WS Writing Skills Supporting Analysis New Visions for Public Schools ELA Website The following document can be used for multiple mini-lessons throughout the unit, in addition to the entire school year. This document is teacher-facing, but can be used to create student-facing documents for the classroom. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- In this series of mini-lessons, students will explore: ● Tips for Integrating Writing Instruction into Your Class ● The Importance of Analysis ● Exploding Topics for the Central Idea ● Three Reads Protocol ● Exploding Analysis ● Half-Writes Connecting to Content- Instruction around sentence construction does not have to replace content instruction; in fact, they should go hand in hand. Teachers are encouraged to adapt the exercises in this resource and replace them with phrases and sentences from the texts they are teaching in class. Additional Resources! Check out the Skills-Based Writing section of the New Visions ELA Curriculum to find additional strategies to support writing in the classroom. Tips for Integrating Writing Instruction into Your Class Directions: Keep these quick tips in the back of your mind when integrating writing into your classroom. Creating Routine Routinizing strategies in the classroom is the first step towards making a plan to scaffold off support. By creating routines, students can eventually work their way to engaging with a strategy without the support of a teacher. By creating routines for students, you are creating an eventual pathway towards independence. Make a Plan to Scaffold Off Support Support is an important part of providing access for all learners. It is just as important, however, to gradually remove the support you provide. Adapt the activities in this resource to support all learners and then create a plan that reduces, and eventually removes structured writing supports. The Importance of Analysis 1 Analysis is one of the most difficult parts of writing for most students. Likewise, it is also one of the most difficult aspects to teach. By being as specific as possible regarding exactly what analysis means in the context of writing, however, teachers can support students in composing more thorough analysis. Notice the skill columns for analysis below. Explains the writer’s purpose for developing the literary device 4 Makes a claim in response to the prompt 3 Describes the literary device in context 3 Explains connection between evidence and thesis/claim/main idea 3 Explains the scientific, historical, or literary context 3 States the topic of the text 2 Identifies t he literary device 2 Connects evidence to the thesis/claim/ main idea 2 Identifies the scientific, historical, or literary context 2 Needs to state the topic of the text 1 Needs to identify the literary device 1 Needs to connect evidence with thesis/claim/main idea 1 Needs to identify the scientific, historical, or literary context 1 Response to the Prompt Analysis of Literary Device Analysis of Evidence Analysis of Context * Depending on the prompt and type of writing, these columns may look slightly different. Notice the red columns on the Skills-Based Literary Analysis rubric and the Skills-Based Writing from Sources/Argument rubric for examples of this. Exploding Topics for the Central Idea Directions: Use the steps below to support your thinking in identifying the central idea of a text. Topic + Argument = Central Idea Read and annotate a text. Identify one-word topics that the text is about. Explode topics. Prioritize Central Ideas What is happening in the text? In one word, what is the text about? What is the text saying about this topic? (Argument) Which central idea is most relevant to the text? Harlem Langston Hughes What happens to a dream deferred? Does it dry up like a raisin in the sun? Or fester like a sore— And then run? Does it stink like rotten #1 meat? Or crust and sugar over— like a syrupy sweet? #2 Maybe it just sags like a heavy load. #3 Or does it explode? One-Word Topics Explode Topics What is the poem saying about this topic? (Argument) Prioritize Circle the central idea that is most relevant to the text. Student Example #1 Directions: Use the steps below to support your thinking in identifying the central idea of a text. Topic + Argument = Central Idea Read and annotate a Identify one-word topics text. that the text is about. What is happening in the text? Harlem Langston Hughes In one word, what is the text about? Explode topics. Prioritize Central Ideas What is the text saying about this topic? (Argument) Which central idea is most relevant to the text? One-Word Topics Dreams Delay Harlem, New York Sad Hope What happens to a dream deferred? Does it dry up Explode Topics like a raisin in the sun? What is the poem saying about this topic? (Argument) Or fester like a sore— And then run? Does it stink like rotten #1- Dreams change over time. meat? Or crust and sugar over— #2 Dreams that are ignored will never come true. like a syrupy sweet? Maybe it just sags like a heavy load. Or does it explode? Prioritize Circle the central idea that is most relevant to the text. Three Reads Protocol Directions: Use the template below to catch notes as you conduct a close-reading of the excerpt. Use the guiding questions to help generate notes for each of the three reads. Remember, even though you’re reading the same excerpt three times, you’re reading it each time with a different purpose. You may notice different ideas each time. The following excerpt comes from Rudolph Fisher’s short story “The City of Refuge”. Out Loud Reading: Comprehension What is happening in the passage? Partnered Reading: Confronted suddenly by daylight, King Solomon Gillis stood dazed and blinking. The railroad station, the long, white-walled corridor, the impassable slot machine, the terrifying subway train ⎯ he felt as if he had been caught up in the jaws of a steam-shovel, jammed together with other helpless lumps of dirt, swept blindly along for a time, and at last abruptly dumped. There had been strange and terrible sounds: “New York! Penn Terminal ⎯ all change!” “Pohter, hyer, pohter, suh?” Shuffle