SENIOR HIGH SCHOOL 2.0 CREATIVE NONFICTION Quarter 1 – Module 2 1S T GE NE RA TI ON MO DU LE S -V ER SI ON PRINCIPLES AND TECHNIQUES OF CREATIVE NONFICTION _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Creative Nonfiction – Senior High School Alternative Delivery Mode Quarter 1 – Module 2: Principles and Techniques of creative Nonfiction First Edition, 2020 2.0 Republic Act 8293, section 176 states that: No copyright shall subsist in any work of the Government of the Philippines. However, prior approval of the government agency or office wherein the work is created shall be necessary for exploitation of such work for profit. Such agency or office may, among other things, impose as a condition the payment of royalties. SI ON Borrowed materials (i.e., songs, stories, poems, pictures, photos, brand names, trademarks, etc.) included in this module are owned by their respective copyright holders. Every effort has been exerted to locate and seek permission to use these materials from their respective copyright owners. The publisher and authors do not represent nor claim ownership over them. -V ER Published by the Department of Education Secretary: Leonor Magtolis Briones Undersecretary: Diosdado M. San Antonio LE S Development Team of the Module Editor: Paterno A. Verano MO Reviewers: Dr. Clavel D. Salinas DU Writer: Aminah M. Sia Marivic M. Yballe (Moderator) ON Illustrator: Cyril Q. Bitoon Layout Artist: Cyril Q. Bitoon NE RA TI Management Team: Schools Division Superintendent Dr. Leah B. Apao Assistant Schools Division Superintendent Dr. Ester A. Futalan Assistant Schools Division Superintendent Dr. Cartesa M. Perico Assistant Schools Division Superintendent 1S T GE Dr. Marilyn S. Andales Dr. Mary Ann P. Flores CID Chief Mr. Isaiash T. Wagas Education Program Supervisor/ LRMDS Dr. Clavel D. Salinas PSDS/ Senior High School Coordinator Printed in the Philippines by: Department of Education – Region VII, Division of Cebu Province Office Address: IPHO Bldg., Sudlon, Lahug, Cebu City Telefax: (032) 255-6405 E-mail Address: cebu.province@deped.gov.ph _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV LE S -V ER SI ON CREATIVE NONFICTION 2.0 SHS- HUMSS MO DU Quarter 1 – Module 2: 1S T GE NE RA TI ON PRINCIPLES AND TECHNIQUES OF CREATIVE NONFICTION _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Introductory Message For the Facilitator: We trust that this Creative Nonfiction Alternative Delivery Mode (ADM) Module on the Principles and Techniques of Creative Nonfiction, shall help you 2.0 to engage your learner in the most enriching and fun ways. The collaborative SI ON work put in by the development team has ensured that each activity does not only facilitate acquisition of 21st Century skills but shall also take into ER consideration the circumstances, needs and well-being of each learner, -V especially at this time of anguish and uncertainty. Rest assured, that we have LE S not compromised learning through this modality but that all essential DU competencies are covered; the same way they will be tackled substantially in MO succeeding modules. ON For the Learner: AT I Real-life stories could be as fascinating as the fairy tales and nursery rhymes from your childhood or the online and printed novels you read in the NE R present. The characters, the setting and the action may even be more GE interesting if you know how to captivate your readers through escalating the thrill in a perspective that engages them; painting colorful images with 1S T metaphors or imagery as in poetry; or setting the mood and anticipation as in the dialogues in drama. The challenge is, even while integrating these elements and devices, how you do not deviate from events as they happen in reality. As you are expected to breathe life to your experiences by using literary elements and devices, Module 2 shall deal with analyzing how principles and techniques in creative nonfiction are exemplified in actual texts. ii _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV To ensure that each lesson is a full, fun and enriching experience, it is divided into the following parts: This introduces the learner where one is at in terms of competencies, objectives, and skills to prosper with in the subject matter. SI ON 2.0 What I Need to Know What I Know ER This checks the learner’s perception on the lesson. This connects the understanding on the previous topic to ideas of the present topic. This is a start-up of the lesson thru stimulus activities that sets the mood into the topic. DU MO What’s New LE S -V What’s In ON What is It NE R AT I This part discusses, unlocks, and guides the learners on the topic. This contains self-checked activities to set into the topic and develop knowledge and skills being asked. What I have Learned This section enriches the learning through a question / activity. 1S T GE What’s More This consists of an activity that applies the learner’s learning into day-to-day events in life. What I Can Do iii _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV This area checks the mastery / skills toward the topic. Assessment This section contains enhancement activities are given to further absorb the learnings. 2.0 Additional Activities Answer Key -V At the end of this module, you will also find: ER SI ON This contains answers to all activities in the module. This is a list of all sources used in making this module. LE S References DU The following are some reminders: MO 1. Use the module with care. Do not put unnecessary mark (s) on any part of ON the module. Use a separate sheet in answering exercises. AT I 2. Answer all activities included in the module starting with What I Know. 3. Read the instruction carefully before doing each task. NE R 4. Observe honesty and integrity in doing the tasks and checking your GE 5. Finish the task at hand before proceeding to the next. 1S T 6. Return this module to your teacher/ facilitator on schedule. If you encounter difficulty in answering the tasks in this module, do not hesitate to consult your teacher or facilitator. We hope that through this material, you will experience meaningful learning and gain deep understanding of the relevant competencies. iv _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV -V ER SI ON 2.0 Lesson 1: Characterization S Learning Competency: LE Analyze factual/ nonfictional elements (Plot, Characters, Characterization, DU Point of View, Angle, Setting and Atmosphere, Symbols and Symbolisms, Irony, Figures of Speech, Dialogue, Scene, Other Elements and Devices) in ON MO the texts. AT I WHAT I NEED TO KNOW NE R Learning objectives: At the end of the lesson, learners should be able to: ⚫ exemplify the different ways to reveal characters in creative nonfiction. GE ⚫ write a character sketch on a person one sees as a role-model. demonstrate creativity and open mindedness in writing a character sketch. 1S T ⚫ 1 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I KNOW PRE - ASSESSMENT Instructions: Write the letter of the correct answer. 1. ___ refers to what a character is thinking which helps us to understand how he acts. A. Action B. Inner Thoughts C. Reaction D. Speech figure of speech does Mark Twain use herein to describe his character. A. Simile B. Metaphor C. Personification 2.0 2. “He was sunshine most always - I mean, he made it seem like good weather,” What D. Antithesis SI ON 3. “He had a long chin and big rather prominent teeth, just covered, when he was not talking, by his full, floridly curved lips. Old, young? Thirty? Fifty? Fifty-five? It was hard to say.” In Brave New World, Aldous Huxley described a character by his ____ B. attitude C. behavior D. speech ER A. appearance -V 4. In the Jungle Book, Rudyard Kipling used ____ to describe one of the characters S as follows: “Everybody knew Bagheera, and nobody cared to cross his path, for he C. personification DU wounded elephant.” A. simile B. metaphor LE was as cunning as Tabaqui, as bold as the wild buffalo, and as reckless as the D. antithesis MO “The confident woman strode into the pub and took the usually shy Seamus by surprise. Despite his generally reserved nature, he got up the nerve to offer her his ON seat at the bar.” 5. In this excerpt, what type of characterization is used by the writer? B. discreet C. direct AT I A. subtle D. indirect A. one NE R 6. How many characters are described in the excerpt above? B. two C. three D. four GE 7. Seamus and the woman have ____ characteristics? A. similar B. contrasting C. difficult D. boring T 8. Seamus is ______ towards the woman. 1S A. angry B. annoyed C. attracted D. appalled “She was shaking her legs nonstop while biting her fingernails. Her eyes darted from left to right and up and down. Sometimes she would twist her fingers and sigh.” 9. We can infer from above description, that the character is ____ A. Happy B. tired C. grateful D. anxious 10. The writer is indirectly showing the character’s mood through describing her ___ A. action B. speech C. thoughts D. appearance 2 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV LET’S TAKE A Blast From the Past! You might have recalled in our study of fiction and drama that characters may be round or flat; dynamic or static. In creative nonfiction, characters may most likely be more complex, depending on their circumstance or state of mind. Their feelings, perspective or mood may change as influenced by norms, personal experience and beliefs. 2.0 WHAT’S IN SI ON FIRST IMPRESSIONS Instructions: Describe accordingly how you come up with your impressions on your first encounter with a person: ER UNPLEASANT/ UNKIND -V PLEASANT/ GOOD DU LE S PHYSICAL APPEARANCE MO ACTION/ ATTITUDE/ AT I ON BEHAVIOR SPEECH/ WAY OF T GE NE R TALKING 1S The writer does not always have to describe the characters directly but leaves his audience to make inferences through the characters’ actuations, thoughts, association with other characters or his tone and manner of speaking. 3 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’S NEW Instructions: Read portion of the autobiography of Gabriel Garcia Marquez describing his first meeting with his mother after so many years. Answer accordingly. She arrived at twelve - sharp. With her light step she made her way among the SI ON mischievous smile of her better days, and before I could react, she said: 2.0 tables of books on display, stopped in front of me, looking into my eyes with the "I'm your mother." Something in her had changed, and this kept me from recognizing her at first ER glance. She was forty-five. Adding up her eleven births, she had spent almost ten -V years pregnant and at least another ten nursing her children. She had gone gray before her time, her eyes seemed larger and more startled behind her first bifocals, S and she wore strict, somber mourning for the death of her mother, but she still Before anything else, even before she embraced me, she said in her DU air. LE preserved the Roman beauty of her wedding portrait, dignified now by an autumnal MO customary, ceremonial way: "I've come to ask you to please go with me to sell the house." AT I ON - Living to Tell the Tale (Gabriel Garcia-Marquez) 1. She had gone gray before her time means she looks _______ for her age. NE R 2. Autumnal air or autumn symbolizes __________________. 