Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 1 Week 1 Day 3 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students working quietly? A Are they staying in their seats? Other observations: Considerations: If you notice that the students are having difficulty staying in their seats or working silently, call for their attention, remind them of your expectations, and have them resume writing. Be aware that some students may need to sit and think for a while before they start writing. 2 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 1 Week 2 Day 2 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students approaching writing with confidence and enthusiasm? A Are they able to start writing fairly quickly? A Do the students who have difficulty getting started begin writing after a few minutes? A Are they able to write sentences? A Can they spell some words conventionally? If not, do they approximate spelling using letter–sound relationships? Other observations: Considerations: Just note where the students are as writers, setting aside concerns about spelling or correctness at this point. Acknowledge their efforts and encourage them to write words and sentences as they are able. If you have a student who has difficulty writing anything at all, have that student dictate an idea to you. Write it on a self-stick note and have the student copy it onto his own paper and then add any further writing to it. © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 3 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 1 Week 3 Day 2 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students able to start writing fairly quickly? A Do those who sketch before writing begin to write fairly quickly? A Do they skip lines? A Do they capitalize the first letters of sentences and use ending sentence punctuation? A Do they make a best guess at spelling unfamiliar words and then keep writing? Other observations: Considerations: If you have a student who has difficulty writing anything at all, have that student dictate an idea to you. Write it on a self-stick note and have the student copy it onto her own paper and then add any further writing to it. 4 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 1 Week 4 Day 1 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Do the students list a variety of friends, such as older and younger friends, relatives, neighbors, and even pets? Other observations: Considerations: If you notice many students are struggling, signal for the class’s attention and ask the students to think about these questions: Q Who is a friend that is older than you? Younger than you? Q Who is a friend in your neighborhood? At school? Q Who do you play with after school? Have the students resume writing their lists. © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 5 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 1 Week 5 Day 4 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students writing stories with multiple sentences? Are some of them beginning to write stories more than one page in length? A Are they approximating the spelling of unfamiliar words? A Are they using ending sentence punctuation? A Are they capitalizing proper nouns and the first letters of sentences? Other observations: Considerations: If necessary, revisit the above skills with individual students, a small group, or the entire class. 6 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 1 Week 6 Day 2 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students writing stories with multiple sentences? Are they beginning to write stories that are more than one page in length? A Do they approximate the spelling of unfamiliar words? A Do they refer to the word wall to spell high-frequency sight words? A Do they use ending sentence punctuation? A Do they capitalize proper nouns and the first letters of sentences? Other observations: Considerations: If necessary, revisit the above skills with individual students, a small group, or the entire class. © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 7 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 1 Week 7 Day 3 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Does the author share in a voice loud enough for all to hear? A Does the author read at a pace that is neither too fast nor too slow? A Does the author wait for everyone’s attention? A Is the audience listening attentively? A Do the students ask the author to speak up if necessary? Other observations: Considerations: Make note of any problems you want to bring up with the students during the reflection. 8 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 2 Week 1 Day 2 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students able to write longer pieces by telling more? A Does their writing make sense? A Do they approximate the spelling of unfamiliar words? A Do they refer to the word wall to spell high-frequency sight words? A Do they capitalize proper nouns and the first letters of sentences and use correct sentence punctuation? Other observations: Considerations: Support students who are struggling with what to write or with telling more by having them tell you what they discussed in their partner conversations and by asking them questions about their writing. © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 9 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 2 Week 2 Day 3 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students able to write longer pieces by telling more? A Does their writing make sense? A Do they approximate spelling and use the word wall? A Do they capitalize proper nouns and the first letters of sentences and use correct sentence punctuation? A Do they attempt to use commas correctly in a series? Other observations: Considerations: Support students who are struggling with what to write or with telling more by asking them questions about their writing. If necessary, revisit the above punctuation and capitalization skills with individual students, a small group, or the entire class. 