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Part of the British
Empire - now known
as Myanmar. Orwell
worked here as
Assistant District
Superintendent in the
Indian Imperial
Police.
Rain has negative connotations. “sodden” has
connotations of discomfort - could reflect prisoners’
feelings.
“sickly” has connotations of poor health reflects prisoners. Simile highlights the
glinting sun and the off-colour sky - suggests
something is wrong.
“A Hanging” by George Orwell
It was in Burma, a sodden morning of the rains. A sickly light, like yellow
tinfoil, was slanting over the high walls into the jail yard. We were waiting
Suggests being trapped outside the condemned cells, a row of sheds fronted with double bars, like
with no glimpse of the
small animal cages. Each cell measured about ten feet by ten and was
outside world
quite bare within except for a plank bed and a pot of drinking water. In
some of them brown silent men were squatting at the inner bars, with their
Personification blankets draped round them. These were the condemned men, due to be
suggests that the
prisoners have just
hanged within the next week or two.
become numbers
and have no identity
Comic image
further emphasises
the prisoner’s frailty.
Alliteration shows
us that the people
in charge of him
had complete
control. “tall”
shows they’re
healthy - clear
contrast.
Oxymoron - grip
shouldn’t be a
caress
WC suggests lack
of life/vitality in the
prison - “desolate”
has connotations
of bleak
emptiness
Casual - strange
to be so relaxed
about someone’s
death. Just wants
to get the job done
- no consideration.
Short sentence to
add drama and
tension to the act.
One prisoner had been brought out of his cell. He was a Hindu, a puny wisp
of a man, with a shaven head and vague liquid eyes. He had a thick,
sprouting moustache, absurdly too big for his body, rather like the
moustache of a comic man on the films. Six tall Indian warders were
guarding him and getting him ready for the gallows. Two of them stood by
with rifles and fixed bayonets, while the others handcuffed him, passed a
chain through his handcuffs and fixed it to their belts, and lashed his arms
tight to his sides. They crowded very close about him, with their hands
always on him in a careful, caressing grip, as though all the while feeling
him to make sure he was there. It was like men handling a fish which is still
alive and may jump back into the water. But he stood quite unresisting,
yielding his arms limply to the ropes, as though he hardly noticed what was
happening.
WC suggests prisoner has given up and accepted his fate.
Eight o'clock struck and a bugle call, desolately thin in the wet air, floated
from the distant barracks. The superintendent of the jail, who was standing
apart from the rest of us, moodily prodding the gravel with his stick, raised
his head at the sound. He was an army doctor, with a grey toothbrush
moustache and a gruff voice. ‘For God's sake hurry up, Francis,’ he said
irritably. ‘The man ought to have been dead by this time. Aren't you ready
yet?’
Contrast to thin, weak prisoners
Francis, the head jailer, a fat Dravidian in a white drill suit and gold
spectacles, waved his black hand. ‘Yes sir, yes sir,’ he bubbled. ‘All iss
satisfactorily prepared. The hangman iss waiting. We shall proceed.’
‘Well, quick march, then. The prisoners can't get their breakfast till this job's
over.’
We set out for the gallows. Two warders marched on either side of the
prisoner, with their rifles at the slope; two others marched close against
him, gripping him by arm and shoulder, as though at once pushing and
supporting him. The rest of us, magistrates and the like, followed behind.
Suddenly, when we had gone ten yards, the procession stopped short
without any order or warning. A dreadful thing had happened — a dog,
Simile highlights the
inhumane
conditions - not
being treated fairly basic human rights
Basic conditions to
be trapped in nothing exciting left
in their lives - trying
to break their spirit.
“wisp” suggests he
is barely there malnourishment
and neglect.
Shaven head
suggests they all
have had their
identity taken
away and all look
the same. “vague”
suggests lack of
purpose.
Suggests threat.
“lashing” has
connotations of
repetitive pain torture - shows
how little care
they had.
Simile - idea of
something
desperate to get
away or
struggling
helplessly evokes sympathy.
Either bored or
trying to avoid
the guilt of what
he’s about to do.
Symbolism - dog goes straight to
prisoner showing that all people are
equal regardless of their circumstance
Dog adds life to
the quiet, subdued
surroundings reminds guards of
what they are
about to take
away.
Again, short
sentence to add
tension as the
event is
approaching
Despite being led
to his death, he
instinctively
avoids a puddle in
order to minimise
his discomfort - a
seemingly futile
action symbolises
human survival
instinct
Frankness leaves
us in no doubt
about Orwell’s
opinion on capital
punishment.
List of bodily
functions reminds
the reader that
the prisoner is a
healthy human
being who is not
ready to die.
Anaphora repetition of one or
more words at the
beginning of two
balanced clauses makes the loss
seem more
significant.
Dog has no awareness of what’s
going on and is a contrast to the
prisoners’ feelings
come goodness knows whence, had appeared in the yard. It came
bounding among us with a loud volley of barks, and leapt round us wagging
its whole body, wild with glee at finding so many human beings together. It
was a large woolly dog, half Airedale, half pariah. For a moment it pranced
round us, and then, before anyone could stop it, it had made a dash for the
prisoner, and jumping up tried to lick his face. Everyone stood aghast, too
taken aback even to grab at the dog.
