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I would recommend focusing on one area of the six traits in a lesson and allow students to work through each of the five steps in one trait using their own writing piece. Journals are a great place for practice. If used, students will need to be given explicit directions when writing a draft on paper. They will need to leave plenty of space to make editing marks with the color-coded revising and editing. Students will use the color code and steps to work through the process of each of the 6-Traits. The first version can be used opposed to using the two-sided (Find/Edit) 6-Trait guiding notes. Colors for each area have been inserted; however, color choices can be modified for teacher preference or availability. Graphics © The 3AM Teacher This product is NOT for commercial use and may not be distributed or claimed as your own. Please link or refer back to my store if you would like to share about this on your blog or with your colleagues. 6-Trait “Code-It”: Incorporating Text Coding Ideas/ Content (ORANGE) Sentence Fluency (RED) Word Choice (GREEN) Organization (PINK) Voice (YELLOW) 1. Read the piece (one paragraph at a time) and ask yourself, “Are the details well-suited for the audience?” 1. Draw a blank piece of old fashioned ribbon candy next to each paragraph. (No need for professionals here, just draw a square or rectangle). 1. Read the piece (one paragraph at a time) Highlight words that are used more than twice in a paragraph (except conjunctions and articles) 1. Make sure that the piece fits the intended writing genre or prompt. Ask yourself, “Did I begin with a strong lead?” 1. Ask yourself, “Does this piece show that I am thinking of my audience?” (i.e., style, word choice & connections). 1. Apply proofreading marks for all the basic grammatical and conventional errors (capitals, missing words, repeats, punctuation) 2. Insert a “carrot” (˄) where your ideas should grow. 2. Read though each paragraph (one at a time) and UNDERLINE compound & complex sentences. 2. Off to the side of each paragraph write the word, EXILE. Write the highlighted words under it for later revisions. 2. Check for a clear beginning, middle, & end. Are there 5-8 sentences per paragraph? 2. Did the piece show a sense of identity? Check for: Originality Sincerity Humor Liveliness Appropriateness 2. Underline the first word of every sentence, and circle the end punctuation. 3. Make sure that each paragraph is focused and the details support the main idea. Highlight the thesis and main idea in each paragraph. 3. Now, draw a stripe on the candy to represent each underlined sentence. A good paragraph should have at least 3. 3. If figurative language is used effectively, box the words in GREEN. Draw a pair of eyes wherever imagery is present. 3. Highlight the thesis in an essay, research, or expository piece. Highlight transition words/phrases. There should be transitions in every paragraph. 3. Next to each part of the piece that showcases emotion and personality, draw a face to represent that feeling. A good piece of writing should have many. 3. Bracket paragraphs to check for indentation and appropriate paragraph breaks. 4. Post-It Make notes to yourself where the writing is boring, confusing, or needs some help. 4. Go back and check the first word of each sentence (one paragraph at a time). No more than two sentences per paragraph should begin the same way. 4. Ask yourself, “Is the vocabulary original? Did I use specific and powerful words to convey the message?” 4. Were the paragraphs put in an order that enhances the meaning and develops the topic? 4. Is the voice appropriate for the topic? (Formal, informal, academic) 4. Double check for spelling errors by circling any words you KNOW or THNK are misspelled and place a SP above the word. 5. Read the piece aloud and make sure it has flow. If dialogue is used, it should be natural 5. Double check that all exiled words are listed and you have completed all of the steps above. 5. Be sure to have a closing paragraph that restates the main idea in a new way to draw the audience to the end. 5. If you believe that the reader can connect with the writing, draw a bridge with a star underneath it at the end of your piece. 5. Double check the piece once again for errors in grammar, capitals, and punctuation. (Clarification and/or questions) Conventions (BLUE) BOX VIOLATORS 5. Finally, ask yourself if your work is original. If not, make a note to include ideas and content that is original to YOU. and effective. 6-Trait “Code-It”: Incorporating Text Coding Ideas/ Content (ORANGE) Sentence Fluency (RED) Word Choice (GREEN) Organization (PINK) Voice (YELLOW) 1. Read the piece (one paragraph at a time) and ask yourself, “Are the details well-suited for the audience?” 1. Draw a blank piece of old fashioned ribbon candy next to each paragraph. (No need for professionals here, just draw a square or rectangle). 1. Read the piece (one paragraph at a time) Highlight words that are used more than twice in a paragraph (except conjunctions and articles) 1. Make sure that the piece fits the intended writing genre or prompt. Ask yourself, “Did I begin with a strong lead?” 1. Ask yourself, “Does this piece show that I am thinking of my audience?” (i.e., style, word choice & connections). 