Lesson 2 Book 1 Hiroshima — the “Liveliest” City in Japan (Excerpts) Jacques Danvoir Contents Ⅰ. Background Info Ⅱ. Text Analysis Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis Ⅳ. Writing Devices Ⅴ. Exercise Ⅰ. Background Info How much do you know about World War II? Ⅰ. Background Info World War II https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1Z5411p7Ct/?spm_id_from=333.337 .searchcard.all.click&vd_source=3541ab327199f2384595c460fef6b24f Ⅰ. Background Info World War II Time 1939-1945 1939 The exact date of start is not universally agreed upon. It is generally considered that in Europe World War II started on 1 September 1939, when Nazi Germany, under Adolf Hitler, invaded Poland. The dates for the beginning of the war in the Pacific include the start of the Second Sino-Japanese War on 7 July 1937, or the earlier Japanese invasion of Manchuria, on 18 September 1931. 1945 The exact date of the war's end is also not universally agreed upon. It was generally accepted at the time that the war ended with the armistice of 14 August 1945 (V-J Day), rather than with the formal surrender of Japan on 2 September 1945, which officially ended the war in Asia. A peace treaty between Japan and the Allies was signed in 1951. Ⅰ. Background Info Two opposing military alliances The Allies (同盟国阵营) The Soviet Union, officially the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR) The Axis Powers (轴心国阵营) Nazi Germany (1933-1943) Nazi Party controlled the country The United States of America (USA) The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, commonly known as the United Kingdom (UK) The Republic of China (ROC) (1912 - 1949) The Empire of Japan (the Japanese Empire or Imperial Japan) Fascist Italy; The Kingdom of Italy was governed by the National Fascist Party from 1922 to 1943 Ⅰ. Background Info Commanders & Leaders The Allies (同盟国阵营) The Axis Powers(轴心国阵营) Joseph Stalin Adolf Hitler Franklin D.Roosevelt Hirohito Winston Churchill Benito Mussolini Chiang Kai-shek Ⅰ. Background Info Major Events 30 Jan, 1933 Adolf Hitler becomes chancellor of Germany and his Nazi Party takes power 25 Oct, 1936 Rome-Berlin Axis coalition formed (Italy & Germany). Later it includes Japan 7 July, 1937 Japan invades China 12 Mar, 1938 Hitler indexes the country of Austria into Germany (Angules) 1 Sep, 1939 Germany invaded Poland. World War 2 begins. 17 Sep, 1939 Soviet Union invades Poland. Ⅰ. Background Info Major Events 30 Sep, Treaty of Munich 慕尼黑阴谋 1938 Mar Hitler invades Czechoslovakia 1939 Late Aug Russia and Germany sign pact 苏德互不侵犯条约 1939 Apr-May, Germany invaded Denmark and Norway 1940 May-Jun, Battle of Dunkirk (Operation Dynamo) 敦刻尔克战役; 1940 敦刻尔克大撤退 Jun 1940 Paris falls to Nazis. France signs armistice with Germany 法国投降 Ⅰ. Background Info Major Events 40 May, 1940 Winston Churchill becomes British Prime Minister July-Oct, Battle of Britain 大不列颠之战 (Nazi Germany's 1940 planned invasion of Britain: Operation Sealion 海狮计 划) 22 Jun, 1941 Operation Barbarossa (invasion of USSA) 巴巴罗萨行 动 7 Dec, 1941 The Attact on Pearl Harbor 偷袭珍珠港 & U.S. plunged into war 4 Jun, 1942 Battle of Midway 中途岛战役 23 Oct 1942 Battle of El Alamein 阿拉曼战役 Ⅰ. Background Info Major Events 10 July, 1943 Allied invasion of Sicily 西西里岛战役 3 Sep, 1943 Italy surrendered 6 June, 1944 D-day in Normandy(Normandy landings); the Allied invasion of Normandy 诺曼底登陆 16 Dec, 1944 Battle of the Bulge 突出部之役 / 阿登战役 19 Feb, 1945 Battle of Iwo Jima 硫磺岛战役 23 Mar, 1945 Operation Plunder Ⅰ. Background Info Major Events 28 Apr 1945 Mussolini captured and executed 30 Apr, 1945 Hitler committed suicide & On 7 May 1945 Germany surrendered unconditionally 6 Aug, 1945 An atomic bomb dropped over hiroshima (little boy) 9 Aug, 1945 A second atom bomb is dropped at Nagasaki (fat man) 2 Sep, 1945 Japan formally surrendered, the end of WW2 Oct 1945 The UN was established Ⅰ. Background Info Hiroshima is the capital of Hiroshima Prefecture in Japan. Ⅰ. Background Info On 6 and 9 August 1945, respectively, the United States dropped atomic bombs on the Japanese cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. Ⅰ. Background Info Hiroshima https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1ua411T7WB/?spm_id_from=33 3.337.searchcard.all.click&vd_source=3541ab327199f2384595c460fef6b24f Ⅰ. Background Info Ⅰ. Background Info On 6 August, a Little Boy was dropped on Hiroshima A post-war Little Boy model Ⅰ. Background Info Three days later, a Fat Man was dropped on Nagasaki. Mockup of the original weapon: Fat Man Ⅱ. Text Analysis Introduction • “Hiroshima — the ‘Liveliest’ City in Japan (Excerpts)” is a piece of feature story or simply a feature, a type of journalistic writing. It is a piece of writing about a subject in a newspaper or a magazine, or a special report on television or on the radio. The one we are studying was presented on an American radio program. Ⅱ. Text Analysis • Feature stories are usually compared with (hard) news stories, which must be objective and timely. Generally, they differ in four aspects: Ⅱ. Text Analysis The Lede /liːd/ (beginning) A feature lede doesn’t have to include who, what, where, when and why in the very first paragraph, the way a hardnews lede does. Instead, a feature lede can use description or an anecdote to set up the story. And a feature lede can run for several paragraphs instead of just one. Ⅱ. Text Analysis Pace Feature stories often employ a more leisurely pace than news stories. Features take time to tell a story, instead of rushing through it the way news stories often seem to do. Length Taking more time to tell a story means using more space, which is why features are usually, though not always, longer than hard news articles. Ⅱ. Text Analysis A Focus