10 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 2 Week 3 Day 2 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are partners listening carefully to each other’s stories? A Are they able to tell each other what more they want to know? Other observations: Considerations: If partners are struggling, wait to see whether they work through their difficulties before you intervene. If they do not, support them by asking questions such as: Q What characters are in your partner’s story? Q What is something more you want to know about [his pet snake]? © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 11 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 2 Week 4 Day 2 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are partners listening carefully to each other’s stories? A Are they able to tell each other what more they want to know? Other observations: Considerations: If partners are struggling, wait to see whether they work through their difficulties before you intervene. If they do not, support them by asking questions such as: Q What characters are in your partner’s story? Q What is something more you want to know about this character, or about what happens to [her]? 12 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 3 Week 1 Day 2 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students able to get engaged with an idea and start writing fairly quickly? A Are they making up stories using their imaginations? A Can they sustain their focus on their writing? Other observations: Considerations: Be aware that some students may need to just sit and think for a while before they start writing. Give them uninterrupted time to do this. If you notice many students having difficulty starting to write after 10 minutes, call for the class’s attention and have a few volunteers share what they have written so far; then have them resume silent writing. © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 13 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 3 Week 2 Day 4 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students making up stories using their imaginations? A Can they sustain their focus on their writing? A Are they attempting to include dialogue? A Do they approximate the spelling of polysyllabic words by listening to their syllables? Other observations: Considerations: If you notice that many students are struggling to write stories, call for the class’s attention and have a few volunteers read their writing to the class. Then have the students resume silent writing. 14 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Print Week Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print All Units Unit 3 Week 3 Day 1 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students adding to their writing? A Do they seem to have a sense of when their piece is finished? Other observations: Considerations: If the students are having difficulty, support them by having them tell you about what they plan to add. Ask questions such as: Q Who are the characters in your story? What happens to them? Q What happens next? How can you write that? Q What did your partner want to know about your story? Where might you add that? Q What more can you tell about [how they escape from the haunted house]? © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 15 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 3 Week 4 Day 2 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students engaged and excited about making their fiction books? A Do they handle materials responsibly and share them fairly? A If they have disputes about the materials or supplies, are they able to resolve them in a fair way? A Will most students be finished making their book by the end of the period? Other observations: Considerations: Make note of any problems you notice the students having and be prepared to discuss them at the end of the writing period. 16 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Print Week Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print All Units Unit 4 Week 1 Day 3 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Were the students able to write questions to ask their partner? A Do they ask follow-up questions to get more information? A Do they help each other write answers when needed? A Are they talking respectfully to each other? Other observations: Considerations: Support struggling pairs by having one partner ask the other a question, listening to the answer, and asking: Q What can you write to capture what your partner just said? Q What else can you ask your partner about [what she likes to do on the weekend]? © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 17 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 4 Week 2 Day 4 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are pairs able to discuss and agree on sentences to write? A If they disagree, do they keep talking until they agree? A Do they write sentences that make sense and describe what happened? Other observations: Considerations: If you notice pairs having difficulty writing about the experiment after 5 minutes, support them by asking questions such as: Q What did we want to find out by doing this experiment? Q What is something else you might tell? How might you say that in your own words? 18 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Print Week Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print All Units Unit 4 Week 3 Day 4 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students excited to write about their topics? A Do they include factual information? A Do they use the charts from earlier in the week to help them write? Other observations: Considerations: Support the students by asking questions such as: Q What topic have you chosen? What do you want to tell about this topic? Q How might you write this information in a way that makes others interested in it, too? What might you say first? Q What is something else you might tell? How might you say that in your own words? © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 19 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 4 Week 4 Day 4 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students adding to their writing? A Do they have a sense of when their pieces are finished? Other observations: Considerations: If students are having difficulty, support them by having them tell you what they plan to add. Ask: Q Why did you pick this piece to publish? Why do you think your readers will find it interesting? Q What did your partner suggest that you add? Where might you add that? Q What else might you tell about your topic? 