1. Apply proofreading marks for all the basic grammatical and conventional errors (capitals, missing words, repeats, punctuation) 2. Insert a “carrot” (˄) where your ideas should grow. 2. Read though each paragraph (one at a time) and UNDERLINE compound & complex sentences. 2. Off to the side of each paragraph write the word, EXILE. Write the highlighted words under it for later revisions. 2. Check for a clear beginning, middle, & end. Are there 5-8 sentences per paragraph? 2. Did the piece show a sense of identity? Check for: Originality Sincerity Humor Liveliness Appropriateness 2. Underline the first word of every sentence, and circle the end punctuation. 3. Make sure that each paragraph is focused and the details support the main idea. Highlight the thesis and main idea in each paragraph. 3. Now, draw a stripe on the candy to represent each underlined sentence. A good paragraph should have at least 3. 3. If figurative language is used effectively, box the words in GREEN. Draw a pair of eyes wherever imagery is present. 3. Highlight the thesis in an essay, research, or expository piece. Highlight transition words/phrases. There should be transitions in every paragraph. 3. Next to each part of the piece that showcases emotion and personality, draw a face to represent that feeling. A good piece of writing should have many. 3. Bracket paragraphs to check for indentation and appropriate paragraph breaks. 4. Post-It Make notes to yourself where the writing is boring, confusing, or needs some help. 4. Go back and check the first word of each sentence (one paragraph at a time). No more than two sentences per paragraph should begin the same way. 4. Ask yourself, “Is the vocabulary original? Did I use specific and powerful words to convey the message?” 4. Were the paragraphs put in an order that enhances the meaning and develops the topic? 4. Is the voice appropriate for the topic? (Formal, informal, academic) 4. Double check for spelling errors by circling any words you KNOW or THNK are misspelled and place a SP above the word. 5. Read the piece aloud and make sure it has flow. If dialogue is used, it should be natural 5. Double check that all exiled words are listed and you have completed all of the steps above. 5. Be sure to have a closing paragraph that restates the main idea in a new way to draw the audience to the end. 5. If you believe that the reader can connect with the writing, draw a bridge with a star underneath it at the end of your piece. 5. Double check the piece once again for errors in grammar, capitals, and punctuation. (Clarification and/or questions) Conventions (BLUE) BOX VIOLATORS 5. Finally, ask yourself if your work is original. If not, make a note to include ideas and content that is original to YOU. and effective. “Code-It” 6-Trait Revising/Editing… FIND Ideas/ Content (ORANGE) Sentence Fluency (RED) Word Choice (GREEN) Organization (PINK) Voice (YELLOW) 1. Highlight the thesis statement and the main idea in each paragraph. Check that each sentence in each paragraph is FOCUSED on the main idea. If not, draw a line through it or draw an arrow to move it. 1. Read the piece & make sure that you have used PRECISE words. If the word seems too general or if it is jargon, circle it. If you use slang (yeah, OMG, etc.) in anything other than a personal narrative, cross it out. 1. Draw a blank piece of old fashioned ribbon candy (square) to the side of each paragraph. Put a stripe on the candy for each compound or complex sentence in each paragraph. 1. Check that all the PARTS of your piece are present (i.e., in a narrative, you need exposition, rising, action, climax & resolution; in an essay, you need an introduction, 3 body paragraphs, and a conclusion) Label each part. If you are missing a part, make yourself a note on your paper. 2. Underline your HOOK and check that it is a strong HOOK at the beginning of your writing piece. If it is weak, then take steps to make it more powerful. 1. Check that the voice is APPROPRIATE. A research paper should have a formal tone (no personal pronouns, etc.), whereas a personal narrative can be more casual (dialogue, emotions, etc.) If you see anything out of place, cross it out. 2. Read the piece and insert a carrot where your ideas should grow (i.e., more DETAILS are needed). You should have at least three carrots per paragraph. 2. Check for IMAGERY. Draw eyes next to anything you can vividly see. If your images seem unclear, circle them and make a note on your paper or sticky note. 2. If there are any pieces of candy with less than three stripes, make a note to combine sentences to make a COMPOUND or COMPLEX sentence. 3. Check to make sure that your piece is ORIGINAL. Ask yourself, “Have I heard this before?” if the answer is yes, circle the sentence. 3. Check for VARIATION. Write the word, exile to the side of your paper and record words that appear more than twice in each paragraph. 3. Check for VARIATION in the start and length of your sentences. You may only start a sentence the same way twice. Box offenders. 4. Check for FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE. Put an FL at the top of your paper and tally any similes, metaphors, or personification you have in each paragraph. A good piece of writing should have at least 3. 