Chemosphere 207 (2018) 517e518 Contents lists available at ScienceDirect Chemosphere journal homepage: www.elsevier.com/locate/chemosphere Discussion Reply to discussion by John Heinze on “occurrence, fate and environmental risk of linear alkylbenzene sulfonate in the langat and Selangor River basins, Malaysia” Nobumitsu Sakai a, b, *, Junichi Shirasaka a, Yasuto Matsui a, Mohd Redzuan Ramli b, Kousuke Yoshida c, Mustafa Ali Mohd b, Minoru Yoneda a a b c Division of Environmental Engineering, Graduate School of Engineering, Kyoto University, Kyoto, 6158540, Japan Shimadzu-UMMC Centre of Xenobiotic Studies, Department of Pharmacology, Faculty of Medicine, University of Malaya, Kuala Lumpur, 50603, Malaysia Lion Corporation, 100 Tajima, Odawara-shi, Kanagawa, 256-0811, Japan h i g h l i g h t s We responded to Dr. Heinze's three discussion points. LAS is not a primary determinant of WQ, but can be an indicator of untreated sewage. LAS does not necessarily biodegrade faster than BOD. Our monitoring results showed a moderate correlation between LAS and BOD. Adsorption to suspended solids followed by settlement should be taken into account. a r t i c l e i n f o Article history: Received 25 March 2018 Accepted 22 May 2018 Available online 22 May 2018 Handling Editor: Jian-Ying Hu We thank Dr. Heinze for pointing out some questions in our recent paper (Sakai et al., 2017). The comments from Heinze can be summarized by the following three points: (1) linear alkylbenzene sulfonate (LAS) concentration is not the primary determinant of water quality in polluted river water and LAS concentrations should not be the basis for prioritizing sewage treatment improvements; (2) LAS biodegrades faster than biochemical oxygen demand (BOD), which is based on the findings in the Balatuin River, the Philippines (Dyer et al., 2003; McAvoy et al., 2003); (3) it is incorrect to determine safety in river water based on LAS concentrations as aquatic safety is determined by BOD, dissolved oxygen (DO) and ammonia. The following is our responses to the three points. In the first point, we do not suggest that LAS is the primary determinant of water quality deterioration. There are numerous * Corresponding author. Division of Environmental Engineering, Graduate School of Engineering, Kyoto University, Kyoto, 6158540. Japan. E-mail address: sakai@risk.env.kyoto-u.ac.jp (N. Sakai). https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chemosphere.2018.05.126 0045-6535/© 2018 Elsevier Ltd. All rights reserved. contaminants present in surface water which are derived from various pollution sources, therefore general water quality parameters, including BOD, DO and ammonia which can indicate overall water quality deterioration, are commonly used as a regulatory basis. Because LAS has a unique characteristics in terms of the specific pollution source that is mainly derived from households due to the use of laundry detergent (Yamamoto et al., 2010) as well as the almost complete elimination by sewage treatment (Matthijs €der et al., 1999), we aimed to elucidate if LAS can et al., 1999; Schro be used as an indicator for the water quality deterioration by untreated sewage, particularly in a watershed scale. As present in our paper (Sakai et al., 2017), the spatial distribution of LAS in the study area was associated with population distribution, and the daily load of LAS and the population density in each sub-basin showed a strong logarithmic correlation (r ¼ 0.882). This fact clearly suggests that LAS was originated from high population areas and sewage treatment system around the areas was not covered enough. Needless to say, BOD, DO and ammonia are primary determinants of water quality affected by not only sewage but also effluents of waste water treatment plants, industrial effluents and agricultural runoff, however LAS can provide additional information for the identification of untreated sewage which is hardly achieved by such general water quality parameters. In the second point, we cannot simply say that LAS biodegrades faster than BOD. We analyzed the correlation between LAS and BOD concentrations using the dataset of 28 monitoring points in our study (Sakai et al., 2017). As shown in Fig. 1, there was a moderate correlation between the parameters (r ¼ 0.668), indicating that the 518 N. Sakai et al. / Chemosphere 207 (2018) 517e518 Fig. 1. Positive linear correlation between LAS concentration and BOD (r ¼ 0.668) in the surface water collected in the Langat and Selangor River basins (n ¼ 28). pollution trend of LAS and BOD in the surface water was not significantly different. Yamamoto et al. (2010) have reported that there was a strong positive correlation between BOD geometric mean values and 95th percentile of LAS concentrations in surface water collected in Japan (r ¼ 0.993). In the two studies introduced by Heinze (Dyer et al., 2003; McAvoy et al., 2003), LAS and BOD values at 6 sites collected in the Balatuin River also show a strong correlation (r ¼ 0.960), which we calculated based on the dataset shown in the papers. These facts suggest that LAS did not necessarily biodegrade faster than BOD. However, the correlation in our study (Fig. 1) may be overstated because the sample size (n ¼ 28) was not enough to evaluate the correlation and there were a few outliers between them, indicating that multiple factors would affect their concentrations in surface water. The biodegradation of LAS in surface water is thought to be subject to flow time vs. halflives, aerobic vs. anaerobic condition (Scott and Jones, 2000) and contact to river bed with vs. without the existence of biofilm (Takada et al., 1994). In other words, the influence of biodegradation on LAS concentrations in surface water would fluctuate depending on geological condition, surface water quality and river bed condition of study area. Our results showed that LAS was considerably adsorbed to suspended solids particularly in polluted sites (Fig. 3 of Sakai et al., 2017), and 70.2% of LAS in the most polluted site of the Selangor River basin was adsorbed to suspended solids which were larger than 11 mm (Table 2 of Sakai et al., 2017). Therefore, the settlement due to the adsorption to suspended solids might rather influence the LAS concentrations in the surface water. It does not mean that biodegradation is negligible in aquatic environment and could be a significant factor particularly in aerobic condition (Scott and Jones, 2000) as well as in shallow stream enriched with biofilm (Takada et al., 1994). Nevertheless, the reduction of LAS from surface water due to adsorption to suspended solids followed by settlement also should be taken into account for elucidating the environmental fate of LAS. In the third point, we do not generalize that the safety of river water is determined by LAS. 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