11 2 2 English for Academic and Professional Purposes Quarter 1 – Week 2 Using Knowledge of Text Structure to Glean the Information Needed 1 What I Need to Know At the end of this lesson, you will be able to: ➢ Identify the text structure to glean the information he/she needs ➢ Use knowledge of text structure to glean the information you need (CS_EN11/12A-EAPP-Ia-c-4) ➢ Evaluate the given information to determine each text structure. What I Know A. To find out what you already know about the topic to be discussed in this module, take the Pre-test. Write your answers in your notebook. Directions: Read each statement below. Identify what text structure is described in each item. Choose your answer from the words/phrase inside the box below. Write your answer on your notebook. Definition Description Order or Sequence structure Cause and Effect Enumeration Comparison and contrast Problem-Solution Classification Thesis evidence 1. It explains the nature of something. 2. It is a text structure that tells the order in which steps in a process or series of events occur. 3. A paragraph that is structured by starting with a negative situation and ends with a positive situation. 4. It presents similarities and differences in a paragraph. 5. Text structure that presents the reason why a situation is obtained. 1 6. A text structure that gives concrete details about the appearance, characteristics and actions of someone or something. 7. It presents groupings, types, classes and categories. 8. In this structure, arguments, points or interpretation is shown. B. Directions: Below is an unorganized text. Arrange the text according to the correct structure of an academic text by numbering 1-3. THE IMPORTANCE OF BEING PERSUASIVE Marikit Tara Alto Uyhoco __________ (a.)As citizens of the nation, it is imperative that we are equipped with the skills necessary in understanding, analyzing, and constructing these different positions. This is an academic exercise that, when acquired correctly, should be applicable to your understanding of the world. According to former US President Bill Clinton, “For any country to succeed in the long term, it is imperative that citizens understand the workings of government and also become active participants in it. “We must take every opportunity to examine our political life and debate the grand issues of our time.” _________ (b.)The world we live in are filled with people, products, and movements that aim to persuade individuals and groups toward their own ends. This is seen in television commercials, political speeches, election campaigns, and homilies in church. This is done even in the institutions that are closest to us, whether it is to follow the Ten Commandments, to buy the latest gadget, or to go against an ideology. ___________ (c.)The truth is, many arguments and positions that we are given can be unreasonable, deceitful, or just plain wrong. Sometimes, we can have the uneasy feeling that we are being forced into believing or doing something that isn’t right, and many times that feeling would be proven to be true. It is important to be able to fully articulate the problems and concerns one may have when it comes to grappling with several positions to discover their societal and political significance and to be able to use the skill in every instance of our lives. You are at the point in your life where your parents can no longer shelter you from the evils of this world, and the best weapon you have in this competitive and chaotic society is your mind. The ability to appreciate and create sophisticated positions in this world is one that will guide you in every endeavor. 2 What’s In You have learned from the previous module about the features of academic text. Can you still remember them? Do the activity below. Activity 1 Directions: Below are examples of sentences that could be used in writing academic text. Read each sentence and focus on the underlined word/words. Write the word formal if it is a formal sentence and informal if it is not. Write your answer on your notebook. 1. What they’re doing doesn’t seem right to me. 2. Yearly, sales decreased by five percent. 3. Studying abroad provides a great opportunity to learn a foreign language. 4. I hope to get clearer understanding of the issues involved. 5. Prices are continuing to climb year after year. 6. This pandemic has no help for it, we have to be extra careful. 7. The train departed the station on time. 8. I have tried Indian food at once. Activity 2 Avoiding two-word verbs Directions: Rewrite the following sentences, replacing the informal two-word verb with a more formal equivalent. Choose the correct answer from the words written inside the parenthesis. Write your answer in your notebook. 