on the Human Element If news stories tend to focus on events, then features tend to focus more on people. Features are designed to bring the human element into the picture, which is why many editors call features “people stories”. Ⅱ. Text Analysis • “Hiroshima — the ‘Liveliest’ City in Japan” is about a place — Hiroshima. The writer’s arrival by shinkansen at the railway station constitutes the lede. • To get to the City Hall, the writer took a cab and enjoyed his leisurely pace in depicting the process of reaching his destination. • The mayor’s reception and the writer’s visit to the atomic ward in the hospital highlight the human element of this feature story. Ⅱ. Text Analysis Theme The feature records the writer’s (an American) personal experience in Hiroshima, the first city bombed by A-bomb, trying to reveal the dual character of Hiroshima: • the coexistence of liveliness and • hidden pain, the result of the bomb. Ⅱ. Text Analysis Text Organization • Part 1 (Paras. 1-27): The writer’s arrival at Hiroshima and his attendance at the city mayor’s reception. • Part 2 (Paras. 28-39): The writer’s short visit to the atomic section of a hospital in Hiroshima and what he has seen, heard and understood on this trip. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 1. Hiroshima-the“Liveliest”City in Japan (Title) • The word “liveliest” is put in quotation marks to show that this is what the city is said to be and the writer perhaps considers it ironic to use the word “liveliest” to describe a city that had been destroyed by an atomic bomb. The article is about the dual character of Hiroshima, the coexistence of liveliness and hidden pain the result of the bomb. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 2. “Hiroshima! Everybody off!” (Para. 1) • 1) Everybody off: Everybody should now get off the train. • 2) These words were shouted by the stationmaster to inform the passengers that the train had arrived at its terminal destination and all passengers were to detrain. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 3. That must be...slipped to a stop in Hiroshima Station. (Para. 1) • 1) “Must" here expresses strong probability as the author did not understand Japanese and could not have been sure. • 2) in the Japanese stationmaster's uniform: • in: (of dress) wearing something • e.g. in white; in mourning; in rags; in silk • stationmaster: the official in charge of a railway station Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 3. That must be...slipped to a stop in Hiroshima Station. (Para. 1) • 3) slip to a stop: to come to a stop smoothly and effortlessly in a gliding manner. • 4) slide, slip, glide: • Slide implies accelerated motion without losing contact with the slippery surface. • Slip often suggests the action is involuntary rather than voluntary sometimes even definitely implying a loss of footing and a fall. • Glide, rather close to slide, means to move smoothly, quietly and continuously as is characteristic of dances. • e.g. A plane glided down to the airfield. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 4. And secondly, because I had a lump in my throat and a lot of sad thoughts...might say. (Para.1) • 1) I had a lump in my throat: I was choked with emotion; I was so overcome with emotion that I could not speak or think clearly. • 2) a lump in one’s throat: a feeling of pressure in one's throat caused by repressed emotion. • 3) a lot of sad thoughts on my mind: I was troubled about some sad events; I was occupied with some sad thoughts. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 4. And secondly, because I had a lump in my throat and a lot of sad thoughts...might say. (Para.1) • 4) on one's mind: occupying one's thoughts, especially as a source of worry. • 5) have to do with: to be a concern of; to be about; to be connected with. • 6) My sad thoughts had no connection with what the stationmaster might say. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 5. The very act of stepping on this soil…any reportorial assignment..taken. (Para.1) • 1) stepping on this soil: putting my feet down on this soil; landing in Hiroshima • 2) far greater: adverbial modifiers of adjective or adverb in the comparative degree • e.g. far more; even more; still more; a lot more; much more; two years older; a head taller Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 5. The very act of stepping on this soil…any reportorial assignment..taken. (Para.1) • 4) adventure: an unusual journey or an exciting or remarkable experience. • 5) reportorial assignment; reporting work for a newspaper. • The fact that I was now in Hiroshima was in itself a much more exciting experience for me than any trip I had taken or any reporting work I had done in the past. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 6. Was I not at the scene of the crime? (Para.1) • 1) scene: place of an actual event. • 2) the crime: the dropping of the A-bomb on Hiroshima. • 3) Rhetorical questions are usually asked only for effect, as to emphasize a point, no answer being expected. • I was now at the place where the first A-bomb was dropped Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 7. Information provided in the first paragraph? • 1) The author was here on a reportorial mission. • 2) Hiroshima was not the author's first assignment. • 3) He was preoccupied with some sad thoughts-the crime of the A-bomb. He was tortured by a guilty conscience. • 4) He didn't understand Japanese. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 8. The Japanese crowd...that I had. (Para. 2) • 1) did not appear to have: did not seem to have. • 2) The author could not have been absolutely sure that the Japanese crowd did not have the same preoccupations. