ELA Name: ______________________ 6-8 Essay Introduction includes a clear thesis and gives some background for a reader to understand it. 1 criterion to a 5 is not fully or consistently met at grade level. Organization W.11-12.a-e Essay has a variety of reasons that are somewhat supported by details or examples; essay somewhat addresses other viewpoints and/or logic. Essay uses a clear, albeit predictable organization; focus is maintained throughout the essay and within paragraphs. Essay uses advanced structures and/or uses a clear structure to maintain a focus on proving the thesis. Conclusion W.11-12.1e Answering the Prompt & Ideas W.11-12.1b 8-10 Essay Conclusion restates and may be particularly memorable or meaningful to the reader through analysis. Conclusion paragraph restates thesis and previous points using synonyms. Vocab & Language 10-12 Essay Intro clearly states thesis and gives complex background/ context; may also hook the reader. Essay uses a variety of very specific evidence, details, and examples to support the thesis; points are wellsupported and logic is used to add complexity. Language use is formal, confident, appropriate, and varied to keep the reader’s interest. Language use is generally confident and formal. Word choice is varied and appropriate to the prompt. Grammar & Spelling LANGUAGE (L.11-12.2) WRITING Intro W.11-12.1a Mock ACT Test Rubric: Common Core State Standards The absence of errors indicates mastery of grammar and/or mastery of editing skills. The general lack of errors shows mastery of grammatical concepts and/or editing skills. Below a 6 2 or more criteria to a 5 are not met or are below grade level. 1 criterion to a 5 is not fully or consistently met at grade level. 2 or more criteria to a 5 are not met or are below grade level. Essay’s structure is inconsistent, unclear, or ineffective. 2 or more criteria to a 5 are not met or are below grade level. Conclusion is not fully developed or focused, including summary. Word choices are somewhat appropriate and may be redundant. Errors indicate a partial lack of understanding in grammar or editing. 2 or more criteria to a 5 are not met or are below grade level. 2 or more criteria to a 5 are not met or are below grade level. Errors indicate a lack of understanding in grammar or editing. Teacher’s Assessment: Overall, I would have rated this as a ____/48 essay. Here’s why: © Secondary Sara ELA Name: ______________________ Rubric Continued: Peer Feedback & Student Self-Assessment Turn-In Guidelines In pencil Stayed in margins Single spacing Legible writing Effort Considerations Self-Assessment What did you do well? Time used effectively Appropriate length completed Proofreading attempted? Timing & Notes Time started: __________ Time finished: _________ Time spent total: _______ minutes What could you do to use your time more effectively? What was difficult for you? How can you improve in that area? What should you do differently on the real ACT? Peer Assessment What do YOU think this person did well? Is there anything the person COULD have said, but didn’t? What could have been stronger in this draft? © Secondary Sara