4. Check for VARIATION in the length of sentences. If you have two long or short sentences in a row, underline them and make a note to vary them. 3. Check that your piece is in a logical ORDER. If it is a narrative, it should be in chronological order. If it’s an essay or a letter, your weakest point should be in the middle. If something is out of place, draw an arrow to where it should go. 4. Check that you have used a TRANSITION at the beginning of each paragraph. Underline the transitions. If you’re missing transitions, make a note on your paper to refer when revising. 2. If you’re writing something serious, check for SINCERITY. Underline sections where you sound passionate about the topic. If you can’t find any, make a note to add that. 3. If you’re writing something lighthearted, check for HUMOR. If you can’t find anything funny, make a note to add humor. 4. Check for EMOTION. Underline any parts that give your emotion or personality. If you can’t find any, make a note to add it. Conventions (BLUE) 1. Check for SPELLING errors. Circle any words you know or think might be misspelled. 2. Circle the end PUNCTUATION in each sentence and make sure that it is correct. 3. Draw brackets around each paragraph to ensure that you have INDENTED appropriately. 4. Check for GRAMMAR errors, such as misplaced commas and apostrophes, as well as run-on sentences and fragments. Circle errors. “Code-It” 6-Trait Revising/Editing… FIND Ideas/ Content (ORANGE) Sentence Fluency (RED) Word Choice (GREEN) Organization (PINK) Voice (YELLOW) 1. Highlight the thesis statement and the main idea in each paragraph. Check that each sentence in each paragraph is FOCUSED on the main idea. If not, draw a line through it or draw an arrow to move it. 1. Read the piece & make sure that you have used PRECISE words. If the word seems too general or if it is jargon, circle it. If you use slang (yeah, OMG, etc.) in anything other than a personal narrative, cross it out. 1. Draw a blank piece of old fashioned ribbon candy (square) to the side of each paragraph. Put a stripe on the candy for each compound or complex sentence in each paragraph. 1. Check that all the PARTS of your piece are present (i.e., in a narrative, you need exposition, rising, action, climax & resolution; in an essay, you need an introduction, 3 body paragraphs, and a conclusion) Label each part. If you are missing a part, make yourself a note on your paper. 2. Underline your HOOK and check that it is a strong HOOK at the beginning of your writing piece. If it is weak, then take steps to make it more powerful. 1. Check that the voice is APPROPRIATE. A research paper should have a formal tone (no personal pronouns, etc.), whereas a personal narrative can be more casual (dialogue, emotions, etc.) If you see anything out of place, cross it out. 2. Read the piece and insert a carrot where your ideas should grow (i.e., more DETAILS are needed). You should have at least three carrots per paragraph. 2. Check for IMAGERY. Draw eyes next to anything you can vividly see. If your images seem unclear, circle them and make a note on your paper or sticky note. 2. If there are any pieces of candy with less than three stripes, make a note to combine sentences to make a COMPOUND or COMPLEX sentence. 3. Check to make sure that your piece is ORIGINAL. Ask yourself, “Have I heard this before?” if the answer is yes, circle the sentence. 3. Check for VARIATION. Write the word, exile to the side of your paper and record words that appear more than twice in each paragraph. 3. Check for VARIATION in the start and length of your sentences. You may only start a sentence the same way twice. Box offenders. 4. Check for FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE. Put an FL at the top of your paper and tally any similes, metaphors, or personification you have in each paragraph. A good piece of writing should have at least 3. 4. Check for VARIATION in the length of sentences. If you have two long or short sentences in a row, underline them and make a note to vary them. 3. Check that your piece is in a logical ORDER. If it is a narrative, it should be in chronological order. If it’s an essay or a letter, your weakest point should be in the middle. If something is out of place, draw an arrow to where it should go. 4. Check that you have used a TRANSITION at the beginning of each paragraph. Underline the transitions. If you’re missing transitions, make a note on your paper to refer when revising. 2. If you’re writing something serious, check for SINCERITY. Underline sections where you sound passionate about the topic. If you can’t find any, make a note to add that. 3. If you’re writing something lighthearted, check for HUMOR. If you can’t find anything funny, make a note to add humor. 4. Check for EMOTION. Underline any parts that give your emotion or personality. If you can’t find any, make a note to add it. Conventions (BLUE) 1. Check for SPELLING errors. Circle any words you know or think might be misspelled. 2. Circle the end PUNCTUATION in each sentence and make sure that it is correct. 3. Draw brackets around each paragraph to ensure that you have INDENTED appropriately. 4. Check for GRAMMAR errors, such as misplaced commas and apostrophes, as well as run-on sentences and fragments. Circle errors. “Code-It” 6-Trait Revision/Editing – fix Ideas/ Content (ORANGE) Sentence Fluency (RED) Word Choice (GREEN) Organization (PINK) 1. Copy any sentences that you moved with an arrow into their FOCUSED new homes and delete them from their old homes. 