3. Despite all her years of struggle, she maintained her ________________. GE 4. According to how the writer described his mother, how do you imagine her tone would be talking to him. Expound. T ___________________________________________________________________ 1S ___________________________________________________________________ You can learn from the works of creative nonfiction writers on how they reveal character traits through varied creative ways without losing track of reality. 4 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT IS IT ⚫ Characterization refers to how the writer develops or create mental images of characters for his audience. ⚫ The two (2) approaches to characterization are: 1. Direct Characterization - the writer tells his audience what he/she wants them to 2.0 know about the character through outright description by the writer, by another character’s description or by the character himself. SI ON 2. Indirect Characterization - the writer shows his audience things about the character to help them understand the character's personality, motives or effect on other ⚫ ER characters Five Methods of Characterization (PAIRS) -V 1. Physical description - the character's physical appearance is described: tall, thin, S fat, pretty, color of hair, way of dressing, etc. stylish, expensive clothing? LE 2. Action/attitude/behavior - the character’s behavior and attitude: good, bad, DU generous, greedy, etc.; focus on a character’s idiosyncrasies, unique or distinct behavior, also gives insight to his personality while his movement and mannerisms MO may also reveal his disposition at a given moment ON 3. Inner thoughts - what the character thinks, revealing their personalities and feelings. 4. Reactions - a character’s effect on others or what the other characters say and feel AT I about this character; how the character makes other characters feel: others are NE R scared, happy, confused, excited, annoyed with a given character 5. Speech - what the character says or his/her manner of speaking, tone, choice of GE words: gentle, soft-spoken, rude, aggressive, imposing, monopolizing, etc.; dialogue with other characters and a monologue or the character talking to himself also allows T inference to a character’s traits or motives. 1S ⚫ As real people, characters in creative nonfiction are complex and multi-faceted and writers may not be able to describe them directly in-depth. Their traits and layers of their personalities are revealed accordingly with how much participation the writer allows these characters in his written work. To make descriptions even vivid, writers use figurative language such as symbolism, similes or metaphors. 5 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’S MORE Instructions: Read the following excerpt from I have a Dream, a speech delivered by the late Martin Luther King in 1963. Answer the following questions. I am happy to join with you today in what will go down in history as the greatest 2.0 demonstration for freedom in the history of our nation. SI ON Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation. This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the ER flames of withering injustice. It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of -V their captivity. But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, LE S the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination. One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island DU of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later, MO the Negro is still languished in the corners of American society and finds himself an exile in his own land. And so we've come here today to dramatize a shameful ON condition. AT I In a sense we've come to our nation's capital to cash a check. When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of NE R Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir. This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, GE would be guaranteed the "unalienable Rights" of "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness." It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note, T insofar as her citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred 1S obligation, America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back marked "insuf ficient funds." But we refuse to believe that the bank of justice is bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation. And so, we've come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of justice. 6 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Questions: 1. Who is the great American described by Martin Luther King in the second paragraph who gave hope for black Americans to enjoy the same freedom as the rest of America’s citizens? ___________________________ 2. How is the “Negro” described here by Martin Luther King according to their situation? _________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 2.0 3. Has America fulfilled its promise of equal opportunities at that time? Why do you say so? ____________________________________________________________ SI ON 4. Judging from Martin Luther King’s speech, how would you describe him as a ER person? ____________________________________________________________ -V WHAT I HAVE LEARNED S Instructions: In the following excerpt on a feature story about Robin Williams, pick out LE clues to his traits or state of mind at the time of writing; identify these traits/ state of DU mind and the method used: (physical description; action/ behavior/ attitude, inner thoughts; reaction; manner of speaking/ dialogue/ tone/ words used; another MO character’s opinion; author’s description or the character’s description of himself ) by which these are revealed. Give at least five (5). ON When Williams and Rock had some time alone, though, Rock saw another, AT I startlingly different side of his new friend — a man who was visibly distraught about his life. “He’d be up, up, up, and then sitting down with him, he’d cry and start t alking NE R about his personal life,” Rock recalls. “It’s something I never expected.” As Rock learned, Williams was heading toward a divorce with his second wife — “He was broke GE up about it” — and he also noticed Williams was going to the bathroom to pee “every 15 minutes” for what he later learned was a worsening heart condition. “I know T comedians can be dark, but it was weird to be in fucking Afghanistan and have 1S someone sit down and really open up like that,” Rock says. “When he got deep, he got deep.” By then, Williams was nothing less than an institution, revered for his charitable causes and his hyperkinetic, pinball-machine-on-overdrive brain. “He was like a computer,” says Martin Short, who met Williams in 1979. “Spewing out names from some film he saw once in 1956. He was just a genius. I would be in awe.” 7 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Williams had a Best Supporting Actor Oscar (for his role in 1997’s Good Will Hunting) and a career that alternated between crowd-pleasers like Patch Adams and Mrs. Doubtfire, and gritty indies like One Hour Photo and Insomnia. He also had a reputation as one of the most generous in his field, from working tirelessly to help the homeless at Comic Relief benefits with his friends Billy Crystal and Whoopi Goldberg to his regular donations to AIDS char ities. 2.0 Over the course of his career, Williams talked openly about his struggles with drinking and drugs, the breakups of his first two marriages and other personal issues. SI ON “Oh, I don’t have inner peace,” he told RS in 1988. “I don’t think I’ll ever be the type that goes, ‘I am now at one with myself.’ Then you’re fucking dead, OK? You’re out of ER your body.” He routinely turned morbid thoughts like suicide into fodder for jokes. While shooting Mork & Mindy, he saw a rope dangling of the set and pretended to -V hang himself. “The series is called Mindy now,” he cracked. In a podcast with Marc Maron in 2010, he rattled of a bit about his conscience quizzing him on his suicidal LE S thoughts: “What were you going to do, cut your wrist with a Waterpik?” Yet Williams always left the impression he was in control, that he wouldn’t end up like so many DU artists before who had succumbed to their demons. His first priority was to entertain, MO to get the laugh, rather than dwell on himself. “He talked about drinking and a little about depression, but it was always light,” says Bob Zmuda, the Comic ON Relief organizer who had known Williams since the late Seventies. “It was always under control. So we all thought, ‘OK, well, I know Robin had some drinking problems, AT I and he was mildly depressed. NE R TABLE OF CHARACTER TRAIT/ DISPOSITION METHOD HOW CHARACTER TRAIT/STATE OF MIND TRAIT/ STATE OF MIND IS REVEALED 1S T GE CLUES FROM THE TEXT 8 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I CAN DO “I Have A Dream” Instructions: Write a monologue or speech of at least two paragraphs to express your dream for the Philippines and how this could possibly be realized. Start your paragraphs with I have a dream that the Philippines … 2.0 I have a dream that the Philippines ___________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ SI ON ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ER ___________________________________________________________________ -V ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ LE S ___________________________________________________________________ DU I have a dream that the Philippines ___________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ MO ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ON ___________________________________________________________________ AT I ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ NE R ___________________________________________________________________ T GE ___________________________________________________________________ 1S You can learn from the works of creative nonfiction writers on how they reveal character traits through varied creative ways without losing track of reality. 9 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV ASSESSMENT Assessment # 1 Name: _________________________________ Grade & Section: _______ Date: ________________ Score: ________ Instructions: Write the letter corresponding to the character trait exemplified in each SI ON 2.0 item. Choose from the figures below. C. stingy D. inconsiderate ON MO DU LE S -V A. kind ER B. appreciative AT I 1. She stood there with hot flushed cheeks while tears were welling from her eyes. NE R She did not have as much as an hour’s sleep to finish the presentation, but the heavy rain had more than doubled her travel time. The manager had lashed at her in front of the client and threw her portfolio out of the door. She was fired right there and then, GE no matter how much she explained and begged. Her boss was simply ____ ____ 2. He silently sneaked inside the room and helped the humiliated peddler to her 1S T feet, asking her if she was hurt. He walked with her to the exit and slipped some hundred-peso bills to her pocket. ____ 3. With crinkled brows and a pout, he checked his bill one more time, mumbling to himself, “P200.00 for a simple meal of a single boiled egg and a slice of ham, a slice of bread and black coffee!” ____ 4. The old lady hugged her four times already; each time saying thank you. She whispered God will repay his kindness one day and if she ever gets the chance to come to the city again, she will seek him and bring him the best of her produce. 