Name: _____________________ Period: _____________________ AN INTRODUCTION TO CLOSE READING THROUGH SONG LYRICS: A Unit for the Middle- or High-School English Language Arts Class The following unit is an exploration of the coming-of-age journey we must all take in life. What makes this unit unique is that it will be accomplished entirely by way of wellchosen song lyrics. By learning to read lyrics closely, students will begin to see how songs, too, share important stories and impart meaningful lessons. The songs selected for this lesson come from a variety of contemporary musical genres, further making clear to students the universality of the coming-ofage journey and the power of great song lyrics to express it. We will begin by listening and reading a song together. Next, students will select one of four songs to explore with a partner. Finally, an extension activity invites students to envision their own CD. As they accomplish this task, students will be displaying their understanding of our central theme, the coming-of-age journey, while reflecting on their own unique journey thus far in life. Students will be challenged to locate meaningful songs that express aspects of themselves, analyze these songs in terms of figurative language, word choice, narrative persona, and narrative development. I feel strongly that, through this unit, students will see firsthand the power of lyrics to express key aspects of this exciting but challenging time of life. This lesson addresses the following Common Core Standards: CCSELA Literacy RL7.1: Cite several pieces of textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. CCSELA Literacy RL7.2: Determine a theme or central ideal of a text and analyze its development over the course of the text; provide an objective summary of the text. CCSELA Literacy RL7.4: Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of rhymes and other repetitions of sounds (e.g., alliteration) on a specific verse or stanza of a poem or section of a story or drama. CCSELA Literacy RL7.6: Analyze how an author develops and contrasts the points of view of different characters or narrators in a text. CCSELA Literacy RL7.7: Compare and contrast a written story, drama, or poem to its audio, filmed, staged, or multimedia version, analyzing the effects of techniques unique to each medium (e.g., lighting, sound, color, or camera focus and angles in a film). CCSELA Literacy.WHST.6-8.1A: Introduce claims(s) about a topic or issue, acknowledge and distinguish the claim(s) from alternate or opposing claims, and organize the reasons and evidence logically. CCSELA.Literacy.WHST.6-8.1B: Support claim(s) with logical reasoning and relevant, accurate data and evidence that demonstrate an understanding of the topic or text, using credible sources. CCSELA.Literacy.WHST.6-8.1D: Establish and maintain a formal style. CCSELA.Literacy.WHST.6-8:1F: Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument presented. Name: _____________________ Period: _____________________ AN INTRODUCTION TO CLOSE READING THROUGH SONG LYRICS Often, we have strong, immediate reactions to the music we hear on the radio or online, not just from the melodies or rhythms themselves, but because the lyrics, in some way, mirror what we are experiencing in our lives at the moment. After an argument with a friend, for example, every song may sound sad. Today, however, I want to show you how doing a close reading of a song’s lyrics can lead us to see things we may have missed. Defining Terms Close reading: the careful reading and rereading of a brief passage of text. Such a reading places great emphasis on noticing individual words, syntax, and the order in which sentences and ideas unfold as they are read. Annotate: the act of adding notes to a text as a comment, question, or explanation. 1. Listen to Echosmith’s song, “Cool Kids” and follow along with the lyrics on the next page. 2. What is your first impression of the song? What is the mood? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. What does it seem to be about? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 4. Now, read the lyrics again. Pay attention to what the singer (the narrator of the song) says. Circle key words and phrases and make notes in the margins. This is called annotating, and we will be doing it all year! What words and phrases stood out to you? Why? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 5. Next, pay attention to the change in pronouns. Why might the lyricist have done this? What might it mean? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 6. Do the “cool kids” really feel cool? How do you know? