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Flood diagram
Paragraph 1
The figure/picture/diagram/flaw chart illustrates the process of…
Paragraph 2 (overall information)
It is clear that the process consists of … steps/stages, beginning with…
It is also noticed that the process is then do something (the names of the steps).
Or It is also noticed that something (e.g. animals, subjects and so on) be done.
Or it is clear that the process consists of … steps/stages, from… to…
Paragraph 3 (detail of each stages/steps)
In the beginning of this process, …
At the first stage in this process, …
This step/stage lasts … minutes/hours/days.
After that, …
After some treatments, …
Follow this, …
Subsequently, …
At stage two, …
At the … steps (names of the steps or the number of this stage), …
During the … steps, …
The diagram illustrates the whole process of brick manufacturing in the building industry.
It is clear that the process consists of 6 steps, beginning with collecting clay by digger. After several stages
of processing, the bricks are finally packaged, and delivered by the transport.
At the first stage of the process, the clay which is the original material of bricks is collected by the digger.
After that, the clay is filtered by the metal grid, and the particles with smaller size are transferred by the
wheel roller. Follow this, there are two ways provided to fabricate the bricks with the additions of sand and
water. One of them is using the wire cutter to cut the bulk into small size. Another is using particular mould
to form the appearance.
At the third stage, the semi-finished products needed to be dry in the special oven. This step costs 24 to
48 hours. After this, the bricks need to be kilned in the moderate temperature of 200-980 degree first, and
then put in the high temperature of 870-1300 degree for the same purpose. Subsequently, the cooling
treatment is conducted in the chamber, lasting48-72 hours. After this step, the fabrication of bricks is
finished. Finally, the bricks are packaged and sent to the costomers.
The pie chart gives the information about the initial occupations of anthropology graduates from one
university after graduation. The table represents (presents?) the salaries of the students majored in
Anthropology after a 5-year work.
Overall, over half of students chose a full-time work to make a living. The majority of students had a
high salary of more than 75000 dollars in three different employments.
According to the pie chart, it is clear that the the students engaging in full-time work accounted for the
highest proportion of 52% of the total. Looking at the information for more details, 15% of the graduated
students chose the part-time job after their undergraduate lessons. The unemployed students rank the
third highest proportion in this university, at 12%. The proportion of students who chose the full-time study,
uncertain destination and part-time job together with postgraduate study were below 10%, which
accounted for 8%, 8% and 5% respectively.
In terms of the table, it shows the details about the salaries of students who were employed by
freelance consultants, government sector or private companies. lt can be seen that the minority of
students who had a career in freelance consultants and government sector had a low salaries of 2500049999 dollars while the 95% of them gain the money beyond 50000 dollars.
In addition, the salaries in
private companies seemed to be distributed evenly. The proportion of each levels were 10%, 35%, 25%,
and 30% respectively.
Turning to the table, freelance consultants were overwhelmingly employed in the upper pay scales
at 40% in both $75,000 – $99,999 and $100,000+, with just 20% making between $25,000 and $74,999.
Government employees displayed a broadly similar pattern with identical figures at the two lowest pay
bands, 30% in the $75,000 to $99,999 range, and 50% earning over a hundred thousand dollars a year.
Private industry salaries diverged generally with 10% in the lowest income range, a striking 35% earning
$50,000 to $74,999, while 25% and 30% of graduates made $75,000 – $99,999 and $100,000+,
respectively.
Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health
problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, in order to meet with the requirements of people's favor, the food industry tends to add high
volume of sugar in drink and food products that deteriorate customers’ health simultaneously. There is an
argument about if we need to raise the prices of these products to decrease the demand of sugary goods
and prevent the healthy body from the them. I definitely disagree to make the products expensive.
On the one hand, it is necessary for people to eat these kinds of food or drinks properly. This is the point
why l disagree to make those products expensive. Firstly, the high levels of sugar in the food is good for
our health. Based on my observation, the majority of women always worries about low level of blood
glucose in the morning. In this case, the food with high level of sugar can effectively increase the blood
sugar to make them refresh. Secondly, people can re-gain the sense of happiness in daily life by intaking
in daily life, especially when they feel exhausted and stress-out. Moreover, the food with sugar and tasty
flavor acts as a role to calm down the little kids. lf the people limit the quantity of sugar in food, the
advantages of them can overtake the drawbacks they bring.
On the other hand, the healthy problems can not only blame the high levels of sugar in the products, which
means increasing the prices can not solve the problems essentially. In order to avoid the harmful effects
of sugar, people need to develop the conscious to limit the input of sugar in their daily life. Besides,
keeping a healthy lifestyle is the key of having a healthy body.In conclusion, the food and drinks with
sugars have their own effects for individuals, so it is unrealistic to raise the price. More important thing for
people to keep health is having a good lifestyle.
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