Brandon Purnomo 2021-07-19
Exam: 12C - Diagnostic Writing Assessment
ssw_brandon.purnomo@bchati.sch.id
Word count: 480
Speech
Hello and good morning, my name is brandon and today im going to talk about the problem of
the take away lunches. take away lunches are creating a problem which causes a serious litter
problem. so to prevent this the school need to prepare a lunch set which does not create too
much waste. also for the community, we need to start creating and using eco friendly bags and
reduce the consumption fo the take away lunches. there are also some serious problem which
some of the take away lunches arent as healthy as the homemade lunches since if you make
the lunch at home you know the ingredients used in your food but if you buy take away food it
may harm your body because of the excess oil or ingredients that is not fresh. the take away
lunches has already causing a big problem to us so we must not making it bigger. to improve
the situation, we also need to do an event such as cleaning event on weekend morning to
reduce the waste and litters on the enviroment of our town. i do have another suggestions, we
could use non plastic plates or cups so that there are less plastic wastes around also if you are
using paper we could burn the waste down so there wont be any wastes scattering around
more. plastic is taking a long time for it to be destroyed. also i would like the students to learn
how to make their homemade lunches since it is cheaper than buying take away lunches. also
in some take away lunches especially fast foods there are preservatives that is used to
maintain the freshness and the taste of the food. also i could suggest a cooking contest so that
we can see who can cook better and also it would be much fun and also it could help those who
cant cook so they have an example and they can learn during this event. since there are wastes
i could suggest the students to bring their own lunchbox with this we can also reduce waste
since the lunchboxes are reusable and it wont make waste for the environment. we could sell
lunchboxes to help childrens in need so they wont have to throw a litter everytime they buy a
take-away lunches. that is all suggestion that i have, if someone have a question please dont
bother to ask and if there are more suggestions please dont hesitate to say it. i hope these
suggestion will help the locals to reduce the waste problem that is happening right now
because of the take away lunches. so i hope my suggestion can improve the situation that we
are experiencing right now and i hope the situation will be under control soon. and that is all
from me thank you for listening and god bless you.