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 7. After reading these lyrics closely, what do you think is the lyricist’s message? _________________________________________________________________________________ "Cool Kids" By Echosmith She sees them walking in a straight line, that's not really her style. And they all got the same heartbeat, but hers is falling behind. Nothing in this world could ever bring them down. Yeah, they're invincible, and she's just in the background. And she says, "I wish that I could be like the cool kids, 'Cause all the cool kids, they seem to fit in. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, like the cool kids." He sees them talking with a big smile, but they haven't got a clue. Yeah, they're living the good life, can't see what he is going through. They're driving fast cars, but they don't know where they're going. In the fast lane, living life without knowing. And he says, "I wish that I could be like the cool kids, 'Cause all the cool kids, they seem to fit in. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, like the cool kids. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, 'Cause all the cool kids, they seem to get it. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, like the cool kids." And they said, "I wish that I could be like the cool kids, 'Cause all the cool kids, they seem to fit in. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, like the cool kids. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, 'Cause all the cool kids, they seem to fit in. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, like the cool kids. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, 'Cause all the cool kids, they seem to get it. I wish that I could be like the cool kids, like the cool kids." Whoa [3x] Like the cool kids Name: ____________________ LYRICS - PARTNER ACTIVITY As you and your partner do a close reading of one of the following song lyrics, keep in mind that all writers, lyricists included, have messages they want to send out into the world, but they want us to do some of the work. They want us to read closely and pay attention to details. The more carefully we pay attention, the more the writer’s message will be revealed. 1. Select one of the following songs to study. Which song did you choose? ________________________________ Who is the lyricist? ___________________________________________ 2. Read your lyrics all the way through to get an overall impression. Additionally, you may listen to the song on your cell phone/headphone (see me if you need headphones). 3. Number the lines of the song and read again, this time with a highlighter and a pencil close by. Circle key words and make notes or questions in the margins. Discuss your findings with your partner. 4. What is the overall mood of this song? ______________________________________________________________________________________ 5. Describe the personality of the singer/narrator. ______________________________________________________________________________________ 6. Do the lyricist use any figurative language? (Look for metaphors, similes, personification, symbols, allusions, etc.) Quote your example below. Add the line number where you found this figurative language in parentheses. _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 7. Analyze this figurative language. What is being compared? How does it enhance the song’s message? _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 8. Does the lyricist employ any unique words? Look for a word with multiple meanings or a word used in a surprising way. Quote your example below. Add the line number where you found these words in parentheses. _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ (more questions on the backside) 9. Analyze this word choice. What made it surprising, interesting, or thought provoking? _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 10. What is the lyricist’s overall message? _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 11. What else did you discover that surprised you? _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ “Fifteen” By Taylor Swift You take a deep breath and you walk through the doors It's the morning of your very first day You say hi to your friends you ain't seen in a while Try and stay out of e verybody's way It's your freshman year and you're gonna be here For the next four years in this town Hoping one of those senior boys will wink at you and say "You know, I haven't seen you around before" 'Cause when you're fifteen and somebody tells you they love you You're gonna believe them And when you're fifteen feeling like there's nothing to figure out but count to ten, take it in This is life before you know who you're gonna be Fifteen You sit in class next to redheaded Abigail And soon enough you're best friends Laughing at the other girls who think they're so cool We'll be outta here as soon as we