FINANCIAL STRATEGIES OF COFFEE SHOPS IN TUGUEGARAO CITY UNDER
INFLATIONARY ENVIRONMENT
THINGS NEEDED TO BE
REVISED/ REMOVED/ADD
1. Remove “basis for business
strategy” in the title
PANELIST WHO
SUGGESTED
Prof. Chona Agustin
ACTIONS DONE
2. Provide RRL in tables of test
of significant difference and
state why there is no
significant difference
Prof. Chona Agustin
3. Connect every citation in the
findings found in the tables
of Chapter 4
Prof. Chona Agustin
We connected our citations in the finding by
adding the phrase “this finding is connected
to the statement of”
(page 26-39)
4. Remove the name of the
business in the SOP
Prof. Chona Agustin
5. Remove introductory
paragraph in conclusion
Prof. Chona Agustin
6. Remove summary
Prof. Chona Agustin
We removed the name of the business in the
SOP and also in the paradigm
(page 3-4)
We removed the introductory paragraph in
the conclusion
(page 41)
We removed the summary in chapter 5 and
replaced findings by summary of findings
(page 40)
7. Recommendations should be
in statement form
Prof. Chona Agustin
We removed the “basis for business
strategy” in the title
(title page)
We included RRL to support the findings in
the tables of Test of significant difference
and we stated the reasons why there is no
significant difference
(page 36-39)
We removed the numbering in
recommendation
(page 42)
We added some information regarding the
locale of our study
(page 23)
We included survey method in the research
design
(page 23)
We included where we got our list of
respondents which is from DTI
(page 23)
We specified what SOP number we applied
the different statistical treatment
(page 24)
8. Elaborate research locale
Prof. Ariel Melad
9. Include survey method in
the research design
Prof. Ariel Melad
10. Include where you get your
respondents in the sampling
plan
11. Statistical treatment
presentation should be
based on SOP
Prof. Ariel Melad
12. Remove the representation
of percentage in the tables
of business profile variables
Prof. Ariel Melad
We removed the percentage representation
and put its data just inside the
representation of the frequency
(page 26-29)
13. Remove the representation
of overall average in table
2.5
Prof. Ariel Melad
14. Include the Likert Scale table
in Statistical Treatment
Prof. Ariel Melad
We removed the overall average
representation of financial strategies in table
2.5
(page 25)
We included the data range of our Likert
Scale in a table form
(page 25)
15. Remove the variable
profitability under financial
strategies and replace by
operational efficiency in the
SOP
Prof. Joseph Cumagun
Prof. Ariel Melad
We removed the variable profitability and
replaced it by operational efficiency
(page 3)