1. Delete or explain any circled jargon. Use a thesaurus to replace any general words (stuff, thing, awesome, went) 1. Find and piece of candy with fewer than 3 stripes, and combine/create 1. If you are missing a PART of your 2. Find your carrots grow by adding interesting details (especially sensory details) anywhere you planted them. At least 3 per paragraph. 3. Anywhere you circled an unoriginal sentence, insert your opinion or rewrite the section to make it more ORIGINAL. Don’t with more PRECISE words. Double check that you have crossed out any slang words. 2. Go back to any unclear IMAGERY and use sensory details (sight, taste, sound, feel/touch) to make them clearer. 3. Use a thesaurus to replace any words that were listed under your exile list to increase VARIATION. be afraid to take risks! until your candy has three stripes. piece…ADD IT. You may need to use a separate piece of paper to add pieces or details. 2. Go to any boxed beginnings of sentences and use transitions or wordorder-change to 2. If your HOOK is not strong, replace it with a stronger, more captivating compound and complex sentences VARY them. HOOK for your reader. 3. Go to any underlined sentences and break long sentences into shorter, more precise sentences; or combine two sentences to make a longer sentence for VARIATION 3. Insert TRANSITIONS anywhere you made a note to add them. Voice (YELLOW) 1. Double check that you have crossed out any inappropriate VOICE (personal, pronouns in a research paper, etc.) where necessary Conventions (BLUE) 1. Use a dictionary to correct SPELLING errors that are circled. 2 If you made notes to add SINCERITY, add a detail that will show your passion for your topic or help your reader connect with you. 2. Correct ending 3. If you made a note to add 3. Write an indention symbol next to each paragraph so that you remember to HUMOR, add details that will make the reader laugh. Remember, exaggeration, selfdepreciation, irony, sarcasm, etc.) PUNCTUATION. INDENT in your final copy. and LENGTH 4. Check your FL tally. Add FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE if your piece has fewer than 3 examples of it. 4. Read through your piece out loud to make sure it FLOWS. If it doesn’t, then re-do step 3 to VARY your sentence lengths. 4. Add personal 4. Correct any EMOTIONS or OPINIONS GRAMMAR errors anywhere you made a note to do so. Remember to do this ONLY if it is appropriate to the genre of text. that you noted. “Code-It” 6-Trait Revision/Editing – fix Ideas/ Content (ORANGE) Sentence Fluency (RED) Word Choice (GREEN) Organization (PINK) 1. Copy any sentences that you moved with an arrow into their FOCUSED new homes and delete them from their old homes. 1. Delete or explain any circled jargon. Use a thesaurus to replace any general words (stuff, thing, awesome, went) 1. Find and piece of candy with fewer than 3 stripes, and combine/create 1. If you are missing a PART of your 2. Find your carrots grow by adding interesting details (especially sensory details) anywhere you planted them. At least 3 per paragraph. 3. Anywhere you circled an unoriginal sentence, insert your opinion or rewrite the section to make it more ORIGINAL. Don’t with more PRECISE words. Double check that you have crossed out any slang words. 2. Go back to any unclear IMAGERY and use sensory details (sight, taste, sound, feel/touch) to make them clearer. 3. Use a thesaurus to replace any words that were listed under your exile list to increase VARIATION. be afraid to take risks! until your candy has three stripes. piece…ADD IT. You may need to use a separate piece of paper to add pieces or details. 2. Go to any boxed beginnings of sentences and use transitions or wordorder-change to 2. If your HOOK is not strong, replace it with a stronger, more captivating compound and complex sentences VARY them. HOOK for your reader. 3. Go to any underlined sentences and break long sentences into shorter, more precise sentences; or combine two sentences to make a longer sentence for VARIATION 3. Insert TRANSITIONS anywhere you made a note to add them. Voice (YELLOW) 1. Double check that you have crossed out any inappropriate VOICE (personal, pronouns in a research paper, etc.) where necessary Conventions (BLUE) 1. Use a dictionary to correct SPELLING errors that are circled. 2 If you made notes to add SINCERITY, add a detail that will show your passion for your topic or help your reader connect with you. 2. Correct ending 3. If you made a note to add 3. Write an indention symbol next to each paragraph so that you remember to HUMOR, add details that will make the reader laugh. Remember, exaggeration, selfdepreciation, irony, sarcasm, etc.) PUNCTUATION. INDENT in your final copy. and LENGTH 4. Check your FL tally. Add FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE if your piece has fewer than 3 examples of it. 4. Read through your piece out loud to make sure it FLOWS. If it doesn’t, then re-do step 3 to VARY your sentence lengths. 4. Add personal 4. Correct any EMOTIONS or OPINIONS GRAMMAR errors anywhere you made a note to do so. Remember to do this ONLY if it is appropriate to the genre of text. that you noted.