ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY----SPECIMENS QUESTION: Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are degrading to men and women. Give your views. 1 Both bodybuilder and beauty pageant are there to express there featured. So I disagree. I help them to see other people opinion on their look and appearance, that was their intention. It help them to improve the feature. In my opinion it has upgraded them, this might help them see what they are doing wrong and how to start doing the right thing. Most of these body builder and beauty pageant enjoy the features a lot and join these competition to share it with the world. ================ 2 Body building allows men and women to be healthy and build muscles and beauty pageant will help any young persons to have to have more confidence on their selves and develop their talents. Despite these are degrading to men and women. Being a body builder and attend a competition expose your body as you will be wearing underwear, beauty pageant model with underwear expose theirselves, bodybuilder taking all kind of injections to build their body and beauty pageant practice different kind of experience to change their body such as silicone, chirugie transplantation etc. When a body builder and women attend a competition they will expose theirselves by showing up with small underwear where the world will see them naked on TV, and children will not be able to watch the show. As the bible said your body is the temple therefore it should not be exposed. Most of the body builder experience many kind of injections to more muscle so that they could be successful on the competitions. And those injections may harm your body, and giving them different kind of disease. Body buildings competition is about comparing muscles and a lot more, therefore the body builder try a lot of injections that might sometimes lead them onto death. Women who attend beauty pageant competition sometimes change different things on their body to appear more beautiful. They sometimes change the part of their body as their nose, their lips their breast and their face they sometimes do hair transplantation to have a better appearance. Those kind of experience may affect the body in future. Some people can do anything to succes in their life to reach their point. Today there is a lot of negative that is possible in the society once you can afford them financially. Body building and beauty pageant competitions can be very useful for some people as they build a high self esteem and also keep you fit and healthy but although some people ------------------------------------- exagerating in body building. Other than those they can be very useful for the body. People need to start things in a different way by trying new things and analyse to make a change. Body building competitions and pageant beauty could be more interested to watch and the children can watch also if their make some changes and the world will be able to participate. --------------------------------------- 3 Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants take place all around the world. One obviously needs confidence, the smarts and other qualities to enter such competitions. However, it is agreed that these competitions and pageants are degrading to men and women. This is said because it gives others a negative understanding of how the body must look, it can change individuals personalities and it can make other individuals self conscious about their physical appearances. Specifically, in bodybuilding competitions, a persons physical appearance must be up to part. People must be able to lift weights and must be really fit. This is the choice by the individual but these, events rely on a specific standard and some peoples’ bodies may not even be able to handle it. Both bodybuilding competitions and pageants can change individuals personalities. This especially happens in young women and young children. The children tend to think highly of themselves and think they are better than others. However, young women tend to follow older individuals who partake in pageants. They may even go to extreme lengths to change their physical appearances. These competitions and pageants can also make other people self conscious about their physical appearances. These events take place everywhere and are eared on television all the time. They are often watched by teens and young adults. However, from what young people see on the television they may think their bodies are not acceptable and may want to change. This is completely normal, however, many people try out new things to resemble others like plastic surgery. That is not okay. Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are okay however, people hosting these events should change the rules or at least have different types of pageants for other individuals. ------------------------------------------ 4 I believe that bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are degrading to men and women. It should not be used as form of entertainment to individuals. With having bodybuilding competition and beauty pageants it make society believe that having that type of body and acting a specific way is how society is supposed to be. This in turn causes people who are not like the bodybuilders and beauty pageant contestants to feel less than who they are. Some become insecure of their body and try all types of things to look like what society believes men and women are supposed to look like. These competitions and pageants allow people to openly judge other people. Men and women now think that it is ok to judge and dictate to each other what they should look like. For example, females especially teens would say if he doesn’t have