ABOUT VSPACE 1 2 3 Our Vision Foster Viet generations through personalized and hands - on education. Our Mission Support youngsters in their journey of becoming global changemakers. VSPACE IELTS Focus on Academic and Self- Development through customized lessons. Contents 1 2 3 Introduction A quick guide to the world of graph Vocabulary The essential vocabulary for IELTS Writing (Graph) Analytical Thinking Practice with sample cue cards 2 GROUND RULES 3 Writing Task 1: Band Descriptors 4 Writing: Criteria Briefing Grammatical Range and Accuracy Task Achievement 04 Task Achievement refers to your This refers to your ability to write ability to answer the question sentences with no mistakes and properly also use a range of grammatical structures 01 03 Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resources Coherence and Cohesion refers to your ability to connect your ideas together so that they are easy to understand This refers to your ability to use a 02 wide range of vocabulary without making mistakes 1. Introduction Graph is the simplified representation of a big chunk of data under many forms. → There are 7 types of diagram in the IELTS Writing Task 1 ● ● ● ● ● ● ● Line Graph Bar Chart Pie Chart Table Mixed-chart Map Process Examples 2. - Before you begin to write Write at least 150 words Make sure to write at least 150 words. Although there is no limit to maximum word count, you should not write over 200 words (lengthy, time-consuming). 1. - Spend only 20 mins at most The IELTS Writing section allows 1 hour to do both Task 1 and Task 2. Task 1 only 3. - accounts for ⅓ Writing score and You should not proceed to write right away; instead, plan what you will write requires at least 150 words. Therefore, beforehand. you should only allocate 20 minutes to this task. Plan first - The 4-step procedure will be introduced later on in this curriculum. 8 5. Summarize information only Before you begin to write - Select significant, noticeable information to describe the graph. Writing Task 1 requires you to “summarise the information by selecting and reporting the 4. - Don’t say your opinions main features”. This does not mean listing Do not put your own opinions or all data presented in the graph. outside/not-mentioned-in-the-graph information into your Task 1 essay. 6. - Be mindful Be mindful of using words and sentence structures flexibly and diversely. They are 2 out of 4 criteria that the examiner will use to score your essay. 9 IELTS Writing Task 1 Band Descriptors 4 criteria: ● Task Achievement ● Coherence and Cohesion ● Lexical Resource ● Grammatical Range and Accuracy 2. Vocabulary for Graph There are different ways to describe the data demonstrated in a graph. It is important that you learn those grammar structures and vocabulary beforehand. ● Vocabulary to describe trends ● Vocabulary to describe degrees of change ● Sentence structures to describe trends ● Prepositions in data analysis ● Sentence structures to compare data Describe Trends Trend Verb increase rise grow climb soar = (sky)rocket = (up)surge decrease decline fall drop Greater extent: ● ● ● Noun Phrase ● ● ● ● ● register/witness/experience/ undergo/ record + an/a (exponential/substantial/ significant) increase/rise/ growth in sth upward tendency/trend in sth an upsurge in + sth register/witness/experience/ undergo/ record + an/a (significant/substantial/ considerable) fall/decrease/ drop/decline in sth a downward tendency/trend in sth plummet plunge significantly/substantially/ considerably + drop/reduce/decrease/decline/fall remain/stay stable at remain/stay unchanged at stabilize at ● register/witness/experience/ undergo/ record + a stable performance/stability at (data) = reach a plateau at (data) / in + N Describe Trends Trend Verb widely >< slightly/mildly fluctuate peak at bottom at Noun Phrase register/witness/experience/ undergo/ record + a wide >< slight/mild fluctuation around (data) hit the highest point of + data reach a peak of + data hit the lowest point of hit a low of hit a trough of Describe Degrees of Change Adjective Adverb Small slight marginal insignificant slightly marginally insignificantly Moderate gradual slow steady progressive gradually slowly steadily progressively Large considerable significant substantial considerably significantly substantially Sentence Structures (Trends) Example: The number of students of VSPACE in 2018 is 13000 and this number witnesses an increase of 3000 students by 2021 Type Formula Example 1 Subject + Verb + Adverb + Number + Time period The number of VSpace students increased significantly to 3,000 in 2021 2 There + be + a/an + Adjective + noun + number + in + “what” + complement + time period There was a significant increase of 1700 in the number of VSpace students in 2021 3 Subject + experienced/ saw/ witnessed/ reported/ registered/ underwent + a/an + adj + noun + number + time period The number of VSpace students witnessed a significant increase of 1700 in 2021 4 A/an + adj + noun + number + was seen/ witnessed/ registered/ recorded + in + subject + time period A significant increase of 500 was seen/ witnessed/ registered/ recorded in the number of VSpace students in 2021 5 Time period + witnessed/saw/registered/ recorded + a/an + adj + noun + in + noun phrase The year 2021 witnessed/ registered/ recorded a significant increase of 1700 in the number of VSpace students Sentence Structures (Trends) Example: The number of VSpace students decreased slightly to 2,500 in 2015. However, the number of VSpace students increased significantly by 500 in 2021. Type Formula Example 1 S + V, which was followed by There was a fall to 2,500 in the number of VSpace students in 2015, which was followed by an increase to 3,000 in 2021. 2 S + V, but later + V The number of VSpace students declined slightly to 2,500 in 2015, but later went up sharply by 500 in 2021. 3 S + V before V-ing The number of V Space students declined slightly to 2,500 in 2015 before experiencing a sharp increase of 500 in 2021. Rewrite the following sentences using the formulas ● The number of cars fell gradually over the period from 1990 to 2000. ● The research investment decreased significantly in 2005. ● There was a slight fall in the sales of mangoes in 2006. ● The quality of food in supermarkets has increased sharply. ● There was a quick drop of $3 million in sugar imports in 1988. ● The price of laptops dropped quickly over the period. ● There was an upward trend in the number of visitors to the website. ● The growth rate fluctuated wildly throughout the years. ● The number of students applying to the university stabilized over the decade. ● The year 2000 saw a gradual growth in the house price in London Thanks! Does anyone have any questions? JOIN US! VSPACE - Foster Viet Innovation 📩 Gmail: contact@vspace.edu.vn 🌐 Fanpage: VSPACE ☎ Hotline: Ms.Hà My: 091 8477617 18