Check Your partner’s essay for the Following: First paragraph has a hook to get the reader’s attention. First paragraph gives background information. First paragraph has a thesis statement. First paragraph states at least 3 reasons. First paragraph has at least three sentences. Second paragraph has a topic sentence that explains the first reason. Second paragraph gives an example of the first reason. Second paragraph has at least three sentences of explanation and discussion. Third paragraph has a topic sentence that states the second reason. Third paragraph gives an example of the second reason. Third paragraph has at least three sentences of explanation and discussion. Fourth paragraph sums up the main reasons Fourth paragraph suggests further action Fifth paragraph has at least 3 sentences. Count the # of sentences: __________All paragraphs are properly indented. All sentences are complete and contain proper punctuation. There are no spelling mistakes. Writing stays on topic. Student: ____________ Partner: ____________ Persuasive Writing Revising and Editing Checklist Writing includes at least 4 transition phrases. Simple/general words are avoided (nice, good, bad, awesome, etc.) Writing has been reviewed and changes have been made for improvement. I hereby pledge and promise that I revised and edited this piece of writing to the best of my ability. I firmly believe that my writing is now the best that it can be. I have completed this checklist with integrity and I am proud of my work. This work is ready to be transferred to the final draft to be published. _______________________________________ (student signature) I hereby pledge and promise that I revised and edited this piece of writing to the best of my ability. I firmly believe that my friend’s writing is now the best that it can be. I have completed this checklist with integrity and believe my friend should be proud of this work. This work is ready to be transferred to the final draft to be published. ____________________________________ (partner signature) I have conferenced with this student during the writing process. I approve this piece of writing for publishing. _____________________________________ (teacher signature)