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2. Inside the Submarines

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Republic of the Philippines
BATANGAS STATE UNIVERSITY
Gov. Pablo Borbon Main II
Alangilan, Batangas City
LITERARY REFLECTION
Lit. 102 – ASEAN LITERATURE
A.Y. 2021-2022; 1st Semester
Note: Copy/paste someone else’s work = NO CREDIT
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Use the template in answering the question.
Use ARIAL or TIMES NEW ROMAN 12 (font style and size)
Use ENGLISH/FILIPINO as the medium for this activity.
Use YOUR NAME as the file name (Surname, First Name).
Look for “LITERARY REFLECTION” folder on Google classroom (see classwork for more
organized topics). It is where you upload your output. DO NOT FORGET to TURN IN.
Submission is on or before September 23, 2021, Thursday until 8:00pm. Once submitted, you
cannot resubmit your output to correct minor errors or to add something.
See the attached rubrics.
CRITERIA
Content &
Development
Organization &
Structure
Originality
Grammar,
Punctuation &
Spelling
RUBRICS for Literary Reflectiuon
Needs
Unsatisfactory
Satisfactory
Improvement
2
7
4
- Content is
- Content is not
- Content is
incomplete.
comprehensive and
accurate and
- Major points are not /or persuasive.
persuasive.
clear.
- Major points are
- Major points are
-Specific examples
addressed, but not
stated.
are not used.
well supported.
- Responses are
- Responses are
adequate and
inadequate or do not address topic.
address topic.
- Content is clear.
-Specific examples
-Specific examples
do not support topic. are used.
- Organization and
structure detract from
the message.
- Writing is
disjointed and lacks
transition of
thoughts.
-Writer's unique
perspective is not
evident and approach
seems clichéd and /or
uninteresting.
- Paper contains
numerous
grammatical,
punctuation, and
spelling errors.
Outstanding
10
- Content is
comprehensive,
accurate, and
persuasive.
- Major points are
stated clearly and are
well supported.
- Responses are
excellent, timely and
address topic.
- Content is clear.
-Specific examples
are used.
- Structure of the
paper is not easy to
follow.
- Transitions need
improvement.
- Conclusion is
missing, or if
provided, does not
flow from the body
of the paper.
Writer's unique
perspective is
somewhat evident.
Approach lacks
imagination.
- Structure is
mostly clear and
easy to follow.
- Transitions are
present.
- Conclusion is
logical.
-Structure of the paper
is clear and easy to
follow.
- Transitions are
logical and maintain
the flow of thought
throughout the paper.
- Conclusion is logical
and flows from the
body of the paper.
-Writer's voice and
unique perspective
is evident; a
creative and
innovative
approach grabs
reader.
-Writer's distinct
voice and unique
perspective is very
evident; a highly
creative and
innovative approach
grabs reader.
- Paper contains few
grammatical,
punctuation and
spelling errors.
- Rules of
grammar, usage,
and punctuation
are followed with
minor errors.
Spelling is correct.
- Rules of grammar,
usage, and
punctuation are
followed; spelling is
correct.
Republic of the Philippines
BATANGAS STATE UNIVERSITY
Gov. Pablo Borbon Main Campus II
Batangas City
COLLEGE of INDUSTRIAL TECHNOLOGY
Literary Reflection #2: Inside Submarines
NAME: Hercules M. Biacora
Yr.&Sect:
ELET 3102
DATE:
Score:
1. What is the underlying meaning of the poem? Reflect and give your own personal point about
it.
I can relate this poem to a story of a man of struggles. A man whose life enough is hard, full of
challenges and obstacles. This poem describes this man as a lone submarine fighting for dear life
on a deep, dark ocean. Traveling without a set destination, drifting along with the waves. The
man tries to live his life despite how hard and painful it may seem, trying to have a positive
outlook and hope for better things. He lives and builds and then lives again and builds things that
he was hoping for. It was his routine. But life is not that easy. Every time he stops, there is
something that is waiting for him. A storm. A storm that was ready to trample the things that he
has worked on, the things that he built. He stumbles and tries to look for help. But in the raging
storm, there was no one to help him because the others were also busy trying to save their own
lives. Once the storm subsides and he can see the debris of his work everywhere, he tries to stand
up and put it back together. But the truth is, it was not the first time that the storm has knocked
down his works. It happens now and then as if it was a part of his routine. But one day while
looking at the debris of his works, he had thought of something. What if he tries something new
and gets out of his usual routine. In the poem there was a line where the author said ‘Once I was
at the equator, trying to slice the earth in half’, this was just like what the man had thought. What
if’s was circling his mind. “What if for once, I let myself be free and less miserable?”, “What if
for once I try to explore and get out of this submarine?” He made up his mind and tries to get up
and explore. He had set up a new goal. He was ready. But then something pulled him back into
the deep, dark ocean. Someone held onto his hands and said “If you do that friend, we would fall
and won’t have any place to live.” With that, he was back again at the deep ocean. What do you
think would have happened if no one pulled him back? If no one held his hand? If that was the
case, he might have had found a new world, where his what if’s will be answered. But he stayed,
and let himself be submerged again into the deepest part of the ocean.
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