abs or muscle then he is not cute, but that should not define whether or not he is cute. Men also think that it is ok to demand that a girl be skinny rather than thick or fat. This situation can lead to serious problem. It can lead to a lot of individuals with depression, insecurities and low self esteem. A society is not supposed to judge, it is supposed to bring each other up and encourage one another. With these pageants and competitions it is doing the opposite. Instead of loving our neighbor for who they are, we are judging and bringing them down. Many teens have comitted suicide because of problems like these, because they do not like what society says they apparantly don’t belong in this society. Many people wonder why there are so many problems in this society but they never once stopped to look at the little ‘insignificant’ things that they. Most of the times it is the things you least expect to be a problem that is the problem. ---------------------------------- 5 Although many people may say that these competitions allow men and women to express themselves physically bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are degrading to men and women. They do this by: making it seem as if it is all the competitors are good for, making those who don’t top the competition feel that they are not good enough and objectifying their bodies. Firstly, these competitions make it seem as if it is all these competitors are good for. Many of the people who participate in these competitions have other jobs. In a study carried out in 2017 47% of the people involved did not know that the women in the Ms. Universe competition are well educated. This shows that the competition has caused people to believe that they are just pretty faces with an empty head. This would be quite degrading as nobody wants to be thought of as uneducated when that is not the case. Secondly, those in the competition that do not top can be made to feel that they are not good enough. If you have trained for several months for a bodybuilding competition and when you get there you don’t even place in the top ten this can cause you to feel dejected. This feeling is one that would be avoided if there was not competition and you simply worked out for the betterment of yourself and not to be judged by others. This is degrading as it makes believe that others opinions are what matters. Lastly, these competitions objectify the bodies of these men and women. In these competitions especially the bodybuilding competitions the body is seen as this thing to look at. This may be seen as the point but people go beyond looking at the body for the purpose of the competition and start to sexualize the participants. In a recent survey it was shown that 72% of the people that watch these shows do not go for the competition. This is degrading as for the participants it is more than that and all of their hard work has been belittled. In conclusion we can see that these competitions degrade men and women in many different ways and should be stopped. -------------------------------- 6 Stereotypes are a normality that plague our society. We grow up with books, magazines, television and even toys telling us what we should look like, how we should dress and how we should act. Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are one of this worlds wicked ways to enforce stereotypes. These showcases are degrading since they lower self-esteem, focus to much on physical appearances and foster feelings of pride and selfishness in the hearts of the competitors. Not everyone looks the same or can look the same. Competitions and pageants make children and teenagers especially, who are in their critical stages of growth and development that the world wants them to look like that. When they realize they can’t look like what the world views as beautiful they have a lower opinion of themselves and this can lead to depression or even how they view others. They forget all about their inner beauty because of how much focus the world puts on outer beauty. Physical appearances are the foundation of bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants. People come from all around the world to compete or to see who is the most muscular male and who is the prettiest female. The male spend hours in the gym and the females spend hours inhancing their features to fit the world’s standards and after a fortune is spent on this not a dime is spent to rid the world of its problems. Having a pretty face or an ‘eight pack’ can’t cure cancer or any other deadly diseases. All it does is distract us and make the men and women and children think winning first place in a pageant or competition is more important than helping our economy. After pageants are won and men bring home a title and a trophy for their first place at a competition their attitude usually changes for the worst. All the power and glory from being beautiful or strong corrupts the minds of the competitors. Competitors have been known to sabotage their rivals, speak badly towards them and throw fits when they lose. They behave terribly and the public enjoys it and thus encourages it. Men think it’s okay to use their beauty and strength for persuation violence and women think it’s okay to use their beauty to manipulate others. Both men and women also think their beauty and fame means that they can treat others any way they want and this is absolutely disgusting. Beauty pageants and bodybuilding competitions are degrading to both men and women. It lowers the self-esteem of the viewers , fills the contestants with pride and selfishness and distracts the world from the problems that really matter. The world would be a better place if men and women didn’t think that they are how they