9 marker proforma
Level 3
A good response overall that focuses on many of the demands of the question Provides an
answer to the question set that: demonstrates a depth and range of knowledge and
understanding of issues in the question. Demonstrates analysis which is well developed and
is applied effectively to the context.
7-9
Level 2
A reasonable response overall that focuses on some of the demands of the question
Provides an answer to the question set that: demonstrates limited knowledge and
understanding of a range of issues in the question or good knowledge and understanding of
relatively few issues in the question. Demonstrates analysis which is developed and is
applied to the context.
4-6
Level 1
A limited response overall with little focus on the demands of the question Provides an
answer to the question set that: demonstrates a limited range and depth of knowledge and
understanding of issues in the question. Demonstrates analysis with little development and
with mainly descriptive application to the context.
1-3
To up-level my work I need to………
Well done on:
Method
Understanding of
option A
Understanding of
option B
Using which means
Having three
paragraphs
Good SPaG
Read the best practice answer to see how it should have
been done
Your method was incorrect, you needed two paragraphs.
Now include your missing paragraph.
You haven’t said which means after your points, where I have
highlighted your work you now need to explain this point.
Correct your literacy errors
Your understanding of the knowledge is incorrect, give a
definition to show you now understand the main points in
the question.
You have not applied your answer to the case study/business
scenario. Please enter application into your answer.
Each paragraph needs two points. Add an extra point to your
paragraph.
Re-write paragraph 1
Re-write paragraph 2
Using the case study
Having a well backed
up evaluation
Stretching yourself by
adding a depends on
Clearly reading
around the topic