‘Who let that bloody brute in here?’ said the superintendent angrily. ‘Catch
it, someone!’
A warder, detached from the escort, charged clumsily after the dog, but it
danced and gambolled just out of his reach, taking everything as part of the
game. A young Eurasian jailer picked up a handful of gravel and tried to
stone the dog away, but it dodged the stones and came after us again. Its
yaps echoed from the jail wails. The prisoner, in the grasp of the two
warders, looked on incuriously, as though this was another formality of the
hanging. It was several minutes before someone managed to catch the
dog. Then we put my handkerchief through its collar and moved off once
more, with the dog still straining and whimpering.
It was about forty yards to the gallows. I watched the bare brown back of
the prisoner marching in front of me. He walked clumsily with his bound
arms, but quite steadily, with that bobbing gait of the Indian who never
straightens his knees. At each step his muscles slid neatly into place, the
lock of hair on his scalp danced up and down, his feet printed themselves
on the wet gravel. And once, in spite of the men who gripped him by each
shoulder, he stepped slightly aside to avoid a puddle on the path.
It is curious, but till that moment I had never realised what it means to
destroy a healthy, conscious man. When I saw the prisoner step aside to
avoid the puddle, I saw the mystery, the unspeakable wrongness, of cutting
a life short when it is in full tide. This man was not dying, he was alive just
as we were alive. All the organs of his body were working — bowels
digesting food, skin renewing itself, nails growing, tissues forming — all
toiling away in solemn foolery. His nails would still be growing when he
stood on the drop, when he was falling through the air with a tenth of a
second to live. His eyes saw the yellow gravel and the grey walls, and his
brain still remembered, foresaw, reasoned — reasoned even about
puddles. He and we were a party of men walking together, seeing, hearing,
feeling, understanding the same world; and in two minutes, with a sudden
snap, one of us would be gone — one mind less, one world less.
The gallows stood in a small yard, separate from the main grounds of the
prison, and overgrown with tall prickly weeds. It was a brick erection like
three sides of a shed, with planking on top, and above that two beams and
a crossbar with the rope dangling. The hangman, a grey-haired convict in
Shows their
underlying
discomfort at
having to take a
life - symbolises
the fact it’s
against human
nature to kill
another
Nothing can
shake prisoner
out of his haze
of sadness and
despair
Reminder of the
life he still has and
that he is still a
worthy soul.
Reflective tone as
Orwell ponders
what it is to
actually kill
Comparison makes
it harder to accept.
Creates a sense
of significant loss
by pausing on this
moment.
Orwell feels a
human
connection with
the prisoner.
Authorities task
the prisoners with
killing other
prisoners passing the
burden of
responsibility
“servile” - showing willingness to serve or please others - they
have the prisoner doing terrible things and being happy about it.
the white uniform of the prison, was waiting beside his machine. He greeted
us with a servile crouch as we entered. At a word from Francis the two
warders, gripping the prisoner more closely than ever, half led, half pushed
him to the gallows and helped him clumsily up the ladder. Then the
hangman climbed up and fixed the rope round the prisoner's neck.
Man still has
religion despite
being so close to
death - evokes
sympathy.
Indicates the
discomfort felt
by the guards emphasises the
de-humanising
effect of the
execution on the
men - Orwell
suggests that
everyone
involved in the
execution is a
victim
Highlights his
anguish and how
precious each
second now is to
him.
Disturbing
description to
emphasise lack of
life. Simile is a
harsh summary of
a lost life.
As the prisoner is
dead, this callous
and uncaring
statement makes
the reader feel
sympathy
We stood waiting, five yards away. The warders had formed in a rough
circle round the gallows. And then, when the noose was fixed, the prisoner
began crying out on his god. It was a high, reiterated cry of ‘Ram! Ram!
Ram! Ram!’, not urgent and fearful like a prayer or a cry for help, but
steady, rhythmical, almost like the tolling of a bell. The dog answered the
sound with a whine. The hangman, still standing on the gallows, produced
a small cotton bag like a flour bag and drew it down over the prisoner's
face. But the sound, muffled by the cloth, still persisted, over and over
again: ‘Ram! Ram! Ram! Ram! Ram!’
The hangman climbed down and stood ready, holding the lever. Minutes
seemed to pass. The steady, muffled crying from the prisoner went on and
on, ‘Ram! Ram! Ram!’ never faltering for an instant. The superintendent, his
head on his chest, was slowly poking the ground with his stick; perhaps he
was counting the cries, allowing the prisoner a fixed number — fifty,
perhaps, or a hundred. Everyone had changed colour. The Indians had
gone grey like bad coffee, and one or two of the bayonets were wavering.
We looked at the lashed, hooded man on the drop, and listened to his cries
— each cry another second of life; the same thought was in all our minds:
oh, kill him quickly, get it over, stop that abominable noise!