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 8. The Japanese crowd...that I had. (Para. 2) • 3) seem, look, appear: • Seem suggests a personal opinion based on evidence that satisfies the judgment. • Look implies that the opinion is based on a visual impression. • Appear may convey the same implication as look, but it sometimes suggests a distorted impression produced by an optical illusion, a restricted point of view, etc. • e.g. The setting sun made the spires appear ablaze. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 9. From the sidewalk...things seemed much the same as in other Japanese cities. (Para. 2) • 1) sidewalk chiefly used in the U.S.; (British) pavement; (New Zealand) footpath. • 2) much the same: about the same; “much” here tones down rather than emphasizes the word “same.” • 3) Seem is used to indicate that things are actually not so. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 10. Little girls...in Western dress. (Para.2) • This sentence gives the impression that in Japan traditional style and Western style exist side by side. • 1) elderly: approaching old age, past middle age. • 2) rub shoulders with: (informal) to meet and mix with (people) • e.g. The foreign visitors said that they would like to rub shoulders with ordinary Chinese people. • During those two terms at the boarding school, she rubbed shoulders with the rich. • 3) teenager: boy or girl from 13 to 19 Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 11. Serious looking men...“Tomo aligato gozayimas.” (Para.2) • 1) be oblivious of/to: to be unaware of. • She seemed completely oblivious to the noise around her • 2) bob up and down repeatedly in little bows: to bow repeatedly • bob up and down: to move up and down automatically (humorous description of the bows) • 3) ritual: all the rites or forms connected with a ceremony; particular form of any procedure regularly followed; here used as an adjective meaning “done as a rite” Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 11. Serious looking men...“Tomo aligato gozayimas.” (Para.2) • 4) formula of gratitude and respect: form of words used regularly such as “Thank you,” “Excuse me”. • They were so absorbed in their conversation that they seemed not to pay any attention to the crowds about them. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 12. Others were using little red telephones that hung on...shops. (Para.2) • 1) facade: front or face of building toward a street or open place. • 2) grocery store: a store where tea, butter, sugar, tinned food and such household requirements as soap and soap powder are sold Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 13. cab driver (Para.3) • (mainly American English) taxi driver. • We might infer from the use of such words as “sidewalk,” “store” and “cab driver” that the author is most likely an American. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 14. ...whose door popped open at the very sight of a traveler. (Para.3) • 1) pop open: to burst open with a short, sharp, slightly explosive sound. • 2) at the sight of: on seeing • As soon as the taxi driver saw a traveler, he immediately opened the door Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 15. City Hall (Para.3) • a building which houses the offices of a municipal government. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 16. He grinned at me in the rearview mirror….(Para.3) • 1) grin: to smile broadly as to show teeth, originally expressing amusement, foolish satisfaction or contempt, etc, but in current English, tending to imply naive cheerfulness. • 2) rearview mirror: driving-mirror inside a motor-vehicle for seeing out of the rear window Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 17. We set off at top speed... (Para.3) • set off: to start a journey race, etc. • The taxi-driver drove very fast. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 18. The tall building of the martyred city.….in response to...the wheel. (Para.3) • 1) martyred city: the city that has been made to suffer. • 2) flash by: to pass swiftly • 3) lurch: to roll or sway suddenly forward or to one side • 4) in response to: as a response to • 5) sharp twist: abrupt change of direction Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 18. The tall building of the martyred city.….in response to...the wheel. (Para.3) • The high buildings passed swiftly and when the driver made abrupt changes of direction, we sometimes swung to one side, sometimes to the other side in response to the swaying motion of the car. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 19. Just as I was beginning to find the ride long….went over to a policeman to ask the way. (Para.4) • 1) ride: a period of travel, especially a journey by horse, car, bicycle, bus, etc. • 2) the taxi screeched to a halt: The taxi stopped with a harsh piercing sound as when the brakes were suddenly applied. • screech: to make a harsh, piercing sound (cf.slip to a stop; come to a stop; grind to a stop) Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 20. ...but to avoid loss of face...how long it may take them to find it. (Para.4) • 1) loss of face: inability to keep up dignity, self-respect, prestige; loss of reputation; humiliation. Saving face is considered as a common trait of Eastern cultures. • 2) will accept any destination without concern for: will agree to go where they are asked to without caring Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 21. At last this intermezzo came to an end, and I found myself...City Hall. (Para.5) • 1) intermezzo: a short, light dramatic, musical or ballet entertainment between the acts of a play or opera; here the word is used figuratively to refer to anything that fills time between two events-the cab ride that took place between his arrival at Hiroshima and his planned meeting with the mayor. