Topic Sentence Primary Support Sentences Secondary Support Sentences 1 Topic Sentence (Topic + CI) ◦ Primary Support Sentence Secondary Support Sentence Secondary Support Sentence ◦ Primary Support Sentence Secondary Support Sentence Secondary Support Sentence ◦ Primary Support Sentence Secondary Support Sentence Secondary Support Sentence ◦ Concluding Sentence (Transitions) Topic Sentence = ◦ Topic + Controlling Idea Topic = what being discussed Controlling Idea = what specifically are you going to say about the topic Samples: a. For most people, the boredom of day-today living is broken only by a vacation. b. Road rage is a dangerous expression of the frustrations of driving. 3 Defined: A sentence that states one of the key (primary) points of the Controlling Idea in the paragraph How do you come up with Primary Support points? ◦ Read your topic sentence and ask “how?” and “why?” ◦ Answers to those questions then become your 3-5 PS points 4 a. b. c. For most people, the monotony of day-today living is broken only by a vacation. Road rage is a dangerous expression of the frustrations of driving. Working for good grades can interfere with learning. 5 Defined: A sentence that has explanations, examples, statistics, description, etc. about the Primary Support sentence it follows. How do you come up with Secondary Support Sentences? ◦ Read each Primary Support Sentence and ask ◦ “What type of support does this sentence need to make its point clearer? Does it need a definition? An example? A story? Some data?” 6 At times football can get grueling which makes the game even more exciting. The first time you make contact with another player even with all that equipment you get very sore. That is true for everyone, but in time you get used to the aches and pains. After awhile, you develop mental discipline which allows you to ignore some of the pain. The mental discipline then allows you to go all out, to unload everything you have in every play. Another way the game is grueling is having to learn all of the plays and signals. That can be very hard to remember in the game because there is so much going on. All in all, football is a grueling game. 7