Short Story Writing Rubric Category Beginning Acceptable Proficient Mastery Ideas & Content Many details and/or background research are lacking. Ideas are missing or don’t make sense. Their ideas are listed as a grocery list. They tell, not show. The writer does not know enough about the topic. The story needs more details and research. Writer knows the topic. Most details fit and are interesting. Writer knows topic really well. The story contains many interesting details. Story just seems to begin without an introduction to characters or a conflict. No clear moment of climax. Ending is hard to follow or lacking completely with the story just stopping. Clear beginning with characters and a problem. A moment of climax and a wrap up to the story. Beginning creates interest, with characters, action, and conflict. The middle has a moment of climax before moving to resolve things with a satisfying conclusion. Beginning creates interest, with developed characters and a building up action with a well-developed and detailed conflict. The middle has an intense moment of climax before moving to resolve things with a satisfying and defined conclusion. The story is missing paragraphs and/or transitions. Too many details are out of order. Few transitions have been used in the piece. Too many details are out of order. The story has some transitions. Most parts of the piece fit together. Most of the details are in the right order. The Story is carefully organized with varied transitions. It grabs the reader’s attention. Conclusion works well. Details and paragraphs are in the right order. The writing is flat. The writer’s voice does not come through in their writing. Sometimes the writer’s voice comes through. The writing fails to draw the reader in. Most of the time the writer’s voice and personality show up in the writing. The writer’s personality comes through in a special way. The writer’s voice is lively and confident. Word’s don’t show the writer’s meaning. The reader is confused by the writer’s choice of words. The story contains too many dull, ordinary words. Some of the words just don’t fit. Writing has some strong words. Some strong words create visuals for the reader. The story has a variety of strong words. The words create vivid pictures in the reader’s mind. The story has many incomplete sentences. The writing does not make sense. Sentences are too short or too long. Similar beginnings are used over and over. The reader is confused and has to reread for meaning. Sentences are different lengths and have varied beginnings. The sentences also fit well together. The story has creative sentences of different kinds and lengths. The sentences flow, making the writing enjoyable to read. Capitalization, punctuation, spelling and grammar mistakes make the writing impossible to read and understand. Major editing is needed. Too many errors in capitalization, punctuation, spelling and grammar make the writing difficult to read. Editing is needed. The story has few errors in capitalization, punctuation, spelling, and grammar. It sounds correct when read aloud. The story has few or no errors in capitalization, punctuation, spelling, and grammar. The writing is easy to read. Lively, interesting and memorable writing keeps the reader’s attention. Ideas are supported with research and details. Story Structure A clear beginning, middle, and end to the story as we move through the plot line: exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution. Includes welldeveloped conflict. Organization Introduction is inviting. Ideas and details fit where placed. Transitions used effectively between ideas and paragraphs. The ending is effective. Voice The reader feels the author’s emotions. Writing sounds real and has personality. Word Choice Writer uses appropriate descriptive vocabulary. Sentence Fluency The writing flows. Writer uses different beginnings and lengths for sentences. Conventions The writer shows a clear understanding of capitalization, punctuation, spelling and grammar.