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G9 18.1 Review Writing Revision

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Final Exam
Revision Week
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Everything we do this is
to prepare you for the
Final Exam
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What’s a review?
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Talking about the good and bad of something you used
or experienced, then giving a recommendation.
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Example of a restaurant review:
The food at the restaurant was amazing. (Good)
You had to wait for a long time before they give you your food though. (Bad)
I’d recommend for you to go when you’re not very hungry, otherwise you
might die of starvation at the table. (Recommendation)
Vocabulary
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Taking a school trip to a
Science Museum
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One minute to memorize the meaning and spelling.
English
Chinese
Gallery
展厅
Robotics
机器人技术
Geography
地理
Natural Science
自然科学
Dinosaur
恐龙
holographic model
全息模型
continents
大洲
oceans
海洋
specimens
标本
skeleton
骨骼
Human anatomy
人类结构学
immune systems
免疫系统
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Inside a Science Museum, you can visit many galleries
and do different things.
▪ Use these words to fill in the gaps
oceans
Geography
continents
_______________
Robotics
Gallery:
Admired the innovations that has won the
Queen Elizabeth Prize for Engineering—the
world’s leading award for engineers
Robotics
holographic model
_______________
Geography
Gallery:
Saw the ___________________
holographic model of
oceans
Earth with its _______________
and
continents
_______________
Medical
immune
Antarctica
interactive
Natural Science Gallery:
interactive
Explored the ___________________
display while
Antarctica
learning about wildlife in __________________
human anatomy
skeletons
Dinosaur Gallery:
Examined the incredible specimens
of dinosaur _______________.
skeletons
____________
Medical
Gallery:
human anatomy
Learnt about ______________________,
immune
_______________
systems and the
development of modern medical science.
One minute to memorize the meaning and spelling.
English
Chinese
members of the public
公民
expert
专家
origins of (something)
(什么)的起源
documentary
记录片
vaccine
疫苗
vaccination
疫苗接种
periodic table
元素周期表
elements
元素
professor
教授
classified
分类
alternatives
备择方案
period of time
一段时期内
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On your school trip, the tour guide took everyone into the
Medical Gallery.
▫ Fill these gaps with the right word to find out what you experienced.
periodic table
expert
members of the public
vaccine
documentary
members of the public
1. For a short time, the museum is free for all ___________________________________.
2. Do you want to learn about fascinating things like the cultural and historical background to
how science developed over the centuries? Starting from when people believed the earth
periodic table
was flat to the discovery of elements in the _________________________?
expert
3. Great that we had a biology ___________________
as our tour guide.
documentary
4. Bored by a long ______________________
on how scientists created the first COVID-19
vaccine
______________________.
▫ Fill these gaps out to find out what you experienced.
professor
vaccination
period of time
classified
vaccination
professor
1. The __________________
was knowledgeable about
loads of scientific studies from different
period of time
________________________in
history
vaccination
2. Interesting to learn that the ______________________
prevented 14·4 million deaths from COVID-19 in 185
countries.
3. Instead of watching the documentary, better to spend your
time listening to the professor of immunology’s introduction
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to how vaccinations are ___________________.
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What is the Structure of a Review?
(30-40 words)
(30-40 words)
(50-60 words)
(overall opinion) + Recommendation
(20-30 words)
Memorize everything in Red. 1 minute.
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In what parts of the Review would these appear in? Why?
members of the public
1. For a short time, the museum is free for all ___________________________________.
Description, because it is “What attracted you”
2. Do you want to learn about fascinating things like the cultural and historical background to
how science developed over the centuries? Starting from when people believed the earth
periodic table
was flat to the discovery of elements in the _________________________.
Introduction, because it is a “Hook”.
expert
3. Great that we had a biology ___________________
as our tour guide.
Opinion, because it is a “What’s good”.
documentary
4. Bored by a long ______________________
on how scientists created the first COVID-19
vaccine
______________________.
Opinion, because it is a “What’s bad”.
▫ Fill these gaps out to find out what you experienced.
professor
vaccination
period of time
classified
vaccination
professor
1. The __________________
was knowledgeable about
loads of scientific studies from different
period of time
________________________in
history.
Opinion, because it is a “What’s good”.
vaccination
2. Interesting to learn that the ______________________
prevented 14·4 million deaths from COVID-19 in 185
countries.
Opinion, because it is a “What’s good”.
3. Instead of watching the documentary, better to spend your
time listening to the professor of immunology’s introduction
to how vaccinations are ___________________.
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Recommendation, because it is a
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Recommendation to people who wants to go.
You see a question. What do you do?
Example Review Question
You and some friends have recently spent a day at a science
museum. You decided to write a review of it for your school magazine.
In your review describe1 what was good and bad and say whether you
2 would recommend other students to go.
Write between 120 to 160 words. You’ll receive a mark from the full
marks of 6 marks for content and 9 marks for language.
What are 2 things you must write so you won’t lose marks?
what was good and bad
1. _______________________________________________
whether you would recommend other students to go.
2. _______________________________________________
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All of these exist in a Science Museum. Draft your
Review by answering these questions:
1. What would attract you to go to a Science Museum?
2. What would be 2 good things and 1 bad thing about the Science Museum?
3. What recommendation would you give so the 1 bad thing don’t affect you so much?
Number these, so they’re in the right order.
Introduction: 30-40 words
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2 If so, then the Movie World in Australia
might be a really good destination to
bring your family and friends.
Write a hook + answer
1 Are you looking to relax and
have a bit of fun over the
summer holidays?
Are you looking to relax and have a bit of fun over the
summer holidays? If so, then the Movie World in
Australia might be a really good destination to bring
your family and friends.
Write your own introduction answering the “Example Review Question”.
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Tip: If you don’t know how to start, get ideas from the sentences we did today.
Description: 30-40 words
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Who, when + what attracted you
2 It is one of the country’s biggest theme
parks, with many exciting attractions.
3 Consequently, we decided to go there.
1 Last week, my friends and I
had spent an entire day at
Movie World in Australia.
Last week, my friends and I had spent an entire
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day at Movie World in Australia. It is one of the
country’s biggest theme parks, with many exciting
attractions. Consequently, we decided to go there. 35 words
Opinion:50-60 words
 Opinions needs to include:
• What’s good
• What’s bad
2 Although, the lines of people in front of 3
we still had an amazing time on the most
each ride were ridiculously long,
1 The awesome rides thrilled me to bits.
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heart-pumping rides like the drop tower,
roller coaster and the pirate ship.
In addition, the adventurous design of the haunted house really blew our minds.
The awesome rides thrilled me to bits. Although, the lines of
people in front of each ride were ridiculously long, we still had
an amazing time on the most heart-pumping rides like the drop
tower, roller coaster and the pirate ship. In addition, the
adventurous design of the haunted house really blew our minds.
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Recommendation:30-50 words
 Recommendation need to include:
• Overall opinion + Recommendation (should do or not do)
2 If you decide to go, you should bring as
many friends as you can so you can chat
with each other while you’re waiting.
1 Overall, it’s really worthwhile
to experience it.
Overall, it’s really worthwhile to experience it . If
you decide to go, you should bring as many friends
as you can so you can chat with each other while
you’re waiting.
Remember that your recommendation need to give tips to solve “What’s bad” for
people who are going, not the museum itself.
Finish this for homework!!!
Example Review Question
You and some friends have recently spent a day at a science
museum. You decided to write a review of it for your school magazine.
In your review describe1 what was good and bad and say whether you
2 would recommend other students to go.
Write between 120 to 160 words. You’ll receive a mark from the full
marks of 6 marks for content and 9 marks for language.
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