1. The patient got over his illness. (worsen, recover) 2. The chess prodigy completely blew away the reigning world champion. (defeated, overwhelm) 3 3. Their film deal had been abruptly cried off, and now they have to start all over again. (call off, cancel) 4. It’s rude to peel off like that without thanking your host. (leave, walk out) What’s New Activity 1: Individual Work Directions: Look at the surroundings or think of an important person or event. What can say about these things found in your surrounding? What about this important person or event in your life? Choose one of these topics? Write a three-paragraph essay consisting of five (5) sentences or more in each paragraph about the topic you have chosen. Consider the following questions when writing your paragraph. 1. How did you start your essay? 2. What does your essay compose of? 3. What have you realized in connection to how they were structured or formed? 4. Is there any pattern to the writing of your paragraph? 5. How do your ideas divided and presented? What Is It The Structure of Academic Texts Structure is an important feature of academic writing. A well-structured text enables the reader to follow the argument and navigate the text. In academic writing a clear structure and a logical flow are imperative to a cohesive text. Furthermore, in many university assignments the correct use of structure is part of the final assessment. 4 Paragraph development Paragraphs can be structured in different ways. The internal structure of each paragraph often depends on the idea that is treated in that specific paragraph and its relationship to the surrounding paragraphs as well as to the text as a whole. Your topic and the purpose of the paragraph should determine its organization. These organizational patterns are called text structures. The term “text structure” refers to how information is organized in a passage. The structure of a text can change many times in a work and even within a paragraph. For example, if your purpose is to illustrate the differences between two theories, your topic sentence should tell the reader that you are about to contrast two theories. You may then describe first one theory, then the other, and finally contrast the two. NINE MAIN STRUCTURES OF A TEXT 1. Definition- explain the nature of something 2. Description or List Structure- gives concrete details about the appearance, characteristics and actions. This structure resembles an outline. Each section opens with its main idea, then elaborates on it, sometimes dividing the elaboration into subsections. It uses signal words like for example, for instance, specifically, in particular, in addition, characteristics includes, next, another kind, spatial word like near, beyond, over, etc. Example 1: A book may tell all about whales or describe what the geography is like in a particular region. Example 2: Geologists classify types of rocks by closely examining certain characteristics. They often begin by looking at the rock through a magnifying lens to check for crystal structures, luster, and color. Breaking the rock shows specimen’s fracture or cleavage. 3. Order or Sequence Structure - chronological narration. Texts that follow this structure tell the order in which steps in a process or series of events occur. It uses signal words like next, first, 5 last, second, another, then, additionally, dates, events, order, etc. sequential Example 1: A book about the American Revolution might list the events leading to the war. In another book, steps involved in harvesting blue crabs might be told. Example 2: First, Goldilocks sat in the great big, Papa Bear chair, but it was too hard. Then, she sat in the medium sized, Mama bear chair, but it was too soft. Finally, she sat in the little, bitty, Baby Chair, and it was just right. 4. Cause and Effect Structure - presents the reason why a situation is obtained or a link between the way things are now and how they got that way. In texts that follow this structure, the reader is told the result of an event or occurrence and the reasons it happened. Signal words: if/then, reasons, why, because, due to, consequently, therefore, as a result, thereby, leads to, etc. Example 1: Weather patterns could be described that explain why a big snowstorm occurred. Note: The order of stating the cause and effect doesn’t matter. Sometimes, the cause will be presented first, then the effect will follow. Example 2: Cause: During the experiment, Henry poured the liquid bromine into the saline solution. Effect: His hypothesis was proved correct when the solution changed colors. Sometimes, the issues are presented with the effects sited first then the causes are offered as explanation. See next example. Example 3: Effect: The future gorillas in the wild are at risk. Scientists predict that at the present rate of decline, in 30 years all the world’s wild gorillas will be gone. Cause: Gorilla meat is a dietary staple for nearly 12 million people in Africa. 