Suddenly the superintendent made up his mind. Throwing up his head he
made a swift motion with his stick. ‘Chalo!’ he shouted almost fiercely.
There was a clanking noise, and then dead silence. The prisoner had
vanished, and the rope was twisting on itself. I let go of the dog, and it
galloped immediately to the back of the gallows; but when it got there it
stopped short, barked, and then retreated into a corner of the yard, where it
stood among the weeds, looking timorously out at us. We went round the
gallows to inspect the prisoner's body. He was dangling with his toes
pointed straight downwards, very slowly revolving, as dead as a stone.
The superintendent reached out with his stick and poked the bare body; it
oscillated, slightly. ‘He's all right,’ said the superintendent. He backed out
from under the gallows, and blew out a deep breath. The moody look had
gone out of his face quite suddenly. He glanced at his wrist-watch. ‘Eight
minutes past eight. Well, that's all for this morning, thank God.’
The warders unfixed bayonets and marched away. The dog, sobered and
conscious of having misbehaved itself, slipped after them. We walked out of
Has accepted his
fate as he has
been left with no
hope
Idea that he still
has complete
control over when
this man’s life
ends.
Orwell wants the
killing to happen
despite being
against it indicates the
discomfort of
everyone in the
vicinity.
Even the dog is
now subdued past life and
excitement has
gone - reflects life
being taken from
the prisoner.
Word choice
suggests fear that
job may not be
done - men don’t
want to have to
think about what
they’ve done.
Casual comment
like they’ve made
plans to be there
- like a meeting to
be forgotten
quickly.
Long heavy iron-bound bamboo
sticks used as weapons.
Strange feeling to
have after taking
another’s life they’re so glad
they don’t have to
think about their
guilt anymore
Don’t know how
to react to what
they’ve just
done.
the gallows yard, past the condemned cells with their waiting prisoners, into
the big central yard of the prison. The convicts, under the command of
warders armed with lathis, were already receiving their breakfast. They
squatted in long rows, each man holding a tin pannikin, while two warders
with buckets marched round ladling out rice; it seemed quite a homely, jolly
scene, after the hanging. An enormous relief had come upon us now that
the job was done. One felt an impulse to sing, to break into a run, to
snigger. All at once everyone began chattering gaily.
The Eurasian boy walking beside me nodded towards the way we had
come, with a knowing smile: ‘Do you know, sir, our friend (he meant the
dead man), when he heard his appeal had been dismissed, he pissed on
the floor of his cell. From fright. — Kindly take one of my cigarettes, sir. Do
you not admire my new silver case, sir? From the boxwallah, two rupees
eight annas. Classy European style.’
Casual mockery of
the dead man poking fun at the
dead person’s
anguish - followed
by a random
comment - lack of
respect.
Several people laughed — at what, nobody seemed certain.
Francis was walking by the superintendent, talking garrulously. ‘Well, sir, all
hass passed off with the utmost satisfactoriness. It wass all finished — flick!
like that. It iss not always so — oah, no! I have known cases where the
doctor wass obliged to go beneath the gallows and pull the prisoner's legs
to ensure decease. Most disagreeable!’
‘Wriggling about, eh? That's bad,’ said the superintendent.
Light hearted
atmosphere after
the killing is a
false emotion and
acts as a coping
mechanism for the
men.
An absurd sentiment
indicating the relief
of the officials now
that the execution
has been
completed.
‘Ach, sir, it iss worse when they become refractory! One man, I recall, clung
to the bars of hiss cage when we went to take him out. You will scarcely
credit, sir, that it took six warders to dislodge him, three pulling at each leg.
We reasoned with him. “My dear fellow,” we said, “think of all the pain and
trouble you are causing to us!” But no, he would not listen! Ach, he wass
very troublesome!’
I found that I was laughing quite loudly. Everyone was laughing. Even the
superintendent grinned in a tolerant way. ‘You'd better all come out and
have a drink,’ he said quite genially. ‘I've got a bottle of whisky in the car.
We could do with it.’
We went through the big double gates of the prison, into the road. ‘Pulling
at his legs!’ exclaimed a Burmese magistrate suddenly, and burst into a
loud chuckling. We all began laughing again. At that moment Francis's
anecdote seemed extraordinarily funny. We all had a drink together, native
and European alike, quite amicably. The dead man was a hundred yards
away.
Orwell doesn’t mention the prisoner’s crime
as he does not want the reader to make
any judgement about whether or not the
death penalty was justified -focuses purely
on the killing aspect.
Another callous
statement directed
at a doomed
prisoner - the
resulting laughter
indicates a lack of
comparison.
Final 2 sentences
are designed to
get Orwell’s point
across clearly.
The jovial scene
of the penultimate
sentence is
contrasted with
the nearby dead
man. Reader is
left to contemplate
this vulgar scene.
At what cost does
this camaraderie
come?
THE END
Story is a reflection on one of the many judicial
executions witnessed by Orwell in his post illustrates the banal reality of death and highlights
his strong anti-capital punishment sentiments.
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