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 21. At last this intermezzo came to an end, and I found myself...City Hall. (Para.5) • 2) I found myself: This pattern gives the idea of “suddenness” and “unexpectedness”; I suddenly discovered that I was in front of the gigantic City Hall. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 22. The usher bowed deeply...in response to my request for an interview (Para.5) • 1) usher: someone who shows people to their seats at a theater, cinema, a wedding etc. • 2) heave a sigh: to utter a sigh. • The usher uttered a sigh perhaps because many people had gone there wrongly before the author and he had to explain once again. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 23. sketch a map (Para.6) • to draw roughly and quickly with outlines but little detail. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 24. Thanks to his map...with a roof like one on a Japanese house was moored. (Para.7) • 1) thanks to: on account of; because of. • 2) embankment: a raised bank built to confine a river or canal. • 3) barge: a large flat-bottomed boat for carrying goods or people on rivers or canals • 4) a sort of: used to suggest that what is referred to does not fully deserve the name; a kind of; something like a... Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 24. Thanks to his map...with a roof like one on a Japanese house was moored. (Para.7) • 5) moor: to secure a boat with cables. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 25. The rather arresting spectacle…between the kimono and the miniskirt. (Para.7) • 1) arresting: striking; attracting and holding the attention. • 2) spectacle: sight, view or scene • 3) the rather arresting spectacle of little old Japan: the rather striking picture of traditional Japan. • 4) adrift: afloat without control at the mercy of wind and sea; floating freely without being steered Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 25. The rather arresting spectacle…between the kimono and the miniskirt. (Para.7) • 5) beige: brownish grey or grayish yellow (the color of sandstone). • 6) concrete: cement mixed with sand and gravel, etc • 7) skyscraper: 摩天大楼; “scrape” means “to touch.” • 8) struggle between the kimono and the miniskirt “Kimono” and “miniskirt” here are used as symbols representing the “old” and the “new” or the East and the West. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 25. The rather arresting spectacle…between the kimono and the miniskirt. (Para.7) • The traditional floating houses among high modern buildings are also used as symbols to represent the constant struggle between old tradition (traditional culture) and new development(Western style). Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 26. a stunning, porcelain-faced woman...my shoes. (Para.8) • 1) stunning: very attractive; delightfully beautiful • 2) porcelain-faced: using the traditional white make-up; a face with a fair delicate complexion • 3) remove: to take off Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 27. ...treading cautiously on the soft tatami matting...in my socks. (Para.8) • 1) tread: to move on foot; to walk. • 2) cautious: careful to avoid danger, harm • 3) a twinge of embarrassment: a sudden sharp feeling of shame • 4) at the prospect of: at the expectation of Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 27. ...treading cautiously on the soft tatami matting...in my socks. (Para.8) • 5) experiencing a twinge of embarrassment...in my socks: suffering from a strong feeling of shame when I thought of the prospect of meeting the mayor of Hiroshima in my socks. • I was not accustomed to walking in my socks so I walked carefully, fearing that something unpleasant or dangerous might happen. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 28. sad-eyed (Para.9) • looking sad. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 29. the strange emotion which had overwhelmed me at the station returned. (Para.9) • I was again overcome by a guilty conscience as I had been when I first arrived at the station. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 30. I was again crushed by the thought that.….(Para.9) • The thought that...once again overwhelmed me. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 31. slay (Para.9) • (literary) to kill or murder. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 32. ...lingered on to die in slow agony (Para.9) • 1) linger: to be slow in dying; to be slow or reluctant to leave. • e.g.They lingered over dinner. • 2) agony: great pain or suffering Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 33. ...just why we were gathered here. (Para. 10) • the exact reason for our coming here. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 34. inhibited (Para.10) • feeling restrained, having to suppress one's emotion. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 35. After three days in Japan….extraordinarily flexible. (Para.12) • 1) spinal column: the backbone. • 2) flexible: easily bent; pliant • 3) Notice the humorous effect achieved through the use of the formal, learned and scientific terms. • After three days in Japan one gets quite used to bowing to people as a ritual in greeting and to show gratitude. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 36. the faces grew more and more serious each time the name Hiroshima was repeated. (Para.14) • The Mayor mentioned Hiroshima repeatedly and to the author (who was suffering from a guilty conscience) the repeated mention of the name created a suspense which he found hard to bear. That was also perhaps why the faces (of other foreigners) grew more and more serious.. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 37. familiar to (Para.15) • well-known to (cf. familiar with: having a good knowledge of). Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 38. “Yes, yes, of course,” murmured the company, more and more agitated. (Para.16) • 1) the company: the group of people present. • 2) agitated: disturbed; upset Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 39. “Seldom has a city gained such world renown..” (Para. 17) • Seldom has a city become so world-famous. . • • • • • • • Common inverted forms: Rarely have I seen such a good movie. Never in my life have I heard such a stupid story. Not only was he a great statesman, but he was also a great scientist. Not until recently did I realize why I was lagging behind others. Only in this way can we overcome this difficulty. So loudly did he speak that even people in the next room could hear him without difficulty. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 40. “…a town known throughout the world for its-oysters” (Para.17) • This is called anti-climax, a common literary device to achieve humor, surprise, satire, etc. The mayor said this because he did not want to embarrass the foreigners by talking about the disaster and he wanted people to forget the tragic past and because Hiroshima was famous for its oysters. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 41. I was just about to make my little bow of assent...my sad reverie. (Para.18) • 1) about to: on the point of (doing something); just going to (do something). • 2) assent: an acceptance(of a statement) as true; agreement • 3) sink in: to be fully absorbed or understood; to penetrate especially gradually • 4) jolt: to shake up or jar, as with a bumpy ride or sharp blow; to shock or surprisev Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 41. I was just about to make my little bow of assent...my sad reverie. (Para.18) • 5) reverie: dreamy thinking, especially of agreeable things; the state of being absorbed in dreamlike contemplation; daydreaming. • I was on the point of showing my agreement by nodding when I suddenly realized what he meant. His words shocked me out of my sad dreamy thinking Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 42. humanity's most heinous crime (Para. 19) • the most wicked crime mankind has ever committed. • heinous: (literary) wicked in a high degree; atrocious Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 43. I cautiously backed away and headed toward the far side of the room... (Para. 20) • backed away: moved backwards away from the mayor; moved toward the other end of the room. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 44. “You look puzzled...” (Para. 21) • You look bewildered. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 45. “I must confess that I did not expect a speech about oysters here” (Para.22) • I must admit that it never occurred to me that I would hear the mayor of Hiroshima talk about oysters.. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 46. “I thought that Hiroshima still felt the impact of the atomic cataclysm.” (Para. 22) • 1) impact: strong effect. • 2) cataclysm: a violent and sudden upheaval, especially a serious flood, an earthquake or a war; disaster • I thought that people here had not forgotten the disaster the city had suffered. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 47. live through (Para.23) • to experience and survive. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 48. “I tell you this because I am almost an old man” (Para.25) • The implication is that it is because I do not care if people should know I was here when the bomb was dropped. Other people might try to hide the fact.. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 49. “There are two different schools of thought.….the point of impact.” (Para.25) • 1) school: group of people sharing the same thought. • 2) trace: a visible mark or sign of the former presence of thing or event; vestige • 3) preserve traces of the bomb: to maintain and protect the signs of destruction caused by the bomb • 4) erect: to construct; to put up • 5) at the point of impact: at the exact point over where the bomb exploded Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 50. “They would also like to demolish the atomic museum.” (Para. 25) • 1) demolish: to pull down or tear down. • 2) the atomic museum: the museum which houses the relics of the holocaust Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 51. time marches on (Para. 27) • Things are changing; history is advancing.. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 52. gay (Para.27) • pleasure-loving (Note: Today it often refers to homosexual.). Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 53. “...even if many of the town's people still bear hidden wounds, and burns. (Para.27) • 1) bear: to carry. • 2) burn: an injury produced by fire, heat, or a heat- producing agent • 3) hidden wounds and burns: invisible scars Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 54. smell of (Para.28) • to give out a smell of. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 55. Stretchers and wheelchairs lined the walls...any healthy visitor. (Para.28) • 1) stretchers and wheelchairs..corridors: stretchers and wheelchairs are put against the walls in the corridors. • 2) the very sight...any healthy visitor: even healthy visitors would shiver when they see those surgical instruments. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 56. by trade (Para.29) • by occupation; by way of making a living. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 57. “I thought somehow I had been spared.” (Para. 31) • I thought for some reason or other I had not been affected; I thought for some reason or other no harm had been done to me.. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 58. “...later my hair began to fall out, and my belly turned to water.” (Para.31) • 1) fall out: to become detached-hair, teeth, etc. • 2) my belly turned to water: I had diarrhea-very loose bowels. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 59. “I felt sick..” (Para. 31) • I felt nauseous; I wanted to vomit.. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 60. “...they have been testing and treating me.” (Para. 31) • “Testing” and “treating” are used here also to achieve musical effect; this is called alliteration.. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 61. “It is humiliating to survive in this city.” (Para.34) • humiliate: to hurt the pride or dignity of. • It is a disgrace for an atomic victim to remain alive in this city (or to continue to live in this city). Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 62. “...your children will encounter prejudice on the part of those who do not.” (Para.34) • 1) encounter: to meet with; to face. • 2) on the part of someone: by someone • Your children will be looked down upon by those who are not atomic victims Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 63. “People are afraid of genetic damage from the radiation.” (Para.34) • genetic: of or relating to genes. • People fear that the effect of the atomic radiation may be hereditary (may pass on from parents to children). People suffering from genetic damage may not be able to produce offspring or may give birth to deformed or otherwise unhealthy children. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 64. lucky birds (Para. 38) • According to Japanese tradition, if one makes one thousand little paper cranes, one's wishes will be realized, hence the “lucky birds.”. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 65. “…each day of suffering that helps to free me from earthly cares.” (Para.38) • 1) earthly: worldly as opposed to spiritual (“earthly” is applied to that which belongs to the earth or to the present life and is chiefly contrasted with “heavenly” ). • 2) care: concern, worry, anxiety. • One more day of suffering would mean a day nearer my death/would bring me closer to my death. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 66. “….I have the opportunity to improve my character.” (Para.38) • I have the chance to raise my moral standard/to purify my soul. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 67. I could read the answer in every eye. (Para.39) • read: to understand the nature, significance, or thinking of as if by reading. • The expression of the people told me what the answer was. Ⅲ. Sentence Analysis 68. xxx • xxx. Further Understanding 1. The theme of “Hiroshima — the ‘Liveliest’ City in Japan (Excerpts)” is: _____. A. An American’s regret for and apology to Hiroshima B. Hiroshima has been reborn from the ruins of the Second World War C. Hiroshima is the liveliest city in Japan D. The dual character of Hiroshima: lively and painful 2.This is the _____ time that the writer went to Hiroshima. A. 1st B. 2nd C. 3rd D. 4th 3. Why did the cab driver, who didn’t know the way to City Hall, responded that he knew? _____ A. To earn more money B. To demonstrate hospitality C. To avoid losing face D. To show friendliness 4. Which of the following is not the tone of “Hiroshima — the ‘Liveliest’ City in Japan (Excerpts)” ? _____. A. Upset B. Pessimistic C. Ironic D. Bitter 5. There are _____ schools of thought about the nuclear bombing among the Hiroshima residents. A. 2 B. 3 C. 4 D. 5 Determine whether the following statements are true or false. Put a “T”, if the statement is true and put a “F”, if the statement is false. 1. The writer had not been to Japan before. F 2. The cab driver took the writer first to City Hall and then to the F restaurant boat. 3. The mayor probably would not like to preserve traces of the T bomb. 4. No one in Hiroshima wanted to talk about the destructive T atomic bombing any more. 5. According the small Japanese man, Hiroshima was the gayest F city in Japan. Determine whether the following statements are true or false. Put a “T”, if the statement is true and put a “F”, if the statement is false. 6. The guests attending the mayor’s interview were mostly F Americans and Germans. 7. The writer inquired of the patient in a hospital with questions F prepared beforehand. 8. People in Hiroshima displayed no prejudice against those F bearing visible scars of atomic burns. 9. The little paper birds were made by the patient himself and T gave him hope and encouragement. F The usher at the City Hall bowed deeply to show his respect 10. for the visitors. Ⅳ. Writing Devices Language Style 1. First-person narrator The narrators explicitly refer to themselves using words and phrases involving “I” (referred to as the first-person singular) and/or “we” (the first-person plural). This allows the reader or audience to see the point of view (including opinions, thoughts, and feelings) of the narrator. I had a lump in my throat and a lot of sad thoughts on my mind. Was I not at the scene of the crime? Ⅳ. Writing Devices 2. Contrast The description of his own emotion and the scenery of Hiroshima. Psychology: sorrowful and repentant. Hiroshima symbolizes war crime, sin, death, terror, etc. Scenery: lively, happy, vigorous, cheerful, etc. Ⅳ. Writing Devices 3. Humors scattering over the text facilitate a pleasant reading. Ordinary people bobbing up and down, the cab driver’s efforts to save face, the usher’s bow, the writer’s meeting the mayor in his socks, spinal column flexible. Ⅳ. Writing Devices Rhetorical Devices: Metonymy Definition: Metonymy is a figure of speech in which a thing or concept is not called by its own name, but by the name of something intimately associated with that thing or concept. The word “metonymy” comes from Greek, “a change of name”. Ⅳ. Writing Devices e.g. 1. Little old Japan adrift amid beige concrete skyscrapers…struggle between the kimono and the miniskirt. 