5. Comparison and contrast - presents similarities and differences. Texts that follow this structure tell about the differences and similarities 6 of two or more objects, places, events or ideas by grouping their traits for comparison. Signal words: differ, same, both, on the other hand, however, unlike, like, by contrast, yet, in comparison, although, whereas, similar to, different from, etc. Example 1: A book about ancient Greece may explain how the Spartan women were different from the Athenian women. Example 2: Saturn is the second largest planet in the solar system, much larger than Earth. It is mostly made by hydrogen. It rotates more quickly too. A day on Saturn is only about 10 Earth hours long. But it takes about 30 of our years to make one full trip around the sun. 6. Enumeration - listing parts and characteristics, of examples 7. Problem-Solution - starts off with a negative situation and ends with a positive situation. A problem is presented and followed by the steps to bring about a solution. It uses signal words like problem is, dilemma is, if-then, because, so that, questionanswer, problem is solved, reason why, etc. Example 1: Native American tribes who lived on the central plains had to move from place to place to follow the migrating herds. Since they could not build permanent homes, they invented the teepee which allowed them to move their homes from place to place. 8. Classification - presents groupings, types, classes categories 9. Thesis evidence - argues, points, interpretation 7 What’s More Independent Learning Activity 1 Directions: Read the passage below and answer the following question. Wrigley’s Chewing Gum (1) Wrigley’s chewing gum was actually developed as a premium to be given away with other product rather than as a primary product for sale. As a teenager, William Wrigley Jr. was working for his father in Chicago selling soap that has been manufactured in his father’s factory. The soap was not very popular with merchants because it was priced at 5 cents, and this selling price did not leave a good profit margin for the merchants. Wrigley convinced his father to raise the price to ten cents and to give away cheap umbrellas as a premium for the merchants. This worked successfully, confirming to Wrigley that the use of premium was an effective sales tool. (2) Wrigley then established his own company; in his company he was selling soap as a wholesaler, giving baking soda away as a premium, and using a cook book to promote each deal. Over time, the baking soda and cookbook became more popular than the soap, so Wrigley began a new operation selling baking soda, he soon decided on chewing gum. Once again, when Wrigley realized that the demand for premium was stronger than the demand for the original product, he created the Wm. Wrigley Jr. Company to produce and sell chewing gum. (3) Wrigley started out with two brands of gum, Vassar and Lotta gums, and soon introduced Juicy Fruit and Spearmint. The latter two brands grew in popularity, while the first two were phased out. Juicy Fruit and Spearmint are two of Wrigley’s main brand to this day. Questions: 1. Based on the passage, how does Wrigley’s chewing gum begin? 2. Read the opening paragraph. What does it say about the subject matter? 3. Now read and evaluate the whole passage. What text structure is used to glean the information in the passage? 8 Activity 2 Directions: In an assessment notebook, choose any of the text structures you are confident to use then write a paragraph with five sentences using either of the following topic: a.) “The Hero I Look Up To” b.) “Why I Took the (name of the strand)”. * It will be graded using a rubric below. RUBRIC FOR GRADING Category Text focus Text structure Excellent (4pts) Student demonstrate a clear understanding of the topic and develop the text in a way that is clear for the reader’s understanding Good (3 pts) Students address the topic appropriately and maintain a clear focus. Student show understandin g of the topic. Regular (2 pts) Students address the topic in an appropriate way, but they sometimes wander off. Students demonstrate limited understanding of the topic. Needs to improve (1pt) There is no clear focus in the text. Students do not understand the topic or the points to be followed. Students introduce in detail the subject they are choosing. The text is well divided into paragraphs that refer to different aspect on the subject. Several connectors suited in the chosen text structure is consistently used to add Students identify the subject of the text but only few details are mentioned. The text is divided into paragraphs, referring to the subject matter and are linked into one or two connectors of There is no clear introduction of the subject matter. The paragraphs are divided but there is no clear use of transitions or connectors. Students do not include a concluding part to summarize the text. Students need help to focus on the subject matter. They need some guidelines to learn what information should be included in each paragraph and how to use connectors to link the ideas in each paragraph. 