can And then you're on your very first date and he's got a car And you feeling like flying And your mama's waiting up and you're thinking he's the one And you're dancing 'round your room when the night ends When the night ends 'Cause when you're fifteen and somebody tells you they love you You're gonna believe them And when you're fifteen and your first kiss Makes your head spin around But in your life you'll do things greater than Dating the boy on the football team I didn't know it at fifteen When all you wanted was to be wanted I wish you could go back and tell yourself what you know now Back then I swore I was gonna marry him someday But I realized some bigger dreams of mine Abigail gave everything she had to a boy who changed his mind We both cried 'Cause when you're fifteen and somebody tells you they love you You're gonna believe them And when you're fifteen, don't forget to love before you fall I've found time can heal most anything And you just might find who you're supposed to be I didn't know who I was supposed to be Fifteen la la la la la Your very first day Take a deep breath girl Take a deep breath as you walk through the doors “Outcast” By Kerrie Roberts Since I can remember, guess I been a problem Never had a filter, never been the popular one To sugar coat what I know is undeniable I just can't hide it, I wear it like a letter Everywhere I go, everyone is talking I can feel them staring, they hope I'm just pretending And giving up my power, caving into pressure I'm not living for them, I live for something better I'm not good enough, I'm not what they want But let me tell you what, I know who I am So just throw me out for not fitting in I will stand my ground and be an outcast So what if I'm an outcast? So what if I'm an outcast? So what if I don't look the part I'm supposed to play What if I don't follow all the rules they make They think I should be perfect, they love it when I mess up No grace in case I blow it, a good girl shouldn't need it I'm not good enough, I'm not what they want But let me tell you what, I know who I am So just throw me out for not fitting in I will stand my ground and be an outcast So what if I'm an outcast So what if I'm an outcast So slow and everybody's so fast So what if I'm an outcast? I try to play nice, I don't want to fight But I won't be great when it sounds like I'm right 'Cause what I believe is what makes me strong If I don't belong, I hold onto love I try to play nice, I don't want to fight But I won't be great when it sounds like I'm right 'Cause what I believe is what makes me strong If I don't belong, I hold onto love So what if I'm an outcast? So what if I'm an outcast? So slow and everybody's so fast No matter what it costs I'll be an outcast I'm not good enough, I'm not what they want But let me tell you what, I know who I am So just throw me out for I'm not fitting in I will stand my ground and be an outcast I'm not good enough, I'm not what they want And let me tell you what, I know who I am So just throw me out, I'm not fitting in I will stand my ground and be an outcast "Growing Up (Sloane's Song)" By Macklemore (with Ryan Lewis) (feat. Ed Sheeran) [Macklemore:] They say boys don't cry But your dad has shed a lot of tears They say I should be a strong man But baby, I'm still filled with fear Sometimes I don't know who I am Sometimes I question why I'm here I just wanna be a good dad Will I be? I have no idea They say girls shouldn't be tough And moms should raise their kids at home But baby, I know that that isn't true Cause your momma's the toughest person I know I wanna raise you to be like her And watch you show the world how to do it on your own I'm still tryna figure out who I am I don't wanna mess this up or do this wrong I'm gonna be there for your first breath I don't know if I'll be there for your first step I can promise you that I'll try to work less But the tour's routed, and I got this album Put in so many hours, and I just want the outcome To be something that I can look back and I can be proud of Don't wanna be a dad that's living in FaceTime But I've got a world to sing to and you at the same time I won't spoil you, you can trust that For your sweet sixteen, you get a bus pass Had your heart broken? Been there, done that I love you and I can't give you enough of that Get back to community that raised you up Read Langston Hughes, I suggest "A Raisin in the Sun" Listen to Sam Cooke, a change gon' come You put the work in, don't worry about the praise, my love Don't try to change the world, find something that you love And do it every day Do that for the rest of your life And eventually, the world will change [Ed Sheeran:] I'll be patient, one more month You'll wrap your fingers 'round my thumb Times are changing, I know, but who am I if