10 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV B. remorseful C. slothful/ lazy D. adept/ skillful SI ON 2.0 A. arrogant ER ____ 5. He stayed in bed all morning, unmindful of the people around who have been up very early to get the table ready for the big banquet at lunchtime. The plate, utensils -V and leftovers from for dinner that was brought to him by his grandmother because he says he was too tired to go down were still scattered on his bedside table while the LE S room smells of molds and his clothes are all cluttered in every corner. ____ 6. He looked down at the poor old beggar as he brushed off dirt from his shirt. DU He spat at him and uttered expletives at him. MO ____ 7. With a whisk of some bamboo strips he found nearby, he quickly came up with ladles and spoons to scoop the coconut water and meat with. He also quickly ON made a bowl out of the coconut shell, smoothening the surface to avoid splinters. ____ 8. She knelt before him and with a bow repeatedly sought his forgiveness. AT I “Forgive me, master. I know you have done so much for me and my family. NE R ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY Instructions: In at least two (2) paragraphs, write about a person that you look up to GE as a role-model. Make a characterization by physical description, action, innermost 1S T thoughts, reactions or manner of speech. Write on a separate sheet. “I KNOW THE PERSON SO WELL” _______________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 11 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV ANSWER KEY Lesson 1 2.0 10. A SI ON 9. D 8. B 8. C 7. B 6. A 6. B 5. C 5. C -V ER 7. D 4. B S 4. A 3. A LE 3. C Pre-Assessment 1S T GE NE R AT I ON Assessment 1. B MO 1. D 2. B DU 2. A 12 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV DU LE S -V ER SI ON 2.0 Lesson 2: Point of View MO Learning Competency: Analyze factual/ nonfictional elements (Plot, Characters, Characterization, ON Point of View, Angle, Setting and Atmosphere, Symbols and Symbolisms, NE R the texts. AT I Irony, Figures of Speech, Dialogue, Scene, Other Elements and Devices) in GE WHAT I NEED TO KNOW Learning objectives: At the end of the lesson, learners should be able to: 1S T ⚫ describe situations using different perspectives. ⚫ write about real-life experiences using varied points of view. ⚫ appreciate and respect other people’s perspective of situations. 13 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I KNOW PRE-ASSESSMENT Instructions: Write the letter corresponding to the correct answer. 1.The _____ Person Point of view is used to make readers feel that they are experiencing events as if they are actual participants or witnesses and uses such pronouns as you, your or yourself. B. 2nd D. 3r Person – Omniscient C. 3rd - Limited A. tone B. style C. approach SI ON 2. _____ is defined by the type of narrator speaking or telling the story. 2.0 A. 1st D. point of view 3. ____ is how the character perceive or view about what is happening. B. style C. perspective D. approach ER A. tone -V 4. ____ has to do with the writer’s attitude about his subject and may be communicated through his choice of words. B. style C. perspective D. point of view S A. tone B. subjective C. offensive D. combative DU A. objective LE 5. The ____ approach is limited to facts and not on feelings. 6. The ____ approach includes one’s personal experiences, observations and MO feelings. A. objective B. subjective C. offensive D. combative ON 7. “Even the poor can dream. A dream of a time when there is money. Money for the right kinds of food, for worm medicine, for iron pills, for toothbrushes…” The tone in J. NE R A. sarcastic AT I Parker’s work,” What is Poverty?” is ___ B. humorous C. angry D. serious 8. ____ is the mark of personality upon the writer’s work; it refers to a writer’s way of using language GE A. style C. approach D. perspective The pronouns he, she, it and they suggest the ____ person point of view T 9. B. tone B. 2nd C. 3rd D. 4th 1S A. 1st 10. “We got our TV set in 1959, when I was 5 years old. So, I can barely remember life without television.” This text from J. Maynard’s “I Remember” is written in ____ point of view. A. 1st B. 2nd C. 3rd - Limited D. Omniscient 14 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’S IN Instructions: Write an advice for the given situation below. Situation: You are close friends with a couple who each confided in you, following a misunderstanding regarding priorities. The boyfriend accordingly is spending so much time playing online; he sees his girlfriend as demanding and a nagger. What would you say to 2.0 each of them? ER SI ON TO THE BOYFRIEND LE S -V TO THE GIRLFRIEND DU WHAT’S NEW MO Instructions: Read the different side of the story of Cinderella as told by her supposed ON wicked stepmother. Cite details in this story and compare with the original Cinderella story. THE STEPMOTHER’S PERSPECTIVE 1S T GE NE R AT I THE ORIGINAL CINDERELLA STORY 15 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Cinderella (As Told by the Evil Stepmother) - Tavinder New “I hate you. You, old hag!” she screamed as she threw the bowl across the room. I had made her favorite dish – soup, which I had spent ages cooking in the kitchen. Her father had told me that it was going to be hard to be accepted as her new mother, but this was much harder than I had imagined. 2.0 “Mum we have tried. I offered to give her my new dress,” said Gemma. SI ON “I said that I would take her to the ball with us,” said Louisa. “What can we do? She calls us ugly sisters, it’s so cruel,” cried Pamela. ER I hugged my two daughters closely. I wanted Cinderella to accept us as we had with her. But she hated us; calling me a ‘wicked stepmother’ and slamming doors. She would cry -V and portray us as ogres. LE S With the arrival of the Prince’s invitation for us to go to the ball, I even tried to invite her, but she was spoiled and rude. “I don’t want to go, you old hag. Get lost!” she shouted. “I DU will get there myself ,” she stormed off as usual to her room. “I miss my mum. You married my MO father for his money. You old cow!” as she shouted going into her room. I sat down, and felt the tears roll down my cheeks. I had fallen in love with her father, ON Jeremy. It wasn’t planned and he had accepted my two daughters with open arms. I hadn’t AT I wanted to get married again; worried as to what people would say and being stereotyped as NE R the wicked stepmother. Jeremy had told me about Cinderella; that she was pretty, had beautiful golden hair and green eyes. But she was pampered by her father who had put her on a pedestal. She GE was bad tempered, fussy and as soon as I came into the house, she made me, and my 1S T daughters live in misery. Cinderella would shout, scream and write letters to the neighbors that I had locked her in the basement without food. But this was simply not true. She would rip my daughters’ clothes, put mouse traps so that we would step into them and would have to go to the local hospital. Often, she would smash plates, not eat, and people feel sorry for her. But when she went out with Jeremy, her attitude would change. “Good morning, Mrs. Pennington. How do you do? greeted Cinderella. “What a lovely child you have Jeremy!” 16 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV “I have lost weight again. My stepmother is evil and I need some food. Can I eat at your house?” So, she would go to eat at the neighbors’ houses and get free clothes; and they would feel sorry for her; while I was perceived as the evil stepmother. “Do you think the Prince will ask me? asked Gemma. She had fallen in love with him and had seen him a couple of times in town. I wanted Gemma to get married to the Prince. They were perfect for each other and had spent time together in theatre shows and jousting 2.0 fights. SI ON I had received the Prince’s Invitation personally. “Prince Griffiths has cordially invited you to the Grand Ball, where he will announce his engagement. The ball will be a grand affair ER so dress for the occasion.” -V This was the news that I was waiting for; the public statement for the wedding of my daughter. I had tried once more to invite Cinderella, but again , she threw her spoon at my S face hitting my head. “Go away, you hag” she shouted. I never told Jeremy how much she LE hated me and would lie about my bruises and cuts. I would tell him that I had fallen over or DU that I was just being clumsy. MO The night of the ball came. We had all dressed up and were ready to go, with the anticipation of the news of my daughter’s wedding. The palace was magnificent: gold, ON sparkling, grand staircases and chandeliers. The servants looked well-dressed themselves AT I and the prince… the prince looked so dazzling. It was then that I saw this mysterious girl. I was sure that she was wearing one of NE R Gemma’s dresses from her closet, as well as her shoes. She was wearing a mask and accidentally spilled her drink on the Prince. As far as I could see, she was apologizing, but I GE was sure that she had put something into that drink. T Prince Griffiths danced with that girl for most of the night, while Gemma had tears in 1S her eyes; hiding herself inside the toilet in embarrassment. I was about to confront the prince, when this girl suddenly run off at the struck of midnight. She left one of her slippers on the landing. Prince Griffiths himself fainted and there was chaos in the castle as we were all ushered out. Pacing up and down, I was concerned over Gemma who had locked herself in the bedroom after the ball. There was a commotion over the Prince coming over to find the girl who he had danced with the night before. He had roamed around town asking women to try 17 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV on the glass slipper. I desperately wanted to speak to the Prince as to why he had changed his mind over Gemma, so I asked. “Prince Griffiths, I thought you loved Gemma?” “Gemma?! I have heard how cruel and mean she was to her stepsister. I have heard how she had treated Cinderella so unkindly.” “But this is simply not true! You have spent time with Gemma, how can you….?!” “Yes, I had. but that mysterious girl told me so many things that horrified me. I also fell in love 2.0 with her beauty, that golden hair…I must find out who she is. And by the way, I heard rumors of you locking your stepdaughter in the basement. I don’t want to be associated with a cruel SI ON family like that.” “That’s a false accusation! I have never done that.” “Let’s go and check then, shall we!” he shouted. He dashed down to the basement, and I could hear weeping inside. ER My heart was beating louder and louder as he was smashing the door. The door broke into -V pieces as he found Cinderella in the room with tears down her cheeks. “Prince, you have come to save me from this evil woman’ she pointed at me. S “This is simply not true. Cinderella please stop lying to people” “See, Prince? She is an evil LE woman. Locking me inside the room and pushing