Poetry Analysis A R G U M E N TAT I V E PA R A G R A P H What does it mean to analyze a poem? 1. To make a claim (POINT) about the poem’s tone, mood, theme, or overall meaning 2. To find the poetic devices (figurative language, imagery, repetition, symbolism, etc) in the poem that support your point Paragraph Breakdown INTRODUCTION- 1 sentence Lists the: • author • title • claim (a.k.a. the basic argument you are making) • “roadmap”: (up to) three devices you will be using as evidence (a.k.a. POINTS) to support your claim BODY – 6-9 sentences • 3 POINT statements • 3 PROOFS (quotes) • 3 EXPLANATIONS CONCLUSION – 1 sentence • Rephrase your topic sentence Point Proof Explanation x3 Example Maya Angelou’s poem “Still I Rise” clearly illustrates the power that disenfranchised people, such as women of color like herself, actually do possess through the use of powerful diction, a traditional rhyme scheme, and a shifting meter. She shows this through her use of strong diction, such as her use of onomatopoeia throughout her poem. For example, the terms “trod” and “pumping” in the first 2 stanza show a juxtaposition of those with power on her, “trod me”, and her power in response, “oil pumping in my living room”. With such imagery-laden, sound-based power words, the audience can hear the power struggle that the speaker is winning. Additionally, Angelou uses a classic folk-ballad rhyme scheme of ABCB for most of her stanzas. In her first stanza, her end words are “history”, “lies”, “dirt”, and “rise”. Her only rhyming words, lies and rise, also show a juxtaposition of the power of others versus her own power, switching a negative to a positive result. This not only points to her theme overall, but the simple alternating rhyme scheme used in folk ballads help the reader feel invited in to the struggle along with her: it’s a folk ‘song’ for all of us who feel a lack of power in some way. Furthermore, Angelou also uses strong repetition with a change in meter throughout her poem of her title “Still I Rise”. At the end of each stanza, she reiterates the phrases while shifting her meter from short syllables to uplifting longer syllables. This shift in the rhyme also shows how the power will shift from those who oppress her to her uplifting her self. The longer syllable’s effect on the tone of the piece uplifts the audience with the speaker, creating a poem that is both angry and empowering for the reader. In conclusion, in ”Still I Rise”, Maya Angelou is able to use strong diction, a classic rhyme scheme, and changing meter to create a powerful poem that brings others up with her, and shows how we all have power to control our attitudes. We cannot control others’ actions towards us, but we can control how we react to them. Example [Introduction] Maya Angelou’s poem “Still I Rise” [Claim] clearly illustrates the power that disenfranchised people, such as women of color like herself, actually do possess through [Point #1] the use of powerful diction, [Point #2] a traditional rhyme scheme, and [Point #3] a shifting meter . [Proof #1] She shows this through her use of strong diction, such as her use of onomatopoeia throughout her poem. For example, the terms “trod” and “pumping” in the first 2 stanza show a juxtaposition of those with power on her, “trod me”, and her power in response, “oil pumping in my living room”. [Explanation #1] With such imagery-laden, sound-based power words, the audience can hear the power struggle that the speaker is winning. [Transition] Additionally, [Proof #2] Angelou uses a classic folk-ballad rhyme scheme of ABCB for most of her stanzas. In her first stanza, her end words are “history”, “lies”, “dirt”, and “rise”. [Explanation #2] Her only rhyming words, lies and rise, also show a juxtaposition of the power of others versus her own power, switching a negative to a positive result. This not only points to her theme overall, but the simple alternating rhyme scheme used in folk ballads help the reader feel invited in to the struggle along with her: it’s a folk ‘song’ for all of us who feel a lack of power in some way. [Transition] Furthermore, [Proof #3] Angelou also uses strong repetition with a change in meter throughout her poem of her title “Still I Rise”. At the end of each stanza, she reiterates the phrases while shifting her meter from short syllables to uplifting longer syllables. [Explanation #3] This shift in the rhyme also shows how the power will shift from those who oppress her to her uplifting her self. The longer syllable’s effect on the tone of the piece uplifts the audience with the speaker, creating a poem that is both angry and empowering for the reader. [Transition/Conclusion] In conclusion, in ”Still I Rise”, Maya Angelou is able to use strong diction, a classic rhyme scheme, and changing meter to create a powerful poem that brings others up with her, and shows how we all have power to control our attitudes. We cannot control others’ actions towards us, but we can control how we react to them. This is only a partial example but still gives you another idea of what an analytical paragraph looks and sounds like