look. ----------------------------------------- 7 “ Every man and every woman is beautiful. You just need to close your eyes to see.” By Jackie Barnes. Every year thousands of people participate in beauty pageants and bodybuilding competitions. But is it a place where impossible beauty standards are made or where body positivity and intellect are cultivated? Well, let me assure you these competitions aren’t degrading for men and women they are so much more. For example, participants are asked questions on a variety of topics which requires them to be informed on a variety of topics. These topics include matters of state, environmental problems and many more. They are judged on their social and conversational skills, language and diction. So these pageants don’t judge beauty only they judge intelligence as well. Also, the diets of the competitors are tracked and questioned to ensure they maintain a healthy diet and lifestyle. So their swimsuit bodies aren’t made from poor eating habits but good ones that nurish their bodies and minds. For the people watching, tips about healthy living can be learnt. Creativity and culture are portrayed in the talent section. The skills they show have come through hard work and practice. There are inspirational and emotional pieces that tell stories and allow the competitors an outlet to demonstrate their points of views in an artistic fashion to everyone regardless of the genders, races and nationalities of the audience members. Though it is said that all of the participants talk and act the same. If you look closely. They don’t. If you listen, you can hear the respectful, educated and caring individuals formed in the process. They are not degraded. They are transformed into role models. In conclusion, pageants and body building don’t degrade men and women. They inspire healthy living. They promote intellectuals. They form incredible members of society. And if we look instead of judge, we could learn from them. ----------------------------------- 8 A wise man once said, “ Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. “ This statement is factual as everyone is beautiful in their own regard. Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants serve no purpose but degrade and belittle men and women. Reasons this is so are due to the competitions: Creating a twisted standard for society to uphold, affecting the self-esteem of others and creating competition and conflict between individuals based solely on physical appearance. In today’s society, beauty and fashion play a pivotal role in the world’s social structure. Beauty and fashion companies are some of the largest in the world, while the competitions are among the most view and anticipated. In all of this, society has created and normalized a false image of beauty. Why must there be an outlined set of features which determines one’s beauty? And who gets to play the role of God in regards to beauty? Gone are the days of “ It is personality that matters.” Nowadays beauty is solely a physical prospect, and is determined by the amount of makeup a woman wears, or silicone that she pumps into her body. And in regards to men, how many steroids his body can manage before a stroke. Vuluptuous , curvaceous bodies and ripped abs do not define one’s beauty, and it is it is on the aspects that majority of competitions and pageants operate, degrading men and women who do not fit the traits stated. With this normalization of what is ‘beauty’ by society, spawns an increase in low selfesteem. “ Am I pretty enough?” is what an abundance of people ask themselves each day, and their conclusion is usually a negative one. Individuals failing to meet society’s preset standard of beauty begin to feel outcasted and different from everyone else. This is particularly evident in teenagers and young adults still fragile to the opinions of others in a cruel world. This low selfesteem may lead to depression and sadly suicide, which is reflected in the increasing rates worldwide. Most low self-esteem individuals who view bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants only feel worse as they infer what society sees as handsome and beautiful. Some proceed to augment the wonderful bodies they were blessed with in hopes of feeling more in tune with the world around them. Are we really fine with our fellow companions hating and killing themselves all in the name of ‘beauty’? Finally, not only are individuals being belittled in themselves, but also by their peers. It’s visible in many places such as the community, the schools and the workplaces. It also takes on several forms such as bullying and gossip. However, the effect is the same—individuals competing and conflicting with one another over the hierarchy of beauty. In a similar manner to the competitions, individuals judge and tear down those who don’t match up with society’s beauty standards. Why can we not all see each for the beautiful creatures we all are? This contention causes us to lose sight of what really matters in defining beauty. That is what one is like on the inside, as underneath the skin makeup and plastic we are all just humans. In conclusion, beauty should not be defined by one’s physical appearance and as such no competition or pageant should exist to compare men and women for their God-given features. Society should have no set standard of beauty, but instead promote the beauty within us all. ----------------------------------- 9 Imagine yourself prancing on a stage in nothing but your underwear while hundreds of judging eyes rake over your body. Imagine having your self-worth and value as a human being determined based on nothing but your physical appearance. Imagine dieting and training relentlessly for months, only to have an onlooking stranger tell you that you are not as good as someone else. Imagine no more; for this imaginary hell is the reality for many beauty pageant and bodybuilding competitions. These wretched competitions only serve to deprive unsuspecting participants of their self-esteem and perpetuate unrealistic body standards which are demeaning to all people. Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are undoubtedly degrading as they force participants into revealing garments, promote the judging of humans by other humans and focus solely on the participants’ bodies instead of looking at them as an entire human being. Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants degrade participants by coercing them into parading on stage in disgustingly skimpy clothing. Competitors are forced to wear tightfitting bikinis and boxers made from the tiniest pieces of fabric. So much for self-respect! This practice strips participants of their clothing and dignity. Furthermore, These competitions encourage the judging of humans by ( you guessed it ) other humans. Every inch of the contestants’ physique is analyzed, judged and then compared to that of another contestant. This practice draws a striking parallel to the judging of enslaved Africans by white slaveowners, simply because fundamentally, that is what these competitions are… slavery! Moreover, competitors are not even judged based on commendable attributes like admirable traits and feats. They are judged completely by their physical appearance. This is extremely damaging to an individual as it prioritizes physical health over mental or emotional health. Participants are not viewed as genuine humans with idiosyncrasies, but as a caricature of a person, who is only as good as their body. Does this sound remotely dignified or even healthy to you? Statistics even show that 80% of pageant contestants later experience depression, further proving that these competitions are downright degrading. In conclusion, beauty pageants and bodybuilding competitions are nothing but slavery masquerading as an uplifting experience. Many persons argue that these competitions improve the self-esteem of participants, but the minds of these persons are even more convoluted than those innocent, helpless persons who are tricked into competing in these vile events. It is time society rejects the practice of parading half-naked humans on stage, rejects the judging of humans by equally imperfect humans, rejects the quantifying of one’s worth on one’s physical appearance, and it is time society rejects the degrading, humiliating practice of beauty pageants and bodybuilding competitions. ------------------------------------ 10 Body building competitions and buety pageants are degrading to men and women because if you think you have the best body or you are the prettiest. Why would you go in a competition with a mindset that is stronger than a lion, and self esteem high like a sky scraper just to win others like you and your characteristics. I think that after all the drama you tend to lower your self-esteem, remarkably because you lost. Then you are going to currupt your own mind into thinking you aren’t enough or you’re ugly or something, anything to blame because you lost. When you win, Oh My! If you win, you’re going to think you’re better than anybody, and on top of the world, but what is that going to better you or what is it worth to you, winning a plastic or board trophy or money; after you have shown your body to the world. The media have seen what is to be covered and tampered by a husband or wife. What is there to be special to a husband or wife after everyone have seen them. Its degrading your self and others who you represent. 11 I totally agree with this statement because in most instances the judges are biased and this however makes the contestants feel less than their worth. Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants desire to many requirements. In such instance, men and women will have to have finincial help which includes having money for themselves and having a sponsor to purchase for example weights for body builders and dresses for the ladies in the beauty pageants. These competitions also leads to disagreement. This is so because after the judges decision contestants will say the title was not fairly chosen and may tend to fight other contestants and even the judges. On August 6, 2016 a beauty pageant was held in Clarendon and contestants broke into a fight because they wanted the first place prize. These competitions also makes the contestants feel inferior to others. This is as a result of males being forced to build muscles and ladies forced to wear make up in most cases to look as beautiful as the other contestants. But all should be accepted for who they truly are as the Christian sacred book states “ All are equal in the sight of God. “ In conclusion, I totally believe that bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are degrading to men and women as in most instances judges are biased, it requires monetary funds, such competitions may lead to disagreements and competitors may feel inferior prior to other competitors, and may disrespect the judges. --------------------------------------- 12 Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are degrading to men and women. First what is a bodybuilding competition and a beauty pageant? In my opinion a bodybuilding competition is where men, and sometimes women, display how muscular their body is or their fitness and a beauty pageant is a show where young ladies and girls dress up as princesses and displays their talent.. Bodybuilding competition, in most cases, pushes a person to their limit. It gives the individual the idea that outward