her daughter to marry you for your money!” DU “Of course not, Gemma is crazy about you. She truly does love you!” “Stop this nonsense! he MO shouted at me. “Poor Cinderella. Now, if you could you try this slipper for me?” He put the glass slipper on Cinderella and it fits! It was Gemma’s. She had stolen it, ON in the same way she had, the dress last night. I knew it was her but who would believe me? AT I They would much rather believe the story of this poor innocent girl. NE R WHAT IS IT • GE • Point of View – refers to the narrator or the one telling the story 1st Person Point of View – the most credible and intimate among the types of narration 1S T as readers are given access to a writer’s thoughts and beliefs; denoted by 1 st person • pronouns: I, we, me, my, myself, us, ourselves 2nd Person Point of View – makes readers feel that the writer is actually directly talking or addressing his readers; readers become part of the story or narrative or are experiencing events as if they are actual participants or witnesses; denoted by pronouns: you, your, yourself • 3rd Person Point of View –most objective among the different points of view; used to tell the story as it unfolds; gives a more global/ universal view of what’s happening in the story; uses pronouns he, she, it, they 18 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV • 3rd person Point of View – the narrator presents the thoughts, feelings and experiences of more than one/ many characters; narrator is privy to past, present and possibly, future events. • 3rd Person Limited – the narrator is restricted to one particular character’s experiences, thoughts, beliefs and feelings. • Perspective – is how a narrator perceives what’s happening in the story through his/her characters; how they think or feel or what they believe according to their 2.0 experiences; the story could change depending on whose perspective it is told • SI ON Perspective can be used in whichever point of view; it helps to define the narrator’s attitude and personality • Approach refers to the angle at which a story or narrative is written; Can either be ER objective which is based on accuracy of facts or subjective which includes one ’s feelings and emotions based on his personal experience and observations. • -V Tone – is the writer’s attitude towards his subject communicated through his/ her MO WHAT’S MORE DU LE S choice of words; a tone can be encouraging, funny, sarcastic, etc. Instructions: Differentiate the three different points of view in talking about your personal ON or other people’s experiences during the pandemic. For 2 nd Person Point of View, you may NE R AT I opt to suggest precautionary measures. GE 1st Person Point of View 1S T 2nd Person Point of View 3rd Person Point of View 19 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I HAVE LEARNED Instructions: Read about the near-death experience of former NFL player, Earl Woff, written in his own words and as it appeared in the Reader’s Digest March 2017 issue. Answer the questions that follow. This is How I Survived Earl Woff 2.0 - It’s a Monday in February, and I’m back home in Fayetteville, North Carolina. SI ON Though I’m exhausted from travel, it’s my buddy’s birthday, so I go over to his girlfriend’s house and we spend the night catching up until I say goodbye around ER midnight. My mother’s home is just five minutes away. I had come home to celebrate -V her birthday. My 2011 white Range Rover is parked on the street. As I get in and reach for LE S the seat belt, someone yanks my door open. There’s a man wearing a black ski mask DU and pointing an AK-47 inches from my face. MO “Give me the keys!” he barks. “And get out of the car!” coming out of my mouth. ON I freeze, wondering if my buddy is playing a trick on me. I babble, but words aren’t AT I “Give me your wallet! Your phone!” NE R I step out and hand over my belongings. Another man with a shotgun rushes toward s me and shoves me into the backseat. Two other men with shotguns appear from the GE side of the house and hop into the car. The man with the AK-47 gets behind the wheel, and I’m squished between two of the masked men in the backseat. We begin driving 1S T around the neighborhood. “Where’s the money at?” one shouts. “I, I, I don’t have any money,” I stammer. “Where’s the money at?” “You can have the car. You can have anything you want,” I say. “Just let me get back to my family.” 20 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV “Why are you lying?” says the man in the front passenger seat. “Lie to me again and I’ll kill you.” I can’t feel my mouth when I talk. I try to breathe. I think of my mom. I think of God. I stare straight ahead. I’m trembling. Though I can’t see their faces, I can tell by their voices that they are young. They ask for my name. 2.0 “Earl,” I say. “Earl Wolff.” SI ON “Wait,” one of the men says. “The football player?” “Yes,” I say. ER “And you’re telling me you have no money?” -V One of the men next to me bashes me twice in the right knee with his gun. I’m bleeding. LE S Where I’m from, a lot of people don’t make it out. Of all my friends I grew up DU with, only one went to college. I’ve never been arrested; I graduated from college in three and a half years. I’m terrified of getting in trouble. My main motivation: I don’t MO want to ever disappoint my mother. ON My parents separated when I was in second grade, and though my father is still in my life, I’ve always been a mama’s boy. She was in the military, and she just AT I retired after 31 years of service. The hardest year of my life was when she was NE R deployed overseas. Playing football, I knew I’d have an opportunity to provide for her. And yet here I am, kidnapped after an innocent night at my friend’s house. GE My heart is racing, my head spinning. All I’m thinking is why this is this T happening to me? What did I do to deserve this? 1S My financial adviser never allows me to keep too much money in my bank account. So, when one of my captors orders me to withdraw $10,000, I say it’s impossible. “I only have $400 in my account,” I say. “Look, you have my phone. Open the Wells Fargo app. Here’s my password. You’ll see there’s just $400.” “If you’re lying,” he says, repeating a numbing refrain, “I’ll kill you.” 21 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV When they see I’m not lying, they ask if my friend has money at the house where they picked me up. “Maybe,” I say. “If he does, he’ll give you whatever he has.” We drive back to my friend’s house. I am led to the door with my hands in the air. I feel the AK-47 pressed against my back. My friend opens the door. He instantly slam s 2.0 it in my face. I now think I am dead. I close my eyes. My captors are panicking. I hear them conspiring, wondering if my friend has SI ON called the cops. They rush me back into the vehicle and secure zip ties around my ankles and my arms, which are then tied behind my back. They put an itchy hat over ER my face. Now we’re driving, and I have no idea where we are or what time it is. At -V some point, two other men get into the vehicle, and five of us are crammed into the backseat. I am exhausted. I try to keep my faith. I try to think of my mom. I am numb, LE S but she is all I have left. The car jolts to a stop. I’m pulled out of the back and shoved onto the road. DU Lying on my back, I think, I can’t die this way. And then, in the distance, I hear the MO faintest sound of police sirens. The men hear it too. They scurry into the car and speed ON away. I am left alone. I am alive. I manage to shimmy out of the arm ties and then AT I slide the hat off my face. I’m surrounded by woods. I can’t free my legs because those ties are too tight, so I begin to hop. I hop and hop and hop down the road. I eventually NE R come across a trailer park. At the second trailer, the lights are on. I can hear the sound GE of laughter and chatter, so I knock on the door, back up, and wait with my hands up. “Who is it?” a man barks from behind the door. 1S T “Sir,” I say. “I’ve been in a terrible situation and I need some help.” He opens the door and stares at me. “I have just been robbed and kidnapped,” I say. “Can you please call the police?” Another man appears in the doorway and points a handgun at me. “Look, I play for the Jacksonville Jaguars,” I say, pointing to the team -issued shorts I’m wearing. 22 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV They don’t trust me. I anticipate a shot being fired, so I fall down and roll on the ground. There’s a loud bang. Shot fired. I hear the men close the door, and I realize I can still feel my body. The shot was likely a warning to scare me or anyone else who might have been lurking in the shadows. But I am alone. I am on the ground. I’m sobbing. I suddenly get a rush of adrenaline. I manage to get my legs out of the ankle 2.0 restraints and start running. I see an intersection. I stand in the grass as cars pass by. SI ON I wave my hands, asking for someone to stop, but no one does. I run to a gas station. It’s lit up, but nobody is there. The pay phone has a broken cord hanging from it. I ER crumble to the ground, defeated again, when a couple pulls in. -V “Are you OK?” the woman asks. “I was robbed and kidnapped,” I say. “Please, I just need some help.” LE S “That’s all you need me to do?” she says in a maternal way. “We are going to wait for DU the police to get here.” MO “Yes,” I say. “Please. Thank you.” Help, finally, is on the way. Questions: ON 1. In what point of view is the narrative/ story written? ________________________ AT I 2. What is the tone of the narrative/ story? _________________________________ 3. What could be the perspective (thoughts) of the following characters at each given NE R point/ event in the story? 