of a thousand soles, clatter of a thousand heels, innumerable echoes. Cracking rifle-shots — no, snapping turnstiles. “Put a nickel in!” “Harlem? Sure. This side — next train.” Distant thunder, nearing. The screeching onslaught of the fiery hosts of hell, headlong, breathtaking. Car doors rattling, sliding, banging open. “Say, wha’ d’ye think this is, a baggage car?” Heat, oppression, suffocation — eternity— “Hundred ’n turdy-fif’ next!” More turnstiles. Jonah emerging from the whale. Clean air, blue sky, bright sunlight. Silent & Independent Reading: Analysis Which literary devices are being developed? Connecting to Context What is this telling us about the story’s setting and the larger world at this time? Exploding Analysis for Literary Analysis Directions: Exploding analysis is a writing strategy that identifies the levels of literary analysis and their placement in a paragraph. In order to analyze fully in literary analysis, you must explain the significance of a piece of evidence on four levels. Notice those levels below and observe their placement in the example paragraph at the bottom of the page. Identify the specific literary device Device Level - What literary device is developed here? Name it. How is the literary device developed in the text? Text Level Explain the writer’s purpose for using the device Writer’s Purpose Level - How is the literary device specific to this text? If you are using conflict, what is the conflict? If you are using symbolism, explain the symbol in the text. - What is the writer’s purpose for including this literary device? What is the writer doing to the text by including this device? Explain how evidence/device/text develops an overall theme or what Thematic/ is it saying about the world World Level - How does it develop the theme of the text? - How does it connect with your thesis statement or topic sentence? - What does this part of the text teach us about humans? - Is there a historical or literary connection that I should identify here? Example of Exploding Analysis for a Literary Abstract on Shakespeare’s Sonnet 116 Throughout the sonnet, the speaker uses figurative imagery to describe his love as something that is not altered or does not waver over time. For the speaker, his love is everlasting, existing even to the “edge of doom,” and never altering “upon [him] proved.” The speaker uses the rhyming couplet in the sonnet in order to confirm the truth to the love he is declaring in the poem. He writes that “if this be error….[he] never write, no Device Level man ever loved.” The speaker uses hyperbole in order to Text Level emphasize the magnitude of the emotions he feels for his loved one. He uses the hyperbole in the rhyming couplet to convince his Writer’s audience that he is speaking the truth by swearing on his work as Purpose Level a testament to his unwavering emotions. Sonnet 116 develops the universal theme that true love is unrelenting and presents to its Thematic/ World Level audience the most ideal form of romantic love. Half-Writes PURPOSE: There is never enough time in a class period to fully teach targeted writing instruction.By using the Half-Writes, teachers are able to focus writing instruction on a specific section of a paragraph within a class period. Follow or adapt the instructional plans below as suggested ways to use the Half-Write in a classroom. Day 1 DIRECT INSTRUCTION USING A THINK-ALOUD ❏ ❏ Day 2 ❏ ❏ ❏ Day 1 ❏ ❏ ❏ Day 3 1 Provide all students with a Half-Write of a literary analysis paragraph that leaves the appropriate “paragraph chunk” blank for direct instruction. Using a “think aloud,” guide student thinking through the composition of the paragraph. When it’s time to compose the blank part of the paragraph, call on students to help you compose. Mirror the writing at the board as students complete their Half-Write at their desks. STUDENT-LED WRITING WORKSHOP ❏ Day 2 Lead the class in a close-reading of a text or an excerpt of a text1 with the purpose of identifying literary devices that develop the text’s central idea . Try using the Three Reads Protocol as the close-reading strategy. ❏ Lead the class in a close-reading of a text or an excerpt of a text with the purpose of identifying literary devices that develop the text’s central idea. Try using the Three Reads Protocol as the close-reading strategy. If students are familiar with this routine, teachers can implement student-led writing workshops in a small group (less than 4 students) or with partners in order to complete their Half-Writes. Collect Half-Write paragraphs and provide each group with feedback. Ideally, students should receive feedback by the following day. Once students have received feedback, they can return to their group or partner in order to talk through the feedback and rewrite the paragraph to improve their writing. This routine can be adapted for other types of writing; however, this resources outlines the plan for literary analysis writing. HALF-WRITES ROUTINE ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Half-Writes for a Literary Abstract Prompt: After reading the poem “Sonnet 116” by William Shakespeare, finish the Half-Writes in order to construct a literary analysis paragraph that explains how the speaker uses a literary device in order to develop the central idea. Finish the paragraph by explaining the “Analysis of Writer’s Purpose” and the “Analysis on the Thematic Level”. Paragraph Chunks Paragraph Throughout the sonnet, the speaker uses figurative imagery to describe his love as something that is not altered or does not waver over time. For the speaker, his love is everlasting, existing even to the “edge of doom,” and never altering “upon [him] proved.” The speaker uses the rhyming couplet in the sonnet in order to confirm the to the love he is declaring in the poem. He writes that “if this be Analysis on the truth error….[he] never write, no man ever loved.” The speaker uses Device hyperbole in order to emphasize the magnitude of the emotions he Analysis on the feels for his loved one. 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