appearance is what only matters, so a person would force their body to do what it cannot handle and even worse gives them the mentality that the body is not perfect so they do surgeries to get the type of body they’re looking for and in some cases, the individuals starts the use of harmful drugs, such as stereoids. Stereoids is a drug used to boost your adrenaline and build up your body structure such as your muscles. An overdose can lead to harmful side effects and sometimes death. Beauty pageants gives a woman the idea that beauty is everything and if you do not have a crown you are not worthy. In my opinion, this is not the mentality you would want a young girl growing up with. This type of mentality causes them to think of themselves as nothing. Some parents would lecture things into their daughter’s head such as, ‘ if you don’t win this crown you are nothing, nobody will want you’. Is this the type of mentality a strong young lady supposed to be growing with. The pound of makeup and fancy dresses is not everything, Young ladies are supposed to grow up knowing that they are beautiful no matter what, and whatever people have to say that’s their opinion about you. You cannot make what other people say about you determine who you are. As I conclude, bodybuilding competitions are useless and does not encourage a man to love his own body and also, the same with the beauty pageant, it brings down the self-esteem of a young lady, giving them the feeling of worthlessness. ------------------------------------- 13 Bodybuilding and beauty pageants are competitions made to show off your beauty and looks. These competitions are brainwashing our society into thinking that if you are muscular and is more beautiful than some one that you are better than them. These things are degrading to men and women. First of all there should not be any competitions to see who is more beautiful than who because this is the reason why young men and women are modifying their bodies by bleaching their skin and doing surgeries. People are suppose to be supporting the right to be human whether good looking or not because we are all made as one and was made special by God. These competitions can cause people especially the youths to become depressed and making them feel that they are not pretty enough or muscular enough. Why do we have to have competitions showing off our prettiness muscularness? Why can’t we have competitions showing off our talents? Statistics shows that that at every pageant competition nine out of ten times the loosing contestants end up doing surgery to enhance their beauty. A study done at Harvard university said that seven out of ten times most of the contestants of a bodybuilding shows uses steroids which means that these competitions are dangerous. To conclude, society needs to finish with those degrading competitions and have some better ones, because these are killing our society. Have more talent shows and encourage the youths to know that they are beautiful inside and out and to not let anyone tell them otherwise. ----------------------------------- 14 Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are two things many females and some males love. Bodybuilding is building up your muscles into being firm and fit. As opposed to the topic, “ Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are degrading to men and women, “ I strongly disagree because it helps to build both the men and women self-esteme , it helps the men and women to take pride in themselves, and to be more focused and determine. Firstly, 95% of women think they are not pretty enough or fit enough. So some wear excessive makeup to look pretty, some do plastic surgery and waste money and some women do NOTHING, and of course the men are not any better. Some men eat excessively to get thick or complain about being underweight and do nothing but, with bodybuilding competitions both men and women feel better about themselves and in most cases they stop degrading themselves and has started uplifting themselves whilst in beauty pageants the women think they are pretty and not compare themselves to others or complain about how “ ugly “ they look. Furthermore, bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants helps men and women take pride in themselves. From my observation the men and women now care about how their bodies look and how they dressed ( as in which clothes suites them and which does not ) Whilst in beauty pageants it helps women to focus on their faces and how much makeup to use and how often to use it, Moreover, bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants helps both men and women to be focused and determine on their goal which is to be have the best body and to work hard to be fit and for beauty pageants their goal is to be the most beautiful person and to have clean and healthy skin. As a result, men and women are not degraded by bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants. ---------------------------------- 15 In today’s society, there is the controversial argument as to whether bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are degrading to men and women. This essay serves to support the above statement and give reasons as to why these events are degrading. Firstly, these competitions encourage a sense of stereotypical beauty among society. The men and women participating in these events are perceived as role models and the remainder of society now strives to look and act like these competitors, hence, all other forms pf physical and internal beauty are neglected by society as inferior. While these events may cause unity among countries in the form of support for their representatives, their moral values and selfesteem are torn apart in their