LANGUAGE ANALYSIS (0500/23/M/J/14) The text is a narrative journal, centered around a wildlife expert, Tom Murphy, attempting to search for a bear in a park based in the USA, Yellowstone. Paragraph 1 portrays the evocative view of the landscape, the writer uses powerful descriptive imagery to exhibit the way the sun has risen between the giant mountains, painting a picture with colors, that relaxed the eye, letting the reader imagine themselves in the scene. The writer deploys the phrase "moving watercolor" to present the readers' mind with a pleasant sensation, it compares the landscape to a canvas, where mother nature has painted a mesmerizing picture, colors flowing through them. Next, the writer uses the phrase "rippling mirror of shimmering pink and gold" to effectively describe the way the water waves which moved in a soothing pattern imitated a mirror, giving back the pink and golden sky, it saw. Lastly through the phrase " light spilled into the valley was shadowed and broken" the writer tends to convey the sequence in which the sun rays that were sent to the valley were shattered and overtaken by darkness. Paragraph 4 solely focuses on the astounding features of the bear, who seemed fearless, the writer uses personification and strong descriptive language to effectively describe the fur filled animal. The writer uses the phrase "scintillated in the sun" to delineate the way in which the sun rays shone on his fur filled coat to create a light similar to a spark, like glitter, as if the rays reflected off him. Then the writer takes the phrase "claws very dexterously" to display the bear's intelligence to the reader, comparing his claws to a humans fingers. Lastly the writer creates a sense of fear through the phrase "a disconcerting sound" to allow the reader to imagine the crackling sound of the bones as the grizzly crunched on a corpse of an bison. ARTICLE WRITING (0500/11/M/J/15) Waking up everyday is much more fun and satisfying when your a guide, not just any guide, but a guide for "the Bandhavgarh National Park", Each morning's air would be filled with excitement towards what might be waiting for me during the long hours I spend working, which dosen't feel like a long time at all, which again is reasonable considering the unqiue experiences that i get to enjoy, like meeting new people everyday and dumping all the years of knowledge about animals I've gathered, on them. After the animals, the best part of the Park the marvelous tourists who visit the park, their faces filled with excitement and curiosity to learn everything about every creature, the chattering of them keeps the energy of the park at a high level. Although it is amazing to have people learn about things everyday, for the animals, it may be an invade to their privacy and day to day activities when cameras flash every 20 secs constantly for 5-6 hours. The most intriguing fact about this astounding park is that, all the animals inside it are happier than they would be at a jungle, the lifestyle offered by the surroundings to the creatures is simply incredible, It not only allows each one of us to gain knowledge and observe animals in their natural habitat but also enjoy the unique experience along the way. The best part is the love and affection that I gain from the animals who send a wave of positive energy to the air. DESCRIPTIVE WRITING The BBQ party that took place in a desolated park seemed similar to a fantasy, elegant sun rays, flared through the brilliant white clouds, which filtered it, to kiss my skin softly, tingling a pleasant sensation in me. The ambrosial smoke of the barbecue filled the atmosphere, which broke through my nose, and attacked my tastebuds, making my mouth water. The high-pitched screams and laughs echoed around, bouncing off the trees that stood tall, like skyscrapers on the earth, covered with dark-green aboriginal blades of humidified grass. The diamond-patterned fabric, which wrapped around the drop-leaf table, carried various delicacies, softly whispering us to munch on them. The sizzling noise of the grill brought a breeze of melodies to my ears, while the experienced ones tossed, slices of juicy beef into the scorching charcoal broil. At the far end of the smooth, leveled earth, the laughter of children brought the playground colors to an ever more heartwarming hue. As some slid down the scorching metallic slides, while others fought aggressively, unable to wait for their turn in the seesaws. In the sky, the scene was completely a magical fest. The pigeons, who glided, slicing the wind in half with their long and feather-filled wings, outnumbered the massive yellow beaked falcons that flew, immensely higher than the pigeons. The cold breeze of the night was filled with a mixture of flower essences, that were gorgeously grown all around the park, occupying my whole body with a smell so pleasureful, its memory still gives me goosebumps. SPEECH WRITING (0500/23/O/N/20) Working hard or work hard, is a phrase that is spoken by an immense number of people in our society, but is it really the secret to success? does it always have a positive impact on human kind overall? or is it just a few words that is incredibly overused by us? Working hard revolts around the fact of burying yourself into the specific work you do for long hours, which can truly act as a massive barrier to the health and life expectancy of an individual. Working hard, although it seems like the most convinient way to acheive something, the enormous weight of stress and anxiety would without a doubt almost paint your whole life with a dark shade, another factor stands to be the overshadowing of working hours on the social life of an individual restraining them from bring in touch or around their loved ones or interfearing the idea of social interactions. The action of working hard not only sets us almost an unacheivable expectation but it also emotionally crushes you when you fail to live up to that, furthermore the introduction of new technology have made it extremely easy to bury yourself down into work from anywhere, causing individuals to remain for unhealthy hours staring at a screen. Although working hard seems like an unattainable task or some sort of action that would exhaust your whole mind, it plays a cruical role in every single person's life. Starting from athletes to entrepreneurs to musicians, many individual we see today that have limitless money and power, started from the sole effort they have put into their crafts. Working hard would most definitely assist an individual in the future, although retirement process comes with a bunch of problems such as the decrease in wealth levels and social isolation. In my opinion, I believe hard work is undeniably a secret weapon that we all poses that can be used in order to acheive something we extremely want, but overworking ourself will surely stand as a massive burdren to our own health and well being, all though hard work gives us many incredible things such as money, social status etc, the things that it takes away are bigger, such as the ability to spend time with loved ones or carry out hobbies we truly enjoy, therefore I believe that each and every individual should work extremely hard, but keeping in mind to balance out the social and physical well being of us, by doing tasks such as excersises, good sleep, social interactive events. Thank you for taking your time to listen to my opinion and views on this matter. JOURNAL WRITING It felt like my mind had been tampered with during my sleep. Exhaustion, agony and headaches has overtaken my body. Until now, yesterday felt like a fantasy dream, the ancient city is wallpapered inside my head, it's memories still makes my hair stand on its end. The bushes and swamps we went through seemed to be the only thing we were going to find, until we encountered the most gorgeous mountain chain I have seen, the sun was sinking far away betwixt the mountains reflecting its rays on the wet rocks and bright green grass, as a vivid low toned rainbow bridged the mountains. We were completely dangled and hopeless, unable to walk any further due to the extreme pain that ran through our muscles, already convinced that the lost mining city was just a myth. When we camped for the night, I was dissapointed when Raposo told me and Manoel to fetch firewood, while the others got to close their eyes and enjoy the slight breeze. Although I was not impressed by the selfish way Raposo lead the team, it was undeniable he was a man that ignored disappointment completely. I was still persuaded that we were doing a useless task by continuing the journey, the hopelessness we had faded away, when we found evidence of human activity right infront of our eyes. A we explored deeper into the forest, what we discovered vanished away all the disbeleif we had in Raposo, the huge mine that consisted of unimaginably valued gold followed by remains of human settlement. Although Raposo was a little dissapointed to have the journey ended, the rest of our agony has been taken away by the excited wind around us. It was the end of a journey we never thought would end.
