Comparing Texts: Short Story and Poem— “The Scarlet Ibis” Woman with a Flower By Naomi Long Madgett I wouldn't coax the plant if I were you. Such watchful nurturing may do it harm. Let the soil rest from so much digging. And wait until it's dry before you water it. The leaf's inclined to find its own direction; Give it a chance to seek the sunlight for itself. Much growth is stunted by too much prodding, Too eager tenderness. The things we love we have to learn to leave alone. After Reading Questions 1. Clarify – How is Doodle different from his brother and other children? 2. Recall – What motivates the narrator for teaching Doodle? 3. Reread lines 1-7 in the first paragraph of the story. What words or images add to the mood of sadness and longing? 4. Analyze Visuals What qualities does the boy in this painting seem to have? Explain your answer by pointing to details of line, color, and shape, and texture. Does this boy have some of the same qualities you would expect of the narrator? Painting is on page 463 of short story if you want to see it in color. 5. Read the following quote and make an inference about the way the narrator feels about his brother and how his feelings change. After analyzing the following quote, find two other examples from the text the prove the narrator has mixed emotions about his brother, Doodle. Comparing Texts: Short Story and Poem— “The Scarlet Ibis” “It was bad enough having an invalid brother, but having one who possibly was not all there was unbearable, so I began to make plans to kill him by smothering him with a pillow. However, one afternoon as I watched him, my head poked between the iron posts of the foot of his bed, he looked straight at me and grinned. I skipped through the rooms, down the echoing halls, shouting, “Mama, he smiled. He’s all there! He’s all there!” and he was. Quote/Evidence from Text 1. Explanation 2. 6. How does Doodle get his nickname? Why does the narrator say that renaming him was the “kindest thing” he ever did for his brother? 7. Interpreting the symbol of the Scarlet Ibis – The narrator sees Doodle as the Scarlet Ibis at the end of the story, but Doodle identified with the Ibis right away. To discover more about this symbolic connection, identify as many similarities between the ibis and Doodle as you can. The Similarities between the Scarlet Ibis and Doodle 8. Which of the following themes does the symbolism of the ibis support? Find two details to support your answer and write them in the chart below. a. Selfish pride usually causes more pain than happiness. b. Fragile beings need to be sheltered and cared for. c. Malicious cruelty toward a loved one frequently stems from injured pride. Theme : Evidence from story – Evidence from story- Comparing Texts: Short Story and Poem— “The Scarlet Ibis” 9. Foreshadowing and Mood: Read the lines of the dramatic death of the ibis on page 602. This dramatic death foreshadows the death of Doodle. Find three other examples that foreshadowing his death. Describe what mood they create in the story. Example of foreshadowing Mood created in story 10. What is a possible theme for this story? Explain using two pieces of evidence from the story. Theme: Evidence from story#1 Evidence from story #2 11. Comparing texts: Reread the poem “Woman with a flower.” What advice does she seem to have for the narrator of “The Scarlet Ibis”? In what ways are the themes of these two texts similar? In what ways are they different?