I'm the person you become If I'm still growing up, up, up, up If I'm still growing up, up, up, up I'm still growing up [Macklemore:] I recommend that you read "The Alchemist" Listen to your teachers, but cheat in calculus Tell the truth, regardless of the consequence And every day, give your momma a compliment Take your girl to the prom But don't get too drunk hanging out the limo Slow dance with your woman in your arms Sneak her in after but boy, you better tiptoe Don't wake your mom up, do yoga, learn 'bout karma Find God, but leave the dogma The quickest way to happiness? Learning to be selfless Ask more questions, talk about yourself less Study David Bowie, James Baldwin and 2Pac Watch the sun set with best friends from a rooftop Wear a helmet, don't be stupid, jaywalk, but look before you do it If it snows, go outside, build a jump, get some help Get a sled, thrash the hill with your friends, 'til it melts Go to festivals, camp, fall in love and dance You're only young once, my loved one, this is your chance Take risks, cause life moves so fast You're only young once, my loved one, this is your chance [Ed Sheeran:] I'll be patient, one more month You'll wrap your fingers round my thumb Times are changing, I know, but who am I if I'm the person you become If I'm still growing up, up, up, up I'm still growing up, up, up, up [Ed Sheeran:] I'll be patient, one more month You'll wrap your fingers round my thumb Times are changing, I know, but who am I if I'm the person you become If I'm still growing up, still growing up, still growing up If I'm still growing up, still growing up, still growing up [Ed Sheeran:] I'm still growing up I'm still growing up, ooh, I'm still growing up, I'm still growing up "Letter to Me" By Brad Paisley If I could write a letter to me And send it back in time to myself at 17 First I'd prove it's me by saying look under your bed There's a Skoal can and a Playboy no one else would know you hid And then I'd say I know its tough When you break up after seven months And yeah I know you really liked her and it just don't seem fair All I can say is pain like that is fast and it's rare [1st Chorus] And oh you got so much going for you going right But I know at 17 it's hard to see past Friday night She wasn't right for you And still you feel like there's a knife sticking out of your back And you're wondering if you'll survive You'll make it through this and you'll see You're still around to write this letter to me At the stop sign at Tomlinson and Eighth Always stop completely don't just tap your brakes And when you get a date with Bridgett make sure the tank is full On second thought forget it that one turns out kinda cool Each and every time you have a fight Just assume you're wrong and daddy is right And you should really thank Mrs. Bringman She spend so much extra time It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishing you 'til you shine [2nd Chorus] And oh you got so much going for you going right But I know at 17 it's hard to see past Friday night Tonight's the bonfire rally But you're staying home instead because if you fail Algebra Mom and dad will kill you dead Trust me you'll squeak by and get a C And you're still around to write this letter to me You've got so much up ahead You'll make new friends You should see your kids and wife And I'd end up saying have no fear These are nowhere near the best years of your life I guess I'll see you in the mirror When you're a grown man P.S. "go hug Aunt Rita every chance you can" [3rd Chorus] And oh you got so much going for you going right But I know at 17 it's hard to see past Friday night I wish you'd study Spanish I wish you'd take a typing class I wish you wouldn't worry, let it be I'd say have a little faith and you'll see If I could write a letter to me To me "C.R.E.A.M." by Wu-Tang Clan [Raekwon and Method Man:] What that ni**a want, God? Word up, look out for the cops though Wu-Tang five finger sh** Cash rulesWord up, two for fives over here, baby Word up, two for fives, ni***s got garbage down the way Word up, know what I'm sayin'? Cash rules everything around me, C.R.E.A.M. getYeah, check this old fly sh** out, word up Cash rules everything around me, C.R.E.A.M. Get the money, dollar dollar bill, y'all Take you on a natural joint Here we here we go, check this shit, yo [Raekwon:] I grew up on the crime side, the New York Times side Stayin' alive was no jive Had secondhands, Mom's bounced on old man So then we moved to Shaolin land A young youth, yo rockin' the gold tooth, 'Lo goose Only way I be gettin' the G off was drug loot And let's start it like this, son Rollin' with this one and that one Pullin' out gats for fun But it was just a dream for the teen who was a fiend Started smokin' woolas at 16 And runnin' up in gates and