9 qualities of the text. Student include a concluding part to summarize the text. the chosen text structure. Students include a concluding part to summarize the text. Students do not include a concluding part to summarize the text. Language: Vocabulary and Grammar Student use very appropriate and varied adjectives to refer to the subject matter. There is a consistent use of the correct subject-verb agreement in the sentences. Student use some appropriate and varied adjectives to refer to the subject matter. There is a several use of the correct subject-verb agreement in the sentences. Student use few appropriate and varied adjectives to refer to the subject matter. There is a rare use of the correct subjectverb agreement in the sentences. A little bit grammar mistakes are evident. There is no clear understanding of the use of words. Sentences are simple and contain many grammar mistakes. Linguistic conventions Correct use of spelling, punctuation, and capitalization There are few minor errors in spelling, punctuation, and capitalization The text contains several errors in spelling, punctuation, and capitalization There are many errors in spelling, punctuation, and capitalization What I Have Learned I learned that: ❖ A well-structured text enables __________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________ 10 ❖ There are nine main structures of an academic text. These are_______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________. What I Can Do Directions: Below are some of the most current issues our society is experiencing. Choose at least one (1) of the following topics then write an essay about it on a separate sheet of paper. Use any of the text structures to develop your ideas in your paragraph. This is good for 15 points. Refer to the rubrics below. a. ) COVID 19 Pandemic b. ) Teenage pregnancy c. ) Senior High School Curriculum d. ) Philippine crisis RUBRICS: Text focus Excellent (4pts) Student demonstrate a clear understanding of the topic and develop the text in a way that is clear for the reader’s understanding Good (3 pts) Students address the topic appropriately and maintain a clear focus. Student show understanding of the topic. 11 Regular (2 pts) Students address the topic in an appropriate way, but they sometimes wander off. Students demonstrate limited understandin g of the topic. Needs to improve (1pt) There is no clear focus in the text. Students do not understand the topic or the points to be followed. Text structure Students introduce in detail the subject they are choosing. The text is well divided into paragraphs that refer to different aspect on the subject. Several connectors suited in the chosen text structure is consistently used to add qualities of the text. Student include a concluding part to summarize the text. Students identify the subject of the text but only few details are mentioned. The text is divided into paragraphs, referring to the subject matter and are linked into one or two connectors of the chosen text structure. Students include a concluding part to summarize the text. There is no clear introduction of the subject matter. The paragraphs are divided but there is no clear use of transitions or connectors. Students do not include a concluding part to summarize the text. Students need elp to focus on the subject matter. They need some guidelines to learn what information should be included in each paragraph and how to use connectors to link the ideas in each paragraph. Students do not include a concluding part to summarize the text. Language: Vocabulary and Grammar Student use very appropriate and varied adjectives to refer to the subject matter. There is a consistent use of the correct subject-verb agreement in the sentences. Student use some appropriate and varied adjectives to refer to the subject matter. There is a several use of the correct subject-verb agreement in the sentences. Student use few appropriate and varied adjectives to refer to the subject matter. There is a rare use of the correct subject-verb agreement in the sentences. A little bit grammar mistakes are evident. There is no clear understanding of the use of words. Sentences are simple and contain many grammar mistakes. Linguistic conventions Correct use of spelling, punctuation, and capitalization There are few minor errors in spelling, punctuation, and capitalization The text contains several errors in spelling, punctuation, and capitalization There are many errors in spelling, punctuation, and capitalization 12 Assessment Activity 1: Directions: Read the given passages and determine the text structure observed in each text. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper. For numbers 1-4. Choose your answer from the choices below: Compare and contrast Enumeration Problem-solution Cause and Effect 1. Although I raised Marcee and Obbie from puppies, they have completely diverse personalities. Obbie is a six-year-old, male, toy Pomeranian whereas Marcee is a one year old, female, Boston terrier. Obbie is small and soft, unlike Marcee who has bristly hair and is much bigger. Marcee insists on sleeping on the bed, under the covers every night. On the other hand, Obbie will only sleep on the floor, under the bed. Obbie is tremendously loyal and uptight; however, Marcee is hyper and friendly to anyone she meets or sees. Around other dogs, Marcee cowers to the larger dog, yet Obbie will always stand his ground, never giving up until he is scolded. Given that they were both treated the same way all their lives, it is hard to believe that they are so different in everything they do. (Kayla Marie Anfinson, 2005) 2. The lack of rain has horrible effects on farmers. With no rain their land dries up, and it is very difficult to grow anything. When the crops fail, the farmers haven’t any choice but to get a second job in order to make the money they need. Farming is a fulltime job and with a second job, farmers are overworked, stressed, and even depressed. Many farmers end up sellig their land. Some farmers have accepted the government program which is the Conservation Reserve Program (CRP), where the land is left idle to let the grass grow and must be left idle a certain number of years. While the land is in the CRP program, some farmers have taken outside jobs. That is why when it doesn’t rain, you notice that most of the farmers are very crabby. As a farmer’s daughter, I have experienced some good times and bad times. I have gained a great respect for farmers everywhere. (Laura White, 2005). 13 3. Bullying may lead to various drastic consequences that may greatly affect a child’s life. One way of stopping bullying is through the solution of campaigns and seminars regarding the effects of bullying. The audience should be bullies themselves and it should discuss the many negative results of this horrid act on victims. Statistics show that most bullies are not aware of these outcomes. Bullying is continued because teens who take part in this horrid act experience pleasure in the feeling of superiority. Once bullies realize the outcomes of the action, hopefully cases lessen. 4. There are a number of good reasons for immigrating to Finland. First, everyone speaks English (though they’re not very talkative). Second, Finland has a superior, free health system (if you don’t mind the long lines) and all education is free (and you get what you pay for). In addition, most public transport is free (except if you get caught). A third reason is that Finns are friendly, outgoing people (when they’re intoxicated). Finns also value equality between the sexes (so, no opening of doors for the fairer sex). Finally, where else except in Finland can you swim outside during the winter (through a hole in the ice). For numbers 5-8. Choose your answer from the choices below: Problem-solution Order or Sequence Compare and contrast Description 5. The old car slowly chugged down on the street like the caboose of a stream engine train. The car goes up the hill it goes Kaboom, kerchunk. The car is old and weathered with rust covering the entire body like cancer consuming its victim. Wheels and tires wobble like a drunk bum on his way home from the bar. Hub caps are gone along with all the mirrors and extras on the car. Black smoke flows out the rotten tail pipes like smoke out of and old cob pipe. The local junk yard had seen better cars than this. The interior was dusty brown with holes covering almost every square inch of the seat covers. The ceiling was hanging down and the rust had eaten through the roof like a Billy goat through a tin can. This old car is my old car and it is as faithful as a good old dog by always starting and getting me from where I need to go. (Jace Oeleis, 2005) 6. Although VCI and Qwest have some similarities, they are also very different. VCI charges a $150 connection fee that you pay $25 the first time, and $10 a month addition to your regular phone bill for 1 year. They charge $ 15 a month for local service plus tax; in addition, they offer call waiting, three way calling, and caller Id. There is no long distance offered in this package. The bill would total anywhere from $35 to $45 a month. If your bill is late, they charge an additional $10 for a late fee; on the other hand, Qwest offers no connection fee for service and free local calls for the first three months with no 14 deposit, just for hooking up service with them. They charge $15 a month for local service + tax with voice mail, call waiting, and caller Id. They also offer unlimited long distance $20 a month. They charge no late fees for late payments; however, with long distance the bill would total about $50 a month. Both VCI and Qwest offer necessary service to the public. However, their service rates are different. (Rubyee Brown, 2005) 7. When a river receives a lot of extra water it may flood. During a flood there is plenty of water, and most people wouldn’t think that dehydration was a serious risk, but flood waters are mostly polluted and not safe to drink. People who drink the contaminated water may suffer from illness or diseases such as typhoid. You can prepare for flooding by filling many containers with fresh clean drinking water. You can also use sandbags to protect your house and to soak up the water. Be prepared and be safe. 8. Once upon a time, there was a girl named Goldilocks. She went for a walk in the