Be sure to support the moment with details and examples. Warm-up or background information By the time students enter high school, they have learned about many moments in history that have influenced our world today. Think about a moment in history you studied and consider its importance. The idea of “warm-up” or “background” is to help the essay writer think about the topic. It’s like part of the brainstorming has been done for you. This should guide your writing and can help you start deciding what you want to say about the topic. Actual writing prompt Write a composition in which you discuss a moment in history. Share its importance in today’s world. Be sure to support the moment with details and examples. The “prompt” is the part that tells you what the actual assignment is that you have to do. The prompt is often made up of several parts that you need to break into pieces so you can figure out exactly what to do. 1|Page Three Steps to “Attack a prompt” 1. Highlight any words that ask you to do something (different colors for different things). 2. Highlight using the same color but a lighter shade what it specifically tells you to do. 3. Under the prompt, rewrite and number what you’ve highlighted. 1. Highlight words that ask you to do something: Write a composition in which you discuss a moment in history. Share its importance in today’s world. Be sure to support the moment with details and examples. 2. Highlight words that specifically details what you are supposed to do: Write a composition in which you discuss a moment in history. Share its importance in today’s world. Be sure to support the moment with details and examples. 3. Under the prompt, rewrite and number what you’ve highlighted. Write – a composition – the final goal 1. Discuss – a moment in history 2. Share – that history’s importance 3. Support – that moment with details and examples 2|Page ABCD: Brainstorm possible answers Three Layers of “Brainstorming possible answers” Layer 1) Brainstorm in the same order what the prompt asks you to do. Create a list of ideas for what the prompt asks first. Layer 2) Choose just one of the brainstormed ideas and address what the prompt asks you to do. Layer 3) Add supporting details, reasons, evidence, etc… From this writing prompt example: Write a composition in which you discuss a moment in history. Share its importance in today’s world. Be sure to support the moment with details and examples. 1st Layer – brainstorm a list of ideas/topics to write about From the prompt: Discuss – a moment in history 9/11 Holocaust The Declaration of Independence First humans on the moon “Founding” of the Americas by Columbus Iraq War 2nd Layer- Select one idea from your brainstormed list and do what the prompt asks you to do. From the prompt: Share – its importance Brainstorm as many reasons as you can why it’s important: 9/11 The moment Security Patriotism War Economy 3|Page 3rd Layer: Add supporting details, evidence, data, proof, examples, etc… 3. Support – details/examples War The Moment Security Patriotism Economy Iraq 4 planes: airports more flags in public airlines Osama bin Laden 2 NYC, 1 DC, 1 PA amusement parks pledge hotels bombings burning towers victims honored restaurants soldiers honored tourist attractions deaths You will write better in an on-demand setting if you take a few minutes to make a plan. You probably don’t want to write about every reason and its details that you brainstormed because there will be too much and you probably won’t have the time. Revisit your brainstorming and narrow it down. You have to decide the criteria for why you will keep some reasons and why you will toss the others, some reasons why you might want to keep a reason: o easiest for you to write about, most impressive to the one reading it, most interesting, most insightful, etc.—remember, this is a test and you want to show off your smart brain and your writing skills Narrow it down for a five paragraph essay (that means choose three subtopics). War The Moment Economy Iraq 4 planes: airlines Osama bin Laden 2 NYC, 1 DC, 1 PA hotels bombings burning towers restaurants deaths tourist attractions 4|Page ABCD: Choose the order of your response You need to decide on a logical flow to your essay Choose the order of your response decide what goes first, second, and so on Choose the order you will write the essay in. The Moment War Economy 4 planes: Iraq airlines 2 NYC, 1 DC, 1 PA Osama bin Laden hotels burning towers bombings restaurants deaths tourist attractions Now that you know what order everything is going to go in, it’s time to outline it more completely by using one of the outlining methods you know. ABCD: Detect errors before turning in draft Reread your essay after you finish drafting. There is real value in revising your work before turning it in. Writers often uncover silly mistakes when they review their paper before submitting. Perfection in a first draft is not the goal, rather the skill of detecting obvious errors is the focus. If there is a rubric, use it! Look at one item on the rubric and then check your writing to see if you did that. Then look at the next item on the rubric and check your writing for that. Etc. Examples of basic mistakes to look for: o Punctuation o Spelling o Agreement issues (tense, noun/pronoun, etc…) o Sentence fragments and/or run-ons 5|Page Practice All humans make choices or decisions daily. Some are important; some are not so important. We choose what clothes to wear. We decide whether or not to do our homework. We choose certain people for friends. Sometimes the decisions we make change our lives. Discuss an important decision you have made in your life. Explain the decision and how it affected you. Tell whether you would make the same decision again. ABCD: Attack the prompt Three Steps to “Attack a prompt” • • • Highlight any words that ask you to do something (different colors for different things). Highlight using the same color but a lighter shade what it specifically tells you to do. Under the prompt, rewrite and number what you’ve highlighted. Discuss an important decision you have made in your life. Explain the decision and how it affected you. Tell whether you would make the same decision again. Write an essay about an important decision 1. Discuss – important decision in your life 2. Explain – how decision affected you 3. Tell – if you would make same decision again 6|Page