NGHI: FEEDBACK EOMT
Listening: 30/40 7.0/9.0
Reading: 30/40
7.0/9.0
Writing: 5.5/9.0
Task 1
(đủ số từ, nhưng chú ý dành khoảng 20 phút cho task 1 thôi là okie)
The picture compares the development of the university campus where it has been
built and changed over the years from 2006 to present. Overall, the improvement of
the university campus area has made great progress as there are more student
accommodation. In addition, there is also an expansion of the road when an
additional entrance to student accommodation is added later.
First, we can see a clear difference between the student accommodation building
located in the northwest when in 2006 there were only 2 buildings next to each other
while this year it has doubled. Nearby are University offices which have been
replaced by Science building after a long time. North east with Teaching block, also
known as Art and science, which has been modified in terms of architecture and
content when it was only an Arts building. The Student accommodation building on
the southwest side in 2006 was moved and it was built into student facilities-shops
offices and more.
Now the shop and restaurant area has been changed when the above-mentioned
Student accommodation has moved here. In the center is a large lake but that was
only in 2006 and now this lake has shrunk by more than half since the lawn and
seating area by the lake has disappeared. However, there is a small detail that the
roadside trees have changed a bit over the years and now there is an additional path
leading to the student accommodation in the northeast.
=> BỔ SUNG Ý NÀO CÒN GIỮ NGUYÊN, KHÔNG THAY ĐỔI QUA CÁC NĂM:
Subject + remain the same
Task 2
(đủ số từ)
A stable job is always a factor that people always aim for, although this is not
always the case for everyone. In my opinion, as a young person, I always prioritize
learning about different working environments and only stop when I find the right
place.
First let's discuss the issue of working in the same organization for life, it is a
dedication and sacrifice for the job you love, and in my opinion, this is a good job
for someone who wants to have a stable job. There are many reasons for this, but the
most typical is that conformity and adaptation already exist to help us express
ourselves better. For example, if we have a stable job at a certain company, the
chances of promotion and recognition are very high. This is also the most
reasonable explanation for this case
On the other hand, if you are a young person or a recent graduate, it is best to learn
and experience many different working environments. The reason is quite
understandable when this is the nature as well as the skill to adapt to many different
places that they need. An example is that they need to receive a lot of experience
and experience of many people in different companies from which to have more
lessons for themselves and improve their skills day by day. If we can't find the way
we want to work, don't worry too much because time will give us the answer.
In short, putting feelings and experiences is very important for choosing a path for
yourself, so in my opinion, you should learn carefully so that you don't make the
wrong choice when working in different environments.