doin' hits for high stakes Makin' my way on fire escapes No question I would speed for cracks and weed The combination made my eyes bleed No question I would flow off and try to get the dough all Stickin' up white boys in ball courts My life got no better, same damn 'Lo sweater Times is rough and tough like leather Figured out I went the wrong route So I got with a sick-a** clique and went all out Catchin' keys from 'cross seas Rollin' in MPV's, every week we made forty G's Yo, nigga, respect mine, or here go the TEC-9 Ch-chick-POW! Move from the gate now! [Method Man:] Cash rules everything around me C.R.E.A.M., get the money Dollar dollar bill, y'all Cash rules everything around me C.R.E.A.M., get the money Dollar dollar bill, y'all [Inspectah Deck:] It's been twenty-two long hard years, I'm still strugglin' Survival got me buggin', but I'm alive on arrival I peep at the shape of the streets And stay awake to the ways of the world 'cause shit is deep A man with a dream with plans to make cream Which failed; I went to jail at the age of fifteen A young buck sellin' drugs and such, who never had much Tryin' to get a clutch at what I could not The court played me short, now I face incarceration Pacin', goin' upstate's my destination Handcuffed in the back of a bus, forty of us Life as a shorty shouldn't be so rough But as the world turned I learned life is hell Livin' in the world no different from a cell Every day I escape from Jakes givin' chase Sellin' base, smokin' bones in the staircase Though I don't know why I chose to smoke sess I guess that's the time when I'm not depressed But I'm still depressed, and I ask: what's it worth? Ready to give up so I seek the old Earth Who explained workin' hard may help you maintain To learn to overcome the heartaches and pain We got stick-up kids, corrupt cops, and crack rocks And stray shots, all on the block that stays hot Leave it up to me while I be livin' proof To kick the truth to the young black youth But shorty's runnin' wild, smokin' sess, drinkin' beer And ain't tryin' to hear what I'm kickin' in his ear Neglected for now, but yo, it gots to be accepted That what? That life is hectic [Method Man:] Cash rules everything around me C.R.E.A.M., get the money Dollar dollar bill, y'all Cash rules everything around me C.R.E.A.M., get the money Dollar dollar bill, y'all [Inspectah Deck:] Ni***s got to do what they got to do To get through, know what I'm sayin'? Because you can't just get by no more Word up, you gotta get over, straight up and down [Method Man:] Cash rules everything around me C.R.E.A.M., get the money Dollar dollar bill, y'all Cash rules everything around me C.R.E.A.M., get the money Dollar dollar bill, y'all "Dreaming Of You" by Selena Quintanilla Late at night when all the world is sleeping I stay up and think of you And I wish on a star that somewhere you are Thinking of me too 'Cause I'm dreaming of you tonight 'Til tomorrow I'll be holding you tight And there's nowhere in the world I'd rather be Than here in my room dreaming about you and me Wonder if you ever see me And I wonder if you know I'm there Am I there? Am I? If you looked in my eyes Would you see what's inside Would you even care? I just wanna hold you close But so far all I have are dreams of you So I wait for the day, wait for the day And the courage to say How much I love you Yes I do! I'll be dreaming of you tonight 'Til tomorrow I'll be holding you tight And there's nowhere in the world I'd rather be Than here in my room dreaming about you and me Corazón I can't stop dreaming of you No puedo dejar de pensar en ti I can't stop dreaming Cómo te necesito I can't stop dreaming of you Mi amor, cómo te extraño Late at night when all the world is sleeping I stay up and think of you And I still can't believe That you came up to me And said, "I love you." I love you too! Now I'm dreaming with you tonight 'Til tomorrow and for all of my life And there's nowhere in the world I'd rather be Than here in my room dreaming with you endlessly With you tonight 'Til tomorrow 'Til tomorrow I'll be holding you tight And there's nowhere in the world I'd rather be Than here in my room I'll be dreaming of you tonight endlessly And I'll be holding you tight 'Til tomorrow dreaming endlessly With you tonight Endlessly endlessly dreaming "Keep Ya Head Up" by 2pac Shakur Little something for my godson Elijah And a little girl named Corin Some say the blacker the berry, the sweeter the juice I say the darker the flesh then the deeper the roots I give a holla to my sisters on welfare 2Pac cares if don't nobody else care And I know they like to beat you down a lot When you come around the block, brothers clown a lot But please don't cry, dry your eyes, never let up Forgive, but don't forget, girl, keep your head up And when