1. Earl’s friend when he slammed the door on him _________________ ___ _ GE ___________________________________________________________________ 2. the kidnappers when they shove Earl him onto the road _________________ ___ _ 1S T ___________________________________________________________________ 3. the men in the trailer who even fired a warning shot to shoo him away ___________________________________________________________________ 4. the old lady who willingly helped him and waited with him until the police came______________________________________________________________ 5. the narrator as he begged for his life and thought of his mother ___________________________________________________________________ 23 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I CAN DO Instructions: Interview any one of your family members and ask about a TV program or movie that he/she likes and why. Write an essay with 8-10 sentences using the point of view of your choice. _____________________________________________________________ 2.0 ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ SI ON ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ER ___________________________________________________________________ -V ___________________________________________________________________ S Assessment LE ASSESSMENT # 2 DU A. Instructions: On the blank, write the Point of View (1 st Person, 2nd Person, Third Person) MO by which each passage is written. ____ 1. You came to an empty house. Worst, the electricity and water were cut off. You ON let out a scream as you rush out to process these unfortunate events. The building manager must know the circumstances behind. AT I ____ 2. We have been waiting for this for so long. I could not hide my excitement. I NE R squeezed my friend’s hand as we squeezed ourselves into the anticipating crowd. ____ 3. The workers had waited patiently for their last pay. They had all been anxious GE about the lockdown. ____ 4. It rained all night. In desperation, he braved the flood and cold. He cannot fail his T wife this time. 1S ____ 5. Make sure to dress your best and show off your best smile during the interview. First impression is crucial. B. Instructions. Write the letter of the correct answer. ____ 1. “There are three sides to every story: your side; my side and the truth. No one is lying.” This saying from Robert Evans pertains to ____ A. tone B. style C. perspective D. approach 24 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV ____ 2. And suddenly I realized that I should shoot the elephant after all. The people expected me to, and I had got to do with it. I could feel their two thousand wills pressing me forward, irresistibly. The tone in this excerpt from Shooting an Elephant by George Orwell is that of ____ A. doubt B. joy C. anger D. pride ____ 3. Of the 270 students who initially opted for modular learning, ten percent were A. objective B. subjective 2.0 considering shifting to online learning. The approach herein is _____ C. affirmative D. negative SI ON ____ 4. At the parent orientation, it was obvious that parents were still anxious about the coming school year as some were looking pensive, while others were murmuring among A. objective B. subjective C. affirmative ER themselves. The approach herein is ____ D. negative -V ____ 5. “They are depriving many of us of our simple joy and recreation.” T his perspective B. congress C. NTC D. the president MO ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY DU LE A. viewers S on the closure of ABS-CBN is that of ____ person point of view. ON Instructions: Rewrite the following excerpt from Cristina P. Hidalgo’s travelogue in the third AT I I was almost twenty when I first left my country to “go abroad,” and like most NE R Filipinos, it was to Hongkong that I went. The trip was kind of a reward. My GE younger sister and I had just graduated, she from high school and I from college 1S T and our parents had presented us with a tour of Hongkong and Japan as a graduation gift. 25 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV ANSWER KEY 10. A 5. A 9. C 4. B 8. A 2.0 3. A 7. D 2. A 6. B SI ON 1. C 5. A B. 4. A ER 5. 2nd person 3. C 4. 3rd Person A. -V Pre-Assessment 1S T GE NE R AT I ON MO Assessment S 1. 2nd person 1. B LE 2. 1st Person 2. D DU 3. 3rd Person 26 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV MO DU LE S -V ER SI ON 2.0 Lesson 3: Setting and Atmosphere Learning Competency: ON Analyze factual/ nonfictional elements (Plot, Characters, Characterization, Point of View, Angle, Setting and Atmosphere, Symbols and Symbolisms, Irony, Figures of NE R AT I Speech, Dialogue, Scene, Other Elements and Devices) in the texts. GE WHAT I NEED TO KNOW Learning objectives: At the end of the lesson, learners should be able to: 1S T ⚫ Differentiate moods according to a character’s perspective. ⚫ write about real-life experience to describe setting and create atmosphere. ⚫ appreciate situations and mood as described in a writer’s experience. 27 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I KNOW Instructions: Fill in the blank with the correct word. Choose from the box below. senses Setting mood backdrop landscapes opposition traumatized Atmospheric tension safe SI ON 2.0 threatened ER 1. Atmosphere adds to the unique ____ that emerges from the setting. -V 2. Characters experience different emotions with the changes of colors and ____. S 3. A cool day on the beach is a reason to laze around for one person but can cause LE panic to a ____ hurricane survivor. DU 4. When creating a setting, the writer should make use of many of the _____ to MO describe it. ON 5. _____ and atmosphere are central to the story as they influence the plot. NE R would feel ____ AT I 6. If the setting involves a familiar place with the familiar friendly people, the character 7. If the setting involves a protagonist going back to his/ her childhood home where GE people were hostile, then he/she would feel _____. 8. ____ is a disruption of balance for the characters such as putting them in an 1S T unfamiliar place or event. 9. Putting a character in _______ with nature can create atmospheric tension. 10. Setting and atmosphere provides a ____ for stories. 28 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’S IN Instructions: Write a vivid description of the scene on a typical school day for you. Describe the places you pass by on your way to school. Use words that appeal to sight, smell, sound and feelings. A Day in My Life 2.0 ________________________________________________________________ SI ON ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ER ___________________________________________________________________ -V ___________________________________________________________________ LE S WHAT’S NEW DU Instructions: Describe the scene/setting and the overall mood in the following contrary to their interests? ON A. MO situations. How would each character describe and feel about such events that are Senior Citizen’s Night for a Teenager AT I Youth Night for a Grandparent Accompanying a grandchild Grandparents (Disco/ Talent Show) NE R Forced to Accompany His/ Her 1S T GE (Bingo and Raffles) 29 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV B. 1. What are the contrasting moods/ feelings of the characters in each situation? A. Grandparent and teenage Grandchild at the Bingo ______________________________________________________________ B. Grandparent and teenage grandchild at the Disco ______________________________________________________________ SI ON 2.0 WHAT IS IT • Setting - specific place, time period, weather, time of day in which the story takes place • Atmosphere – the surrounding mood, generally established through the meaning and • ER action of the scene/ setting -V A change in the setting creates a specific atmosphere and from each, a different story would emerge (example: a home invasion at daytime and at night would vary in motive S or outcome) • LE Setting evokes a specific behavior or emotional response from the characters DU (example: darkness is associated to trouble/ danger and character would feel unsafe, evoking a worried/tense response also from readers) • MO Atmosphere functions to set the emotions and state of mind and brings out inner experience. Words used whether symbolically or as concrete expressions allow the ON reader to experience what is depicted. • AT I Atmospheric tension is the disruption of balance or status quo much like the conflict in the plot through: NE R 1. putting characters in opposition with nature – dark and stormy night; turbulent weather puts people on the edge GE 2. putting characters in unfamiliar setting – remote/abandoned campsite gives the creepy, terrifying feeling T 3. irony – describing the town as sleepy and the next scene describes chaos 1S • Some ways to establish mood/ atmosphere: 1. Word choice – the exact scene may evoke different feelings as written by two different writers. 2. Tone - the writer’s attitude contribute to the mood 3. Setting – as already mentioned, can affect the mood. One must pay attention on the way characters interact with what is happening around them (e.g. does it 30 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV cause tension, are characters provoked or do they feel comfortable about it) 4. Dialogue – pep talk creates a different mood (relaxed) from a heated argument (tension) 5. Internal monologue – characters’ inner thoughts and observations help to drive home the mood of the moment 2.0 6. Description – the writer decides as to which scene or object to focus on or SI ON ignore to evoke a specific feeling (e.g. the sudden whisk of cool air instead of the celebration creates eerie feeling rather than focusing on the revelry) ER 7. Rhythm of Language – short concise sentences evoke urgency; long -V complex sentences are more intense (“We need to act fast.” Versus “We have suffered long enough to let it go or play a deaf ear while these erstwhile corrupt LE S so-called leaders that we have continue to enjoy their loot to in utmost vulgarity.” DU 8. Tools of poetry – use of imagery, metaphor, simile, and other poetic devices MO to foster a particular mood (e.g. the sunset like the color of bloodbath) ON WHAT’S MORE AT I Back in The Days Instructions: Describe a typical date in these different periods. NE R A. In the 1960’s Present GE Way of Dressing 1S T Communication/Meet Up Actual Date Place B. 1. Which is more intimate and formal? _________________ 2. Which is more relaxed and casual? _________________ 3. What do you think are favorable characteristics of each period in terms of dating? 31 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV 1960s ________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ The Present ___________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ WHAT I HAVE LEARNED 2.0 Instruction: You must have heard or read about the recent bombing in Beirut, Lebanon SI ON recently. Picture a scene immediately after the explosion using different sensory appeals such as sight, smell and sound. Describe the mood/ overall feeling. Scene: ER _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ -V _________________________________________________________________________ S _________________________________________________________________________ LE _________________________________________________________________________ DU Overall Mood/ Feeling: ___________________________________________________________________ MO ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ AT I ON ___________________________________________________________________ NE R WHAT I CAN DO Instruction: You must have written about your summer vacation so many times in the GE elementary and junior high school. We will be writing about it again this time, but you have to reinvent it in such a way that it makes it timelier and more interesting. While you may 1S T have written about all the nice things about it, this time, include the not so pleasant ones. Follow the guide questions in this writing prompt designed by Aguila, et. Al (2017). First Paragraph. When and where was your last vacation? Who were with you? Where did you stay? Was it your first time to visit the place? What do you think of the place? What were the particular places you visited there? _____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 32 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Second Paragraph. What were the good things you remember about the vacation? Did you dislike anything about the trip and the vacation? What were they? ________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 2.0 ___________________________________________________________________ Third Paragraph. If you were to relive your summer vacation, what changes would SI