Thanks
Suggestions
Concerns
Value
Clarify
Clarify
Does it read well?
Were there any spelling or grammar errors?
What do you not understand?
What would you like to know more about?
Value
Which parts did you really like? Why?
What was really exciting? Funny? Interesting?
What did you like about the way it was written?
What did you like about the information that
was written?
Concerns
Which parts could be improved? Why?
What was wrong with the writing style?
What was wrong with the information?
Can they tell you more about what they were
trying to do?
Suggestions
What ideas do you have to make it better?
Do they need to change any of the beginning,
middle or end?
Do they need to improve a description?
Could the story be more interesting or easy to
understand?
Thanks
Thank each other for helping!
Which bits were particularly useful?
What could you change in your own work?
What feedback would you give again next time?