he tells you you ain't nothing, don't believe him And if he can't learn to love you, you should leave him 'Cause, sister, you don't need him And I ain't trying to gas ya up, I just call 'em how I see 'em You know what makes me unhappy? When brothers make babies and leave a young mother to be a pappy And since we all came from a woman Got our name from a woman and our game from a woman I wonder why we take from our women Why we rape our women, do we hate our women? I think it's time to kill for our women Time to heal our women, be real to our women And if we don't we'll have a race of babies That will hate the ladies that make the babies And since a man can't make one He has no right to tell a woman when and where to create one So will the real men get up? I know you're fed up, ladies, but keep your head up Keep ya head up, ooh, child Things are gonna get easier Keep ya head up, ooh, child Things'll get brighter Keep ya head up, ooh, child Things are gonna get easier Keep ya head up, ooh, child Things'll get brighter Ayo, I remember Marvin Gaye used to sing to me He had me feeling like black was the thing to be And suddenly the ghetto didn't seem so tough And though we had it rough, we always had enough I huffed and puffed about my curfew and broke the rules Ran with the local crew and had a smoke or two And I realize momma really paid the price She nearly gave her life to raise me right And all I had to give her was my pipe dream Of how I'd rock the mic and make it to the bright screen I'm trying to make a dollar out of fifteen cents It's hard to be legit and still pay the rent And in the end it seems I'm heading for the pen I try to find my friends, but they're blowing in the wind Last night my buddy lost his whole family It's gonna take the man in me to conquer this insanity It seems the rain'll never let up I try to keep my head up and still keep from getting wet up You know, it's funny, when it rains it pours They got money for wars but can't feed the poor Say there ain't no hope for the youth And the truth is it ain't no hope for the future And then they wonder why we crazy I blame my mother for turning my brother into a crack baby We ain't meant to survive, 'cause it's a set-up And even though you're fed up Huh, you got to keep your head up Keep ya head up, ooh, child Things are gonna get easier Keep ya head up, ooh, child Things'll get brighter Keep ya head up, ooh, child Things are gonna get easier Keep ya head up, ooh, child Things'll get brighter And uh, to all the ladies having babies on they own I know it's kinda rough and you're feeling all alone Daddy's long gone and he left you by your lonesome Thank the Lord for my kids even if nobody else want 'em 'Cause I think we can make it, in fact, I'm sure And if you fall, stand tall and comeback for more 'Cause ain't nothing worse than when your son Wants to know why his daddy don't love him no mo' You can't complain you was dealt this Hell of a hand without a man, feeling helpless Because there's too many things for you to deal with Dying inside, but outside you're looking fearless While tears is rolling down your cheeks You steady hoping things don't fall down this week 'Cause if it did, you couldn't take it And don't blame me, I was given this world, I didn't make it And now my son's getting older and older and colder From having the world on his shoulders While the rich kids is driving Benz I'm still trying to hold on to surviving friends And it's crazy, it seems it'll never let up But please, you got to keep your head up YOUR MUSICAL INTRODUCTION Due 8/30/19 – Worth 10 pts Your musical choices tell us so much about you. They not only make clear your taste, but your influences, your experiences thus far in life, and your unique personality! Your Task: Imagine that you have been asked to produce a CD that expresses you! To complete your musical introduction, you will list 3 – 5 handpicked songs that represent YOU, and illustrate your CD’s cover. You must do a close reading and fill out the form for ONE of the songs you chose. Make deliberate choices as you put together your CD, these songs represent YOU so make them count. This is a mock-up for what your CD would look like, so you do not have to make these pages actually fit a CD jewel case. Instead, use 8 ½” by 11 paper. SONG TITLES MUST BE SCHOOL APPROPRIATE Defining Terms: “Liner Notes” The section on an album or CD cover where the musician gets to give thanks to people or make any comments about the album that they want. Sometimes people hide jokes in the liner notes or they thank everyone who has helped them finish the album. Steps to Take: • Assemble three songs that, in some important way, define you. They could be songs that mirror elements of your life (past or present), your influences, or that