ON you make? ________________________________________________________________ ER ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ -V ___________________________________________________________________ S ___________________________________________________________________ LE ___________________________________________________________________ DU Last Paragraph. What is your dream vacation? Where do you want to go? Who do you want to take with you in this dream vacation? What activities do you want to MO engage in which you haven’t done yet in your previous vacation? Do you think this is AT I ON possible? What do your parents/ guardians think about it? NE R ASSESSMENT ASSESSMENT # 3 GE Instructions. Read the excerpt below from Cristina P. Hidalgo’s Casa Blanca, (a creative nonfiction) and do the following exercises. Write the letter of your answer on 1S T your answer sheet. I remember Mr. Joaquin as a distinguished-looking, courteous gentleman; and Mrs. Joaquin as a beautiful, elegant lady with a sweet smile and an unfailingly gracious manner. There were five children, whose names I still know today. The three older ones – Pat and Terry and Bud – were good-looking and glamorous. They seemed to have a lot of friends, who dashed up and down the stairs, laughed a lot, and held dancing parties in the basement that lasted long into the night. The youngest girl, Mary Ann, was still in school, and wore a bulky white sweater over her school un iform. And the younger boy, 33 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Sonny, used to romp about with the large family dog. But Casablanca was just one part of the magic that was Baguio in that lost time. I was only eight years old when I was first taken to Baguio. We went up by car, and and my kid sister, Ting, and I felt that we would never get there. The flat rice fields, which in my Geography book were called the “Central Plain,” seemed endless. My brother, Boy, who must have been only two, simply went to sleep on his yaya’s lap. But I couldn’t follow suit, because 2.0 the car kept having to stop for Ting to throw up by the roadside. The “Zig Zag Road” was an altogether different experience. Not only was it traversing SI ON terrain that was most definitely not flat, but it also appeared to be climbing a mo untain – possibly several mountains – and doing so with great difficulty and at enormous risk. ER Our mother was torn between gasps of admiration and exclamations of alarm. The road twisted past old trees, squeezed between enormous boulders, perched above riv ers and -V ravines. Here and there we came upon a small waterfall tumbling down from the mountain S slope into the roadside. And sometimes the road became so narrow, and bent so sharply that LE it was not possible for our father to see whether there was any vehicle coming toward us. DU Then we had to stop until the vehicle did pass us, and we were waved on by a man standing MO on the road, communicating with someone else through what was then called a walkie -talkie. But all around us were wonders that we children were be holding for the first time: astonishing rock formations, trees perched at the very edge of a cliff, their branches dripping ON with tangled vines, enormous flowers, rainbow-winged butterflies, cascades and precipices. part of the journey. AT I And, strangely, I have no memory of having to stop to allow Ting to be car sick during this NE R Baguio itself was a wonderland – a marvelous mountain town, draped in mist, smelling of pine trees, and tasting of fresh strawberries and whipped cream. We went pony -riding GE under the trees and biking around a lake ringed with weeping willows. We wore thick jackets and took long walks in the woods. And every night, before I fell asleep, I prayed that when I 1S T woke up, my father would announce that he was closing down our house in Quezon Ci ty and moving us all to Baguio. 1. The author used ____ in revealing the characters. A. dialogue B. direct description C. monologue D. idiosyncrasy C. chaotic D. sad C. fun D. rebellion 2. The atmosphere in the first paragraph is ____. A. heartwarming B. tensed 3. The dance parties and laughter connote ____ A. labor B. unity 34 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV 4. The bulky white sweater over Mat Ann’s school uniform that it was usually ___ weather. A. warm B. humid C. cold D. temperate 5. In the 5th paragraph, “exclamation of alarm” suggests ____ A. joy B. excitement C. love D. fear 6. The description of rocks, trees and butterflies appeals to the sense of ____. A. sight B. smell C. taste D. sound 7. In the last paragraph, the description of the ____ appeals to the sense of smell. B. pine tree C. strawberry D. cream 2.0 A. Mist A. touch B. taste SI ON 8. The description of strawberries and whipped cream appeals to the sense of ____ C. sound D. sight 9. Draped mists appeal to the sense of _____ B. taste C. sound D. sight ER A. touch 10. The last sentence in the last paragraph, suggests the writer’s ____ for Baguio C. pity -V B. distaste D. fondness LE S A. dislike Instructions: Read the following DU ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY essay from a collection of essays from MO https://crestaola.wordpress.com/category/baguio/. Answer the following questions. ON Between fairy tales and childhood games, I always thought I would make a great queen. Princesses didn’t have enough authority and were always being married off by clueless king AT I fathers. NE R The Wicked Queen in Snow White stunned me. “Wow she has power, but she is misusing it,” I thought. My sisters and I would play a game of claiming chairs and pieces of the house GE when we were small. “I’m the Queen!” I’d shout. Then my sister, Lizzie would counter with, “No, that is mine, because I am the Empress!”. T I lost my attempt at territorial expansion because I forgot that there was a title greater than 1S queen. I loved the power of the words, “I command you!” Of course, shouting that as a 7-year-old is different from a 30-year-old with an army. But……sometimes I think if people would just do what they were commande d to do, everything would work out better. Don’t laugh. Democracy (which I prefer to monarchy as a real-life political system), works. But really, some people should be told what to do. Especially during a government shutdown. 35 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Well, I didn’t get a crown, but I married a prince. When you go back in Bud’s genealogy you collide with a wall of kings and queens. I always knew he was special. As the mother of many children I had plenty of years of telling small people what they should do. I think I was very benevolent, and they love me very much, so it worked out. When I watch royal dramas the level of intrigue and nastiness is horrible. Real life is much more terrible than imagined life, so I am happy with my small dominion. My current subjects 2.0 are one dog and four cats. Life is good. SI ON Questions: 1. What is the overall mood of the essay? ___________________________________________________________________ ER 2. What lesson in life did the writer imply in the concluding paragraph? -V ___________________________________________________________________ 3. In the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs, what did the writer use to take the readers back to the S moment and make the experience even more real for readers? LE ___________________________________________________________________ DU 4. What is your own fondest memory of childhood? 1S T GE NE R AT I ON MO ___________________________________________________________________ 36 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV SI ON 2.0 ANSWER KEY 10. D ER -V 5. D 4. C 3. C 2. A S 6. safe LE 6. A 7. threatened DU 7. B 8. atmospheric tension 5. setting 4. senses MO 8. B 9. opposition 3. traumatized 2. landscapes ON 9. A 10. backdrop 1. B 1. mood AT I Assessment 1S T GE NE R Pre-Assessment 37 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV MO DU LE S -V ER SI ON 2.0 Lesson 4: Structure Learning Competency: ON Analyze factual/ nonfictional elements (Plot, Characters, Characterization, Point of View, Angle, Setting and Atmosphere, Symbols and Symbolisms, Irony, Figures of NE R AT I Speech, Dialogue, Scene, Other Elements and Devices) in the texts. GE WHAT I NEED TO KNOW Learning objectives: At the end of the lesson, learners should be able to: 1S T ⚫ Distinguish different types of structure ⚫ write vignettes applying use of different structures. ⚫ Appreciate experiences and the lessons they give. 38 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I KNOW Instructions: Write the letter of the correct answer. 1. ____ refers to how a text is organized. A. pattern B. structure C. rhythm D. setting A. outline B. graph C. table D. drawing B. style SI ON 3. Essays are arranged into sections according to a key or main ____. A. voice 2.0 2. An ____ helps a beginning writer to organize his thoughts C. idea D. language ER 4. ___ structure refers to arrangement of events in a linear/ sequential fashion as A. Diary B. collage C. parallel -V they occur in time. D. chronological B. interview C. memoir LE A. fiction S 5. Question-and-answer structure is best for ____ stories. D. diary A. Logbook DU 6. ___ structure may begin at some point in time; going backwards to the past. B. collage C. vignette D. flashback B. Diary or logbook ON A. Explanation-of-a-process MO 7. How-to-articles work best with ____ structure. C. Question-and-answer D. story-within-a-story AT I 8. Telling two stories such as when the writer tells about the actual physical and the inner journey of the character uses works best with the ___ structure. C. question-and-answer B. diary or logbook D. story-within-a-story NE R A. explanation-of-a-process GE 9. ___ is pasting together small fragments which builds up the total picture such as T when writing about a disaster. 1S A. Collage/ Mosaic B. diary/ log C. parallel D. flashback 10. A more personal narrative that suggests immediacy of events uses the ___ structure. A. explanation-of-a-process C. question-and-answer B. diary or logbook D. story-within-a-story 39 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’S IN Instructions: Answer the questions about the following excerpt from the Philippine Star’s interview story of Korina Sanchez-Roxas. “Everyone who knows me well knows that I love children. But for the longest time, because my career in news took charge, I thought it would never happen,” said 2.0 Sanchez, who was the former anchor of ABS-CBN’s flagship newscast, “TV Patrol.” SI ON “We weren’t married yet when we decided to freeze our embryos, before my biological clock stopped ticking,” she continued. “It was just a matter of when we were ER ready to start a family. But that time couldn’t be found for years. We were both always -V so very busy.” According to Sanchez, it was only after 2016 that she and Roxas got to embark LE S on their “best life adventures.” DU And this was the time they started planning on building a family, tapping MO professionals abroad for their surrogacy process. ON Questions: AT I 1. What aspect of the interviewee’s life is the point of discussion herein? NE R _____________________________________________________________ 2. What is the significance of 2016 for the Roxas couple? GE _____________________________________________________________ 3. What does the writer use to establish credibility of interviewee’s responses? 