Give ‘em something to write about with PIXAR SHORT-FILMS Building Paragraphs A Scaffolded Approach to Building Expository Essay Paragraphs Thanks for Checking out this Product! This product can be used with any short-film or movie. Purpose: Teach an Expository Essay Body Paragraph that uses a short-film to make a connection with a concept students are discussing in their controlling ideas. The scaffolded approach divides the paragraph into the topic sentence, short-film summary, and the connection (this is where they zoom in on a particular scene in the short film to connect to the controlling idea). The independent practice approach would be used AFTER the scaffolded approach or with advanced students and includes a peer revision element to ensure that the paragraph is built correctly. Scaffolded Independent Pixar Short-Films Can Be Found on YouTube Pixar Short-Film Title Concepts “Piper” Fear, Change, Courage, Coming of Age, Independence, New Abilities Love, Courage, Destiny, Family, Identity, Change, Coming of Age, Independence, New Abilities Sacrifice, Love, Friendship Acceptance, Identity, Differences Learning, Mistakes, “Paperman” “La Luna” “Feast” “For the Birds” “Lifted” Please contact for questions! I’d appreciate your feedback! www.jenjonesfonts.com Key/Teacher Guide Topic Sentence Provide transitions that could be used with topic sentences and teach students how to punctuate short-films. Summary Remind students to keep the summary detailed enough so that the reader knows what happens, but short enough so that the entire paragraph isn’t just a summary. Providing sequencing transitions and BME graphic organizers can help those that struggle with this part. Connection This is the part that requires the student’s explanation. Have them ZOOM in on one particular scene (or a few connected scenes), but they should NOT simply be summarizing; they should be explaining how those scenes support the controlling idea. Provide concluding transitions here. B M E