reflect aspects of your unique personality. • Print the lyrics to ONE OF THE SONGS and annotate them. Highlight key words and phrases and make notes in the margins. Your notes should include your questions, your personal connections, and your interpretations of the lyrics. Make sure to analyze the lyricist’s choice of words and his or her use of figurative language. • Explain your album. To do this, write a well-organized 5 sentence paragraph explanation for your three song’s inclusion in your CD. What do the songs mean? Why did you include these songs? How does it reflect an aspect of you (your journey, thus far, in life, your influences, and/or your unique personality)? Do any of the songs remind you of someone or something? Include a brief, well-chosen quote or two that supports how the songs represent you. • Construct a cover for your album. You can draw your visuals or use computer generated art. These visuals will continue to tell us more about you. They should tie into the songs you have selected. • Create a dedication page/liner notes. Who are the people who have guided you, thus far, toward making great choices in life? Who has believed in you all along? Remember them now with a thoughtful paragraph that explains what they have added to your life. • Title your album! Have fun, use your imagination, and be a bit symbolic. Make sure to have your album title, your name, and your period number on your front cover. • Edit and proofread your work carefully. o Make sure that your paragraphs avoid: Run-on sentences Sentence fragments Problems of subject/verb agreement Misspelled words o Make sure that your work reveals: Strong analysis of the songs Thoughtful connections to you Engaging and precise word choice Thoughtful and inviting visuals that symbolically represent your ideas Student: _______________________ Period: _______________________ Date: _______________________ MUSICAL INTRODUCTION CHECKLIST Front Cover/Title Page _____ • • • • Strong title that hints at the CD’s message Strong visuals symbolically make clear the CD’s message Student’s name and period are clear This work is neat, engaging, and shows effort Dedication Page _____ • • • Thoughtful discussion of the writer’s influences Neat, engaging, and shows effort Writing is relatively free from mechanical mistakes (grammar, spelling, and punctuation) Liner Notes Paragraph _____ • • topic sentences introduce the songs and the composer and lyricist supporting details o song is analyzed; its message is clear o figurative language or unique word choice is analyzed o connection to the student is clear o brief quote from the song with a line number in parentheses adds to this analysis o discussion of the brief quote • • • • • thoughtful conclusion transitional words and phrases move reader from one paragraph to the next tone is engaging word choice is thoughtful and precise writing is relatively free from mechanical mistakes (grammar, spelling, and punctuation) Song Lyrics _____ • • songs are well chosen and allow us to get to know you song lyrics are annotated thoughtfully Name: ____________________ YOUR Album – Close Reading of a Song . Select one of the songs you pick to study. Which song did you choose? ________________________________ Who is the lyricist? ___________________________________________ Read your lyrics all the way through to get an overall impression. Additionally, you may listen to the song on your cell phone/headphones. Number the lines ofs the song and read again, this time with a highlighter and a pencil close by. Circle key words and make notes or questions in the margins. Discuss your findings with your partner. What is the overall mood of this song? ______________________________________________________________________________________ Describe the personality of the singer/narrator. ______________________________________________________________________________________ Do the lyricist use any figurative language? (Look for metaphors, similes, personification, symbols, allusions, etc.) Quote your example below. Add the line number where you found this figurative language in parentheses. _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ Does the lyricist employ any unique words? Look for a word with multiple meanings or a word used in a surprising way. Quote your example below. Add the line number where you found these words in parentheses. _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ Analyze this word choice. What made it surprising, interesting, or thought provoking? _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ What is the lyricist’s overall message? _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ What else did you discover that surprised you? _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________