20 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 4 Week 5 Day 3 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students engaged and excited about making their nonfiction books? A Do they include any features of nonfiction books? A Do they handle the materials responsibly and share them fairly? A If they have disputes about the materials, are they able to resolve them in a fair way? Other observations: Considerations: Make note of any problems the students have so that you can discuss these problems at the end of the writing period. Also note whether most of the students will finish making their books today or whether they will need more time to do so. © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 21 Print Unit Print Week Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 5 Week 1 Day 1 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Day All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Do partners start writing quickly and stay on task? A Do they share the work? A Do they agree on what to write? Other observations: Considerations: Support pairs who are struggling to write by asking questions such as: Q What is something you’d like me to know about [our classroom/our classroom rules/how we go to lunch/how we use the computers]? Q What should I know about recess time? What are some things that could make recess time better? As you observe, jot a few notes about ways the students work responsibly and any problems you notice. You will use these notes during the reflection time at the end of the lesson. 22 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Print Week Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Day Print All Units Unit 5 Week 1 Day 4 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Do the students begin writing eagerly? A Do they use the five parts of a friendly letter? A Do they seem to consider the feelings of the recipient as they write? Other observations: Considerations: Support students who are struggling by asking them questions such as: Q Look around the room. Who is someone you might write to? Q What is something you might tell about yourself in this letter? How might you write that? Q What is something you want to ask this person? What question can you write to ask that? © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 23 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 5 Week 2 Day 4 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Do the students quickly pick a recipient and begin writing? A Do they use the five parts of a friendly letter? A Do they correctly punctuate the date, greeting, and closing? A Are they able to write something about themselves? Write questions? Tell more? Other observations: Considerations: Support students who are struggling by asking questions such as: Q Read this sentence aloud. Where does your voice naturally stop? What punctuation mark will you put there? Q What is something you’ve done recently that you can tell this person about? Q What would you like to know about this person? 24 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 5 Week 3 Day 1 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Do the students use the five parts of a friendly letter? A Do they notice and correct incorrect or missing capitalization or punctuation? A Do they notice and correct misspelled words? Other observations: Considerations: Support the students who are struggling by asking questions such as: Q Read this sentence aloud. Where does your voice naturally stop? What punctuation mark will you put there? © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 25 Print Unit Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 6 Week 1 Day 4 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students eager to write? A Do they use ideas from the chart and/or their own ideas? A Are they attempting to write poems rather than stories? Other observations: Considerations: Support students by asking questions such as: Q How are you starting your poem? Q Close your eyes and imagine your favorite food. What does it [look/feel/taste] like? How can you write that as a line in your poem? 26 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Unit Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Week Print All Units Unit 6 Week 2 Day 1 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students eager to write? A Do they use their listed descriptive words and/or other words of their own? A Are they attempting to write poems rather than stories? Other observations: Considerations: Support struggling students by having them look at their objects as you repeat the questions in Step 3 of the lesson. Encourage them to add to their poems by asking, “What other words tell what [your lunch box] looks like? Where might you add those words to your poem?” © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 27 Print Week Print All Units Class Assessment Record Unit 7 Week 1 Day 1 Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Day All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Are the students writing with confidence and enthusiasm? A Does their writing make sense? A Do they add to their writing to tell more? A Do they capitalize and punctuate sentences correctly? A Do they capitalize proper nouns and the pronoun I? A Do they approximate spelling and use the word wall? Other observations: 28 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Week Class Assessment Record Observe the students and ask yourself: Print Day Print All Units Unit 7 Week 1 Day 4 All or most students