1S T _____________________________________________________________ 4. What else does the writer use for transition from one response or paragraph to another? ___________________________ 40 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’S NEW Instructions: Read the excerpt of Cristina Hidalgo’s creative nonfiction work, Casa Blanca and answer the following questions. 2.0 Nearly two decades later, I was invited by my old friend to contribute something to a book that would honor another dear, old friend – and one of Baguio’s favorite SI ON sons –who was about to retire, after a lifetime of dedication to the study of Cordillera culture. It was instantly clear to me that I would write about his city… and mine. I would write about Baguio, and about something which will always be a part of Baguio for ER me. -V So, I went sleuthing once again for my vanished Casablanca. But this time I LE S would do my searching on the Net. The first few tries brought up nothing but duds: hotels in Morocco named DU “Casablanca”, or hotels in Baguio city named anything by “Casablanca.” So much for MO Google’s finding the answers to everything, I thought. But I gave it another try. And suddenly I stumbled on this blog by someone ON called Kathleen Burkhalter. She was writing of her old homes in the Philippines which AT I were called “Casa Blanca” (she spelled it as two words) in Baguio and “Cresta Ola” in La Union. The blogger’s name seemed familiar. A quick search revealed her to be my NE R Facebook friend. I dashed off a Private Message, explaining who I was, and why I was interested GE in her Filipino homes. Within a few hours, I received her reply. She confirmed that her T family had lived “next door to the Nevadas at #4 Loakan Road,” and she gave me a 1S thumbnail sketch of the Casa Blanca’s story. In the 1930s, when it was built by the patriarch (her grandfather), Engineer Francisco Joaquin, it was both a hotel and the family residence. It suffered some damage during World War II, and Kathleen’s grandmother, Mercedes Joaquin, “got the Americans to repair it because they wanted to rent it postwar.” However, it was someone called Annette Krasnianska who became its tenant, and she ran it as an “incredibly successful” place called “Annette’s Guest House.” The lady kept a guest 41 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV book, which she later printed, and which is now in Kathleen’s hands. During that time, Kathleen’s grandparents had gone to Marinduque “to regroup,” which, I gathered, meant waiting for the Baguio mines to be reopened. In 1961, when Kathleen was herself first introduced to the white house, she was only four years old. The Casa Blanca, wrote Kathleen, “worked hard as a hotel in the 50s” (which was when our family used to stay in it). “Its inner architecture,” she 2.0 added, “made it able to morph from large home to hotel to summer rentals and back SI ON to house.” She was immediately “enchanted.” She lived there from 1968 to 1975. Her grandparents died in 1966 and 1969. And in 1975, the house was “taken over” by the ER Social Security System (SSS), which “put an ugly gray façade over the front, made of -V wood and painted it.” S Kathleen does not know what happened between the 1975 and 1990. But she LE does know that during the Big Earthquake of 1990, the house “came down” or “was DU terribly damaged.” MO Questions: ON 1. Whose story is it within the story of this excerpt from Cristina Hidalgo’s nonfiction work? _______________________________________________ AT I 2. What was the second story talking about? ________________________ NE R 3. How is the secondary story arranged? ___________________________ GE WHAT IS IT 1S T Organization is essential in creative nonfiction that would serve as the blueprint to our essays and help us focus and arrange ideas according to the timeline that they happen or on its degree of importance: Chronological Structure – arrangement of events in a linear/ sequential fashion as they occurred in time. Explanation-of-a-process Structure – used to describe a process/ procedure such as in How-to articles. 42 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Flashback Structure – begins at some point in time then goes backwards to the past Parallel Structure – consists of several stories running side-by-side. Parallelism may also refer to how paragraphs or sentences are structured or arranged. Collage or Mosaic Structure – using several accounts and pasting these small fragments to build a total picture such as when writing about disasters or calamities. 2.0 Diary or Logbook Structure - personal chronicle of what is happening in one’s life; SI ON one’s experiences arranged chronologically as in chronological narratives. Question-and-answer Structure – used in interview stories; often directly quoting the ER subject in the story for a more intimate glimpse of the person or the subject matter Frame/ story-within-a-story Structure – telling two stories; a secondary story from S -V within the actual story DU LE WHAT’S MORE MO Instructions: There have been contrasting beliefs, opinions and stand of different groups concerning precautions, concerns and other issues about the pandemic. What ON would you include if tasked to write parallel stories of the pandemic in the perspective AT I of the following: LAW ENFORCERS DISPLACED WORKERS (NO-WORK/ NO PAY) 1S T GE NE R HEALTH WORKERS 43 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I HAVE LEARNED Instructions: Answer the questions accordingly. What are three types of structure that you are most comfortable using and why? What topics/ subject matter would you be using these structures with? 2.0 ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ SI ON ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ER ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ -V ___________________________________________________________________ DU MO WHAT I CAN DO LE S ___________________________________________________________________ Instructions: Choose any of the given structure to write at least a two-paragraph ON sample about any topic you choose. ________________________________________________________________ AT I ___________________________________________________________________ NE R ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ GE ___________________________________________________________________ T ________________________________________________________________ 1S ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 44 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV ASSESSMENT ASSESSMENT # 4 Instructions: Identify the type of structure most appropriate for each scenario. ____ 1. A prisoner about to be executed in a month’s time chronicles last-ditch efforts 2.0 to avoid death as well as his innermost thoughts and wishes as the day of doom is fast approaching. SI ON ____ 2. An immigration lawyer runs down requirements to secure legal documents for working in Canada ER ____ 3. Writing his speech for their 25th wedding anniversary, he recalls the ups and -V downs of his marriage. ____ 4. The investigative reporter puts together the accounts of different individuals LE fury over the islands of Leyte and Samar. S concerning their ordeal that fateful day in November as Typhoon Yolanda lashed its DU ____ 5. The writer documents how the wife curled in bed, silently crying herself to MO sleep after a phone call to her family on Christmas eve; on the other hand, her family and their friends were happily celebrating Christmas at home with joyous noise and ON singing. NE R AT I ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY Instructions: Write a personal account of your experiences during the pandemic during GE the following timeline. Write a paragraph each. March-April 2020 (start or onset of COVID 19 quarantine/ lockdown/ your T adjustments; food provisions, house activities) 1S ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ May-July 2020 (extension of quarantine/ prohibition of those below 21 years old from going out; how you feel about the extended prohibitions announcement of postponed opening of classes to August/no face-to-face classes/ online and modular options) 45 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ August - Present (anticipation/ worries about learning modality; home tutors; modules and resources; feeling about the postponement of classes and how you feel about this school year) 2.0 ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ER SI ON ___________________________________________________________________ ON MO DU LE S -V ANSWER KEY AT I 10. B 5. B 4. Collage/ Mosaic 4. D 3. Flashback 3. C 2. Explanation-of-a-Process GE 6. D 5. Parallel T 7. A 1S 8. D NE R 9. A 2. A 1. Diary/ Logbook 1. B Assessment Pre- Assessment 46 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV MO DU LE S -V ER SI ON 2.0 Lesson 5: Figurative Language Learning Competency: ON Analyze factual/ nonfictional elements (Plot, Characters, Characterization, Point of View, Angle, Setting and Atmosphere, Symbols and Symbolisms, Irony, Figures of NE R AT I Speech, Dialogue, Scene, Other Elements and Devices) in the texts. GE WHAT I NEED TO KNOW T Learning objectives: At the end of the lesson, learners should be able to: 1S ⚫ identify figurative language used in texts ⚫ explain meanings according to use of figurative language ⚫ appreciate symbolisms embodied in one’s culture 47 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT I KNOW Instructions: Answer accordingly. A. Write the letter corresponding to the correct answer. 1. The policeman was apprehended for driving under the influence. A. irony B. understatement C. pun D. hyperbole B. understatement C. pun D. hyperbole SI ON A. irony 2.0 2. I have loved you for a thousand years and will love you for a thousand more 3. One hundred years later, the negro is still not free… One hundred years later, the life of a Negro is still sadly crippled… one hundred years later, the Negro still liv es on B. understatement C. anaphora 4. At night, the stars put on a show for free C. anaphora S B. understatement LE A. personification D. hyperbole -V A. metaphor ER a lonely island of poverty…. D. hyperbole 5. She was happy to have won the grand prize. B. understatement C. anaphora D. hyperbole MO DU A. metaphor B. Write the symbolism for each. _________________ 2. white _________________ 3. black _________________ 4. cross _________________ AT I NE R _________________ GE 5. snake ON 1. red C. Put a checkmark (/) on the blank if the statement expresses an irony. T ____ 1. “I just love your timing! I was just going to bed.” 1S ____ 2. They both left. ____ 3. He promised never to leave me. He left me for some girl he just met. ____ 4. “I cannot thank you enough for ruining my life.” ____ 5. I pray I’ll get well soon. 48 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’S IN Instructions: The following texts are excerpts from Martin Luther king’s speech, “I Have a Dream” which uses some figurative language and devices. Answer the questions accordingly. 