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assignment 1

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To:
From:
Subject:
Dear,
Best wishes,
Olivia
To: Head of ward associates
From: communication director
Subject: The new improvements
Dear sir,
In reference to your last email subject about the company problems
and recommendations and as the communication director, I am
writing to tell you my opinion.
The first idea which is about the head of department sending daily
reports to the board director, I agree with it as it will improve the
communication between the head of department and the director, I
also fully agree with the second idea about giving the sales
representatives a black berry to report from as this will facilities their
work and speed up their reporting process. On the other hand, I
disagree with the last idea about forwarding the health and safety
implications on the marketing, research &development and public
relations as I feel it will be a pressure on this departments to do their
work and the product complains too so it is better to get a new
employee to get this job done.
I wish these improvements is set as soon as possible as it will
make a difference in the company.
Best wishes,
Olivia Michel
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