About half of the students Only a few students A Do the students remember to include the five parts of a letter? A Do they punctuate their letters appropriately? A Do their letters make sense and communicate clearly? A Do they check their spelling and make necessary corrections? Other observations: © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 29 Print Form Participates in partner work and class discussions Follows classroom procedures (e.g., gathering for readalouds, silent writing time, pair conferences, Author’s Chair) Uses “Turn to Your Partner” and “Think, Pair, Share” (e.g., faces partner, listens attentively, contributes ideas about the reading, question, or topic) Speaks clearly Listens to others Reflects on own behavior Takes responsibility for learning and behavior (e.g., during writing time, pair conferences, Author’s Chair) Acts considerately toward others Gives full attention to people who are speaking Uses discussion prompts (e.g., to express interest in one another’s writing, to build on one another’s thinking) Expresses interest in and appreciation for others’ writing Asks others questions about their writing Shares partner’s thinking with the class Agrees and disagrees in a caring way Reaches agreement before making decisions Makes fair decisions Discusses and solves problems that arise in work together Handles materials responsibly Shares materials fairly 32 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two na m s tudent Use the following rubric to score each student: 1 = does not implement 2 = implements with support 3 = implements independently es Social Skills Assessment Record Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring © Developmental Studies Center s tudent na m es Print Form Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring Fall Winter Spring © Developmental Studies Center Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 33 Print Form Individual Writing Assessment Tool: Fall BLM Student’s name Date Teacher’s name Grade Writing sample score (fall) 6+1 Trait® addressed Almost all of the writing Much (>50%) of the writing Some (<50%) of the writing Almost none of the writing It’s clear what this piece is about. I 4 3 2 1 The writing shows evidence of sustained thought and stays on topic. I 4 3 2 1 The writing shows creativity or personal engagement with the topic. V 4 3 2 1 O, S 4 3 2 1 There is varied and descriptive vocabulary. W 4 3 2 1 Spelling communicates effectively whether conventional or approximate. C 4 3 2 1 The writing incorporates taught skills. C 4 3 2 1 I, P 4 3 2 1 Descriptors of Successful Writing One idea flows logically into the next. Writing corresponds to illustration. Subtotals Total score (sum of 4 subtotals) (Highest=32, middle=20, lowest=8) I = Ideas O = Organization V = Voice W = Word choice S = Sentence fluency C = Conventions P = Presentation Teacher Reflections • What evidence of instruction do I see in this student’s notebook writing? • What areas of focus are evident in this student’s “Conference Notes” record sheets? • What might I want to focus on with this student between now and the winter assessment? 44 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Form Individual Writing Assessment Tool: Winter Student’s name Date Teacher’s name Grade Writing sample score (fall) BLM Writing sample score (winter) 6+1 Trait® addressed Almost all of the writing Much (>50%) of the writing Some (<50%) of the writing Almost none of the writing It’s clear what this piece is about. I 4 3 2 1 The writing shows evidence of sustained thought and stays on topic. I 4 3 2 1 The writing shows creativity or personal engagement with the topic. V 4 3 2 1 O, S 4 3 2 1 There is varied and descriptive vocabulary. W 4 3 2 1 Spelling communicates effectively whether conventional or approximate. C 4 3 2 1 The writing incorporates taught skills. C 4 3 2 1 Details are used to tell more. I 4 3 2 1 Descriptors of Successful Writing One idea flows logically into the next. Subtotals Total score (sum of 4 subtotals) (Highest=32, middle=20, lowest=8) I = Ideas O = Organization V = Voice W = Word choice S = Sentence fluency C = Conventions P = Presentation Teacher Reflections • How do this student’s fall and winter writing sample scores compare? • What changes do I notice in how I scored the fall and winter “Descriptors of Successful Writing?” • What learning is evident in this student’s recent notebook writing? In the “Conference Notes” record sheets? 52 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Form Individual Writing Assessment Tool: Spring Student’s name Date Teacher’s name Grade Writing sample score (fall) Writing sample score (winter) BLM Writing sample score (spring) 6+1 Trait® addressed Almost all of the writing Much (>50%) of the writing Some (<50%) of the writing Almost none of the writing It’s clear what this piece is about. I 4 3 2 1 The writing shows evidence of sustained thought and stays on topic. I 4 3 2 1 The writing shows creativity or personal engagement with the topic. V 4 3 2 1 O, S 4 3 2 1 There is varied and descriptive vocabulary. W 4 3 2 1 Spelling communicates effectively whether conventional or approximate. C 4 3 2 1 The writing incorporates taught skills. C 4 3 2 1 Details are used to tell more. I 4 3 2 1 Descriptors of Successful Writing One idea flows logically into the next. Subtotals Total score (sum of 4 subtotals) (Highest=32, middle=20, lowest=8) I = Ideas O = Organization V = Voice W = Word choice S = Sentence fluency C = Conventions P = Presentation Teacher Reflections • How do this student’s fall, winter, and spring writing sample scores compare? • What changes do I notice in how I scored the “Descriptors of Successful Writing” across the three samples? • What learning is evident in this student’s notebook writing? In the “Conference Notes” record sheets? 60 Being a Writer™ • Grade Two © Developmental Studies Center Print Form Individual Writing Assessment Class Record Sheet Student Names © Developmental Studies Center Writing Sample Scores Fall Winter Spring Being a Writer™ • Grade Two 61