forest. Pretty soon, she came upon a house. Then, upon entering the house she first eats three bowls of porridge sitting on the table. Then, she tests out three different chairs to see which one is the most comfortable. After that escapade, she goes upstairs to lie down in each of the three beds. Sure enough, three bears come home and express horror over the fact that someone’s been eating their porridge and sitting in their chairs. When they make their way upstairs and find her lying in Baby Bear’s bed, Goldilocks screams, “Help!” and runs out of the room, never to return. Activity 2 Directions: Read each passage. Write a sentence explaining the main idea of the text and identify how the text is being organized in the passage, choose whether it is organized through definition, description, sequence, cause and effect, comparison and contrast, enumeration problem solution, classification or thesis evidence. (2 pts each) 1. Being a clown isn’t all fun and games. Rodeo clowns expose themselves to create danger every time they perform. When cowboys dismount or are bucked off of bulls at riding competitions, rodeo clowns jump in front of the bulls and motion wildly to get their attention. In this way rodeo clowns provide an alternate target, and in doing so protect the rider. So you see, sometimes clowning around can be serious business. 2. The wolverine, a medium sized mammal weighing no more than 50 lbs., has earned its reputation for ferocity with its documented ability to kill prey 15 many times its size. The reason why wolverines have so many conflicts with other animals (including wolves, cougars, and even bears) is probably because of the wolverine’s preferred hunting style. Rather than chasing down or tricking its prey like most hunters, the wolverine prefers to take its meals directly from other hunters. So while a polar bear or a lone wolf might be enjoying a hard earned carcass, a hungry wolverine may try to take his lunch. This keeps the wolverine in plenty of fights. 3. What’s that humming sound? Could it be hummingbird, the only bird capable of backward flight? Hummingbirds have may uniquely flight habits that distinguish them from other birds. Most birds flap their wings up and down to fly, but the hummingbirds move their wings forward and backward very rapidly in a figure eight pattern. This allows the hummingbird to hover in position, fly upside down, and move about very rapidly. And while other birds have to push off with their feet to begin flying, and work their ways up to their top speeds, the hummingbird can both start flying at maximum speed and stop flying instantaneously. After you’ve seen a hummingbird in flight, it’s unlikely that you’ll mistake them for another bird. 16 Answer Key What I Know A. 1. Definition 5. Cause and Effect 2. Order or Sequence structure 6. Description 3. Problem-Solution 7. Classification 4. Comparison and Contrast 8. Thesis Evidence B. a. 3 b. 1 c. 2 *What’s In Activity 1 Activity 2 1. Informal 5. Informal 1. Recover 2. Formal 6. Informal 2. Defeated 3. Formal 7. Formal 3. Cancel 4. Informal 8. Informal 4. Leave What’s More This is an essay type of test, and answers of students may vary. 1. Wrigleys chewing gum began as a premium to be given away with other product rather than as a primary product for sale. 2. The opening paragraph is describing and narrating how the subject matter began as a product. It also describes how the author establish his own company through the use of premium as an effective sales tool. 17 3. The whole passage is using order or sequence structure. It is narrating how Wrigley’s chewing gum began and developed. There are also signal words used in the paragraphs that shows chronological order. What I Can Do Student’s answer may vary. The teacher may refer to the rubrics provided. Assessment (Post-Test) Activity 1 1. Compare and Contrast 5.Description 2. Cause and Effect 6. Compare and Contrast 3. Problem- Solution 7. Problem-Solution 4. Enumeration 8. Order or Sequence Activity 2 This is also an essay type of test. Your answer may vary as long as the idea is there, it depends how you and your teacher discuss about it. 1. This passage is about how Rodeo clowns protect bull riders. It is organized as cause and effect. This passage also could be arguably organized as problem and solution. 2. This passage is about how wolverines rob other animals of their meals. It is organized as cause and effect. 3. This passage is about the unique flying abilities of the hummingbird. It is organized as compare and contrast. 18 References: “How to Write an Essay”(n.p.,n.d.). Accessed July 3, 2020. https://en.wikibooks.org/w/index.php?title=How_to_Write_an_Essay/P arts&oldid=3550127 Linnaues University.(2018). Features of Academic Writing. Accessed December 17, 2018 https://lnu.se/en/library/Writing-and-referencing/thestructure-of-ademic-texts/ National Education Association.(n.d.).Using Text Structure. http://www.nea.org/tools/using-text-structure-37339145. 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