SPORTS WRITING Zenon Roderick U. Yabis Aringin Elementary School Presenter Sports reporting is sports writing. It has the structure of an action story. Sports writing is livelier because the writer deals with physical movement and action. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Encourage students to read sports page as often as possible. Direct the students to have a compilation of sports stories they like. The more diverse the articles, the better. Instruct them to gather sports vocabulary (verbs, adjectives, phrases) from articles they have gathered. Examples of Sports Verbs (strong verbs) Win bag grab harvest sweep triumph clinch Defeat beat rip nip batter over power crush Examples of Sports Verbs (strong verbs) Filipino nanalo nakamit namayani napasakamay namayagpag nanguna nasungkit natalo dinurog pinulbos ginapi pinatulog pinatumba pinataob Sports Lingo or Sports Jargon Basketball- five, quintet, shot, lay up, double team, rainbow territory 15-foot line, technical foul, man to man, follow up, tip-in press Volleyball – Spikes, neat placing, full back, corner, wallop, block spiker, booming service net ball, two out of three Sports Lingo or Sports Jargon Badminton- smash, let, netting, forehand, backhand, service over, backline, change end, tip in, net, footwork, shuttlecock, fault, love all, match point, game point. Chess- middle game, end game, pawn, bishop, knight, rook, king’s side, queen side, castling, Sicilian defense, Queen’s gambit, Ruy Lopez opening. Sports lingo or sports jargon A head-to-head matches Best of three series Split decision Power hitting Tough defense Daring drive Runaway win Slowly but surely pulled away Sports Lingo or Sports Jargon Big defensive play A real close game Remained undefeated Exciting series To notch their three straight victory An inspiring come-from behind 55-45-win Sports Lingo (Filipino) Lalong nabaon Matapos magmintis Nagkamada ng 20 puntos Sinungkit Humataw Kinapus ng hininga Matapos masilat ng… Kung saan nagbida si… matinik na kalaban Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Coach them to use the words they have gathered in sentence form. Teach the students how to read for sentence structure. The standard sports story sentence is in the active voice. (S-TV-DO+modifier) Example: Ateneo Blue Eagles outlasted the FEU Tamaraws 85-83 when Chris Tiu sank a tie -breaking lay up with 8.2 seconds left in overtime last night at the Araneta Coliseum. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Teach the students how to read for sentence structure. The standard sports story sentence is in the active voice. (S-TVDO+modifier. In Filipino however, the pattern is: verb +subject+details Example: Bumulsa ng record breaking performance si John Wilson nang trangkuhan ang JRU Bombers sa pagdurog sa St. Benilde, 95-85 kahapon upang isulong ang kanilang FinalFour bid sa 85th NCAA basketball tournament sa The Arena, San Juan City. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Drill the students to experiment on composing compound and complex sentences. Example: Ateneo Blue Eagles outlasted the FEU Tamaraws 85-83. There were only 8.2 seconds left in overtime. Chris Tiu sank a tie -breaking lay up. The game was played last night at the Araneta Coliseum. Ateneo Blue Eagles outlasted the FEU Tamaraws 85-83 when Chris Tiu sank a tie -breaking lay up with 8.2 seconds left in overtime last night at the Araneta Coliseum. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Require the students to compile sample sports stories. Encourage them to watch sporting events on TV and during live games situations. Assist them how take down notes. Help them how to analyze data. Teach them how to ask questions before and after the game. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Drill them how to write sports stories even if the material is fiction based. Tell your students that reading is key to becoming an effective and efficient writer. Always bear in mind that the sports story: A. is a result-oriented B. is written is active voice and in the simple past tense. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Always bear in mind that the sports story: C. is a visual report, thus the need for more description. D. follows the structure of a straight news-the inverted pyramid. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Always bear in mind that the sports story: E. has a standard lead format that answers the 5W’s. Who won? Against whom? By what score? When? And Where? Example: The FEU Tamaraws crushed the Adamson University Falcons, 84-75, yesterday during their game played at the Araneta Coliseum. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills F. the sports lead may play up any of the following features: 1. Significance of the game a. Did the team clinch the championship? b. Did the team qualify for the finals? c. Did the team exact revenge? Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills Significance of the game Example: The FEU Tamaraws gored the Adamson Falcons, 85-75, during their UAAP men’s basketball tournament game played yesterday at the Araneta Coliseum to secure a slot in the final four. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills F. the sports lead may play up any of the following features: 2. Spectacular Performance or Play a. shooting a game-high 30 points, for example b. a series of three pointers Spectacular Performance or Play Example: Diana Munz, a 15-year old sophomore, beat 17-year-old US Olympic gold medalist Brooke Benette in a heartbreaking 800-meter freestyle with 65 seconds leads in the US Open championship Saturday. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills F. the sports lead may play up any of the following features: 3. Hero of the game a. a steal on a dying seconds of the game to break a tie. Practical tips on how to improve students’ sports writing skills G. Body includes: 1. Focus on the winning moment. 2. Use a quotation from the winning coach or player. 3. Cite stats of the game’s best player/hero. 4. Highlight losing side’s best moment. 5. How the winners rallied. THANK YOU! SAMPLE EXERCISE: Sports Writing Araneta Coliseum 5th GMA Men’s Volleyball Tournament 2,000 in attendance October 20, 2009 UST is the defending champion and has 4-0 record UP has a record of 3-1 before the match Winning team advances to the semi-final round Team I II UST UP 14 25 15 25 III IV 25 21 25 21 V 29 27