Topic 1: Write an effect essay about having a well-paid job. What are the positive effects of having a well-paid job on a person’s life? Topic 2: Write a cause essay about failure. Why is failure good for success? What are the positive effects of having a well-paid job on a person’s life? Effects/Benefits of Having a Well-paid Job - - Good income= good investments, easy to have a more comfortable life. Less stressed and anxious, , Health benefits, good income=better health service, life quality, have healthier options in food and exercise < a member of a gym. Access to different services; regular check ups, life coach, mediation, Better social status, improve cultural capital: close to people who are valued in a specific field. Offer better opportunities to your children, better schools, Engage in leisure activities, have various hobbies < good for mental health. 1. Financial stability a. Good income= good investments, easy to have a more comfortable life b. provide better care for your family c. because of financial stability that comes with a well paid job live in safer, better neighbourhoods 2. Health benefits a. Physical health: good income=better health service, life quality, have healthier options in food and exercise < a member of a gym. Access to different services; regular check ups, life coach, mediation, b. mental health: Increase in self-confidence, feel more satisfied about yourself, more confident in your abilities, higher chance of promotion, receive additional training. c. Less stressed and anxious. 3. Better social status a. improve cultural capital: close to people who are valued in a specific field. b. Offer better opportunities to your children, better schools, c. Engage in leisure activities, have various hobbies < good for mental health. Introduction: underline the importance of the topic, define it, indicate a change, +thesis statement. There are various positive effects/benefits of having a well-paid job, some of them are related to financial stability, health benefits, better social status. T.S: Having a well-paid job has various benefits. In addition to having the financial stability, it has many health benefits and social benefits. Firstly, financial benefits of having a well paid job are too many to count/are very important/can be considered as an important factor. Good income comes with/leads to good investments. This way you can achieve a better life quality and lead a more comfortable life. In addition/Furthermore, as a result of the financial stability you can provide a better care for your family. (explain). Furthermore, because of financial stability that comes with a well paid job you can opt to live in safer, better neighbourhoods. Secondly, Another important/vital/huge/critical/fundamental benefit of having a well-paid job is related to/ leads to many health benefits. Access to a better/qualified health care is closely related to the income level of an individual. As a result of the high income, you can have regular check ups, have healthier options in terms of food and exercise. According to a research people who have high incomes are more likely to live a longer life./less prone to heart diseases, suffering from high sugar levels or anaemia. Apart from physical benefits/advantages, high income is also closely related to a more stable mental health. As a result of having a more stable life you can feel less anxious and stressed about life. This will lead to improved self-confidence and self esteem. Lastly,/finally, well paid hob is also essential for a higher social status…….. To sum up, As a conclusion, to summarize, Choosing your job wisely is a fundamental condition for people. Consequently, people who have well-paid positions can feel better off financially, leading to…. Moreover, a good job comes with a better mental and physical health…… To add more, having a higher social status is also vital here. In short, people should be more careful about their choice of occupation/position/expertise.