2. The pen is mightier than the sword. 3. He is too fond of the bottles. Ⅳ. Writing Devices Rhetorical Devices: Irony Definition: The word “irony” comes from Greek word “eirōnia”, meaning dissimulation or feigned ignorance. An irony is a figure of speech in actions. Ⅳ. Writing Devices Henry Watson Fowler, in The King's English, says “any definition of irony — though hundreds might be given, and very few of them would be accepted — must include this, that the surface meaning and the underlying meaning of what is said are not the same.” Ⅳ. Writing Devices e.g. 1. Beautiful weather, isn’t it? (when it is raining or nasty) 2. “Of course Michael won’t be late; you know how punctual he always is.” (when the speaker in fact meant that Michael was always late) Ⅳ. Writing Devices Rhetorical Devices: Anticlimax Definition: A figure of speech in which an abrupt declension (either deliberate or unintended) on the part of a speaker or writer from the dignity of idea which he appeared to be aiming at is represented. An anticlimax can be intentionally employed only for a jocular or satiric purpose. Ⅳ. Writing Devices e.g. A woman who could face the very devil…or a mouse — loses her grip and goes all to pieces in front of a flash of lightning. (Mark Twain) Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 1. The very act of stepping on this soil…any reportorial assignment…taken. (Para. 1) The fact that I was now in Hiroshima was in itself a much more exciting experience for me than any trip I had taken or any reporting work I had done in the past. 2. Serious looking men…“Tomo aligato gozayimas.” (Para. 2) They were so absorbed in their conversation that they seemed not to pay any attention to the crowds about them. Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 3. The rather arresting spectacle...between the kimono and the miniskirt. (Para. 7) The traditional floating houses among high modern buildings are also used as symbols to represent the constant struggle between old tradition (traditional culture) and new development (western style). Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 4. …treading cautiously on the soft tatami matting…in my socks. (Para. 8) I was not accustomed to walking in my socks so I walked carefully, fearing that something unpleasant or dangerous might happen. Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 5. …the faces grew more and more serious each time the name Hiroshima was repeated. (Para. 14) The Mayor mentioned Hiroshima repeatedly and to the author (who was suffering from a guilty conscience) the repeated mention of the name created a suspense which he found hard to bear. That was also, perhaps, why the faces (of other foreigners) grew more and more serious. Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 6. I was just about to make my little bow of assent…my sad reverie. (Para. 18) I was on the point of showing my agreement by nodding when I suddenly realized what he meant. His words shocked me out of my sad dreamy thinking. Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 7. “I must confess that I did not expect a speech about oysters here.” (Para. 22) I must admit that it never occurred to me that I would hear the mayor of Hiroshima talk about oysters. Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 8. “I thought that Hiroshima still felt the impact of the atomic cataclysm.” (Para. 22) I thought that people here had not forgotten the disaster the city had suffered. Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 9. Stretchers and wheelchairs lined the walls…any healthy visitor. (Para. 28) Stretchers and wheelchairs are put against the walls in the many corridors. Even healthy visitors would shiver when they see those surgical instruments. Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 10. “It is humiliating to survive in this city.” (Para. 34) It is a disgrace for an atomic victim to remain alive in this city (or to continue to live in this city). 11. “…your children will encounter prejudice on the part of those who do not.” (Para. 34) Your children will be looked down upon by those who are not atomic victims. Ⅲ. Sentence Paraphrase 12. “…each day of suffering that helps to free me from earthly cares…” (Para. 38) One more day of suffering would mean a day nearer my death/would bring me closer to my death. 13. “…I have the opportunity to improve my character.” (Para. 38) I have the chance to raise my moral standard/to purify my soul. Part Four—Language Study Ⅰ. Word Study Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions Ⅰ. Word Study 1. oblivious 9. stunning 2. ritual 10. twinge 3. martyr 11. inhabited 4. lurch 12. agitated 5. intermezzo 13. reverie 6. usher 14. heinous 7. embankment 15. cataclysm 8. arresting 16. earthly Ⅰ. Word Study 1. oblivious (adj.): be unaware of/unmindful of what is happening around e.g. I am oblivious of my former failure. 2. ritual (adj.): done as part of a rite e.g. a ritual dance Ⅰ. Word Study 3. martyr (v.): if someone is martyred, they are killed because of their religious beliefs. e.g. Catherine was martyred for her faith. 