COPYREADING AND HEADLINE WRITING (ENGLISH & FILIPINO) LUKE MENDOZA COPYREADING ● ● ● It is the art of arranging, correcting, and selecting the quality and type of news. It is also called COPYEDITING. One who edits copies is called a COPYREADER or COPYEDITOR. MGA TUNGKULIN NG COPYREADER Tiyaking tumpak ang mga datos sa artikulo. Ang akdang ililimbag ay may wastong gramatika at pagbabaybay ng mga salita. Magwasto ng kamalian ng mga datos. Pumutol o magkaltas ng di-mahahalagang datos. Mag-alis ng mga salitang nagsasaad ng opinyon. Mag-alis ng mga salitang walang kabuluhan. Tinitiyak nito na malaya sa anumang libelong pamamahayag ang akda. MGA TUNGKULIN NG COPYREADER Sumusulat ng ulo ng balita at nagpapasya sa tipograpiya nito. Magbigay ng tagubilin sa tagapaglimbag ukol sa laki at tipong gagamitin, kolum at bilang ng ems. Sinusunod nito ang istilo ng pahayagan. COPYREADING SYMBOLS SYMBOL USE & FUNCTION COPYREADING SYMBOLS SYMBOL USE & FUNCTION COPYREADING SYMBOLS SYMBOL USE & FUNCTION KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING NUMBERS The numbers 1 – 9 are written in words while the numbers 10 and above are written in figures. Example: nine students 13 children KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING NUMBERS EXCEPTIONS: dates, address: always in figures proper nouns: may be written in figures/words beginning of sentence: always in words events: 1st – 9th is allowed KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING SPELLING Look for misspelled words. Here in the Philippines, American English is used, not British English. Ex: color, not colour If a word has more than one accepted spelling, the shortest one is preferred. Ex: judgment, instead of judgement KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING CAPITALIZATION The first letter of the sentence is always capitalized. Proper nouns are capitalized, common nouns are not. Ex: singer Regine Velasquez KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING CAPITALIZATION Small letters are usually used for title or position. Ex: Mrs. Cecilia Burayag, the principal of BCIS, delivered the opening remarks. Capitalized titles: Governor Umali KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING ABBREVIATIONS Spell out Dept., gov’t, and other abbreviations. The abbreviations Jr. and Sr. are allowed in names. Remember: Engr. Emmanuel Delgado; Engineer Delgado 12 Dimagiba St.; Dimagiba Street KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING ABBREVIATIONS A title or position of a person may be abbreviated if it appears before the name but not if simply used in the sentence: Ex: Sen. Recto filed another taxation bill yesterday. The senator filed another taxation bill yesterday. KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING ACRONYMS Acronyms are usually written in capital letters. Example: BCIS Check if the letters of the acronym are in the correct order. KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING ACRONYMS When an acronym appears for the first time in a news story, it is written after its meaning and it is enclosed in parentheses. Ex: University of the Philippines (UP) KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING PARAGRAPHS The first sentence of a paragraph is indented. In news stories, the rule is one paragraph, one sentence only. KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING LEAD There should be no names of unknown persons in the lead. Check for buried leads. The standard lead answers the 5 Ws and 1 H. KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING PUNCTUATIONS: PERIOD It is used at the end of declarative and imperative sentences. It is used in abbreviations such as p.m., a.m., Jr., Sr., Pres., Sen., Rep., Gov., Gen., Capt., Dr., Fr., Atty., Corp., and Inc. Acronyms of schools, organizations and offices do not need periods. KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING PUNCTUATIONS: COMMA It is used to separate the month and day from the year. It is used to separate the street, barangay, town and province in an address It is used to separate facts concerning victims and suspects. Ex: Jolas Burayag, 17, of Barangay San Fernando Norte KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING PUNCTUATIONS: COMMA Do not use commas to separate the abbreviation Jr., Sr., or III from the name. Ex: Emmanuel Delgado Jr. KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING PUNCTUATIONS: HYPHEN Use hyphen: in most compound nouns Ex: editor-in-chief, officer-in-charge in fractions Ex: two-thirds, three-fourths in numerals Ex: twenty-two, fifty-nine KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING PUNCTUATIONS: APOSTROPHE Apostrophes are used in the possessive form of the noun. Ex. the teacher’s table the teachers’ meeting In contractions Ex. I’m (I am) you’re (you are) KEYS TO REMEMBER IN COPYREADING Watch out for jumbled letters, words and paragraphs. Check for joined/disjoined words. Ex. class room, newteacher Delete editorializing words/phrases. Ex. The very beautiful and intelligent principal… The cops were right in arresting… Check for redundancies (recurring words/phrases/paragraphs, synonymous or redundant terms). Ex. the concert the concert ended SAMPLE OF AN EDITED COPY HEADLINE WRITING • An assemblage of words written in bigger, bolder letters than the usual page text at the beginning of the news. • It is not a title. TIPS IN CREATING A STRONG HEADLINE 1. First, read the story for general meaning. 2. Clues to the headline are usually in the lead. What happened? Who did what? How did IT happen? 3. Use the shortest words possible. Ex. Cop – policeman Up – increase Nab - arrest TIPS IN CREATING A STRONG HEADLINE 4. Have a subject and a verb. Avoid starting with a verb; the headline might sound as if it were giving orders. Wrong: Revise money mart guidelines Correct: Central Bank revises money mart guidelines 5. Use the historical present tense if the verb is in the active voice. Wrong: Delgado topped editorial tilt Correct: Delgado tops editorial tilt TIPS IN CREATING A STRONG HEADLINE 6. Do not use a period at the end of the headline. 7. Omit articles (a, an, the). Wrong: A fire hits Tondo slum area Correct: Fire hits Tondo slum area 8. Use a comma instead of “and” in writing headlines. Delays, confusion bug Asiad Lacson, Trillanes no show at SONA 9. Use semicolon to separate sentences. Gina Lopez heads Pasig body; Noy swears in 35 other execs TIPS IN CREATING A STRONG HEADLINE 10. Always give the source of a quote. Quotation marks are not needed, a dash or a colon will serve the purpose. Crackdown on errant bus firms – Enrile Enrile: Crackdown on errant bus firms 11. Use the down-style – only the first word and proper nouns are capitalized, unless otherwise indicated. This is more readable because people are used to reading sentences this way. Ex. Faculty honors Nuñez TIPS IN CREATING A STRONG HEADLINE 12. Use only widely known abbreviations. Wrong: JEE to play Santa this Christmas 13. Dont use names unless the person is well known, use common nouns instead. Wrong: Santos electrocuted Correct: Carpenter electrocuted 14. Be positive. Don't use negatives in headlines. They weaken not only the headlines but also the stories. UNIT COUNTS UNIT COUNTS UNIT COUNTS PRINTER’S DIRECTIONS 3 – 32 – Arial (31.5 u.c.) 1, ds, fl 3 32 Arial 31.5 u.c. 1 ds, fl - number of columns - font size - font style - total unit counts - number of lines - types of headline SLUG LINE Balita PS Ngayon Pres. Duterte lpm/04-06-23 Structure Name of Paper Keyword Initials/Date SUMMARY 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. Read Edit Write a Headline Count Units Prepare Printer’s Directions Write Slug Line Re-read MARAMING SALAMAT SA INYONG PAKIKINIG!!!