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Cockroaches poem annotated

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Cockroaches
By Mauri Yambo
Turn on the light
and helter-skelter
they scuttle
to their dark shelters.
Cut them off
from their hideouts
block
their many approaches
and see cockroaches
in hopeless flurry
and helpless worry.
But
who ordained
the crash-fall
of sandals
on these
shy creatures?
Or
is it their love
of darkness
holds them suspect?
MAURI YAMBO
(1947 - )
• Prof. Mauri Yambo is a Kenyan, by birth. He is married to Joan, with children and a
granddaughter. He was born in Nairobi in AD 1947, in the last millennium. He obtained his
first degree (BA Hons in Sociology and Political Science) in 1972, from the University of Dar
Es Salaam, in neighboring Tanzania. He obtained an MA degree in Sociology from the
University of Nairobi (UoN) in 1974 and graduated in 1980 with a PhD degree in Industrial
Sociology from the University of Illinois (at Urbana-Champaign), USA.
• He joined the Department of Sociology, University of Nairobi, as a lecturer in May 1980.
He lectured there (at both the undergraduate and postgraduate levels), did research,
supervised, and published until 2017 – in-between serving as Departmental Chair, as an
appointee of the University’s Vice-Chancellor. He was also elected by his 170+ academic
peers as Dean of the Faculty of Arts and served for two terms.
• It was the largest Faculty at the UoN by student numbers. Among the high points of his
tenure as Dean was the successful launch of the Module II certificate, diploma and degree
programs across the Faculty’s eleven Departments and sub-Departments. He also saw to
the procurement, for the first time, of a desktop computer for each Departmental Office in
the Faculty; and established the Faculty’s first computer lab for students.
• Prof. Yambo continues to write and is a regular blogger at mauriyambo.blogspot.com.
His creative writing-and-publishing endeavors have now resumed.
Title
Cockroaches
Definition: scavenging insects that resembles a beetle, having long antennae and legs and typically a broad,
flattened body.
Purpose: Prompts us to reconsider our relationship with cockroaches, as well as our behaviour and attitudes
toward them.
An abrupt opening that creates tension because something is about to be revealed. This can be
interpreted as either an instruction or a description of events. This implies that the speaker is
decisive and certain of what will be discovered.
Turn on the light
and helter-skelter
In disorderly haste or confusion
Exact rhyme
Skelter and shelter
Purpose – emphasis the pace
of the verse and evoke the
frantic, hurried scurrying of
the insects as they try to find
shelter.
they scuttle
The cockroaches
Alliteration of ‘s’=
Sibilance - creates the
sound effect of the insects
scattering and scurrying
across the floor.
Scurry, scramble/ flee, to move quickly, with
small, short steps, especially in order to escape
to their dark shelters.
Most cockroach species prefer to hide and breed in dark, moist areas. Cockroaches are
nocturnal because they provide food for many predators. They prefer to spend the day
hiding in dark, hidden places and then foraging for food at night. Dark shelters are
associated with safety for them.
Another abrupt command. Whether it be a command
or a description of events is unclear, this echoes the
opening line of the first stanza.
Choice of diction: these actions show
the speaker is the aggressor and that
the cockroaches are the victims of these
harsh actions as they will be hopeless
and helpless.
Rhyme - Approaches and cockroaches
emphasise the pace of the verse and the
frantic hurried scurrying as the flee/scramble.
Rhyme - Flurry and worry heighten the
cockroaches' vulnerability and powerlessness
when they are unable to escape.
Cut them off
Cut them off means to interrupt
someone or something; to
prevent someone from
continuing.
Prevent them from reaching
‘their hideouts’ by cutting them
off and their approaches (a way
of dealing with a situation or
problem) to flee to safety.
cockroaches
from their hideouts
block
their many approaches
and see cockroaches
in hopeless flurry
and helpless worry.
The speaker notes that if the
preventative measures are
successful (‘cut’ and ‘block’)
the cockroaches will be
stranded as a ‘flurry’
(swirling mass) of hopeless
and ‘helpless’ ‘worry’.
Stanza ends with a full stop which creates a pause
allowing the imagery and meaning of the stanza to be
processed.
Conjunction – creates tension as it
indicates a change of topic and tone.
But
who ordained
order (something) officially, who gave the consent or has
the authority
the crash-fall To suddenly fall, land, or hit with destructive
force
The cause of the ‘crash-fall’, a method of
of sandals
on these
nervous or timid in the company of
other people, provides a reason for
them scurrying and fleeing.
which many people make use of in order
to stomp on cockroaches.
shy creatures? Question mark creates longer pauses
insisting that the reader consider the
question asked.
The word ‘or’ indicates a shift in
reasoning as the speaker
contemplates why cockroaches are
killed in such harsh manners.
Ambiguous reference to
‘darkness holds them
suspect’ :
Or
is it their love
Is it their fondness for
the dark that makes
them suspicious?
of darkness
holds them suspect?
Perhaps it is a literal
reference to humans'
instinctual primal fear of the
dark - the inability to see
making them feel vulnerable
- and, by extension, the fear
of other nocturnal insects
and creatures.
Perhaps a metaphor for
darkness, which is associated
with the unknown, death,
evil, and distrust.
Structure
• Free verse – no formal rhyme scheme or
meter.
• Four stanzas, varying in length
• The minimal use of punctuation
supports the fast urgent pace of the
poem in significant stanzas.
• Can be interpreted literally or
figuratively.
Title
Cockroaches
Figurative interpretation
Figurative interpretation
• Cockroaches are a powerful metaphor for the oppressed,
marginalized, or downtrodden in society. They are reviled and
rejected, and they are difficult to kill. Some commentators have
suggested that the cockroaches in the poem are 'shy,' 'worried,'
'hopeless,' and 'helpless,' implying that they represent Kenya's
indigenous tribes and people during colonisation.
• From this vantage point, the poem becomes a moving and compelling
examination of imperialism.
Stanza 1
Turn on the light
and helter-skelter
they scuttle
to their dark shelters.
• Displays the disruptive and
disorientating effect on the
arrival of the British colonists.
Stanza 2
Stanza 3
But
who ordained
the crash-fall
of sandals
on these
shy creatures?
• It not only evokes the colonists'
thoughtless violent brutality, but
it also poignantly queries who or
what gave these intruders the
authority to torment and murder
the indigenous people in this
inhumane manner.
Stanza 4
Or
is it their love
of darkness
holds them suspect?
• This stanza is a
chilling reference to
European racial
chauvinism and their
perceptions of
Africans as inferior
and subhuman.
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