2.0 “We must forever conduct our struggle on the high plane of dignity and discipline. We must not allow our creative protest to degenerate into physical violence. Again, and ER 1. What phrase is repeated at the beginning of the sentences? SI ON again we must rise to the majestic heights of meeting physical force with soul force.” -V ___________________________________________________________________ 2. What is the purpose for repeating the phrase? S ___________________________________________________________________ LE 2. What is the message conveyed in this passage? MO DU __________________________________________________________________ “ This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, ON would be guaranteed the unalienable rights of life, liberty, and the pursuit of AT I happiness.” NE R “ It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note insofar as her citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, GE America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back T marked “insufficient funds.” 1S 1. What was the promise herein in reference to the Declaration of Independence? ___________________________________________________________________ 2. What does the bad check mean? ___________________________________________________________________ 3. To whom is the phrase citizens of color refer? ____________________________ 4. What other nationalities are citizens of color in America at present? ___________________________________________________________________ 49 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’S NEW Instructions: The following are passages taken from a speech by former US President Barack Obama during a Father’s Day Celebration at church. “Yes, we need fewer guns in the hands of people who shouldn't have them. ... need to show our kids that you're not strong by putting other people 2.0 We SI ON down – you're strong by lifting them up.” 1. What is not the right test of strength __________________________________ ER 2. On the contrary, hat must people do to others, that makes them strong? -V _________________________________________________________________ S “We should be making it easier for fathers who make responsible choices and DU LE harder for those who avoid them." MO 1. In what ways can government make it easier for fathers who take their responsibilities seriously? ______________________________________________ ON On the other hand, how can government make it hard for fathers who avoid AT I responsibility? _______________________________________________________ NE R “If you watch nightly news, it feels like the world is falling apart.” GE 1. What incident in the Bible tells about the world falling apart or destroyed? ___________________________________________________________________ In Science, what could cause the destruction of the earth? 1S T 2. ___________________________________________________________________ 3. In the expression used by President Obama, what does he mean about the world falling apart? What are some happenings/events in some parts of the world or what are some global/world problems that we are facing at present? ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 50 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT IS IT Here are more figures of speech that you can add to the ones already discussed in previous lessons that you can use in creative nonfiction: Anaphora – the use of a word/ phrases/ sequence of words repeatedly in nearby clauses or sentences to add emphasis; almost always parallel-structured 2.0 Example: Our nation is at war… Our economy badly weakened … Our healthcare is too costly… SI ON Antithesis – a contradiction that pits two ideas against each other in a parallel, balanced way ER Example: The church contains in full the kindness and cruelty, the fierce intelligenc e and the shocking ignorance, the struggles and successes, the love and yes, the -V bitterness and bias.” S Euphemism – substitute words/ phrases to soften/ subdue meaning or sound escort – call girl/boy LE Example: pass away instead of die DU Hyperbole – exaggerated statements or claims that should not be taken literally MO Example: “The deal I just made with China is, by far, the greatest and biggest deal ever made for our Great Patriot Farmers in the history of our Country," Trump tweeted ON the day after. "In fact, there is a question as to whether or not this much product can be produced? Our farmers will figure it out,” President Trump announced recently. AT I Irony – contrary to meaning or expected such as in verbal and situational irony NE R Example: “I thank you for betraying me.” The people who we entrusted our safety to, are the ones who endanger us. Parallelism – parts of lines, verses or sentences or paragraphs are grammatically the GE same or are similarly structured T Example: We can never be satisfied as long as the Negro is the victim of the 1S unspeakable horrors of police brutality. We can never be satisfied as long as our bodies, heavy with the fatigue of travel, cannot gain lodging in the motels of the highways and the hotels of the cities. We cannot be satisfied as long as the negro's basic mobility is from a smaller ghetto to a larger one. We can never be satisfied as long as our children are stripped of their self-hood and robbed of their dignity by signs stating: "For Whites Only" We cannot be satisfied as long as a Negro in Mississippi cannot vote and a Negro in New York believes he has nothing for which to vote 51 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV Personification – assigning human traits to animals or objects Example: Time grabs you by the wrist and directs you where to go. Pun – word play using different meaning of homophones; word with multiple meanings or similar-sounding words for humorous, witty or rhetorical effect Example: A pessimist's blood type is always B-negative The other day I held the door open for a clown. I thought it was a nice jester (gesture). 2.0 Symbolism – an object that signifies deeper meaning than its literal meaning Example: ring – marriage flag – country’s sovereignty/ freedom SI ON Understatement – A situation wherein what is discussed or referred to on hand is made less important than it really is -V ER Example: His film as internationally acclaimed; not bad for a newcomer in film. LE S WHAT’S MORE MO DU Instructions: Read and analyze this excerpt from Winston Churchill’s speech. we shall defend our Island, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the beaches, ON we shall fight on the landing grounds, we shall fight in the fields and in the streets, we shall fight in the hills; we shall never surrender, and even if, which I do not for a AT I moment believe, this Island or a large part of it were subjugated and starving, then NE R our Empire beyond the seas, armed and guarded by the British Fleet, would carry on the struggle, until, in God’s good time, the New World, with all its power and might, GE steps forth to the rescue and the liberation of the old. What figure (s) of speech is/ are used in the passage? 1S T 1. ___________________________________________________________________ 2. What feeling does the text evoke? ___________________________________________________________________ 52 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV WHAT’ I HAVE LEARNED Instructions: Write a paragraph to explain the importance of using figurative language. _____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 2.0 ___________________________________________________________________ SI ON ___________________________________________________________________ ER WHAT’ I CAN DO -V A. Instructions: Write a two-paragraph campaign speech using figures of speech, including those LE S discussed in earlier lessons. ___________________________________________________________________ DU _________________________________________________________________________ MO _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ ON ___________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ AT I _________________________________________________________________________ NE R _________________________________________________________________________ B. GE Instructions: Pick out words/ phrases/statements with figures of speech and identify 1S T accordingly. Words/ phrases/ statements Figure of Speech Used 53 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV ASSESSMENT ASSESSMENT # 5 Instructions: Identify the Figure of speech used. Write the letter of the correct answer. ___ 1. Our brave men and women in uniform, tempered by the flames of battle, are A. hyperbole B. parallelism 2.0 unmatched in skill and courage. C. personification d. anaphora SI ON ___ 2. Moving my family to the worst place in America was the best decision I ever made. B. irony C. euphemism D. antithesis ER A. pun ___ 3. “Together, we determined that a modern economy requires railroads and -V highways to speed travel and commerce, schools and colleges to train our workers. S Together, we discovered that a free market only thrives when there are rules to LE ensure competition and fair play. Together, we resolved that a great nation must care A. antithesis DU for the vulnerable and protect its people from life’s worst hazards…” B. irony C. parallelism D. pun MO ___ 4.” Now is the time to rise from the dark…Now is the time to lift our nation from the quick sands of racial injustice…Now is the time to make justice a reality.” B. anaphora ON A. euphemism C. irony D. hyperbole A. euphemism AT I ___ 5. The doctor advised termination of pregnancy as the mother’s life is at risk. B. anaphora C. irony D. hyperbole NE R ___ 6. It wouldn’t be fair, if they’d not share in the fare. A. antithesis B. pun C. anaphora D, irony GE ___ 7. “Washington flourished, but the people did not share in its wealth. Politicians prospered, but the jobs left, and the factories closed. B. anaphora C. parallelism D, pun 1S T A. antithesis ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY Instructions: What would symbolize you and why? _____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 54 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV ANSWER KEY SI ON 2.0 C. 1 3 4 ER 1. courage 2. purity 3. death 4. sacrifice 5. betrayal -V 7. A 6. B S LE 1. A 2. D 3. C 4. A 5. B 3. C 2. B 1. A DU 4. B MO 5. A B. ON Assessment A. 1S T GE NE R AT I Pre-Assessment 55 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV References: Books: Aguila, A., Galan, R.S., Wigley, J (2017) Telling the Truth: The Art of Creative Nonfiction. Quezon City: C & E Publishing Inc. Sygaco, S. (2017) Writing Techniques in Creative Nonfiction. 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Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV 2.0 SI ON ER For inquiries and feedback, please write or call: -V Department of Education, Region VII, Division of Cebu Province (IPHO Bldg., Sudlon, Lahug, Cebu City) LE S Telefax (032) 255-6405 1S T GE NE R AT I ON MO DU Email Address: cebu.province@deped.gov.ph 57 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Subject to further validation for IP compliance, this material is for first quarter use only. Circulation shall be limited to public schools within the jurisdiction of the Division of Cebu Province. LR-PIPCV