attempts to imitate the competitors. After all, wouldn’t you want to be just like your superhero? Secondly, statistics have shown an increase in the numbers of people suffering from lifestyle diseases such as anorexia nervosa in the past five years, especially in women. When interrogated, several of these women stated, “ I just wanted to look like her; like Miss Universe! “ While viewing these competitions may encourage some people to live healthier, others have poisoned their minds as they idolize the competitors and reject their own beauty. Lastly, these events are degrading because they increase gender inequality. Statistics show an increase in men who rate in Miss Universe, because of their “ hot figures “ and “ pretty faces “, which are demeaning comments to the female society who strive to achieve equality with men. Furthermore, there has been a decline in the number of women in bodybuilding competitions, because of men who claim that “ women should stick to wearing their pretty dresses “, according to the Daily Entertainment News. In conclusion, these events are degrading because they promote sexism and stereotypes among men and women. 16 Bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants have existed as forms of entertainment for several decades. These events are usually held in public settings and attract large audiences who wish to see the contestants compete with each other head to head for victory. As a result of this, both events are fiercely competitive. I am in full agreement with the statement that bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants degrading to men and women. Firstly, both events place excessive emphasis on the physical appearance of the competitors rather than their internal qualities or intellectual capabilities. On most occassions, the participants of both bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are judged for their looks. Although some may say beauty pageants may include questions for the competitors, this is usually a minor part of the competition. Additionally, bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants tend to promote objectification, especially in women. Females are often perceived as sexual objects which can be used whenever it is desired. Since the 1960’s, many women rights movements have emerged, advocating better education, more employment oppurtunities and the equal payment of men and women. Although females have made many efforts to escape the shackles of patriarchy, some of the progress made is negated by these events. These events may also have a significant impact on children. Youths are likely to begin believing that the physical appearance of an individual is their most important feature if they are exposed to these events. In conclusion, although bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants may be entertaining to some, they cause more harm to both men and women than good. ---------------------------------- 17 I firmly believe bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are degrading to men and women. These competitions are designed to focus on a contestant’s physical components, outer beauty and appeal. This acts as a lead way for harsh criticism, low self-esteem, insecurities and body modifications to begin which affects contestants and our society. Firstly, these events are extremely competitive. Contestants are required to be of a certain height, build and weight be in good standing for a trophy. As a result of these competitions being created on a foundation of outer beauty and appeal, contestants imperfections are highlighted, insecurities are formed and result in them going to extreme and expensive measures to win these contests. This includes procedures such as liposuction and tummy tucks to achieve a smaller, curvier figure. Botox, rhinoplasties and facial reconstructive surgeries are performed for higher cheek bones, ‘ perfect ‘ skin and more feminine or masculine features. Females even completely deplete their diets and males use various supplements and injections which can be very harmful to the body. Secondly, beauty pageants and bodybuilding competitions heavily influence society’s perception of beauty and what is acceptable. This sparks seas of critics, harsh comments, body shaming and ignites a fire of insecurity and the inability to be comfortable with one’s body in many males and females involved and uninvolved in these contests. Society then glorifies a particular body type, empowers males and females of a specific height, weight and even race or something as miniscule as hair texture and eye colour. People who fall outside of these norms are then heavily criticized and bashed, humiliated rude comments online and in person. Similarly, this constant criticism due to outlandish beauty standards and a lack of diversity in our communities result in the development of health issues in multiple persons. These vary from mental health and physical health issues such as schizophrenia, addictions to illegal substances and even depression to name a few, are all products of insecurity, low selfesteem and the harsh standards men and women living in this world are expected to uphold, reach and surpass. One may argue that these pageants and bodybuilding contests are empowering and inspiring for men and women however they only empower others who look like the competitors and they do inspire people but not in a positive way 80% of the time. In conclusion, bodybuilding competitions and beauty pageants are very entertaining, to watch. However, are as a nation missing the bigger picture? Are we really helping and supporting all body shapes, races and cultures or are we imprisoned by a myopic image of beauty? -----------------------------------