4. lurch (v.): to walk or move suddenly in an uncontrolled or unsteady way e.g. The car gave a start and then lurched forward. Ⅰ. Word Study 5. intermezzo (n.): short, light dramatic, musical or ballet entertainment between the acts of a play or opera. Figuratively it refers to anything that fills time between two events. 插曲,间奏曲 e.g. The concert was so boring that many people went out during the intermezzo. Ⅰ. Word Study 6. usher (n.): one who is employed to escort people to their seats, as in a theater, church, or stadium. 引座员,招待员,传达员 e.g. The usher asked him if he had reserved a seat. Ⅰ. Word Study 7. embankment (n.): a mound of earth or stone built to hold back water or to support a roadway. e.g. The van slipped down the embankment. 8. arresting (adj.): striking; eye-catching e.g. arresting figure/sight/sculpture Ⅰ. Word Study 9. stunning (adj.): of a strikingly attractive appearance e.g. The actors gave a stunning performance. 10. twinge (n.): a mental or emotional pain e.g. Charles even felt a twinge of pity for Mrs. Sweet. Ⅰ. Word Study 11. inhibited (adj.): unable to act in a relaxed and natural way because of self-consciousness or mental restraint e.g. Having been laughed at because of his lameness, the boy became shy and inhibited. 12. agitated (adj.): emotionally disturbed and excited e.g. He was agitated about his wife’s health. Ⅰ. Word Study 13. reverie (n.): a state of being pleasantly lost in one’s thoughts; a daydream e.g. A knock on the door broke her reverie. Ⅰ. Word Study 14. heinous (adj.): very shocking and immoral 十恶不赦的,不可饶恕的; 令人发指的 e.g. The Nanjing massacre was a heinous crime committed by the Japanese. Ⅰ. Word Study 15. cataclysm (n.): a violent or sudden event or change, such as a serious flood e.g. People in that area still felt the impact of the atomic cataclysm. Ⅰ. Word Study 16. earthly (adj.): connected with life on Earth rather than in heaven e.g. Believers wanted to be detached in many ways from earthly life and attached to heavenly life through a process called salvation. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 1. a lump in the/sb.’s throat 6. sink in 2. on sb.’s mind 7. among yourselves/ourselves/ 3. rub shoulders/elbows with 4. at the prospect of 5. linger on themselves 8. send shivers down the spine Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 1. a lump in the/sb.’s throat: a feeling of tightness or dryness in the throat caused by strong emotion, esp. sadness e.g. For a moment she said nothing; she just swallowed as if there were a lump in her throat. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions Similar expressions: I was choked with emotion. I was overcome with emotion that I could not speak or think clearly. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 2. on sb.’s mind: if sth. is on your mind, you keep thinking or worrying about it e.g. He looked as though he had something on his mind. Cf. in sb.’s mind: e.g. The event is still fresh in most people’s minds. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 3. rub shoulders/elbows with: to associate or come into contact with another person; to meet and mix with people e.g. He rubbed shoulders with TV stars at the party. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 4. at the prospect of: the possibility that something will happen e.g. I was excited at the prospect of living in Seoul again and writing about my native place full-time. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 5. linger on: to continue to live although you are slowly dying e.g. Uncle Gene lingered on a year longer than doctors had expected. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 6. sink in: if information, facts etc. sink in, you gradually understand them or realize the full meaning e.g. The news of the President’s assassination had only just begun to sink in. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 7. among yourselves/ourselves/themselves: with each other e.g. If the political parties cannot reach agreement among themselves, the President must become involved in the negotiations. Ⅱ. Phrases and Expressions 8. send shivers down the spine: to make you feel very frightened or excited e.g. Stephen King’s novels have sent shivers down the readers’ spines for more than 20 years. Part Five—Extension Ⅰ. Useful Expressions 悄然停下 slipped to a stop 与……无关 have little to do with 采访任务 reportorial assignment 突然出现/消失 bob up/down 惯例 ritual formula Ⅰ. Useful Expressions 遭受浩劫的城市 martyred city 前俯后仰 lurch from side to side 戛然而止 screech to a halt 作为回应 in response to 引人注目的场景 arresting spectacle Ⅰ. Useful Expressions 蹑手蹑脚地踏在…… treading cautiously on… 一阵窘迫 a twinge of embarrassment 脊柱 spinal column 忧愁伤感 sad reverie 惨绝人寰的罪行 heinous crime Ⅰ. Useful Expressions 思想流派 schools of thought 带着伤痕 bear wounds 遭遇歧视 encounter prejudice 修身养性 improve character 原子病区 atomic ward Ⅱ. Discussion 1. Did the writer narrate the events in the order of their occurrence ? 2. What was the writer’s major impression of the city? What symbol did the writer use to describe his impression? Ⅱ. Discussion 3. What does the writer focus chiefly on — developing character, action (plot), or idea (theme) ? 4. Paragraph 38 quotes the patient’s words to reveal to the reader the inner world of the victims. What kind of technique is employed there and what effect is achieved? 5. Do you think the text is well-ended? Why? Ⅲ. Quiz Ⅳ. Writing Write an essay titled Reflections on “Hiroshima — the ‘Liveliest’ City in Japan” with 300 words in English. You can approach the essay with the following perspectives. · War and the life of the civilians. · Nuclear technological advance: blessing or disaster. · Japan: a war victim or war beneficiary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. End of Lesson 2 For more information, please visit www.fltrp.com http://enmajor.heep.cn 外语教学与研究出版社 FOREIGN LANGUAGE TEACHING AND REAEARCH PRESS